Yer funny, Shmergo! :-D
What does fo shizzle mean?
Author's Response: Thank you! \'Fo shizzle\' means \'for real\' or \'totally.\'
Nice touch with the dripping water that turns into words. I liked that. I must admit though that this story went right over my head. I was wracking my brain trying to remember who Rudolphus was. I thought maybe the story was about R.A.B.'s girlfriend. That's how confused I was. :-D Why didn't you have her say, "Tom"? Bellatrix doesn't show any sign of being interested in her husband.
Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion. If it makes you feel any better, I had to explain who Rodolphus was to my wife when she read it. As for why Bella didn\'t say, \"Tom,\" well... for one thing, I don\'t think she\'d ever use that name for him. She freaked out when Harry said Voldemort was a half-blood, so I don\'t think she\'d be one to actively remember his Muggle heritage. I wrote this to sort of try and see the other side of things (as twisted and evil as it may be). Bella may very well love her husband; we just don\'t see it because we\'re always watching from Harry\'s POV.
Thanks for reviewing, and I\'m really glad you liked the dripping water.
Aww cute. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you. Pleez read the rest of mine! I beg u PLEEZ!
I'm afraid I didn't get through the whole thing because I found the first part very confusing. Can you make it clearer what exactly is going on?
Author's Response: I\'m not sure what to say. The viepoint shifts between places around Hogwarts, and is tied together by Harry in the Headmaster\'s office. If I could, I would seperate it by different font faces or something, but that\'s not possible here. I haven\'t had anyone else mention a problem tracking the storyline, either. But thanks for pointing this out!