I'm Jennifer. I write fics for your enjoyment (well, mostly my own, but I hope you enjoy it too).
That was so gorgeous! I think the characters were portrayed really well.
"I think he just liked it because it showed off my arse." That was a good one! So James-like to think like that. This is going in my favourites, one of the best fics I've read in a while. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so glad you thought this was good. It\'s going on your favourites? Wow, I am so flattered!
This story was sweet, but I think you overdid it a little. Firstly, your characters seem to be a little OOC, because Ginny depends on Harry too much in this fic. She's usually the strong one, and she seemed a little weak. Also, Harry is NOT that romantic. Sure, he's nice, but the rose petals and the jewelery are over the top. Oh, and it seems a bit repetitive with the necklace he gives her on Valentine's Day and the necklace he gives her at Christmas.
The pet names also seem way too cutesy for Harry and Ginny. I can't really imagine Harry calling Ginny 'snowflake', no matter how much in love he was.
Well done all the same!
Jennifer
Children cry and people die,
At the hands of the man with scarlet snake eyes.
That sent shivers up my spine ...
Absolutely brilliant. I just read them all in one go, and I can't wait for the next one! I loved the red wine trick! You are so going on my favourites!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I\'m really glad you enjoyed it, and am honoured to be on your favourites ... I always am. Next Chapter should be soon, depending on when my beta can get it back to me ... :D
Another brilliant chapter! Petunia's reaction to Lily's friends was hilarious! It was pretty funny how all of them thought she was menstruating too. Update soon! I love this story!
Author's Response: Ha ha, that part was based on how if I\'m ever upset about something, someone always asks me if I\'m \"due\" and it\'s like: \"Hello, I can have feelings without hormones being a part of it!\". I\'m glad you liked this fic =D
AAAGGGHHHH!!! POOR LILY AND HALLEAD!! That's horrible! Why did Hagrid have to be so mean? It's not like him! I feel so sorry for Hallead. *sobs*
But anyway, I said about five chapters ago that Iola would get together with Sirius. I was right, hey? *looks around for support* And Lily and James ... those bloody Perfects! Way to ruin the moment!
So sad that this will be finished. But it still is my favourite fic! I can't wait for the last chapter!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, I\'m glad you\'ve enjoyed this fic. Hagrid wasn\'t mean, he was just upset about Hallead, and he and Lily aren\'t as good friends as he and the trio are (or will be). And yes, you were right about Sirius and Iola. Congratulations!
OMG I CAN"T BELIEVE IT"S FINISHED!!!!!*Bursts into tears*
Sorry, but this is my favouritest story on this site. I love it so much! THis was an amaing chapter, I loved the Hollywood ending. So sweet!
My favourite characters - of course, the adorable James and Sirius, my favourite chapter - has to be 'Revenge is a Dish Best Served Comical', Scene - the last one! Quotes - there are just too many to name! My favourite things all round would be Padfoot Points and the reinvented 'Perfects' ... hilarious.
Thanks for writing a great story for me to while away hours reading!
Author's Response: It was a pleasure to while away hours writing, so don\'t worry! I\'m sorry this is over too, but it\'s been fun, and I\'m glad you enjoyed it. Yay for James and Sirius! I love those guys ...
Oh my god! That was so cool! Does Iola like Sirius? That would be so cute if they got together! I'm glad Lily's going to ditch her friends, I never really liked them. I didn't think Iolas life was lame, by the way, it fit in perfectly. Once again, I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks. We\'ll have to see about Sirius and Iola I guess. It\'s time for some anvil type hints, methinks. I\'m glad you never really liked Lily\'s friends. It\'s nice to know I achieved that particular goal.
I loved it! You are such a great writer! I almost fell off my computer chair laughing when they called themselves 'The Perfects'. I can't wait until some romance starts... and what about Iola and Sirius? Are they going to get together? Update soon!
Author's Response: Ahaha ... you\'ll have to wait and see. There are a couple more obstacles to get in the way before any true romance, but maybe ... maybe ... soon ... you never know! Thanks about the \'The Perfects\' thing, too ... I just thought \"What would be a really tacky, yet still believable name ...?\" and there it was!
Once again, another super duper amazing chapter! I didn't remember the centuar, by the way. But I have a bad memory, and that was ages ago! I don't want this story to finish! It's so good! When are James and Lily gonna get together, anyway? They better! *jumps around crazily* Anyway, do you wanna see how much I love this story? I actually use punctuation in the reviews! Shock, horror! Update soon! How many more chapters?
Author's Response: Two more chapters I\'m afraid ... oh, how time has flown by! If you look back at Chapter two there should be a mention of our dear Hallead being a bit of a wuss ... and as for Lily and James ... well, keep your eyes peeled! Congratulations on the punctuation by the way! Hi, punctuation! It\'s nice to see you!
AAAGGGHHH! That is the best chapter yet. So sad ... but very well written. I thought I knew what would happen, I was screaming along with Lily's conscience, but then BAM. So unexpected. Poor Iola and James! I send them both virtual hugs. OK, I know I can't, but it's been a long day.
Author's Response: Iola and James feel your virtual hugs anyway, I\'m sure they\'re very grateful! Yeah, okay, it\'s been a long day for me as well. I\'m glad you liked this chapter! I wasn\'t sure how it would be received, but it\'s all going well so far!
I just re-read the last chapter of this story, because I love it so much! Lily and James! SQUEE!
Anyway, I definitely will be nominating this story for a few awards in the QsQs. If anyone deserves one, it will be you.
Author's Response: Oh my cod! REALLY? You\'re kidding! That\'s so ... that\'s unbelievable! Thank you so much, that\'s really, really great of you! =D I\'m so excited that someone loves this so much!
that was good, but a bit weird how lily gets points for pulling a prank on James.
Author's Response: lol (: well, I made use of the point that Dumbledore might be senile...
This was very funny! Light-hearted and sweet. Even from the small bit written of the muggle Prime Minister in HBP, you managed to make him sound very canon.
I loved Annabel's character. Very brat-like and selfish, which is perfect for the Prime Ministers daughter.
It was written in a different style to most fics, and I really liked it. The short sentences and the way you made it sound as if you were telling it out loud was great.
Excellent work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this wonderful review! I can\'t believe I only just found it - over 6 months late! Shows how much I visit this account, lol.\r\nAnyway, I\'m glad you like the characters! Yes, it\'s a different style to anything else I\'ve ever done, too, so I\'m glad it worked.\r\nThanks HEAPS again! :D :D
ooohhh! sequel! sequel! it was so good!
oh that was so good! especially the end! it made me laugh! i love ALL your stories, you're one of my favourite authors. this one is probably my favourite!
that was really good. u should definitely do a sequel!
Yay! I love Sirius! Poor Sophie ...
I love Lilys criticisms of McGonagall and Dumbledore. I literally started laughing. This is so funny! The best bit: Lily Evans: Queen of Cool. Nice.
Author's Response: Yeah, I love Sirius too...who doesn\'t? Lol, thanks for the reviews!
Well, I decided to be lazy and not review every chapter like I said I would. They're all great, though. :)
I loved this chapter! It was short and pretty calm, but I think you needed a break after everything that's been happening in this fic. I loved the ending.
Good job!
Author's Response: Gee, thanks for all the reviews. Don\'t be silly, it is no obligation of yours to review my chapters. I\'m very glad that you do though, lol. Thanks!
This is an amazing story so far! I found this in the Hufflepuff library on the forums, and the title caught me. I'm a sucker for Lily/James. *sighs*
I love your characterization of Lily. She seems nice, yet slightly evil. That's the way I've always thought of her.
I don't like Terry, but that's only because I love James and hate all of Lily's boyfriends before him.
Good job! I'll get around to reading the other chapters soon.
Author's Response: Wow, turns out posting in there really did payoff! I\'m so glad you\'re liking this. I never really liked that stereotype image of Lily, so I morphed her into something a little more sinister. Lol, anyway, I\'m glad she doesn\'t scare you.