Finally! This chapter was great! I really liked the 'man-to-man' talk Harry and Ron had, it was quite funny. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I have a feeling Dobby took Harry's crumpled letter and send it to Hermione nonetheless. Maybe he even spiced it up a bit, lol. Very well written! 10! ~Eilime~ PS. The last part of this chapter was accidentally in italic, just thought you'd like to know :)

Author's Response: It's pretty funny that everyone really liked the talk with Ron and that was like that last thing I added to this chapter. In its originally version, Ron wasn't even in this chapter. You might just be right about Dobby ;). Thanks for the great review.

Great chapter! Update soon, looking forawrd to see what Ron says to Hermione and what happens next between Draco and the Gryffindor boy! Keep up the good work! ~Eilime~

Hi sparx! I’ve been waiting patiently alongside everyone else for chapter 32 to be validated, and then what do I realise? I haven’t even read chapter 31! Nor reviewed it. Seriously, where was my mind the day I oversaw this huge mistake? I’m truly sorry; to think that you had to survive a whole chapter without my seemingly perpetual reviews must have been hard on you. But, of course, having 198 reviews for that sole chapter might have helped your suffering. Anyway, on to this chapter then… At the beginning, I thought the air of this chapter was completely new. Not that it was a different writing style, but it just… felt different. But when Lucius came back, not particularly far into the story, everything was back to normal. When Lucius said Narcissa was considering throwing the wedding ‘here’, where did you mean? At the Malfoy estate, in France, or Hogwarts where his head was floating in the fireplace as he said it? I like the fact that he’s complaining about how much money his wife has been throwing away, and then ends their conversation by saying his caviar is served. My, what a hypocritical man. But, honestly, what can you expect? I liked their conversation on the night before the match. It was very sweet, and I enjoyed this irrational overdramatic Hermione who sees Quidditch as a game where you chase balls and get your skull split open, and nothing more. “It’s nothing some sexy red lingerie cannot fix.” Or a dancing sheep nightgown with bright pink pompoms for buttons. I love these little secret thoughts of Draco’s. You had another one in a previous chapter (“His favourite nightie.”) I remember it because we discussed it in a review, me saying that the fact that he doesn’t prefer a see-through, black nightie is really comforting and adoringly foreshadowing. So you knew I’d love this one, too. I like that fact that they’re talking about the miserable life his future wife will have when he has such a passion for Quidditch too, and neither of them have really realised that she, Hermione Granger, is the one he’s, probably, going to marry. Which means she’s the one wearing red lingerie and soaking in a hot tub with Draco in the vision (You can’t see it, but I’m wriggling my eyebrows). “Having fulfilled his goal of making Hermione stop thinking about the upcoming match, Draco flopped back onto his pillow.” Yeah, right, like that was his only goal. Like he didn’t secretly enjoy leaning close to her and whisper sweet nothings – or rather, whispering complacent lies and secret hints, whichever you prefer – into her ear? And then as I read along, he admits to having thought he was about to snog her, too. Major step-up! Oh, and I absolutely loved Hermione’s comeback with “…considering how much you enjoyed the first one.” Take that, Draco. Get yourself out of that one. Well… sadly, he did… but only after a long, uncomfortable silence. I liked the little incident with Pansy where she gave him her usual good luck kiss (yucky in its own simple way) and that he now, unlike before, felt like wiping his lips for some strange, phenomenal, unknown, inexplicable reason that will remain a mystery till the end of time, I’m sure (I’m being extremely sarcastic, if you couldn’t tell…). I’m happy to hear Harry and Ron are back on track with Hermione. I really liked the promise Draco gave her about taking all the responsibility should Slytherin lose the match, even if Hermione had something to do with it. I agree with Jinx; very gallant. Which leads me to him buying – oh yes, “buying” – robes for her to wear for the game. He is very thoughtful, a quality you don’t lightly allow Draco Malfoy to be capable of having. “Don’t want any of my players coming in while you change and getting a heart attack, do we?” Hermione was very right about this comment; it could be both taken as a compliment and an insult. I rather prefer ‘compliment’, but when have Hermione and Draco ever listened to me? “I still don’t see why you insist on taking the potion,” Draco scowled. His reluctance to agree to this is perfectly understandable. Firstly, because, as you said, he doesn’t like to be in debt. Secondly, because it’s kind of an indirect insult to his flying, his advice on how to overcome her fear, and his passion for the sport, but of course this is not how Hermione sees it at all; she’s just all good will and wants to help him, bless her. “Don’t you dare ever make the mistake of saying something like that again!” Draco bellowed at Hanson. Does Draco yell because Hanson is somewhat insulting Hermione’s inability to stay on a broom without screaming or falling, or because Hanson makes the mistake of believing that Gryffindor will go easy on them because Hermione is tailing along, or just the asset/liability difference you mentioned in the text? (I feel like I’m not making any sense). I’m glad that Harry got hit by a Bludger – okay, that sounded wrong! What I mean is I’m glad you didn’t just let Draco reach the Snitch first because that would be, in my honest opinion, quite unreal (what with him never having beaten Harry to it, let alone with another person weighing on his broom). So I’m pleased with the way you let him win, though of course now I’m dying to read the next chapter to see what happens next – whether or not Draco and Hermione are dead (I’m guessing not), and whether or not Hermione will know that Draco did in fact position her above him in the fall. So, I’m off to read the next chapter! And I think I can say for sure that this is the longest review you’ve had from me yet. Sorry.

Author's Response: Hi Eilime! K first, let me just say that I was ridiculously happy to see that you have such a long review for me! Haha… I\'m going to enjoy replying this one! (And like you, I have employed the tactic of writing in Word while reading the review so I can comment where appropriate). Anyways, let’s get started on the long, glorious review. Yup, I did happen to realize that there was no review from dear old Eilime for this chapter, but I thought it was because you decided that leaving long reviews for sparx has become too tiresome! I did miss the review and it wasn’t at all easy to survive knowing that you hadn’t left one (oh the suffering!), but I guess the 198 reviews did help ease it a little (to all you guys reading this response, YOU ALL ROCK!). Right, I\'m side-tracking again. On with the chapter… Hmmm, I think I understand why you felt that the chapter started out differently. I admit, I did want to give it a different feel, but that didn’t turn out too well, so I went back to my usual writing style (probably when Lucius came into the picture again, in fact). Ah, I guess I didn’t make it too clear where Lucius and Narcissa wanted to hold the wedding when they said they wanted it “here”, right? I actually meant France, but, now that I think about it, it could have been any of those places you mentioned. I’ll remember to be clearer about that in the future. Hahaha… I\'m glad you caught the so-called irony of the situation: where Lucius keeps complaining about how his wife is spending his water like money, but then disappears to enjoy his high-class caviar. The hypocrisy is all too evident when it comes to Lucius Malfoy. The little talk they had before the Quidditch match was necessary I felt— I wanted to show how much they’re relationship had developed (from couch in common room where they didn’t talk at all to same bed on which they actually have a normal conversation— I think you get the idea) over time. So I\'m glad you enjoyed that whole talk, including Hermione’s anxiety and momentary overdramatic-ness. Yes, I couldn\'t resist! I had to bring in the nightie again. And I knew you’d like the comment, especially after the review you left the last time about the black, sheer nightie… Lol, and you\'re right, Hermione is probably going to end up becoming Draco’s wife in the future (probably, unless I decide to turn things around… *evil smile*), so it’s like Hermione in the vision, wearing that red lingerie and soaking with Malfoy junior in the hot tub (ooooooh, *wriggles eyebrows with you*). How exciting. ;) Oh, I would think he was whispering BOTH complacent lies and secret hints into her ear, don’t you think (and of course enjoying every moment of it…)? Yup, he admits to having enjoyed the kiss with her! He thought he could outsmart dear Hermione with that, eh? But Hermione’s much too fast for him (well, sometimes anyway, when she’s not too tongue-tied at least), so she came back with the “considering how much you enjoyed the first one.” But then, like you said, even after the silence, Draco DID make a comeback (dang it!). LOL… Your sarcasm (yes, I could tell and I loved it!) about the inexplicably, unknown reason that Draco felt Pansy’s kiss to be icky this time had be rolling over with laughter. But yes, I think that little incident did show how Malfoy is moving away from a certain pug-face and moving TOWARD a certain brunette… =D I had to have Harry and Ron make it all up with Hermione again because, to be honest, it would be difficult to handle them still being mad at her for such a long time. I would think (or at least hope) that they’re friendship is strong enough to withstand such problems. About the responsibility talk— I’ll be honest, I wasn’t sure if it was befitting initially. I was having second thoughts about including it in. Then I thought it would make sense for Draco to say something like that after all Hermione has done for him (and we all know how Draco hates being indebted to anyone, so I guess he would have jumped to take her responsibility… Did that make sense?). I think he “buying” robes for her (though not admitting to it because he’s an idiot like) is definitely a big hint to Draco’s changing attitude towards Hermione (nope, I\'m not gonna bore you with the full details, don’t worry). I mean, like you said, how often do we get Draco Malfoy being thoughtful?? LOL… I know you’d rather have the “heart attack” comment be a compliment, but what Draco meant, only Draco knows! But think about it, Draco has seen the body Hermione Granger possesses beneath all those layers of clothes… ;) So, you decide! You\'re conclusions about why Draco doesn’t want Hermione to take the Potion are perfectly right— but on Hermione’s part, she just wants to help, sincerely, just like you said. And if she thinks taking that potion is going to help Draco, then take it she will! About Draco screaming at Hanson (don’t worry, I actually do get what you\'re trying to say! Haha…), I think it’s a little bit of all the three. Draco doesn’t like the fact that Hanson sorta indirectly insulted Hermione, but he also doesn’t want Hanson underestimating Gryffindor’s ability, and thus underperforming, with Hermione around. (now does that make sense??) Then there is that whole asset/liability thing that I mentioned (which I can’t really recall now, so we’ll leave it at that. =P). “I’m glad that Harry got hit by a Bludger – okay, that sounded wrong!” ---> LOL, yes, that DID sound wrong indeed! But I do get what you mean. I couldn\'t let Draco just get the Snitch like that, because honestly, Draco does have the disadvantage. Not only is Harry the better player, but with Hermione adding to the weight of his broom, it would have been near impossible for Draco to put up a fight with Harry. But the thing was, I really wanted Draco to catch the Snitch (can you guess why? Heehee… *evil grin*) and for that I knew that Harry had to be stopped (by means of a Bludger— that was the only thing I could come up with that wouldn\'t hurt Harry too much). So now, you will have to read the next chapter to see what becomes of our two heros! Will they be dead (kinda defeats the purpose of the story, but you never know! I might have decided to go for a really morbid ending)? And if they survived, were they injured? Will Hermione remember what Draco did for her? Will… OK, I will stop now, promise! And yup, I think this is the longest review you\'ve written, but it was awesome going through it, really! And, err, I\'m really sorry you’ll have to read this awfully long response Eilime…

Great chapter! Loved your idea about the Love-Knot -- nice imagination you've got! Can't wait for more, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank u! I'm really glad you liked the idea of the Love-Knot. i was praying hard that it would work out and not seem to far-fetched. seems it worked out after all! thanks once again!

Okay, so now you’ve dug your own grave, darling. You’ve officially given me free rein to babble endlessly in my reviews, so the day you die from hyperventilation in attempt to read one of my overdone, seemingly perpetual sentences that leave you panting, sweating and begging for mercy, an ‘I told you so’ won’t be unlikely, though, of course, I couldn’t live with myself knowing I had killed you, so I would end up taking my own life, and thus the world would be rid of us both to dwell, reluctantly of course, in the unhappiness everyone has been shrouded in since we crossed over. Oh, the misery! The despair! The lovely piña coladas left untouched in my absence! No way am I going to let that happen. I’m just going to have to leave a short review. *Sparx is shaken off her desk chair as the Earth rotates off its axis* Eilime, leaving a short review? Three words: No way! - We both know that’s impossible. “Ah yes, it’s quite freaky how you pick up on these little details and infer so much and so precisely from them!” (-on the topic of the light from the Love Knot growing). I can’t believe my guessing and ostensibly ridiculous interpretations were so correct. You can’t see it, but I’m applauding myself and throwing roses at my feet. I’m an altruist, if you couldn’t tell *coughs violently*. And to continue from the fact that I undid an inextricable knot (*applause arises out of the blue again and Eilime blushes from all the unwanted attention*), it sounded as though I was on to something that you couldn’t disclose for the sake of the continuation of the story, and I just have to say, I’m pretty excited about whatever is to come. “After giving that whole long speech and him not caring and all that jazz, he leaps outta bed in a jiffy with all of those injuries. Sigh. Men are such idiots at times.” True, but they’re cute idiots, which makes it all the more difficult. Damn this weakness… Okay, NOW I’ll start commenting on chapter 33, which has been, unsurprisingly, greatly anticipated for a long time. I thought the Hermione Healing Draco moment was – though sadly predictable, I have to say – cute. You wrote it in a way that wasn’t too cliché, but just the fact that their relationship is growing quite slowly, and rightfully so, in this story, made me like this little moment of compassion because, damnit, we need some action. I don’t really know why, but I thought the “Awwww, look! They’re having a quarrel! Isn’t that sweet?!” comment was cute. As for the “Ignorance is bliss” mantra, I find it equivocal. For it’s both urging Hermione and Draco to be purposely ignorant of the rumours and the whole incident at the match, but it also seems to me that they need to convince themselves that they’re not affected by the rumours and the possible truth behind them (at least the rumours of them having romantic feelings for each other). The whole toilet sequence with Lavender and Parvati was a really nice touch. I’m sure Draco’s head was inflating conspicuously, but I also liked the fact that he heard some not-so-complimenting things like how Hermione had looked as though Parvati was a loon when she had said Draco was hot. Serves him right. But it was actually quite an important moment for the imminent development in Hermione and Draco’s relationship, since – like in the chapter with the psychiatrist who so innocently cut it out in cardboard for them – someone is stating their compatibilities and the possibility of them being together. I have to agree with Hermione though; laughing like a maniac about it was a bit too extreme. I thought I’d just like to point out that during this chapter Draco has taken Hermione’s hand twice. Though he is just leading her somewhere, I’m sure he’s all tingly inside when doing it. Well, it’s nice to know that Draco would prefer to be stuck with Hermione for an interminable amount of time rather than some ninny, but I’m sure there are other reasons than the ones he fed Hermione. Sparx, I have a theory. It’s a possible ending to this story that my mind has been pondering about whenever I read another chapter. Okay, I’m going to tell you what it is whether you like it or not: Throughout the story, Draco and Hermione get closer, more conspicuously now after he’s saved her, and as you wrote at the end of chapter 32, And from that moment on, the two Heads definitely grew closer, whether they knew it or not. And then, sometime in the future, they’ll grow even closer, close enough to, on some level, not mind so much that they are doomed to be married. Then, they accept it, either out loud or just in each of their minds, but before they get to admit it to each other, they find a way to break the Love Knot, which they do, without getting married. So now, emancipated and without any perceptible reason to stay together, they feel like they’re missing something. And then, BOOM! – they realise that what they’re missing is each other, and they get together on their own accord and not because the Love Knot deemed them to be together for all eternity. What d’you think, eh? This is of course your story, and you do whatever you set out to do, but in my anxiety for this story to end so I’ll know what happens (and on the same time not to end, so it can go on…), my mind just started to imagine things. Well, in conclusion – Loved the chapter. Until we meet again… ~Eilime.

Hi sparx. I’m so happy my rambling is appreciated! It really does make one wonder if Hell has frozen over… Even though I’m allowed, I don’t think I’ll talk so much in this review. But let’s just get on with it: I really enjoyed this chapter. The flow of the story is wonderful and I liked the little progress in their relationship in this chapter. The Silencing Charm seems to be working okay, though I’m still doubtful about Draco’s abilities to navigate the broom properly to complete a match. But anyway, “Is it permanent, by any chance?” I really like this input by Nott about the Silencing Charm. It’s such a small thing but, I don’t know, I just liked it. Another thing I liked was the way Jinx tried to calm Hermione down by telling her to ‘breathe in, out, in…’ Such a nice ring. Not at all filled with cruelty, malice and the will to dominate all life like stupid Ring of Power by stupid Sauron. Even though you’ve mentioned it in previous chapters, you really see that Quidditch does mean a lot to Draco in this one. I mean, he allows Hermione to bruise him all over, yet he doesn’t complain for the sake of her overcoming her fear and him being able to play again. And the nightie… Oh, the nightie, the nightie. What’s a Harry Potter fanfiction without a pink nightie with dancing sheep and pompoms? “His favorite nightie.” Aww, how cute is Draco? That he doesn’t prefer a see-through, black nightie is really comforting and adoringly foreshadowing. And oh, he was trying to keep his eyes from wandering all over her body? In that nightie? Hey, whatever gets him going… Considering you practically hauled me out of bed, no,” Hermione snapped. Touché. Like Nott’s input, this is one of the minor things but the things that I really like and want to mention. “For your information, I'm going to do a Silencing Charm on you, before you start snapping at me and presume that I'm going to hex you.” I love it that he’s starting to get to know her much better. Even though he could as easily have said this when they were still “sworn enemies” (which they still are as for what people think but, hah, I know better) because he would still have known she’s a know-it-all friend of Harry Potter who would not wish to have evil Draco Malfoy’s wand pointed at her, but it gets a whole new meaning now. And then there’s that part of their evening flight where it says, “She squeezed. Immediately, Draco lowered his speed.” I love it that he sticks to his word and, however reluctant he might be to admit it, cares for her safety and, yes, I know, he doesn’t want to be showered with vomit, but still! I believe in the better side of him. However dangerous and long the journey to his good side is, I will get there. And so will Hermione. Ooh, loved the electricity between the two of them at night. Him being conscious about the proximity they were in, her pulling herself closer to Draco because she was now quite at ease. At ease with, might I point out, Draco! The reappearance of Lucius was enjoyable. However agitating it is for the Head Boy and Girl, he really does amuse me with his little inputs like, “Just what where you two doing anyway?” Then there’s the drinking problem… However amusing it was when Parvati (or was it Lavender? Who cares…) came over and was all sweet about this ‘problem’ of Hermione’s, I do hope this won’t be anything major in the future chapters. I’m sorry for bringing all the quotes into this review, but it’s a great way of letting you know what the hell I’m on about. My review is nearing an end (indeed, it is), so I’d just like to say, great chapter! Powerful and sweet. But please, more action. Until we meet again! Eilime. PS. “Even though I’m allowed, I don’t think I’ll talk so much in this review.” Whoops, I guess I just proved myself wrong…

Author's Response: Eilime! My eternal life-saver! LOL, kidding. Seriously, your rambling is appreciated, as unbelievable as that may seem. =D Righty, let’s get on with it then since you want to keep this review short. ;) I'm glad that you liked the flow of this chapter and that the little progress the two had did not go unnoticed! I understand that you're a little doubtful about Draco’s abilities to navigate with Hermione behind him, but hey, he’s a big strong man so I'm sure he’ll be able to handle a little extra weight. Heehee. That dialogue by Nott just seemed like a very Slytherin thing to say, so I had to add it in. good to hear that you liked it! Jinx is essentially a good ring, even though she can be really bitchy to Draco when the need arises. Definitely nothing like the Ring of Power that Sauron was after in LOTR. But I'm sure Jinx would love to meet this Ring of Power if she had the chance. She’s got an active social life you know? ;) More active than mine, sad to say. Yup, Quidditch does mean a lot to him and I can’t exactly explain why without blabbering on and on, but it just does. Like you said, you can see it especially in this chapter. I do love the sheep nightie! I know it may seem a little odd that Draco Malfoy would prefer a nightie that has dancing sheep and pink pompoms on it to a sexy back lingerie, but I guess that kinda adds to his appeal, doesn’t it? Plus, I think the nightie is just so atrocious that you have to love it. Am I making any sense at all? K, moving on… The bit where Draco warns Hermione before performing the charm on her was put in the chapter for the precise reason of letting the readers know that he now knows her better and knew instinctively that she would have snapped at him. Like you said, he could have easily said that when they were sworn enemies (they still believe that, don’t they??), but him saying him now bears a totally different implication. And you're right about that line— despite not wanting to be covered with puke (we’ll overlook that fact for now), there’s certainly a deeper meaning to why he “IMMEDIATELY lowered his speed” (notice especially the word in caps). He does (as much as he doesn’t want to admit it) care about her safety and since she is keeping true to her word of flying with him, the least he can do is return the favor. I had to show you readers the chemistry between the two of them as they took the broomride. It was just one of the things I had to do. Having them actually realizing each other’s presence does say a lot about their relationship. =D Sparks were flying (ignore the really bad pun)! Hermione was in fact at ease with, of all people, Draco. Wow, did you ever think this day would come?? Lucius had to make a reappearance eventually, despite his wife being obsessed with France. I cannot stand him, but he is fun to have around, especially when dialogue as the one you mentioned has to be delivered. About the drinking problem, well, it was Parvati (though it doesn’t really make a difference), and I assure you, it won’t be a problem in the future. I just needed to lay out the groundwork for my next chapter. *wink* You’ll see. I'm actually really grateful that you did bring all those quotes into the review. I do appreciate it and it definitely makes it easier for me to understand what you're talking about. Well, I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. There will be progress (and soon, I assure you). Ta for now dear! And thanks for the “short” review. Hopefully, your next one will be even “shorter”… =D

Hi, sparx. Congratulations on another fabulous chapter. I’m glad you didn’t make Hermione forget about the previous night since it wouldn’t be very realistic. I was excited when they started talking about the night before because I, like every other reader I expect, believe that the kiss must have consequences. Draco’s rather abrupt and amazingly honest statement that led to, “Better than Simone?” made me want to slap Hermione. Though humorous in its conciseness and simplicity, it was very risky of her, and what Draco replied to this was even better. I loved how Draco made Hermione admit that she remembered the previous night, telling her lies which she couldn’t help but want to contradict. Well, the whole scene where they discussed the night before was just rightly awkward, smug and delightfully packed with hinting questions and evasive answers. Hermione’s “drinking problem” was a nice touch. I would definitely not want to be in her shoes at that moment. And when Harry and Ginny found out that Draco had given Hermione roses - so cute how they fidgeted in their seats (Draco and Hermione, of course). I also liked how Blaise and Draco (though the latter hiding it) sniggered at Hermione’s comments to Pansy. The whole dinner seemed, as you wrote Hermione found it, enjoyable and I like the slow progress the story has, both between Draco and Hermione but also the fact that Blaise seems quite indifferent to, and even seems to enjoy, her presence at dinner. You can relax now – I’m finished talking. Seriously. Not going to say another thing. Not a word. Not even one. I’m absolutely certain. I’ll bet you anything. By the way, can’t wait to the next chapter! Dammit! Lost the bet.

Author's Response: Hi, Eilime! My savior (yup, read the email)! Thank you so much for the review! It’s good that you liked the fact that I didn’t make Hermione forget what happened the previous night. If she did forget, where’s the fun in that? ;) That whole scene where Draco tells Hermione that she’s a good kisser and she asks if she’s better than Simone… I was debating whether or not to have that scene in this chapter. I thought it might seem a bold move on both Draco and Hermione’s part, but I decided why not. It added a nice touch and did catch Hermione completely off guard. But you do have a good point— it was awfully risky of her, and that is why I added the statement “And since when Hermione talk before thinking?” to let the readers know that she had no idea what made her say, “Better than Simone?” I wanted their exchange about the events of the previous night to be awkward, but not overly awkward because that wouldn't have given me room to do much with their characters. I’ll be honest with you; the rumor about Hermione’s “drinking problem” was a last minute touch. I did it because I wanted to make sure that Hermione would never repeat the mistake of getting herself drunk, ever. Harry and Ginny had to find out eventually, though it was unfortunate that they had to find out through Ron, who, as we all know, as a tendency to blow things out of proportion. Ah, the dinner scene with Slytherin. I quite enjoyed writing that bit as well. Pansy was back, and it seemed right that she would say something nasty to Hermione, who would definitely counter. You're right on the count that Blaise seems indifferent to Hermione’s presence; enjoy would be a bit too strong a word, at the moment. I actually need Blaise to not mind Hermione’s company, for reasons you’ll find out later in the story. Hahaha… Liked the way you ended the review! Brought a smile to my face. You don’t have to worry about talking too much actually— look how much I have rambled! All right, I shall leave you alone now. Thank you so much for this wonderful review!

I really liked your story. I just have one question: "L'Amoureux Du Serpent", do you mean "The Serpent's Love" because if you do then Draco is gay, lol. If his "Love" is supposed to be a woman (Hermione of course) it should say "L'Amoureuse Du Serpent". But I liked your story anyway of course! Good job, update soon

Author's Response: Yeah I know about the whole title deal and everything, but I think it just sounded better like it is. I'm glad you like my story though! : )

Author's Response: I changed the title anyway, lol. I had to recreate part of the plot line and this title fits better.

I really like your story so far, but I didn't understand that part where Uncle Vernon came to Harry's bedroom and started yelling when he saw Hermione in Harry's bed. It said that Harry used the 'Pretrificus Totallus' curse but his wand was on his bedside table a second later... Maybe I just read it wrong, but I got a bit confused. Anyhoo, I'm off to read the next chapters!

Author's Response: In the last story, Harry showed signs of wandless magic in front of Hermione. Here he used that ability when he felt she was being threatened.

One word: WOW! I loved it! I really enjoyed the "You're him too?!"-part (the boogeyman), it was hilarious! I think it is very well written and I like how the POV changes - it gives the story a kick, y'know, like everything goes faster and it's interesting that way! I don't know what else to say but update soon and *10*!