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09/22/06

The name's Juliet.
Yes, Juliet as in Romeo and Juliet.
No relation.
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Better Off This Way? by NorskHeksen

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sometimes people get involved with Dark Magic, not because they're evil, but because they haven't the intelligence or confidence to decide what they truly believe and stand up for it.

Narcissa Malfoy reflects on her life.

Songfic based on "Airport Song" by Guster. Warning is for a vague element, nothing graphic.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Better Off This Way?

Wonderfully written, excellent reflections with Narcissa, though I do think you overplayed Lucius a bit. Don't think on it, though, because I'm probably a bit prejudiced, seeing as Lucius is among my many favorite characters.

Very good job... I liked the ending. A lot.

Keep at it!

~Juli

Mary Sue, I love you! by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Once upon a time in the far, far, away land of California, Miranda Aramintha Rowena Ysabella Slyvia Ursula Evangelista- Mary Sue, for short- accepted an invitation to Hogwarts. As she searches for her one true love, will her soul mate be Draco? Harry? Snape? Colin? Fred and George? or...gasp...Voldemort?

Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Humour Fiction.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mary Sue, I love you!

*applauds* Oh, I must congratulate you on a lovely Mary-Sue performance. I've seen far too many of these not to realize a master at work... xD Loved it. Bravissima!

~Juli

Author's Response: Buongiorno Juli! Non parlo italiano, but I know enough to say \'Grazie!\' Coming from someone who\'s had post traumatic Sue-stress, I really appreciate it. ^_^

Epilogues, Part II: The Eighth Year by Grimmrook

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: *Nominated for 2006 Annual Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Original Character in reference to Rathius Ratbone*

It is Ginny's last year at Hogwarts, and the lessons she will learn are not restricted to books and classes. As she struggles to hold onto that which she holds most dear, the youngest Weasley will come to learn much about love, friendship, and herself.

This is the fifth story in the Epilogues story arc. If this is the first of my stories you have sat down to read, please read Right Here, One Good Day, and Epilogues Part I prior to reading this fic.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/14/06 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Ball

Woah! Major cliffhanger... I'm happy with Harry's decision, though - fits his character excellently. Poor Colin! I wonder what he walked in on. Or did he?

You have to write more VERY VERY soon.

~Juli

Author's Response: yeah, pretty much you\'re dealing with cliffhangers for the rest of the story, sorry about that. And I\'m glad you thought i got harry right. it\'s tough, and that\'s a situation i think it would be valid to disagree with me on, but youknow, it doesn\'t hurt to have people agree either. i will write more as soon as is humanly possible. thank you kindly.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/14/06 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Ball

Cliché Nation by just_the_contrary

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A compilation of the most commonly used Harry Potter clichés in the fandom. Features Angsty!Harry, Sweet!Draco, Head Dorms, sudden romances in the forms of Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny and of course, Draco/Hermione, because what's a cliché without them?

The Marauders also make an appearance in this fic, including Lily/Lily's best friend/Lily's other best friend.

Warning: mention of hippopotamuses inside.

Chapter Five is up! The story is done. Also, thank you to everyone who nominated this neatly tied bundle of ridiculousness in the QQ awards, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Collection of All-Sorts

*rolls around on the floor* Oh! *wipes eyes* This is wonderful, I tell you, absolutely great. Sparklypoo... And all with naturally perfect coloured hair, too. xD A Hogwarts full of Mary Sues and Gary Stus! Can't wait to look at the next chapter.

~Juliet

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 2: The New York Student Exchange

And presenting... Another great chapter of a MarySue World! Must read more. Brava!

~Juli

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 3: I'll Just Go Throw Myself a Large Pity Party

xD I love the Harry's scheduled duels and the house points... And the shouting! Ah, to die for. That was Harry in the 5th book, yes indeed, all shouting. Brava, again!

~Juliet

Author's Response: Yes, Harry\'s scheduled duels what one of my finer points, I say. Thank you.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 4: I Came, I Saw, I Dissolved Into a Fit of Laughter

"Yes, and all the ones that write fanfics and insert Americanisms"... Ah, so true. I hate that. xD Wonderful chapter again - Voldie. I'm sure he'd hate that... xD On to the next!

~Juli

Author's Response: Alrighty. Merci beaucoup.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 5: Bring Me to Life

"if anyone in your house thinks you’re insane from laughing so hard, I’m dreadfully sorry." Well, only my dad, but I doubt he cares. xD This was a wonderful anti-example... Good work - if it's not against the rules to tell you that. It hurts to read, but it was worth the laughs. Bravissima!

~Juli

Author's Response: Nothing is against the rules with my humour fics. I\'m so glad you liked it and thank you very much! :)

Miss Me by Valentinia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Merope Gaunt is alone and in love with a man she knows she can never have back. In her loneliness she writes a letter that is never to be delivered to Tom Riddle.

Reviews would be greatly appreciated! Constructive critism is definately welcome!

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Wow. Heartsick letter - her last. I love it. The reader is really caught up in her emotions, and Merope is seen in a deeper light. She was a good girl, really, I always thought. My favorite part was the part with Riddle and his current wife - "If she knew me she would not worry."
Bravissima!

Author's Response: Thanks! You\'ve made my day!

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Mary Sue, Marauders love you! by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

In the far, far away land of California, where the moon was in the seventh house, and Jupiter aligned with Mars, an Aquarian girl was called to Hogwarts, met the Marauders, and let her love steer the stars!

*Groovy prequel to Mary Sue, I love you!*

Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Humour Fiction.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mary Sue, Marauders Love You!

*smirk*
Hippie Mary-Sue... Now, there's a new one! xD Loved it- Harlot... *chortles*
Anyhow... Great one, again! I'll have to go see if there's any more.

~Juli

Author's Response: Grazie infinite! The first story was written for Sue-Therapy, lol, and this continued the \'healing\', snicker, snicker.

Friends, Love, and Dreams by NorskHeksen

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Set during Prisoner of Azkaban, the trio are in the hospital wing after their adventure. Hermione takes the time to reflect on her relationships with Ron and Harry.

Warning is for sexual references, nothing graphic.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh! That's so cute... I loved the ending. Very poetic, very powerful end. Marvelous.

Brava!
~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh! That's so cute... I loved the ending. Very poetic, very powerful end. Marvelous.

Brava!
~Juli

Ode to Mary Sue by Kerichi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

After eviscerating Mary Sue in fiction, Mary Sue, I love you! and Mary Sue, Marauders love you!, I was seized by the irresistible urge to skewer her in sonnet. (my version of one, anyway, choosing content over iambic pentameter :D) Shakespeare's 18th sonnet, Shall I compare thee..., was my inspiration, since when it comes to Mary Sue fics, (including the humorous ones) So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this gives life to thee....

*Rated 3rd-5th only due to a belief that younger readers shouldn't be exposed to unpleasant 'facts of life' like Mary Sue. ^_~ *

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Ode to Mary Sue

Well, I wouldn't quite say poison, exactly.. Maybe a sedative.

Excellent, again - You should write some on her soul mate, Gary Sue. xD
~Juli

Author's Response: Non veleno- sedativo? (you\'ve got me hooked on an italian translator from other reviews, :D) I think the range of Sues varies from harmless to toxic depending on the story and reaction of the reader, heh. Gary Stu only makes me curl a lip, though, not bare teeth...or claws...LOL

The Raconteur by The Half Blood Prince
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Sirius has always wondered what fear really is like. Told in second person, this is a non-rhyming poem exploring Sirius's feelings of fear.

QSQ Poetry Award Winner.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woah..
This was spectacular. All out - oh my goodness, what an awesome poem. Good job on the freeverse situation, and I love the occational sidethoughts in parenthesis... Loved it. Bravissima!

~Juliet

Author's Response: Thank you, and an even bigger thank you for telling me you enjoyed my work - I could need, I have figured, some confidence, which I am severely lacking after I post a poem on this site. Again, thank you! =)

Friendship, Love, and Pranks: The Story of the Marauders by Padfoot is MINE

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Chapter Thirty-Eight in Queue!

They say someday your life will flash before your eyes...

The Marauders. The name alone strikes fear into the hearts of teachers and makes girls swoon. Watch as Sirius, who has always kept his emotions locked up in a box, finally finds the girl that has its key; as James masterminds everything, except how to win over the girl of his dreams; as Remus finds love, but learns it's just as hard to keep it going, and as Peter tries to prove he's just as good as the other four, no matter what he has to do. They're unstoppable, and it's safe to say that once they're gone, Hogwarts will never be the same again.

...let's make ours worth watching.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Making History

Whew... That was a lot of names... I'm not sure I quite liked the style, but hey, for a first star , ' one of the best I've seen. This is pretty good for an introduction, as well, and I liked how you ended with "the rest is history..." It really gives a step-up into the story. I also liked the idea of Dumbledore's granddaughter... Wonder if/how she dies? Hmm. Anyhow. Brava!

~Juliet

Author's Response: Yeah, it\'s a lot...this is some of me earler writing, anot very good or anything...especially the next chapter, It\'s definitely my least favorite...

Ils Veulent Que Nous Dansions by NorskHeksen

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A fluffy songfic about Ron and Hermione at Bill and Fleur's wedding.

Lyrics from "Asking Us to Dance" by Kathy Mattea in italics.

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Ils Veulent Que Nous Dansions

Oh...

That was spectacular. Wonderful, lovely, incredible... Bravissima.

The bouquet in the beginning was filled with such perfect imagery... Could not have been better. A wonderful Ron and Hermione fic - most of them are so sappy, but this... Well, you captured their emotions PERFECTLY.

Bravissima, again.

~Juli

A Golden Ribbon by Periwinkle

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It's eight days until Hermione leaves Hogwarts and she is faced with a difficult situation to make that has nothing to do with her graduation. Seeking the Astronomy Tower for its isolated comfort, she finds none of it when he chooses to pay her a visit.

Will she let him go, or will she stay?

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Oooh... I like this one. The entrance reminded me of Bambi, but the rest - oh, the rest was excellent. Great work here, leaves much to be admired in its enchanting words. Brava!

~Juliet

Author's Response: *blushes* Wow, thank you for this great review! *grins*

A Fair to Remember by Therinian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary:
Before going to a Muggle fair, Mr. Weasley tells his family, Harry, and Hermione: “Don’t attract attention to yourselves, do not use your wand for any reason, and lastly, don’t let anyone know you’re not a Muggle!”

The group tries to abide by these simple rules, but things don’t always go according to plan...

NOTE: This story takes place during the summer after the Trio's 6th Year and consists of 12 chapters.

***THANK YOU FOR YOUR REVIEWS.*** :)

Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmm... Another very awesome chapter, though I'm not sure what the significance of this card game is, it certainly holds amusement. Great job here!

~Juliet

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