11/15/06
www.myspace.com/fran_fraiser
heya im emma
im 16 and i absolutly adore harry potter and anything related.
i have always loved writing ever since i was tiny and the amount of rubbish stories i have written over the years is incredible.
so i decided, now that i am all grown up and (hopefully) know how to write well i have decided to put my love of harry potter and my love of writing together.
i am hoping that making my own will help pass the time until the seven book comes out.
which, now that i think about it, i am kind of hoping it never does, because it is going to be the last one and that is just going to kill me
i also write poetry you can read them at poetrypoem.com/monkey5 (read shrink or no other way, if you read any)
I LOVE YOU JULIET
made by me!! how great am I?!?!?!
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Porcelain Doll by silver_tears
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Pansy had once laughed at those other girls who were obsessed with the way they looked. She now knew that the line separating the normal world from the other – the world no one ever talked about – that line was too thin to be noticed; once she’d trodden beyond that point, there would be no going back.
The road to perfection is too rough to attain and porcelain dolls break from the pressure of it.
A Winter Miracle challenge, written by silver_tears for Slytherin house.
Date: 05/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Porcelain Doll
I read this before, but i loved it, so i had to read it again. i dont know if i reviewed last time...
The feelings conveyed in this are really powerful and it looks like you've got the mind set of a girl suffering annorexia very accurate.
Also, 'The road to perfection is too rough to attain and porcelain dolls break from the pressure of it' That is so beautiful. iIwas wondering if you made that up yourself or if it came from somewhere else?
emma x x x
Author's Response: Hey,
Thanks for the lovely review. :) Actually, I made that up myself. It was probably one of those ultra-rare moments of blissful muse. ^_^ It could also be because I knew what I was talking about when I wrote this.
Again, thanks for reading, and I\'m glad you liked it. :) -Debbie
Opposites Attract - A James/Lily Story by radcliffe4eva
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: It is the Maruader's Seventh Year. With it comes more problems - Voldemort is gaining power, danger is rising, and James still cannot get Lily to go out with him. Join us as we explore the little-known story of James and Lily's past. **Although this is a James/Lily fic, the Marauders also star in it as well.
3/12/10 I've been editing and I'm pretty sure I'm going to take this up again...
Date: 01/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A - What
This is such a good start
The writing is actually amazing
It's hard to find a captivating story that is also well written but i think this ticks both boxes
looking forward to the next chapter
emma
x x x
Author's Response: This is ironic. I just read your story earlier (Broken Hearts...I reviewed it and as I said before its really good, but sad...)
Anyway, thanks for the review, and thanks for saying my writing is amazing *bows to your excellent complimenting/writing skills*. I submitted the next chapter a couple of days ago, so hopefully it will be up soon.
Once again, thank you for the wonderful review!
The Walk by Miss_Massacre
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Hermione has always felt the same way as Ron and Harry towards Professor Severus Snape. But it's during O.W.L. year, and the tension and stress is high. Can Hermione stop herself from running her mouth and getting into even deeper trouble?
Note: Not all warnings apply to all chapters!
Date: 01/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Polyjuice Disaster
this is really good
the characterisation is perfect.
emma x x x
A Cold Heaven by forsakenphoenix
Rated: Professors •Summary: Even in death, James shines brighter than Sirius. But he’s no longer jealous, knows that it’s just borrowed light; James glows when he’s loved. He was always loved, will always be loved.
Date: 01/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
that was so sad
and so happy
its so confusing
its all sweet and then its just so depressing you want to cry
i loved it
it was so amazingly written
emma
x x x
Anorexia by StepUpTimneh
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Ginny battles with Anorexia Nervosa after who true love deserts her.
Date: 10/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Anorexia
This story actually sent shivers up my spine. It was very realistic. I loved you personified Anorexia by using upper case letters.
I'm actually writing a fic where Ginny has anorexia too, it's scary how many parellels there are between them.
This really was amazingly written.
emma x x x
Date: 10/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Anorexia
... I READ THIS BEFORE!!
I thought I had when I started but then I didn't recognise it and I thought I would have remembered it if I had.
that is strange. Sorry for reviewing again. ... well, for a third time.
Date: 01/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Anorexia
this is so sad
i think its awful how people feel they have to do this to themselves
one of my friends suggested to me that my sister had the disorder where you excersise obbsessively. That was quite a while ago and at the time i never really thought about it but when she mentioned it it made sence and even that really got to me because she feels like such a together person. It's scary to think that it can happen to anyone.
I think you adressed the problem really well. Some stories I've read where problems mentioned I've been affected by make me feel quite insulted but this was so amazingly written.
emma
Author's Response: I\'m so sorry about your sister. I love when readers can relate, though. Thank you so much.
Harry Potter and the Serpent's Eye by Marauder9744
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: A 7th year fic in which Harry, Ron and Hermione search for the remaining Horcruxes and ultimately battle Voldemort. Post HBP; in canon, no slash. H/G R/Hr
Chapter 25 is up; Chapter 26 is with my beta!
Date: 02/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Return to Privet Drive
your characterisation is really good, tonks especially. your writing is really good too. emma, x x x
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I\'m glad you enjoyed!
Date: 02/06/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Betrayal
cant believe ginny found someone else!!! I am shocked. i want to know who. Update soon. Im really enjoying this. Emma, x x x
Author's Response: Chapter 3 is with my beta now so as soon as I get it back I\'ll update. Thanks again!
Spell Checker by MollyCoddles
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: After the war, Snape is on sabbatical and Remus is filling in for DADA. Wading through scrolls of assignments, he begins to suspect one particular essay is wifely mischief managed.
Date: 01/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
this was so good
it was really sweet and really funny
emma
x x x
Author's Response: I\'m so glad to hear you enjoyed it!
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! :)
Tears by BittersweetLove
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Ron mourns the death of Harry. Will he ever get over losing his best friends?
This is a one-shot that ends a little randomly. so if you don't like randomness, don't read this.
Written before DH
Date: 01/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
i really liked that
the end was especailly good
those words (even if they arnt yours) have a lot of impact and really enforce the story.
i had to agree with you about rons beautiful eyes. I think Ron is buff (which is why he gets annoyed in the fourth book because he knows he is buffer than harry...) even if no one else does
great story
emma, x x x
Author's Response: i love ron\'s eyes. i have to say again. i like nice reviews. theyre nice!
Smells Like Sirius Black by Soap
Rated: Professors •Summary: Hermione Granger finds herself in an unusual place, an unusual time for that matter. Through an unintentional mishap, she is tossed right into the mix with James Potter, Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew, and Sirius Black. Will she make it back to her own time without altering the future irreparably? And what will happen when she returns?
Sirius/Hermione
Thanks to everyone who nominated this story for a Quicksilver Quill, and congratulations to the winners!!
Date: 05/02/07 Title: Chapter 16: Back to the Future
this better involve bring sirius back somehow...
Date: 05/03/07 Title: Chapter 17: Through the Veil
YOU BOUGHT HIM BACK!!
i love you so much right now.
Date: 05/04/07 Title: Chapter 18: Ginny Finds Out
he does remember!!
i love it
Date: 05/01/07 Title: Chapter 15: A Change in the Routine
oh my god.
i want to cry.
thats so mean and sad
you cant make hermione go back to where sirius is dead and dumbledore is dead and life is terrible...
if i didnt love this so much id hate you
emma x x x
Date: 05/08/07 Title: Chapter 20: Harry Finds Out
what!! thats just rude. this should go on for ever and ever.
rons a bit rude, surely he had realised by then that hermione didnt want him.
Date: 05/11/07 Title: Chapter 21: Wedding Bells
i cant believe its ended. it was all so happy. i loved it.
one of the best fics ive read ever and i will miss it very much.
emma x x x
Date: 04/19/07 Title: Chapter 4: Love Potions
that was really clever. i always wondered what hermione had smelt in the amortentia potion and now i know.
love this story.
its so good.
emma x x x
Date: 04/19/07 Title: Chapter 5: Arithmancy, Fire Crabs, and Our Tree
oh my god. james and lily are going to die in like 4 years. just realised that. its mean
i love it.
emma x x x
Date: 04/19/07 Title: Chapter 8: A Frightening Encounter
oh no but shes going to hurt him when she has to leave!!