Well, after a long hiatus, and a lot of life changes I'm back.
I've got one story for sure and possibly more. We'll just see how it goes.
Actually, mugglenet has been taken over by moderators drunk on their own power. Look for me on fanfiction.net under the penname: Sorcerer's Muse. I will be reposting all current stories there as well as any new work.
Elle
Very good, nice touch of embarasement for both of them with the reminder of his mother. It has been over a month since youwrote on this line, are you going to give us more?
I'm really confused, but then that is the mark of a good story.
Arrrgh: The idiots. Igonore her for three years and then invite her to your wedding. Stubornly sit for 3 years waiting for him to come, what a couple of morons. Anyways I love it
Ok, I believe you when you say this is a Ron/Hermione fic, but I'm begining to think the only way it can be is if whe have been reading a dream for 11 chapters. I was sure Dumbledore would show up a week after Ron's wedding with a time turner, but not anymore. The thing with a time turner is the further you go back the more damage you risk doing to the time line. Dumbledore may be willing to go outside the laws, but to go back six months, I doubt it. Anyways, keep posting and soon, because I am curious to see how you fix the mess Ron and Hermione have gotten themselves into.
Yeah, it's up. Bummer they still haven't gotten anywhere on admiting their feelings. Oh well, a good chapter, and update sooner this time please...
This is a great story, I can't wait for the next chapter. I like how you have both of them struggling to grow up, especially Ron helping Hermione realize at the end that it is ok to be who you are.
Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm glad that you saw the insight there! I'm glad that you liked it! :) If you would like to read the ending of this fic, the final chapters are posted on www.harrypotterfanfiction.com. Thanks so much for reviewing!
this is good, are you going to update some time soon?
Well here I am back to read this again. I think this is 5 or 6 times now. You really do a nice job with your writing.
I really like the Harry you've created in this story. This is a good chapter, though I wonder why Harry chose to ask Ginny if she could handle him being her friend instead of something more. He does seem to have the confidence to go after what he wants, I'm surprised he wasn't more foreward with his intentions.
I really like the Harry you've created in this story. This is a good chapter, though I wonder why Harry chose to ask Ginny if she could handle him being her friend instead of something more. He does seem to have the confidence to go after what he wants, I'm surprised he wasn't more foreward with his intentions.
this is good, I have been waiting for 3 weeks for you to update, any chance you're going to?
A good start. I like the grief you are showing with Harry, that unlike most others has him completely deblitated. This I think might be a little more realistic. Especially from what I could tell of the last scene of book five after Mad-Eye's little chat with Harry's uncle. Harry seemed to have the slightest bounce in his step at that point.
A good job again. Having Harry fall asleep while waiting and having the Order teach him a lesson was a good touch
A good job again. I bet Ginny was hoping Harry was going to say he had a crush on her when she was listening on the other side of the door. Got a little more than she bargined for, didn't she?
A good job with the surprise party. I rally like how you are bringing Harry around to living again.
A good job so far. That Harry is joining the Order and getting private lessons is good. I think it is a mistake that Ron, Hermione and Ginny are not also getting lessons even if they are not in the order. Perhaps Harry will teach them? He is likely to tell them everything from the meetings anyways, and your version of Dumbledore hints that he expects him to even if he shouldn't. Something to keep in mind about Hermione, her birthday is sept 19th from JKR's official site. JKR has said that Hermione was nearly twelve when she started her first year. That means, in aproximately three months in your story, she will be 17, legal age in the Wizarding World. If she wants to join the Order at that time, her parents are not going to be able to do anything about it. Dumbledore has already expressed intrest in her being in the Order. He would not forget this change in her legal status.
You continue to do an excellent job with your story. I like the depth of the characters you are creating. I wonder when you might have Harry wake up and realize he needs help?
A good chapter. i don't think it was Draco sending the roses, but you never know. Ron better get his act together. 21 years old and he still knows nothing about girls. He needs to grow up a little.
Exclent job. Finally someone reaches out to help Harry and he lets them. Keep up the great story.