This is where I talk about myself is it? Hm...
Well I'm a huge Harry Potter fan (you never would have guessed huh?), I enjoy books, writing, music, dance (though I'm not very good at it).
I suppose I'm a bit of a sucker for romance... good romance, that is. Some of my favorite movies are not in English, but I like POTC, Titanic, Little Miss Sunshine (and other good comedy), and sometimes I get a sudden urge to watch scifi.
Really great job. I love how you brought so much of Sirius and Regulus' bond into the story. Really well written ^_^
Hello! I've just started reading this fic and so far it's really amazing! I love how you mix silliness with subtle and sarcastic humor. The only thing I'd like to mention is that I doubt Lily would physically be bouncing in her seat. It just seems a bit OOC. Anyway great job, and I'm anxious to see what her plan of revenge will be!
Now normally I don't like the Ron/Luna pairing, but this was wonderful! It's so sweet, and really captured Ron's personality.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I don't really like Ron so I try to make him true to his character -- I'm glad it showed. =]
I have to say this is one of the best fanfic characterizations of Harry and Hermione's relationship that I've ever read. You've done a masterful job of bringing out the subtleties of everything that they have been through.
Along with the line about Ron's leaving and the coffee, one of my favorites was where Hermione tells Harry to stop staring. It reminded me so much of the young Hermione, always having to be the sensible one, etc. Obviously here they are much more mature, but for me this sort of connected them back to the kids we know from the books. Lovely story!
Now this trick, it involves the other couple doesn't it?
You've got a wonderful style. The moment was executed quite nicely. I loved the progression through Draco's emotions and his thought process in writing the letter. That's difficult to capture properly, and you've done a good job. The end with Scorpius was, of course, very sweet, but personally, I thought it was slightly OOC. Perhaps it was just the use of "okay" as that's usually more of an American thing. Good story though :)