oh no. The mystery comes in now...aww, I love James with Sara, it's so cute!
I love this story already.
Awwww....I hope they don't stop being friends. But who knows....nice job again.
I love this it is so adorable! And just a few days ago I was thinking of this song. It is so so so very cute, I adore James/Lily as well, and you did a great job!
Author's Response: thanks so much! i\'m glad you liked it.
Well, I thought your story was beautiful.
I think, even though it was just a dream, that is something that happens to Harry a lot, or would happen if he were a boy with the life he has. The dream was so sweet, and you made the bitterness so clear with only those last two paragraphs.
I thought the way you described the surroundings was magical.
'The breeze blew lightly, caressing the faces of those who cared to feel its soft presence and played with others’ tresses.'
That's a great line. You have talent at describing nature in a gentle, peaceful way. Also, what Dumbledore said, about love not having an end, that just struck me as brilliance.
My only little suggestion would be to to change the font for Harry's thought, 'Hang on'. I didn't find one other mistake with this and it truly was wonderful and sad and sweet...bittersweet then.
Oh, and, by the way, I have herd that line before, the one about 'the world to one person'. It's a great line and it worked great here too.
Well, I hoped you liked this review, I really don't think I am good at it. But you deserve the best review.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderfully kind words! I just love to describe things, and to me, I feel that my stories aren\'t complete if there isn\'t a sufficent amount of description in them. About the font, thanks for telling me. :)
Good thing Lily is dumping her superficial friends. They deserve it. Poor Iola. It doesn't sound VERY dramatic, but it still is horrible. And it's more realistic. Tons of people have lives like that, and less have worse. Very nice chapter, and great story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I\'m glad you appreciate that - I didn\'t want it to be \"VERY dramatic\", just a little dramatic, to make it more realistic. So I\'m really glad you picked that up! :)
Ha, melted butter! That was good! It seems pretty obvious to me what Iola is always on about, but maybe you're planning a clever surprise for us. Does Lily also sort of assume what it is? And I really don't mean to sound annoying, but I hate it that Iola thinks her troubles are so big that she calls other's troubles pathetic. Sometimes the people with the real problems don't like to let it show ever, and are assumed to have faultless lives...but anyway, it's great!
Author's Response: Well ... I agree with absolutely everything. It is a little obvious, yes, although there is a little bit of depth to it. And yes, that Iola thinks her troubles are so huge no one else\'s matter is one of her faults. Because nobody\'s perfect, right? I\'ve never said Iola is, either. :D Thanks for your review!
Well, I like it and all, but they are all annoying me! It used to be just James and her other friends , but now it's all of them! I hope this part doesn't last too long. Good job.
Author's Response: It doesn\'t, don\'t worry. Next chapter is a little more fun. Thanks for reviewing! And sorry they\'re annoying you ... :S
I can almost not believe how hysterically funny you’ve made Sirius. He is the perfect blend of smart, immature, and friendly. What he said about the pennies…goodness I would’ve burst into laughter if my mother had not been very ill, next to me.
And I like the way Lily is slowly realizing what she’ missed out on. James is great too, I imagined he’d stopped being an idiot by this time. And of course, Iola, gotta love her. Lol, can’t wait to read more. Also, tell you’re brother he’s hilarious for me…loved that last line!
Author's Response: Ha ha, the last line has been a hit all round, I think! Thank so much for everything you said, because that means everything is coming off how I want it to ... and what could be a better feeling than that? Especially James - you would have THOUGHT he\'d have stopped being an idiot by now, but ... Anyway, thanks so so much for this review, it was lovely!
Hey!
Well, I like the study group idea, though I think you overdid a little with Petunia. maybe that's necessary so, keep it up.
Author's Response: Petunia is a bit over the top in her revulsion towards Lily, I think, especially because there\'s still an element of shock- she\'s still getting used to the idea of Lily being a \"freak\". The next chapter has been in queue for a few days, so hopefully it\'ll be posted soon. Thanks for the review! =)
That was really sad. You did a great job on Caroline's memory. Poor thing.
Author's Response: I know, poor Caroline :(. But I think that this chapter definitely shows why she\'s so leaky and annoying. Thanks for the review!
Hey! I was just wondering when you would update again. I miss your story. Lol, I sound sappy. I'd love it if you could tell me what you think of my very first James/Lily too. your a good writer
Author's Response: Hi, actually I stopped updating because I wasn\'t sure if people were actually reading my story. But your review prompted me to update just a few minutes ago. You receive your very own shout out in my author\'s notes. =)
I just found this story, and i like it. It seems a bit slow now, but I'm sure it'll pick up. up date soon, please.
I just found this story, and i like it. It seems a bit slow now, but I'm sure it'll pick up. up date soon, please.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review- yeah, the story starts picking up around the 3/4 chapter- right now, the background info has to be given about characters.
I just submitted the next chapter into the queue yesterday, so hopefully it\'ll be validated soon! =)
You are very welcome and I loved the review you left me! Glad I'll be reading more soon!
First off, I am sorry it took me so long to get to but I was on a cruise for a bout two weeks. So there you have it. Anyway, now I have to read this...
Author's Response: I hope the cruise was fun!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! This is so funny! I am begginning to see how James starts to fall for her. Is thsi the end of the first year...great job!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for all the reviews =). And yes, this is the end of the first year, second year starts quite soon.
Yay! Awww....how sweet! Stupid Severus...he messes everything up...When's the next update...
Author's Response: As soon as I finish writing the next chapter, I assume! :P Thanks for the review!
ohh...I love Remus. He is too sweet. And what is Addie thiking!!!Poor Nell when she finds out.
Author's Response: I love Remus too :) Thanks for the review!
forgot to add this to my favorites.
Author's Response: *smiles* You\'ve made my night better :) Thanks so much!