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04/15/06




KEDme story - Home Alone: Shadow Rising listed in Chapter One of Three Weasleys and a Wood can be found at: http://www.checkmated.com/story.php?story=4919


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Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - And They Went Their Separate Ways

Oh thank you. I hope your muse visits you again!! I've missed this - your writing.



A Thousand Words by annie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: For the rest of the Ministry, the interdepartmental challenge was merely a failed attempt to restore trust between workers. But for Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger, it was the catalyst for an unexpected relationship built on passionate letters, concealed identities, and secret meetings – and the beginning of an end that neither of them could ever have imagined possible, not even in their wildest dreams.

Post-war. Based somewhat on the story of the Phantom of the Opera. Also contains R/Hr, so don't read if you can't stomach that ship.

Status: Complete. Thanks for reading, everyone!
Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 04/17/07 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

WOW What a beautifully written chapter.

My heart breaks for all three. None of them will really be happy.

I can't wait to read part two!



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 01/24/07 Title: Chapter 32: Breathing Lies

Not uninteresting - just sets up a nice cliffhanger!!



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 01/08/07 Title: Chapter 29: The Final Threshold

ARG - this is heartbreaking!

(which also means it's wonderful)



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 01/13/07 Title: Chapter 30: Words Run Dry

Such a frustrating place to stop.

Draco seemed so frustrated by the Wolfsbane - he must have come to a breakthrough.

Look forward to more.



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 05/26/07 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue Part Two: Passing Bells and Sculpted Angels

As much as we all like when the world allows stories to finish like a nice pretty package with a beautiful bow, sometimes the most fitting ending is the one that is messy and tragic.

I very much enjoyed this story and the way you created the interplay between the characters.



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 01/30/07 Title: Chapter 33: One Final Question

I'm not sure I could improve on it. I would have loved for Starlight to be with Shadow. But, part way through this chapter I started thinking how wrong it felt for Hermione to be with Draco. I couldn't quite see Draco changing so drastically.

Then, you met every expectation by having Draco try to hold too tightly to Hermione.

I thought it was right. I'm not sure I think she should end up married to Ron - probably an OMC - but Ron and Harry will always be a part of her life and I can't imagine her ever chosing someone who gives an either/or challenge.

Not everything is life is happy endings. Sometimes there is heartbreak. It takes a bit of courage to write this way.



Harry Potter and the Dynasty of the Wand by Lady Snuffles

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The fact that opposites attract might be one reason for Ron and Hermione’s new endearment towards each other. By the time the Hogwarts Express pulls into Hogsmeade Station for another year at Hogwarts, every witch and wizard on the train knew something had changed drastically between the two friends. Harry and Ginny on the other hand decide to keep their relationship a secret because of a “dream” Harry has about ‘You Know Who.’ If their secret love is discovered by the wrong people it could possibly cost Harry and Ginny their lives.

The sequel is on it's way! It's been submitted so I hope you enjoy it everyone!
Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 06/04/06 Title: Chapter 8: The Discovery

I discovered this story when I went in search of something that wasn't Hermione/Snape (not that I don't enjoy this pairing)

I am enjoying your story. Your teaser quotes are fun too.

I've added your story to my favorites so I can keep up with your additions.

Author's Response: Oh that\'s so exciting that I\'m held over Hr/S! Woot! Now that\'s what I call an accomplishment!



Part II of Romance Slytherin Style - However Far Away by SeaIsleWitch

Rated: Professors •
Summary: He had no choice when he was marked as a servant of evil; her only mistake was to fall in love with him. Draco Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson are two lovers forced to live in a cruel reality.

This is Part II of Romance, Slytherin Style - A Trilogy. Please read Part I - Somewhere Only We Know first. *Let me change your mind about the Slytherins you love to hate.*
Warnings: Non-graphic violence, torture and sexual situations. Character death, but not Pansy or Draco.
Genres: Romance/drama with some humour and action
Main Characters: Draco Malfoy & Pansy Parkinson
Other Characters: Severus Snape, Narcissa Malfoy, Millicent Bulstrode, Bellatrix Lestrange , Lord Voldemort and many more.
Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 01/03/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

LOL I quickly notice the name change. I also had to look twice to see if it was the greyback's name.

Look forward to the next chapter.

Refresh my memory, can Draco marry someone he's not betrothed to?

Author's Response: Hi, Timestep! Yes, Fefnir was too close to Fenir, so I changed it to the more common spelling of the Norse dragon -- Fafnir. Thanks for reading! - SIW



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 05/04/07 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-two

I absolutely loved the interaction between Pansy and Winifred



Pure & Proud by SeaIsleWitch

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Draco Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson were destined to share a privileged life until the devastating circumstances of their sixth year at Hogwarts tore them apart. Five years later, they separately strive to come to terms with the past and proceed with a life they did not expect…alone. Pure & Proud is presented through alternating chapters of Draco's brooding journal and Pansy's idiosyncratic diary.

~ Pansy Parkinson is written by Sea Isle Witch ~ Twenty-two year old Pansy seemingly has everything a young witch could desire; yet she struggles to build a life for herself independent of her pure-blood family's expectations and without her one true love. From the pages of her private diary, Miss Parkinson shares a précis of the past five years and then gives us a glimpse of her current challenges.

~ Draco Malfoy is written by Desslok and Sea Isle Witch ~ After spending a year on the run and then a year in Azkaban, Draco Malfoy was expelled from England by the Ministry of Magic. He spent the last three years travelling the Continent until he realised it was time to come home. Mr Malfoy discloses his journey back from exile, beginning with a statement to the Ministry of Magic in November of 2002. Complete!
Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 06/05/06 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen: Draco Malfoy - Weird Sisters Concert

WOW. That was really powerful - and heartbreaking.

Author's Response: We\'re glad you\'re enjoying it.Thanks for letting us know!



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 07/15/06 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty Five: Pansy Parkinson - Ivy Hall

OK, I re-read this story. Someone I missed that IT and Mystery Wizard/Draco were two different people. *facepalm*

I did wonder why Draco would hex Pansy with antlers! LOL. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: *giggles* That\'s okay, Timestiep. *passes cup of tea* -SIW

Author's Response: (That\'s Timestep.)



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-eight: Pansy & Draco - The Masquerade - Part III

You both write wonderfully together. It is seamless, intimate, intricate, it is a dance!

Thank you for sharing tihs with us.

Author's Response: Thank you, timestep. We appreciate your beautiful words. -SIW



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-nine: Draco Malfoy - The Masquerade - Part IV

WOW - that was raw pain. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Thirty: Pansy Parkinson - The Masquerade - Part V

OH, he is cruel!! Please, send more!!

Author's Response: Well, Zach realises he can get Malfoy out of the way. She\'s already crying, right? *ahakes head at Zach\'s timing* -SIW



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 07/11/06 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-four: Pansy Parkinson - My Father and the Auror

I love your Pansy. Eddie is a fun addition - but I'm interested in why she is still leaving out the fact that she had dinner(?) with "It" a few weeks prior.

I've been wondering why you hadn't posted a chapter in a while only to discover 3 today (and 2 notices buried in my email). This is one of the stories I"m tracking closely!

Author's Response: Hi, Timestep! Thanks for reading! Pansy never had dinner with \'It\', so I\'m not sure what you are referring to. Can you show me? I\'ll be posting another Pansy chapter this weekend, and then there will be several intense chapters. - SIW



Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 06/05/06 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen: Pansy Parkinson - Hebridean Black

I'm really enjoy this story. I've never thought much about Pansy (until I started reading your LJ).

Once Pansy made the comment that she needed to kiss him to learn who he was I thought - well of course!!

This game of cat and mouse is great.

Hey, can they unbetroth for cause?

Author's Response: Hi, Timestep. Thanks for letting me know you\'re reading and enjoying the story. Yes, Pansy would be able to tell from his kiss, but do you think she can get the mystery wizard to kiss her?

Pansy is not betrothed to Zach. Their parents are considering the match, but, of course, Pansy and Zach have a say. It must be mutually agreed upon. There is powerful magic that is involved in the Betrothal Ritual, so ithere would need to be a \'deal breaker\' to remove the spell.

I hope you\'ll continue to read. The next chapters are some of my favorites. - SIW



Paint the Silence by electronicquillster

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Charlie returns to the Burrow and begins healing his own heart, as well as that of someone else. It's always darkest before the dawn.

Begun pre-Deathly Hallows.
Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 07/16/06 Title: Chapter 3: Happy Birthday, Hermione

Curious to see where you are heading - I've enjoyed this so far. I love George being shoved in the pond and Hermione almost knocked by Charlie.



Strip Poker (A G-Rated Tale of the Marauders) by Rhys

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One night in the Marauders' fifth year...

A bit of fluff and laughs.
Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 07/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Game of Cards

This is fun. I can't wait to read more. You did a lovely job of incorporating Peter as the friend he was in this error.

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much. I do work very hard on Peter, especially in a fic like this, where he needs to be a full, working character, so it\'s rather nice to get noticed for that. This fic is intended as a one-shot, but I hope that you\'ll continue reading my other stories. I\'m very glad you enjoyed it.



Flowers Aren't Enough by SeaIsleWitch

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Romantic upheaval in Slytherin House on Valentine's Day. A missing scene from OotP.
Reviewer: timestep Signed
Date: 02/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwwww! Just lovely.

*sighs*

Author's Response: Hello, timestep! Thanks for reading and commenting. They had a rocky day, but it ended up okay. - SIW