I love writing and Harry Potter books, so this is an amazing website to join. My favourite character is Percy Weasley. Percy rocks!!!!!!
very, very, very, very good. One of the best stories I've read. Hurry up and finish it, I want to see what happens!
Hilarious story. Hurry and finish it !!!!
In a word: hilarious! Very, very much so. Keep writing!!
Percy's dead!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! He's my favourite character! You can't kill him! Sob! Very, very good story, though, apart from mudering Percy. Ginny rocks, feminism, Yay! I love how everyone's so close. You're a wonderful writer, so I may just forgive you for killing the wonderful human being that is Percy Weasley. Maybe. I don't know, I'll have to think about it. I do really love the ideas you introduce though, it's food for thought. I must now leave to grieve over Percy x :-(
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry you missed him. But he was a catalyst for change, and very convenient. Thank you for reviewing. I hope you like the rest!
Wow! Really, really wow! This is incredible, it's just so meaningful. Clever dialogue, the kind great romances are made of. Definitely one of the best stories I've read here.
Very good story! I felt so sorry 4 poor Ginny. Finish it quickly!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I meant to respond like this but at first I didn't know how.
Wow. Strange and wonderful. This has so many levels. Absoulutely brilliant and amazingly well-written. Ardderchog!!!
Whoa, cool. I'd really like to see where this is going to go. Awesome story
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I just updated the story, go see the next chapter.
Absolutely amazing. I feel so sorry for George, and I've often wondered myself about how close the twins are, y'know. This is a fascinatingly strange and mesmerizingly compelling story. I HAVE to know what happens. Please write as fast as you can. Brilliant.
Whoa, this is something new. What the hell is going on, and why is George seeming to be afraid of his twin? Must leave to read the next chapter now!!!
Very, very, very good! It was lovely and long and I loved the descriptions. I feel simltaneous sympathy and revulsion for Petunia. You have a very cool and interesting style of writing. I love the symbolism the dog has of Sirius. 10 out of 10!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your most kind review. I always feel like blushing when people say it's a ten out ten. I'm having trouble getting chapter seven accepted, so if you'd like, I hope you will go to fanfiction.net to read further until I get time to resolve the problem here. I have twenty chapters over there. I need to check my grammar to resubmit, but I'm volunteerting a lot lately and I'm pressed for time. You have a sweet pename. I really hope to see you over at the other site, at least temporarily until I resubmit here, and if you get time, leave a little review for me on the other chapters if you like them, which I really hope you will, because your review has really made me smile! Thanks so much for taking the time to review, it means so much to me! Have a great day!
Wonderful!!! Your writing's incredibly moving and I really felt Harry's frustration at the end. I'm truly fascinated by Tyler, you've added him in wonderfully. Is he a wizard? Great long chapters and you're writing's intruiging with a nice wry humour thrown in to lighten it!!! 10 out of 10, for sure!
Author's Response: Wow! thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the looong chapters, because later on in chapter 23, it is 24 pages loooong. I'm trying to break it up, but I don't know.......It kind of works this way. I don't know if people want to read a chapter that long though. A lot happens in it....oh well, I've only posted seven chapters here, so I have time to think about it before I get to that part later on here. I'm very glad to read that you enjoy the angsty side of things as well, as Harry recovers for most of the months of September and October before he is really up for much...but good stuff happens in the meantime...I really hope you like it because you've been a constant source of good information on how the story is progressing, and I've appreciated hearing from you very much. This story is finished now with just editing left at over 700 pages.....hope that didn't make you run away from your computer screaming...? It is so very kind of you to rate this as ten out ten as I worry about it's quality sometimes and it's very long length. So far so good with reviews though and reviews like yours make this such a worthwhile hobby and make me feel so appreciated, which is a nice feeling for sure. I just want you to know how much I appreciate your having taken your valuable time to review these chapters. It is very nice of you indeed. You have always been most kind and encouraging and I hope all writers are lucky enough to get a reviewer like you who takes the time to leave a thought or two on any given chapter of a story. I am submitting a new chapter tomorrow and hopefully it will be accepted. I don't know if you've seen my one shot I did for challenge at a site called SIYE called 'Five More Minutes,' The contest criteria was that it had to be about a Muggle picnic held in April and could contain bonus phrases they give you such as "Futon, fondue what's the difference?" yeah, hard to fit in, but I managed. It is very different from the other responses to the challenge which were typically fluffy....trust me to do a dark angsty one with the plot of a picnic...butit worked out well so far. If you have any time, I would appreciate your feedback there. I hope you didn't mind me asking you to read that one? If you don't have time or something, I really hope to hear from you again on this story when I post again, as I truly have enjoyed your reviews. Thanks again so much for your kindness! HUGS!
Excellent, thought-provocing story. Very interesting. Keep on writing.
Author's Response: I adore you for being the first one to review. grazi!
Hey, I liked this. It's interesting and I liked how you've set the seen -- anything could happen from here on. I'd like to read on about Harry copes later.
Laura has been a good friend to Percy for seven years. She took his side during a fight between Percy and Oliver their second year. She accepted Percy the way he was, something most of his brothers couldn't even do. And when the one brother who did understand Percy died, Laura was there to help Percy through it, even though the death hurt her greatly as well.
Yes, Laura has been a good friend to Percy. So why, during their seventh year, is Percy allowing his friend to be lonely and miserable?
A fellow Gryffindor decides to try to ease Laura's loneliness by interfering in her life. The result is that Laura must suddenly deal with new relationships, including an unlikely reconciliation with Oliver.
Laura succeeded in being a good friend when she only had one friend. Now she must learn how to be a good friend to several people... including herself. Oliver/OC
Complete!"Thy friendship oft has made my heart to ache; do be my enemy - for friendship's sake." -William Blake
Oh my God, I've just read the first chapter and it's amazing. A little confusing and I had to read all the Authors notes to get it all, but still very, very good
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I hope Chapter 2 clears up any confusion. Let me know. Thanks for reviewing.
OMG - words cannot describe...
Awesome - Ioved this story. Percy's my favourite character and it pains me to see him act as he does - I can only hope we will have some explanation in book 7! But this was moving and psychologically bizarre but incredible. Definitely one of the best stories I have read on here!
awesome - i laughed all the way through