02/14/05
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I Was a Famous Hogwarts Professor continually got rejected, due to the new rules about stories submitted in script (mainly don't submit in script, lol) but if you really want to read the second story it can be found on my myspace sadly enough, lol...u'll see a blog link I Was a Famous Hogwarts Professor. Anyone can read it even if you don't have a myspace! Sorry it had to be done this way, but it's up there! =)
!!!!!!!!!!NEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!Note to all my Draught of Prospicio readers: I am sad to say that last semester, school officially kicked my tail...I made it through all my courses all right but I had to work hard to do so...the sequel to the Draught only made it to three chapters and I couldn't go any farther with it without it feeling forced and I don't want to make myself write it just for the sake of finishing it. I want to wait until it comes on its own. The next little while in school is the last part of my schooling. *dances around* but that leaves no time for writing...so unless the story comes in between classes, I’m going to have to put it on hold for now...I’m sorry if this disappoints anyone....I would love to quit school and just write all the time but unfortunately, I don't have that option at the moment...I will be on the site here and there, so if there's a story that you want me to read and review that's not to terribly long, or you just want to talk send me an email or something and I’ll get back to you =)
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Date: 03/21/05 Title: None
Brilliant, I love this chapter. Can't wait to read more. Your writing really flows. I love being able to read a story without having to stumble over anything. Great job. :)
Date: 03/20/05 Title: None
This is really good, I can't wait to read more. I just love pig, i'm glad you included him. Oh yeah, and the cliff at the end, brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks! BUT! GAR, BUT! My second chapter keeps on getting rejected because of the HTML format! I'm not sure what I'm doing wrong, either.
Regret by Ella Norman
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: *one-shot*If there is one word Hermione could use to describe her life, it's regret. She married the man her parents chose, instead of the man she loved. They have now grown old, and all they can do is look back on their lives with regret. Warning: A little bit of angst. Please R&R.
Date: 03/30/05 Title: Chapter 1: Regret
Holly Cricket (lol) I am left with tears once again. I was reading your profile, are you sure your only fourteen. Your writing is so moving. Keep it up, maybe one day you'll write something I can buy in the store. I will tell people, "yes, I read her fan fiction, she's always been brilliant." :)
Author's Response: I am only fourteen. :) You are one of the people who makes me extraordinarily happy, because that's my greatest ambition. :)
Date: 05/02/05 Title: None
Grrrrrr....you can't do that I tell you. Just one line more, come on. Would it have killed you to give the verdict? lol. Ok, I'm over it now (I really do love the cliffs, but I needed to whine a little) Great, great...now if only the mods would speed up the process so I could read more, faster. =)
Author's Response: YAY!! chappie five was finally accepted!! i was reading my reviews and i saw u had reviewed chappie five, so then i knew it was up and--yay!
anyway, sorry for the cliffie, but thats how i keep ppl reading. i'll try to write more soon!
Date: 04/13/05 Title: None
OMGSH, I love this. I can't believe I haven't read it b4 now. must...read...more. Lavender did it didn't she! lol she just wanted to get at wonderful ron and new she had to get hermy out of the way. lol (sorry, she irritates me a bit) And like I said, I love the story. Brilliant work 10! :)
Author's Response: lavender might have done it... maybe... you'll see... :P
thank u so much for reviewing my story and im really glad u like it!! if i haven't already reviewed your story/stories, i will! thanks again!
Failure is Unacceptable by Granger
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermionie's been crazy about Ron for ages. For years, she's tried to forget about him, to stop feeling the way she feels about him. But for once, Hermionie is failing, and she's hating it. Can a walk to Hagrid's with Ron help her sort out her feelings? One shot. Please R&R
Date: 04/04/05 Title: Chapter 1: Failure is Unacceptable
Aww, this was really good. I liked the H/L thing no one does that but I think they should (cause of how she makes him feel at the end of the 5th book) I just had one problem....I wish it had been longer. *sigh* :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the nice feedback! :) This was my first fan fic on MuggleNet, so i wasn't sure what the reaction would be like...but anyway, thanks so much, and i'll be writing more soon!
Nothing Left to Live For by phoenix_trills
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: In order for us to rejoin our loved ones, we must sometimes give all we have... One-shot.
Date: 06/05/05 Title: Chapter 1: Nothing Left to Live For
voldemort...wins...*gasp*...u write depressing stuff really well...i know sometimes u just get in one of those moods and it has to come out on paper or you'll just burst...good job despite the fact that *tear* everyone dies except the old snake...and ron the first to go *sniff*...
Author's Response: I agree completely! I originally wrote this fic after reading another story in the Dark/Angst section. I was in that mood when I wanted to read something depressing, but this story I was reading wasn't depressing at all (I'm not even sure why it was in the Dark section). I just thought to myself, 'Hey, I can do better than this!' So I wrote Nothing Left. All in all, I agree with your mood theory!
Entirely His Fault by RebeccaChoong
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione muses as she serves a detention she earned entirely because of Ron Weasley.
Date: 05/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: Entirely His Fault
wow. that was a really nice read. I like the one-shots...you don't have to keep checking for updates and waiting in suspense. don't get me wrong i like them too but i really liked this. it was very refreshing and beautiful. =)
Author's Response: Yay, a review! Thanks for the compliment. I was hoping for a review as I saw that the 'read status' was quite high yet I had no response. I like one shots too, but most of all, I like novel length stories that are completed.
Cherry Pie by Kacie
Rated: •Summary: Hermione brings dessert back to the common room for Ron and Harry who are off at Quidditch practice. Harry doesn't get his dessert but Hermione helps Ron with his.
Date: 05/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: Cherry Pie
wow, i love it when stuff like that happens with the food. hummm....maybe i have a thing for food and red heads...sorry...got caught up there for a moment...really good...but where can u go from here? =)
Distraction by Jenn_Weasley
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Telara always knew she was special to her adoptive family. But she never knew how special she really was until Albus Dumbledore took her back to England and the wizarding world. Now she faces her biggest challenge ever. Fitting in at Hogwarts? No – she can do that. Will she be able to help Harry Potter win the war against Voldemort? For everyone’s sake – let’s hope so.
Over 4200 reads! Thanks so much everyone!! This was written Pre-HBP. You'll have to suspend new canon a bit for me.
For my faithful (and new as well) reviewers: I've been practicing my amateur publishing skills and have made a paperback version of this story. If you would like a copy, let me know and I'll send one out. I might even make a collection of all my stories if anyone is interested. Thanks!
Date: 10/12/05 Title: Chapter 7: The Storm
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Very creative way to finish off old voldy there. That was a most enjoyable read. I'm just amazed that I had time to actually get over here read it and review it *phew* glad I did though...thanks for the email...that helped out...I would have hated to miss this because I have so enjoyed reading this one. all the other reviewers seem to be against a draco/telara fic...well i'm all for it...specially now that his father's out of the way, i think his parents are what keep him "evil" especially after reading the sixth book...but that's just me, oh well...like i said, great job with this fic, very nicely done=)
Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with me. I'm outlining a possible sequel right now. It will include Draco. We'll see how it maps out. Thanks for your vote on the matter. I like Draco so it's an interesting option to me too. Thanks again for reviewing!
Date: 06/19/05 Title: Chapter 3: Arrival at Hogwarts
im back!!!! excellent job, Dumbledore was very well written in the chapter, a little scary 'the darkness inside' wonder what it could be? oh well...off to read more =)
Author's Response: You'll find out in Chap 7...hehehe
Date: 06/19/05 Title: Chapter 4: Classes Begin
still very good...so is draco going to be the evil that talara (not sure of spelling) has to deal with...just wondering...and oh yeah...this is petty but i was just wonderin if her 'jet' lag was going to kick in she does have like a 6 hour time difference, lol...just askin...i love it anyway on to the next chapter =)
Author's Response: Do you get jet lag when traveling by portkey? I don't know. I traveled to Europe when I was 16 and didn't have much trouble with jetlag - the advantages of youth, I guess. Draco is not the evil of which the sorting hat speaks - but good guess. Thanks for reviewing again!
Date: 06/19/05 Title: Chapter 5: Dark Arts and the Potions Master
alas, i have come to the end...i love this...i can't wait for another chapter...great job =)
Author's Response: My beta has Chapter 6 so it should be submitted in the not too distant future. Thank you for your encouragement!
Date: 06/18/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Past Always Catches Up
I like this so far. It kind of has a superman feel, lol...you know, living out in the sticks with fields to fly over, sorry i got carried away, now on to the next chapter =)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 06/18/05 Title: Chapter 2: You Can Go Home Again
I liked this chapter very much. Fred and George are always a good thing. I'm afraid i'll have to finish reading the story later cause this site keeps deciding to through up blasted computer text instead of what I want to read. I'll come back and finish when I have more patience for frustrating "site issues" Great story =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for sticking with me! Your reviews mean even more with the log in issues. I really like Fred & George too. I'd like to come up with a good story centered around them. Thanks for your review!!
Date: 08/04/05 Title: Chapter 6: The Calm Before the Storm
wow, super long chapter...excellent...i got a little worried there when ron was going to hogsmead with tellara but *wipes sweat from brow* you made it work out 'right' in the end...go tellera, go ron! woohoo!...ok, sorry...i was worried voldy would end up being her father but i kept trying to talk myself out of that idea because it seemed to horrible to bare...i can't imagine even being able to go to sleep after learning that kind of information....can't wait to see how she handles it and how her friends handle the info...wow, great job...patiently awaiting next chapter....is it up yet....grrrrrr....still not there, lol...ok, im gone now=)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Yeah, I about made my beta sweat about the Ron/Telara thing too. hehehehe Just wanted to throw y'all for a loop. I will get writing straight away on the next chapter (I waited so long to get this chapter approved, I was scared to start writing any more). Thanks again!!!
The Caves of Concealment by CraftySlytherin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: While Ginny tries to get Harry to notice her and Hermione tries to get Ron to admit he's noticed her, Ginny and Hermione come across a very special place at Hogwarts. Not just anyone can get into the Caves of Concealment, for within lie some of the most powerful items in the wizarding world. Can Ginny and Hermione discover the secrets of the caves while at the same time getting their favorite guys to notice them? Well, the final chapter is up! I hope you all enjoy it!!!! Please remember to read and review and tell me what you think :) The sequel to this story is called Harry Potter and The Year of the Dragon.
Date: 06/07/05 Title: Chapter 13: General Hospital Wing
*sniff* poor harry...ginny has to get better, he can't take another loss that close to him right now...ok, now that i'm through whining...you through in the line about purple hair again...i still love it when you do that...and my favorite part of this chapter was when madam pomfrey said "Miss Granger, I assure you that mouth-to-mouth resuscitation will be of no use to Mr. Weasley now." it made me laugh for some reason...excellent job as always...how do you get your chapters up so fast anyways...i think im sensing a little favoritism, lol...=)
Author's Response: No, I don't want to put Harry through another terrible loss like that, and I'm not going to. I'm glad you liked the mouth to mouth line, I had to laugh a bit while I was writing it! Thanks for your kind review. As far as how fast my chapters go up, I guess I'd just have to say that as I type each one up, I've proofread it very rigorously, picking each one apart for typos, spelling mistakes, and grammar errors. In the first half of the story I had a few chapters rejected a time or two for stuff like that, and once for Hermione being ooc, so I've been trying to be SUPER careful. Would you believe that the last five chapters have all been accepted without being rejected even once? Of course, I shouldn't have said that, because now I've jinxed myself and that next one will probably get rejected at least one time. My luck's just kinda like that :)
Date: 06/10/05 Title: Chapter 14: Evil Rides Again
*shouting at my computer screen*WHAT DID RON FIGURE OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is killing me!!!!!!!!...ok...i'm calm now, *breath* ok...another brilliant chapter. the thing that makes your writing so appealing to me is all the little things you take the time to throw in, like mrs. weasley going after snape and making him change ginny's hair back, and conveniently leaving two strands purple, excellent touch (you know from past reviews how i feel about the purple hair) the ring for ginny to have sweet dreams, that was really clever and milius is an awesome creation of yours....he's a very loveable ghost...ron calling hermione hot lips made me laugh out loud, i could just see it, i was crackin up...as far as what i want you to write next...well....i don't care as long as you write more, i really like your work and im sure anything u do will be good =)
Author's Response: I have plenty of ideas for more stories and have no plans to stop writing anytime soon :) I'm thinking of doing both stories at once. I hope you liked what I ultimately did with Ginny's hair, you were definitely the reviewer who talked about the purple hair the most ;) I actually got the Hot Lips idea off of a show my dad used to make me watch (M*A*S*H). Thanks for all of the nice things you had to say about my writing, as you well know, good reviews are what this is all about! The satisfaction of knowing that you are creating something and other people are enjoying it.........Priceless!! BTW, I'm about to die wanting to know what the Draught is, so please hurry up and update!!!!
Date: 06/05/05 Title: Chapter 12: To Kill, or Not to Kill
wow...u get ur chapters up fast...go u...i actually started to feel sorry for Bellatrix if u can believe it...im the kind of person who wants everything to turn out all happy and perfect and the bad guy turn good...but alas...life's not like that...good chapter as usual...i really like the fact that u keep reminding us that ginny's hair is purple...i'll forget and then read it and be like oh yeah...it makes me smile for some reason...i like the idea of her having purple hair...oh well...this has gotten a bit too long...can't wait to see how everyone heals up =)
Author's Response: I personally like long reviews! It's nice for people to put what parts they like when they are reviewing! As for Ginny's purple hair, I STILL don't know when I'll resolve that! Haven't really found a part where it fits in yet. I don't know whether to finally have it wear off, have someone do a spell or something to put it back right, or make it stuck like that for a long time. If anyone has an opinion, email me or leave it in a review!!
Date: 06/02/05 Title: Chapter 11: The Wands, The Amulet, and a Showdown
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now you're leaving chapters hanging like i do...*i must stop giving readers heart attacks* woops sorry about that...It was an excellent chapter as usual...a bit nerve racking at the end though...my favorite line from it was when Harry said The fact that I don't ever want to love anyone else like this. *wipes tear* that's just beautiful. i'd give you a million times 10 if i could =)
Author's Response: Sorry! I realize that this was the worst cliffhanger in my story, as some of my chapters don't even really end with cliffhangers. Maybe you rubbed off on me!!! And as they say, turnabout is fair play!! Thanks for your awesome review!!