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Thank you.
Oh, well thank you so much for the comment - I just really like your story. Reviewing comes natural to me if I'm enjoying a fic. :D I laughed so hard when I read Hermione's comment about being in the same room as werewolf!Draco - at least he couldn't talk . . . AHAHA! I was surprised that everyone was there when they got home - how embarrassing! And Lupin - he was just adorable - even with his one line. Tonks/Lupin, I never really liked it, but I find it kind of cute in this story. Oh, I really do hope Draco and Hermione get together - how much of a punch in the face would that be for Ron? XD And Blaise - gotta love him. Can't wait for the next chapter - great work! :]
Author's Response: Well, the wedding had only just ended, they weren\'t about to leave that quickly, especially after two people had gone missing. And Lupin/Tonks is the only canon romance I support, they really are so sweet together. And to find about more about Draco and Hermione, The Influence of Wolfsbane just made it out of queue, so I\'d recommend reading it! School is clogging up my time with chapter 6. It\'s a bit too fluffy for me so I\'m going to go do major revision as soon as I can. Thank you for your review, it is ENORMOUSLY appreciated.
Oh no - I just read your author's note. I hope you don't stop writing this fic just because there isn't enough reviews. This is story is very good - reviews aren't everything. ;] Anyways, I really want to know what happened to Hermione in that room with Draco. I wonder if she sat and cried in the corner all night or like, played fetch with him. XD Ginny is becoming slightly odd - why is she acting so erratic? Blaise is so great - I really want them to hook up soon. Ahaha. Great work! Please continue!
Author's Response: Don\'t worry, I\'d never stop this fic. The lack of reviews compared to favorites is just a bit annoying. My parents took away my computer, but I plan on posting the next chapter VERY soon (like tomorrow-ish, depending on school).
Arg, Ginny kind of got on my nerves in this one. Their own conversation was so childish - in such a horrid situation you have two teens trying to figure each other out, and acting like they're five!
Absolutely perfect. :D Please continue.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I\'m struggling to finish this up because a quasi-sequel is almost done.
Whoa. WHOA! He - he kissed Ginny! I was not expecting that! I wish Ginny wasn't so goggly-eyed for Harry - that could have been a great kissing scene. I really like Blaise in this one - his inner-dialogue is just so realistic. I love the simplicity in your writing - great chapter! :D
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I\'m undergoing a bit of review overload at the moment, but all reviews are HUGELY appreciated! I\'m glad you enjoy it. As for the compliment to my writing style...wow, thank you so much!
That was so devestating! I really did get choked up by the last paragraph. I guess reading the books didn't really make me feel bad for Merope - but that last paragraph really made her so real to me. *sigh* Damn Tom Riddle!
The one thing that puzzled me was the line about contacts. Voldemort was born around the early 1920s and contacts hadn't been invented yet.
I just thought to tell you. :]
Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Oh, and about the contacts, my bad! *goes to change* There, it\'s better. Thank you for the great (and first) review! I\'m glad it made someone emotional.
I think anyone can relate to what Remus is going through in this fic. You do a wondeful job describing his feelings. Very nice! D
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Moony is obviously my fave charrie, so I\'m glad u thing I described him well!
I think anyone can relate to what Remus is going through in this fic. You do a wondeful job describing his feelings. Very nice! D
Author's Response: thanx again!
Ahaha! Of course Slughorn would make his students brew an infatuation potion. I really liked how you listed the directions - it made me feel like I was in the class, trying to make a potion. XD Great work! Please continue.
Wow, I can't believe Mcgonagall died. That was very unexpected, but it was a good story overall. Poor Hermione . . .
Author's Response: We were required for the challenge to make Hermione suffer, and I wanted it to be in a different way. Thanks for reviewing!
Escaping the clutches of her loving but stifling parents, Riana travels to London and from there to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. There, Riana is viewed as mysterious, cunning, sly, and—though her parentage is unknown—is chosen for Slytherin House.
The two halves of her life clash, as her anorexia battles with the disdain of fellow Slytherin students for Muggle-born witches and wizards. Follow Riana on her journey through the world of wizardry and her search to find a true home, the identity of her real parents, as well as her inner conflict with anorexia.
Wow, when I read the summary for this fic I was immediately interested. A character with anorexia - I have never seen that before in a fan fic. It's very nice - I loved the descriptions of her bony fingers and her mother in the shadows - very film noir. :D Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. :) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much as you did the first chapter. I like the subject of anorexia in a fic. not only because I have had to deal with it personally, but because it is seldom touched by other authors. Tsk, tsk, striving for originality ... yet again. *sigh* Hee!
Anyway, your review truly encouarges me. Thank you again! :)
~Julia~
Wow, that was kind of harsh of her. It ruined the whole wedding - poor Archibald - he seemed so perfect too. I loved the fairies - great job!
Author's Response: Once you get through three husbands, the deaths become rather inconsequential. Or so I\'ve heard ;) Thank you for the review!
Damn, well at least Snape didn't have to kill Dumbledore. I was having trouble following the story because a lot of the situations weren't canon. *slaps face* I need to snap out of it. Draco was very appealing - I loved his feelings for Harry - how he wanted to hurt him. Very good! :D
Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you like it. Sorry about the confusion!
Wow, this had a very different insight. I really like Moody - you wrote him perfectly. Great work!
Author's Response: I\'m so glad you like my Moody! I see him very differntly than in the movie - more like what you hear on t e books on tape. I adore him myself - a bit of paranoia is a healthy thing... thank you for reviewing, too. It\'s always terrific to know someone besides my mother has read something....
ProfPosky
The gaping black hole,
Now replaces you,
In my heart,
Forever.
I don't know, but that part really hit me hard. Very nice. :D
Author's Response: awww, thanx. It really hit me hard, too. It really reminded my of my deciced friend, he loved Harry Potter, he never finished GOF.
Author's Response: awww, thanx. It really hit me hard, too. It really reminded my of my deciced friend, he loved Harry Potter, he never finished GOF.
Author's Response: Edit: sorry, wasn\'t thinking, i said deciced, i ment deceased. forgive me.
Ok, I'll be completely honest with you - I just don't get it. I read the poem three times over, and I can't see where this relates to Snape. Well, except the forget and regret part - which I really liked.
Maybe you should have rated it professors. ;] Very nice job.
Author's Response: I appreciate the effort. *thumbs up*
I\'ve really got to tone down a bit after this. :D
No - no. He killed his brother? Oh My God. How incredibly awful! That is just horrible.
I loved the last two lines . . .
For three days each month, I am a monster.
But for three weeks each month, I am a man.
So simple, so heartbreaking. Great work!
Oh, I'm so incredibly happy that you wrote Aberforth into the story. I've always been very curious about him. Great start! : D
Author's Response: Marauder: And I\'m incredibly happy you thought to leave a comment!!! I don\'t know how much more of Aberforth will make an appearance, but his character is so intriguing!! I hope you enjoy the rest!
Oh, wow - I really like this. I love, love your portrayal of Snape.
Snape believed he was destined for greatness - for something important; for the rest of the wizarding world to finally recognize and acknowledge his unique abilities.
That line says it all about his character, especially when Snape was younger. We see it later as well - in his desire for the Order of Merlin.
But I don't understand why Snape didn't recognize Lily when she walked into the shop - and I'm really excited to find out why she started to cry. Oh, and baby Harry! :D
Poor Peter. I never thought of him being forced into joining Voldemort, like the Death Eaters kidnapping him and bonding him so he couldn't escape. It really makes me think differently about Peter's whole character.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Author's Response: Ah... it wasn\'t Lily... just someone who reminded him of her.
Peter - there is so much we have yet to learn about the little worm... ;)
But he was - different from the others. She didn’t know how she knew this, but she did. He was thin, and his light brown hair often fell over his eyes. Many of the boys in her year had started to grow tall, but Remus wasn’t yet one of them.
What a great description of Remus - I adore your Remus and Snape.
He was transfixed by another one of Lily’s beaming smiles. He really didn’t like this feeling and decided it would be best to discourage her.
Exactly how I see Snape thinking. The nice feeling in his stomach makes him vulnerable - of course he would want to stop it.
I don't know why I'm quoting this story, but, damn, I really, really like it.
Please continue it!
Author's Response: I love writing Snape.... I\'m thrilled you\'re enjoying it!! Please tell your friends!
Wow, straight away I was drawn to this fic because the summary made it sound so much like the Draco/Harry fic I'm working on.
I really much liked the beginning here -- and I do hope you will continue the story. It has great potential. :]
Author's Response: I plan to finish it...sometime soon I hope! Thanks for the encouragement!