Oh, I've been missing updates again! *Drat work!*

Anyways, things just took a turn for the super interesting in the last chapter - Elizabett is an extremely daring individual - kudos to you for creating this amazing character that continues to grow more complex and more believable. I am digging her, lol.

I really enjoyed reading the scenes with Albus at her parent's house. It was so...Albus, lol. He was there when she got home, he was chatting it up with her parents, saying the right things to win them over, but the truthful things...they are just too cute. I am amazed everytime I finish a chapter at how cute I find Albus Dumbledore to be in an adult relationship, and that is a testament to your writing.

Another testament is the way you've fit this story into canon with Grendewald. I know the outcome, but..this journey is really exciting, and I can't wait to see how it develops.

~Amanda

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I didn't think this story would take off as Dumbledore is not one of my favorite characters. But, with the focus on the OC, it has really come along. So far, I'm working on Chapter 50!! Eekk! A whole lot bigger than I anticipated! I hope you keep reading ane reviewing. Dani

Very interesting premise and very good story! The name "Elizabett" is perfect for this time period, and I am interested to see how things progress, with both her relationships and with her class. I will continue reading. You write this time period very well!

I though Slughorn's line in Chapter 3 was great: it was something to the effect of "We are to impart knowledge, not let them find it for themselves". It made even me indignant! :) I'm not sure if I quite agree with his characterization, but it's been a while since I've read the books or canon descriptions concerning his attitudes. He just seems a little too...rude? Boorish? In HBP he just seemed somewhat clueless as to what the people around him were thinking, and he was definitely selfish, but I never got the impression that he believed the things he believes in this story, or that he was quite so rude. I do like his relationship with Dumbledore; they seem to have confidences and that they've been old friends--letting the other to see what no one else can see, being honest. Especially the part at the end when he goes to Albus' room.

Albus' feelings for Elizabett were unexpected, but I've never read a story where he has any sort of love interest like this and I'm excited to see where it goes! We don't know much yet about Thomas, but as she's known him her entire life, I'm inclined to like him. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for such a kind review. I’m trying hard to intertwine the events of the time period with the story, and I think you may be in for a surprise or two or more… Slughorn was never one of my favorite characters. I always saw him as selfish and self-serving, and it fit with JKR’s info that he uses people for purposes of personal prestige. Very little is known about his personal life (or preferences), so I played with that aspect in his and Albus’ relationship. Expect more. You’ll see more of Thomas and he is a constant figure throughout the story. I’ll try to post as each chapter is validated, but it is only as fast as the validation. I hope to hear from you again. Dani

I must first say that a sixth year McGonagall being distracted by the Gryffindor seeker was priceless, and once again it was nice to have it brushed by with out being overdone. Something you are talented at.

That being said, this chapter certainly upped everything. The suspense, certainly, on all fronts -…I did not thing originally that I would enjoy the romantic aspect of Dumbledore with a younger woman who had a much more (on the surface) admirable man already returning her affections. The way this is starting to play out and develop is slowly changing my mind. I definitely am enjoying this story very very much!

I liked the beginning from Dumbledore's POV as well (although we don't know much more than we did before, lol). And Elizabett's interplay with him, and her dialogue with Slughorn, made my admiration for her increase.

Author's Response: I like the way Elizabett plays with Albus. She keeps the relationship friendly and casual. As for Slughorn…he never was one of my favourites. He always seemed to be self-important, someone who enjoys trophies.I had to make Elizabett hold her own with him. Dani

Hmmmm....the romantic intrigue continues! I just can't help it, I still like Thomas, my heart goes out to him, and I certainly don't envy Elizabett's position. It seems as if Thomas and Albus were presented in separate situations to juxatopose Elizabett's reactions.

This story is a wonderfully romantic historic mysterious story! I'm getting spoiled, reading so many chapters at once. And I haven't forgotten about Slughorn! :)

Author's Response: I’m glad you’re still with it. It was supposed to be short…but isn’t. I got carried away. Dani

Great first chapter! I can't wait to read the rest of it! I particularly like that Remus has a tattoo...the images of the Mauraders was a nice little light moment amongst Remus' current indirection in his life. This is a great take on what Remus might have been doing all those years. Very creative title, as well. You are a great writer, and your work is very enjoyable to read!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's always a pleasure to receive lovely reviews like this and I'm glad you enjoyed my take on Remus during those lost years. Carole xxx

Oh, yes, this cemented my liking for Adelaide and her superb fast thinking and acting skills. :) I'm glad it will continue and I thought the use of the prompts was great!

Author's Response: Tehe. Adelaide's fun to write. :D

Thanks for the compliments and the review! :)

This is a beautifully written story! The choice of moments in Al's life help to develop his character wonderfully, giving him his separate identify from his large and famous family. The way that you filled in the missing moments each year to help him grow, but still left missing moments makes it mysterious...as the reader, I want to know more! What was in the box from his first year? How long did he stay on the Quidditch team? And the big question at the end...I definitely want to go check out "Lost" now!

I think my favorite prompt is...well, I couldn't pick one out. :) Ophelia's dialogue in Prompt 1 is fantastic, I liked her right away. I enjoy seeing the dymanics between all the relatives...you write the relationships very well.

In addition, I thought you treated what could be a sensitive subject for some very naturally. I personally don't know what it's like to have to come to terms with understanding those feelings at a young age, but you made his transition believeable to me. The defensiveness and refusal to admit it to himself, keeping it secret, fear of rejection from his loved ones, fear of being outcast from society...all of those things he felt as such a young person. And you captured it all.

Great story, I hope you did well in the Almost Gauntlet!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this great review! I'm so glad you liked the way this piece was set up and presented. Thank you for the wonderful compliments *blushes* I especially appreciate your last comments on Albus's coming out - I have never written a gay character before and am glad I was able to handle it with sensitivity and realism. Thank you for reading this and leaving such a nice review, I really appreciate it! ~Gina :) PS. I haven't heard about the Almost-Gauntlet yet, but I must admit I miss writing about these characters I created for it!

It is easy to see why Andromeda would want to escape to a life free of prejudice and full of love with Ted Tonks. Her mother is scary and very similar in her beliefs to Sirius' mother; it is how I imagine growing up with Mrs. Black must have been. Her mother was more upset that he was a Mudblood rather than the fact that they were swimming in the lake or snogging in broom closets. Her illogical beliefs just fly in the face of everything normal; I found myself right with Andromeda going, "Yea, so, what's the problem?!"

I wonder how long it took poor Andromeda to realize that arguing with her mother is like talking to the wall. That's the sense I got reading this - which I thought was what you were trying to achieve, so, hopefully that's what you were going for! Rationing with someone like this is futile. I thought she was going to get punished more harshly with her comments about her mother and father's relationship, actually. Quite a cheeky girl, Andromeda. :D

I think it might have made more sense for her to have found a letter from Ted, but the plot device worked just the same, as it let Andromeda put down her family rather than Ted, and it let Ted's character remain without fault except for his blood status in the eyes of her mother. Though it didn't do him much good.

The icing on the cake on this story was Andromeda's declaration of striving to be known as a failure to her mother. The paragraph where she declares this to now be her great pleasure in life was very satisfying to read, because even though I knew her mother STILL wouldn't get it…I knew Andromeda must have felt darn good saying it. And it made her mother speechless for once.

Oh, wait, then she's Petrified. Well, I know that eventually the story has a happy ending, so I guess this unhappy ending for now is okay. Just kidding, just kidding. I thought the ending was quite great, actually, as her mother abruptly curses her and throws her in the dungeon. Probably the most realistic ending, lol. But I know Andromeda got to hear her mother's final cruel words.

I was never confused as to who was speaking, which can be quite difficult in this type of writing, so kudos!, and I really enjoyed this look into a minor character! Great story!

~Amanda

Oh, what can I say about this? That you were so very right that I would like it? That I almost teared up at the end with Molly because it was beautifully said? That I desparately wish we could have seen more moments like this in the series? That I hope Ron gets his moment like this as he so richly deserves?

This is the second story I've read from Harry's POV and I am digging it. It just...flows. I liked that you picked the toast to show this moment as well, as we got to see cameos and little touches and reminiscings here and there. It was sweet and lovely.

~Amanda

Author's Response: Anand Thanks for reading, and thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the story. Neil

Heehee! If I were Hermione and I saw the pink fabric, I think I would have asked one short question and then gotten the heck out of there!

Loved this line: "Whoever taught Peeves paint ball should be expelled from Hogwarts after the havoc they had caused."

I really like the chapter title, it make me giggle before I even read it.

I really like this series, Snape's girlfriend is spunky!

Author's Response: G'day LOL, thank you for the review. As said in the summary, this is a sequel and paint balling is mentioned in the first oneshot, so I had to add it in this one. Hermione may be smart but she never did learn to stop talking. Glad you liked Snapes girlfriend. ...xXxLove SandyxXx...