Melindaleo,
This story cute. I always like to read happy Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione stories. I like that Harry and Ginny were rocking the carts on the Ferris Wheel and breaking the rules.
very interesting story. It reminds me of a recent Smallville episode and a old Buffy episode. I thought the medical jargon was pretty good, I didn't question it. I'm gonna go on a limb and say the wizarding world reality is real. Can't wait for the coming chapters. Great job!
Aww great story. I love Harry and Ginny stories :-)
Author's Response: Thanks, I love Harry/Ginny stories too. Not the sad ones, though. I like happy endings. :)
I thought this story was very touching. I love the part of OoTP when Ginny yells at Harry and it turns him around. I think this is a great story from her POV leading up to that scene. Good Job.
I thought this story was very touching. I love the part of OoTP when Ginny yells at Harry and it turns him around. I think this is a great story from her POV leading up to that scene. Good Job.
Fantastic!! Dudley married a witch, that is so funny. I shudder to think of Dudley giving his son "the talk". I love your concept. Can't wait for ch 4. Keep up the good work!!
Although I'm a bit confused about your time line Scrimgeour being the Minister of Magic for 33 years when Guldone refers to the incident at the DoM as a couple of years ago. Other than that its a great story.
Author's Response: This was an incident which occurred about 4 years after Harry\'s 5th year. Thanks for reviewing!
Very cute and clever. Maybe you can write another one with "Harry, I will Marry you". Its just a suggestion. :-)
Very cute and clever. Maybe you can write another one with "Harry, I will Marry you". Its just a suggestion. :-)
Author's Response: i like that suggestion. thank you. :)
Ha Ha. I love this story. Its so funny, Dudley working for Fred and George. I cracked up at the part where Ginny was flirting with Dudley to get a rise out of Harry. I love stories with Fred and George. Good job!
Ha! Petunia I knew it, but Umbridge!?! I did not see that coming. Great chapter.
Author's Response: We always suspect the Muggles, don\'t we? Thanks for the review, and I hope you keep reading.
What Harry's memory is still gone!?! What about Ginny? What is going on? ;-)Hee hee hee Gred and Forge at the Dursleys, that is awesome. I'll be on the lookout for A Past Reclaimed.
Author's Response: The first chapter of A Past Reclaimed is in the queue. I hope it gets validated soon. :)
...and so the plot thickens. Nice work on that theory. My head was swimming the first time I read it. I had to reread it again to understand it. Accusing Petunia for consenting to this would be too easy and surely if she did consent it would have to have been behind Vernon's back cuz why would he let a wizard get that close to him? Hmm. Sirius is the only other "legal guardian", but why would he do something that cruel unless he thought it was for Harry's own good. Hmm. Interesting. My brain hurts, I guess that is why this is categorized as a Mystery. Great Job!
Author's Response: Yeah, that\'s how I always get out of answering questions: \"It\'s a Mystery; you\'re supposed to be confused!\" I\'m glad you like it, though, and I hope you\'re not disappointed by the next chapter.
That summary is just pure evil ;-) I have to wait 2 - 3 days to find out who did this to him. Great job on your story. You write very compelling chapters, and the baiting is perfect. I'm hooked as you can see.
Author's Response: Hahahaha! *maniacal laughter* I had an actual summary at one time, but it gave things away, like the fact that the person who erased Harry\'s memory was-- Wait, I still don\'t want to give it away. I finally just gave up and went with the \"read it and find out\" approach. Look at it this way, though: at least it\'s only 2-3 days (probably). My other chaptered story can\'t seem to get through the queue in less than a week.
OMG poor Harry. I think you've dealt him a worse hand than JK Rowling :-) I'm glad you didn't kill off Tyler, Harry needs a friend. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Ouch. I\'m not sure if dealing Harry a worse hand than JK is a compliment or an insult. After all, she killed off his parents, his godfather, and his mentor, not to mention everything he went through in the graveyard, with Umbridge, etc. Oh well, I guess I\'ll take it as a compliment.
After I sat down and thought about it, I decided that Harry and I both still need Tyler around to be the catalyst for several things. Of course, this story still has a Character Death warning, so you know that SOMEBODY\'s going to snuff it -- but whom? I really hope you like the next chapter -- I know I do. I\'m on my way to submit it right now.
YAY! It was Ginny, it was Ginny! Great chapter can't wait to see how it ends. There's a sequel? YAY!!
Author's Response: Yep, it was Ginny. I just love Ginny, and I can\'t bear to put Harry with anyone but her. And there most definitely IS a sequel.
Another great chapter. YAY Ron and Hermione too the rescue.
I've read your other stories and they are great too. Considering what kind of shipper you are I think I know who Harry's dream girl is ;-) Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: *Grin* That\'s all I\'ll say about the shipping. I\'m glad you like my stories, and I hope you continue reading them.
Author's Response: I just checked quickly through my story, and I`m pretty sure I haven`t used the term \"Harry`s dream girl\" yet, although that is what Tyler will start calling her as soon as he finds out about her. Incidentally, Chapter 17 is titled \"Harry`s Dream Girl.\" Just thought you might find that interesting.
Another great chapter! I think your premise is very interesting. When are Ron and Hermione gonna show up? Is the girl Harry is dreaming about Ginny?
Author's Response: I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it. I can assure you that Ron and Hermione will make their appearance in due time. As to the identity of the girl in Harry\'s dreams... my lips are sealed. Over the course of the next few chapters, Harry will begin developing his own theories about who she might be, but you\'ll have to decide if you think he\'s right or not. :D
Wow. Bellatrix actually loved someone else besides LV? At first I thought the man that was murdered was Harry and the woman "scorned" was Ginny (naturally because every story about a love lost from a woman's POV is from Ginny), but than I thought why would Ginny be in prison. Duh! Its interesting that the "monster" is Harry.
Was this your first dark/angst fic? Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks. You were intended to think it was Ginny at first, so I\'m glad I got that part right. I kept running across stories like this that were about Ginny, and I thought it might be interesting to turn the tables. I imagine Harry killing Rodolphus in battle, perhaps to prevent him from killing someone else, but none of that would matter to Bella. She would only see the man who killed her husband. And yeah, this is my first dark/angst. I\'m glad you thought it was good.
I forgot to mention something in my first review: I totally didn't see that coming. I mean I kind of suspected it was Bellatrix from the start or maybe Narcissa but that thought came and went. Nice twist at the end. I can see Harry being that cold where Bellatrix is concerned.
Author's Response: Thanks. I can totally see Harry being that cold to her too. He\'s a really nice guy, but not to people like her.
Awww cute story. I like your style and the dialog.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Harry and Ginny are fun to do, and its clear in HBP that they became friends over the summer, but all the details were left out. So we have to supply them, natrually.