Hi i am an enerjetic/hyper harry potter fan fiction freak. My friend and i are writing a book about are high school (no harry potter i know it sucks). We think it is fun anyways. it has lots of generes. My fav couple to read is Severus Snape and Hermione Granger and i am attempting to write some storys at the moment. Also this kind of freaky friday one between Mcgonnagal and Hermione(weird kind of i know but it will be worth it) So this is me.
i feel like crying with them. that was a great story
Author's Response: oh my goodness... thank you so much :)
This line "McGonagall was sobbing her heart out on Sirius's shoulder as he patted her on the back." is one of the funiest i have ever read.
1 question during this whole story you have never mentioned neville longbottoms parents didnt thay go to school with the maureders
the whole story was hilarous i didnt get to read it all at once but it was still good.
Hermione knew this thing she had with Malfoy was purely physical. She knew she shouldn't have fallen in love with him. And she knew that when he said he loved her too, a dozen misfortunes would befall them. Yet they both did admit it and just when she thought this temporary relationship might just last, she was left all alone and he?...Well he became one of Them.
RUNNER-UP in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards for "The Where Did That Come From Award" (Best Twists and Turns) and WINNER in the He Had it Coming Awards.
I also want to add that all this support you all have given me is just fabulous. Thanks a lot. I love you guys!
1 word to describe so far.
FUNNY!
That was a good description of Voldemort. Good job and good luck on upcoming chapters. I really like this story.
The way Hermione slipped out her little secret was...unexpected. Does the Dark Lord have plans for this child? Good job and good luck on upcoming chapters. Oh and the way you described Snapes lying was very much how i would imagine it.
That fight was very hurtful to both. I hope that they fix the problem and tell each other that they love one another I think that they do but I could be wrong. Good job and good luck on upcoming chapters.
The Veritusurm was brillant to make Snape confess. You should have asked him more questions though in my opion. Hermione also forgave a little to easily. Good job though and good luck on upcoming chapters.
I wonder what Joe and Hermione will come up with. Is Joe a real friend or is he a foe? Great chapter good luck on the next ones.
What does Lacrima Serpentis mean excatly?
I thought with legimency you had to use the spell legimens. That you just couldnt enter someones mind? Good chapter.
Is the term "ashwinder" a couincidence because there is a website that is Hermione and Severus fics called Ashwinder. Just a question. You are right it is kind of hard to comprehend all that happened in this chapter. That is sometimes a good thing though. Luv the story good luck on the rest.
I thought that nothing could deflect unforgivable curses. Oh well good chapter. Good luck on upcoming ones.
Will they ever figure out she is pregant? Well eventully they will but i mean in the near furture?
I like the way she tricked him without planning to. I agree with what she said at being good at improvising. Luv the story.
I am glad that Snape is able to show a little compasion know or at least it seems like it. Good luck on upcoming chapters i loved this one.
I am happy that they both got the time away from azkaban that they deserved. I hope that they dont die in the batte. Is the battle supposed to be the 'Final Battle'? Just wondering. Love the story please update. Good luck on future chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you very very much for the time you have spent reading and reviewing my story. It\'s helped remind me of previous chapters and some of the problems I\'ve faced/still facing! You\'ve been a tremendous help. Also, I read your reviews on a day before my exams and it cheered me up loads. It helped me build my confidence back up. As for next chapter... I believe it has just been validated ;-)
I dont like that letter. She loves him. It seems like she loves him enough for the both of them. Who is the voice? Is it Voldemort or mabye Malfoy. Please tell me and update again.
Author's Response: *huggles* You\'re not supposed to like the letter. It is cruel in its honesty, but Severus insisted that it be that way. Thank you for the review. The update won\'t be long.
I think this "incoherent mess" is great. Good job and good luck on chapters to come.