I LOVED IT
Author's Response: AWESOME!! lol
I love your story, I'll do what you told me to do know and will send it back asap. I love the S/G thing goin on I hate. As for Bridget I think she is kinda typical. I dont hate her for the record. She know Harry is the object of a lot of girls dreams and is making sure no one steals her.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! But what do you mean by "I love the S/G thing goin on I hate." I didn't understand that. Sorry!
Oh, I love it, I will read your other story now. A suggestion, go to the beta boards and advertise your fic.
Author's Response: I will! Thanks for reviewing.
I loved it. I like 1 Character storys that are 1 shot. I also like the last line. Maybe Tomorrow I'll fly.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I always tend to choose my last line rather carefully.
I liked it, but it goes to fast. I think it was well written, a lot of thought went into it. I really hope all three of them find happiness. More specifically I mean that Hermione and Ron are together, and Harry finds someone that he will learn to love also.
Binks-I love it. I actually read it awhile ago, but forgot to review. Please update soon.
Oh, I love ya to Lisa. I love the story. I have to say my new favorite part has got to be Hermione's inner conflict. This is the first believalble snape/hermione fic I've had yet.
Oh I had thought differ people were writing this because there are other story's called Great Plans.
Can wait for an update. Add me to your "post to mailing list" my email is lavenderbrown_47@hotmail.com I wish I could give it an 11
Author's Response: Thank you so much, lavenderbrown_47! Right now, I do not have a mailing list for my Mugglenet updates because I have so few stories that are not adult oriented. But the final chapter is in queue awaiting validation. It should not be too much longer. I'm so happy you're enjoying this!
~Lisa
please please update soon
Author's Response: I will, lavender! Thank you!
~Lisa
I love it, I love it, its so funny, and so well planned out. UPDATE SOON
Author's Response: Thank you, lavender! I'm happy you're enjoying it in the final chapter is in queue now awaiting validation.
~Lisa
I love the story, its really cool, I like the way different people write each chapter its really interesting take. Also I loved the fact that Hermionie missed her appoitment (sp?) with Ginny and Bill. I love this story
Author's Response: Thank you, lavenderbrown. Different people aren't writing each chapter though, it's all just me and the voices in my head. :-) I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I love the story, I like the suttleness of Snape, Also I know I didnt get to submit a review in the first chapter but I love the whole Ron bit I love love it.
Author's Response: Lavender, thank you so much! I am so happy you're enjoying it. :-)
~Lisa
"Dance bunnies, dance!"
I love you story. I cant wait for you to update!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Ignoring.... like you told me too. :-D
Thanks for the credit that I helped you, I just kidding, I love the story and glad to see it on, Remeber to keep writing like that, its perfect.
Author's Response: Of course you get credit! Lol. ;-)
Okay, I am really going to review your story this time.
I like how you have Tom Riddle planned out. Especially how he has a "love life" I always pictured him as being lonelly, no friends, just really persuasive. Your story is believable enough to prove me wrong.
I have some grammer mistakes. Sorry, but this is only to make you a better writer.
First, 'He was greeted by his friends and his fellow Slytherins.' It should be 'His friends and his fellow Slytherins greeted him.' Next when you were describing Tom, you had 'height,' it shoud be 'height;' with a semicolon.Thirdly you have ' a light lavender' the "a" is not necessary, it sounds better, and is more gramatically correct if you just put 'light lavender.'
Farther down in the story, you have 'She sighed, then sat up' You should put, 'She sighed, and then sat up.' The word "and" shoud have been put there. Finally you have "There was a small clearing, it was beautiful." This works best if it is 2 sentences rather one.
Keep up the GREAT writing. I love your work.
Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks for the corrections. I haven't started on the third chapter yet (because my I had to recover my hard drive the other day), but I will soon.
Oh, wow, I loved it. I just read it to see what other "rape" stories looked like, but this one blew me away. I love love it. I wish I could give it an 11
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you liked it. While I and the betas who help me with this fic refer to it as "the rape fic", it is only to distinguish it from the other fic I am writing which is quite a bit fluffier. I don't consider this to be a traditional rape story, though, and it certainly isn't smutty. The fact is, the rape that is dealt with in this story is more psychological than physical. I think it is very important to note that I have not broached this topic lightly. I spent two months discussing it with other authors before even attempting to write it. This fic is extensively beta'd and it would NOT be posted on this site otherwise. The mods here at MNFF are extremely careful not to validate a chapter containing rape if it isn't handled with extreme care.
I love love love love it, I love how Draco goes around and tries to pick on "fresh meat" I think I know how its going to end, but I'll keep that to myself, I love the whole story, encore encore to you. I wish I could give it an 11
Author's Response: Thanks! I actually have a few ideas for the ending, so I need to narrow it down. haha. Thanks again!
I like the story, it was well put together, I think you need to use pronouns more though.
Also a cannon error, wouldn't they say You-Know-Who over Vodemort, Dumbledore said he was one of the few who said his name, and the students would call him You-Know-Who also because they have a right to fear him also.
Author's Response: Well, you see, I figured that they didn't use You-Know-Who at this point because he's not really in power. I'm going to start it later in my story (I think). But the pronouns thing may be correct. I'll look in on it. Thanks.
I love the story, I cant wait until Harry finds out he has a twin, Now I am waiting on end to see what house she is in. I LOVED the part in chp2 about the SOUE I love those books