I'm so sorry!

I know I said I was going to finish reading this story ... but I totally forgot! I'll put it in my favourites now and finish reading and reviewing them!

Anyway. Back to the review. This chapter was so cute! you've gotta feel a bit sorry for Lily when she realises the flowers from James, even though she does love him in the end ... *sighs*

My favourite part:

“Iff’ uff’’ ‘Amef oo’ ‘femp iff’ oo’ du.”

Oh, well, how intelligible.

I loved it! So cute. This is great!


Author's Response: Awww...thanks so much for reviewing...it\'s no obligation, and I thank you very much for taking the time...lol, I felt sorry for Lily too.

This chapter was adorable! I only have a few criticisms.
I think that Lily's gullibility (I have no idea how to spell that) in this chapter was a little OOC. Despite her hatred for James, she must know that he isn't really the kind of guy to punch her boyfriend for no reason but having been called a few names.
James really likes Lily, and I somehow don't think he would be that mean to the guy who makes her happy, no matter how much he wants her for himself, unless he had a very good reason, like him treating Lily badly.

Author's Response: Well, I really don\'t think she knew James was nice at all. It\'s just the way she hates him...I think we\'d all like to believe that she only pretended to hate him, or thought that deep down he was actually truly decent, but in my opinion she didn\'t. Something happened to make her change. But I comletely understand you disagreeing. We all have our points of view, righ? :-)

I love this story! The wait is okay. Good stories are always worth it!

I was smiling throughout the entire chapter. Almost every line makes me laugh. You make me see Lily in a whole different light to how I imagined her. She’s a lot more sarcastic and cynical than I thought … but it’s good how you didn’t stereotype her.

Truth or dare … you gotta love that game. I played it with my friends the other day at school, because it was the last day. Thankfully, none of our dares got as bad as skinny-dipping!

This was one of my favourite chapters yet, because Lily and James are finally friends!

Jennifer



Author's Response: Lol, yeah, I love truth or dare. I\'m glad you like this different Lily. I just didn\'t want her to be as close to perfect as can be, like in so many fics I\'ve read. Thanks for reviewing!

That was a great chapter! I cant wait for the next one. When I saw the title, I freaked! I thought it would be a cliffie or something with James unconscious. But luckily it wasn't that bad. I really love this story, keep it up!

Author's Response: Nope... I haven\'t had many cliffhangers in this story, yet, have I? I had so many cliffhangers in past stories... And, come to think of it, I had James be knocked unconscious and lose his memory in one of those stories, too. :D But don\'t worry... I still have plenty of cliffhangers up my sleeves for the next chapters! Thanks for reviewing! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

OH. MY. GODFATHER.

That is the best chapter of this story I have read. It's probably one of the best chapters I've ever read on this site! It was really good.

I LOVED the chemistry between James and Lily when they were acting - they are both so in love! Also afterwards, when they were play-fighting. I was hoping they would kiss, but that damn girl! (Whoops. I said damn. Lily won't be happy with me.)
When she thought James was going to kill her, I started laughing out loud. Seriously. It takes a lot to make me do that with fanfictions, too. I cry all the time, but normally I just smile and laugh in my head. i don't really know why I cry a lot, but don't laugh, because I'm a very happy person usually. So don't go thinking I'll be suicidal or anything. I'm just emotional.
OK, back to the story. XD

I can tell the next chapter will be very, very, good. I cannot wait! They will kiss in the next chapter, won't they? Please please please? This story has now been promoted to my no. 2 favourite story on the site. it is a great honor. Feel privileged. Feel very privileged. I won't say what no. 1 is in case you get jealous! :) That's funny, because at first I didn't like this story much.

I loved the ending. They seem to be doing a lot of play-fighting/chasing each other in this story, hey? Hee hee.
I don't understand Jimmy. He's the wizard one, right? I'm a bit weirded out with him. But he's still one of my favourite characters.

This is the longest review I've ever written. Wow. Aren't you special? you are a great writer, keep up the brilliant work!

Author's Response: Oh, wow, thank you so much! :) Haha - and no, Lily would not be happy that you said damn! Shame on you! :D And I understand your laughing/crying deal - I would just sit and giggle while reading the 7th book this weekend, because I couldn\'t help but feel excited! But the only time I cried was after I had finished the book and I realized it was all done! Thank you so much for such a LONG review! :D Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

oh that was good. very good. UPDATE!!!! Please? By the way, i love ALL of your other fics, you are one of my favourite authors. My fave one is Up to Speed(boxer shorts...drool...) I am one of the biggest James/Lily lovers out there. Anyway, I'm getting off track. That was really good so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you like all of my stories! :D But I always wonder why people love Up To Speed so much... I enjoyed writing it, but I don\'t think that\'s my favorite... I can\'t figure out what it is that makes everyone love it! I guess the boxer shorts do help, though... Haha! And you\'re in luck - I basically write Lily/James... I\'ve written maybe one non-L/J story... and I never finished it or posted it. You can tell how enthusiastic I am about other ships. :) Anyway... Thank you so much for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Yay! Brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant! You just gotta love Jimmy. It's impossible not too! I think James will play the lead role instead of Peter. And Lily hits Jess Marzoli. (Okay, so that probably won't happen, but I can dream!)
I love this story sooooooooo much! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I think it\'s safe to tell you that one of those two predictions will happen... James might take Peter\'s role, or Lily might hit Jess... but you\'ll have to wait and see! :D Thanks for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

oooohh! finally some romance! cant wait 4 the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yep... There\'s always gonna be just a little bit more romance in the next chapter! :D Thank you so much for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

They finally kissed! Yay! But of course Lily has to screw it up ... but it would've been way too cliche if they just got together then. I can't imagine Lily just going out with him after one kiss, when she's hated him for so long.

Go Jimmy! He's going to Hogwarts! I'm so proud of him!

I don't like Lily's friends. She doen't much either, by the looks of things. They're going to interfere with Lily and James' relationship, aren't they? *curses them angrily*

This was one of my favourite chapters yet!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked this chapter so much! And, yes, Lily\'s friends interfere... but I don\'t think they realize that they are! :D\r\n\r\nThanks for the review!\r\n\r\nYours truly,\r\nAmelia Bedelia

omg! i loved it! i burst out laughing at almost every line! my parents must think I'm going crazy!