01/07/07
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MY STORIES!:
First Comes Friendship
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Summary
Seamus and Dean have been friends since they were eleven. They're basically joined at the hip! But what happens when Seamus has a secret? A secret he's been hiding since forth year? Now that the two boys are in their seventh and final year, Seamus is finding it harder and harder to keep his secret from Dean. But what would Dean think? There was no way that Dean saw their friendship as Seamus did. But one thought keeps penetrating Seamus' head: friendship always comes before love.
The Angels Come to Visit Us:
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Sumary:
“Yes. I’ll just ask an angel to watch over me,” Maura replied with steady certainty, like it were the most logical thing in the world.
Oliver laughed again, readjusting Maura on one knee so that he could face her. “Oh, I see. And where are you going to find this angel?”
Maura shook her head. “Everyone has an angel, silly. I already know mine. They just don’t show up unless you really need them.”
When Oliver Wood's daughter once again begs to learn how to fly, she makes a promise that brings Oliver's past memories back to life, as well as his belief in Angels.
Just Another Time Traveler’s Love Story:
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Summary:
After a mishap during a heated argument, Hermione and Draco find themselves taken back in time to when the Marauders ruled the halls of Hogwarts and find out that they share a deeper connection than hate. The question is will they ever get back if the only way is to get along? As Hermione and Draco try to get back to their own time as well as fulfill an unwanted destiny, they deal with a disturbed Sorting Hat, unwanted suitors, the constant squabbles of James and Lily, awkward moments galore, and maybe even a little love.
She was Beautiful: (Honorable Mention for the June, 2007 one-shot challenge!)
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Summary:
Draco relives his happiest, most painful memory of love and pain as he fights for his life. But what is worth living for when what you want, love, has left forever?
“Draco didn’t know what it was, whether it was the intoxicating appeal of forbidden fruit, or the way her hair blew in the breeze, with lovely brown tendrils that lay elegantly down her back. What he did know, was that she was beautiful.”
Coping:
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Summary:
Three years after Voldemort’s final defeat, Hermione finally realizes that it’s time to move on with her life, even though it means going back to her pain stricken past. Knowing she can’t do it alone, she calls on Harry for support. However, Harry has his own demons that are keeping his life from progressing as well.
Mystic Lasagna:
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Summary:
James and Lily are married and Lily is acting strange and emotional. More so than usual that is. However, James may have an idea as to what may be causing Lily's strange emotions.
Oh, and before I forget…
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Date: 06/08/07 Title: None
I really like this! It shows a lot of promise.
There were some typos and mistakes in the text, but not a whole lot. Just wanted to let you know in case you had no idea!
Anyways, I love the story. It's very differenting and refreshing. I can't wait to see where you take this!
-Olivia
P.S. - I LOVE kayaking! Only once the spray skirt had a tight knot in it and it wouldn't let me out when I flipped. Talk about a wake up call!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I LOVE to kayak!!!!! It is my favorite thing in the world to do. I have had some pretty scary incidents also. One of them will be incoporated into the story later on.
I have the next chapter written but I need to find a new beta. My old one isn\'t around the forums anymore. Oh well...
Thanks for your review!
~Kay
Date: 06/08/07 Title: None
I just noticed that I wrote "differenting" in my review. Woops!
Author's Response: I\'ts okay. I make silly mistakes all the time. Thanks for the review!
~Kay
Decadent Love by Pixichik118
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry and Ginny can't make it throught the war for peace, but is it all bad? Harry's pov
We brought each other to such great heights,
And all we left behind were silhouettes...
Date: 05/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow! You capture the emotion of heartbreak and sorrow beautifuly.
I wonder, if I were to die tomorrow,
Which of us would bear the heaviest sorrow?
"I yearn for the past,
I miss what was glittering and new.
I miss the euphoric bliss I felt
Just from holding you."
This was my favorite stanza. The words were mezmorizing. You keep a perfect, steady rythem through the poem and you integrate you stanzas flawlessly. I usually don't find myself so taken by poetry, but I truly LOVE this poem. Write more!
-Olivia
Day's End by crazy_purple_hp_freak
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Many fighters in the endless horrors of battle wonder when it will end - when will one side triumph and another be defeated? When will they be released from the struggles of life?
Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Day's End
This is amazing! The rhyming and rhythm is perfect and the poem is oustanding. The poem just grabs you from the beginning and holds you straight to the end, which is, in my opinion very hard to do. Especially to have such a strong beginning and an even stronger ending and be ale to tie them together so nicely! This is something I still have to work on in my poetry, so your poem is definintly an inspiration for me.
Your beginning was amazing:
Will the sun ever set?
Will the moon ever rise?
Will we ever see death -
Or will we always survive?
Will we ever defeat,
Will this continue through time?
Are we ever to rest,
Or doomed never to die?
This really got me thinking. Mabey surviving through the war is worse because of everything you see, everything you lose, and the constant questioning of 'will it ever end?'
I especially liked this stanza as well:
"Time can’t delay
What events come to pass;
Two threads run astray,
Come together at last.
When two paths collide
Then Time will fly fast,
Then your moment will come.
Then your ending will pass."
The rhythm is outstanding and the last two lines in particular caught my attention.
Overall, you have done a fantastic job on this poem and you should be very proud! Keep up the outstanding work!
-Olivia (social loner)
Author's Response: Thank you for the fantastic review, I\'m really glad you like the poem! The beginning of it was something that just more or less formed in my head without a lot of thought, and I sort of just shaped the rest of the poem around that theme.
In lots of fics we\'ve seen cases of the survivors of a war probably being worse off than before, having lost so many loved ones. I was thinking about how hatred and destruction from war never really ends. Though a war has ended, somewhere people are still saddened. And sometimes when wars cannot be won easily, those in battle may feel trapped as they know that the ending may come sooner or later but they have no idea when and may even hope that it is \'soon\'.
Thanks again for the review. :) ~Suzie
Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Day's End
This is amazing! The rhyming and rhythm is perfect and the poem is oustanding. The poem just grabs you from the beginning and holds you straight to the end, which is, in my opinion very hard to do. Especially to have such a strong beginning and an even stronger ending and to be able to tie them together so nicely! This is something I still have to work on in my poetry, so your poem is definintly an inspiration for me.
Your beginning was amazing:
Will the sun ever set?
Will the moon ever rise?
Will we ever see death -
Or will we always survive?
Will we ever defeat,
Will this continue through time?
Are we ever to rest,
Or doomed never to die?
This really got me thinking. Mabey surviving through the war is worse because of everything you see, everything you lose, and the constant questioning of 'will it ever end?'
I especially liked this stanza as well:
"Time can’t delay
What events come to pass;
Two threads run astray,
Come together at last.
When two paths collide
Then Time will fly fast,
Then your moment will come.
Then your ending will pass."
The rhythm is outstanding and the last two lines in particular caught my attention.
Overall, you have done a fantastic job on this poem and you should be very proud! Keep up the outstanding work!
-Olivia (social loner)
Author's Response: *has already responded to the previous review* :D
Frozen by Sarakime
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: "Cold without you...
Never let me go."
It started out as watching, simply watching her while she peacefully slept in the common room. But slowly, for him, it turned into so much more - something that shaped his life. Draco Malfoy never would have imagined that Hermione Granger would've had such an affect on him - never would've thought he needed her so much.
Originally written as a drabble for FFTF OWL Romance Class.
Date: 06/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow! I really like this one-shot. It's very short, but is still just as powerful.
Your portrayal of Draco in this story truely is fantastic. It shows that other side of him that we so rarely see. And yeat, he's still uneasy and embarressed about letting that side of him show.
And your writing is so beautiful! It just ties the whole story together. It's like reading a poem in story format.
You did a vry good job with this, so be proud!
-Olivia
Author's Response: =] Thank you so much!
Moral Relativism by Colores
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: In the end of the final battle, Harry is faced with the most difficult decision of his life. He is outnumbered by the remaining Death Eaters, and the two beside him will surely die. The only question is...Who will kill them?
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I don't know if I can explain in words just how powerful this is. I'm not one to cry, but this story had me tearing. Your writing is positively illustrious. I could mentally see the entire story being played out in front of my eyes. Plus, yu've taken such a deep and emotional topic and brought it to new hieghts. My favorite quote has to be "Morality is relative."
Overall, this is a spectacular piece of work, and your banners are just as amazing! Thanks again!
-olivia
Author's Response: Olivia,
You are so welcome! I\'m thrilled to hear how much you enjoyed this piece. I\'m glad that it was able to touch you in such a way. In writing this piece, I tried to capture something that was not only dark/angsty but also thought provoking and emotionally heart wrenching. I am thrilled you found it so powerful. Thank you for your review and feedback.
From the Ashes: The Order of the Phoenix by luinrina
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: They were few and fought for peace and freedom. Their chances haven’t been the best, they were outnumbered by Voldemort’s forces. And yet, like the phoenix rises again from his ashes, those few never gave up and kept fighting, even when the Death Eaters took them out one after the other, and death never seemed far away.
This is the story of the Order of the Phoenix.
Date: 07/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Part One: 1979 - 1981
You did a fantastic job! I would never be able to do anything close to something like this, so I have supreme respect for you.
You have a great, natural rhythm, which really helped me stay in the moment and follow along. Alos, I loved how the rhyming wasn't as forced. It made the piece flow beautifully.
"The fiercest war soon is raging,
innocent people all over engaging,
hunting down creature and man:
to survive you have to do what you can."
This is only one of my favorite quotes, but I just had to point it out! You have a great way with words, and I love your personal style.
Overall, great job and I look forward to part two!
-Olivia
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Olivia. Your review just made my day. And I\'m working on part two which is suddenly a little stuck halfway through thanks to the plot bunny having run away. I hope it\'ll find home soon.