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03/15/07

I'm never really here but I appreciate reviews, they make life a little brighter. I try to pop in from time to time, but I'm terribly sorry that I'm neglecting MNFF.

A shout out to any people still reading my wimsy little pieces. =D

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Reviews by Lalalalatina

Another Suitcase in Another Hall by Kerichi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

Loss is a suitcase fastened with string tightly knotted.... Remus prepares to leave Grimmauld Place.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 05/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice, poem. The suitcase is very symbolic but I think the poem should have been a little longer and maybe you could somehow show the reader how it connects to those chapter you said inspired you. ^^ Good job.

Author's Response: Ta, Thanks! I\'m glad you wanted the poem to be longer, and if you\'re ever over in the R/T cat you could always look up the story and see in detail! ^_~

Spinning A Lie by Herminoninny

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Can you break the yarn of a lie?

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 06/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Spinning A Lie

Great poem, very interesting. I liked how you managed to pull off directly questioning and "talking" to the reader, I don't see that often. The only thing I am a bit confused on is what "truth" Harry found.

Author's Response: I have an answer, but guess...

The Working Class by _Ivy_

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A short but not so sweet poem that delves into the hearts of house elves and brings to light their deepest feelings.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 06/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: House Elves

Pattern.....pattern.... is the pattern the fact that its an acrostic? Good job on this! You did a good job of detailing the life of a poor, mistreated house elf. Some of my fave lines were:

Seeing and doing it all, yet staying pure,
Even though inside, they feel tainted.

and of course... the last line. ^^

Author's Response: Yeah, you would read the words \'HOUSE ELVES\' if you read the first letter in each line. *grins* Nice job figuring it out. *squees* So happy you liked it! Thanks sooo much for reviewing!

Lily's Thoughts by Hermione Lurves Ron

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily is thinking about James. J/L Acrostic

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 06/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Haha, very cute poem. Her contradictory thoughts portrayed her emotions well. I really liked how you ended the poem. Heehee.^^

Author's Response: I know. I think she had always liked him secretly! Thanks!!

What Wouldst Thou Make of Air? by laurskii

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: What comes after the deaths of the seven Weasley sons? A two-part poem describing the events and aftermath of the Final Battle.

This story is now complete.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 06/21/07 Title: Chapter 1: One.

Wow, this is amazing. Your use of words and decriptions is beautiful. Your begining really caught my attention, and I was awestruck at how great this was as I continued reading. I'm eager to read the next part. ^^ Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you loads for reviewing. I\'m very glad you liked it (: I\'ll definitely update tonight, as it\'s all written

We All Fall Down by coppercurls

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A Rondeau poem about fighting the losing battle.

"Nevertheless, Harry, while you may only have delayed his return to power, it will take someone else who is prepared to fight what seems a losing battle next time -- and if he is delayed again, and again, why he many never return to power." Sorcerer's Stone, p298

By coppercurls of Hufflpuff house for the rondeau poetry challenge.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 06/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: We all fall down

Hello fellow Hufflepuff. I thought this poem was fantastic, to simply put it. Your ending is very powerful, but the last line before "We all fall down" slightly confuses me- one is left but they're still fighting? I thought this perhaps may be referring to Harry. Or is it about Voldemort? Anyways, great job and good luck in the challenge.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The line you are refering to means that while one person remains to fight against Voldemort or whatever form evil has taken, the fight will go on. So long as one person is left to fight it will not all be in vain. Hope that it wasn\'t too confusing and thanks again!

What Harry never Said by Will_the_Ranger

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: As Harry stares death in the face, he writes Ginny one last letter, one he may never send.

As the storm finally breaks,

And the darkness kills the light,

I wish that I were not alone,

As I enter the final fight.

R&R! All reveiws wiil be answered!

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, so sad. I'm guessing this is H/G? It fits the pair quite well. Hopefully they will get together in DH and then Harry won't be so lonely. Anyways, excellent job!

Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m glad that Harry gets to be happy for once (even if I didn\'t write it:))

Coping by social loner

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Three years after Voldemort’s final defeat, Hermione finally realizes that it’s time to move on with her life, even though it means going back to her pain stricken past. Knowing she can’t do it alone, she calls on Harry for support. However, Harry has his own demons that are keeping his life from progressing as well.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story. I like how it ends with Harry and Ginny meeting again. Although you ended the story with their accidental meeting and no further to let the reader decide for themselves how the story will end, I want to know what happens next! ^^ Great job on this.

A Day in the Sun by gryffindoratheart

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A humoruos poem about Voldemort's trip to the beach.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 07/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh- my - gosh. This was brilliant! Very fun to read after all the serious and dark poems submitted regularily. Of course those aren't bad- serious poems are *awesome*. But this was just refreshing and funny. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! Maybe I\'ll write some more serious poems.

She Was Beautiful by social loner

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Draco relives his happiest, most painful memory of love and pain as he fights for his life. But what is worth living for when what you want, love, has left forever?

“Draco didn’t know what it was, whether it was the intoxicating appeal of forbidden fruit, or the way her hair blew in the breeze, with lovely brown tendrils that lay elegantly down her back. What he did know, was that she was beautiful.”

I’m Social Loner from Hufflepuff, and this is for the June one-shot challenge.

Categories: Draco/Other Character
Characters: None
Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Words: 3033 | Hits: 491 | Published: 07/01/07 | Updated: 07/01/07
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Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 01/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh.. so romantic and sad! The very last line is just so bittersweet and perfect. Fantastic job, I'm not much of a Draco fan but I still liked it! In the books we never see Draco have a real romantic interest in anyone (I don't believe he ever had real strong feelings for Pansy) and this is a nice little twist to him having to keep his feelings for a non-pureblood hidden.

PS. Thanks for the wonderful banner!

Love behind the Veil by fawkeshermione221

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A poem about the ones Harry loved who were killed, and the veil in the Department of Mysteries.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 07/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: Love behind the Veil

Wow, incredible poem. It is very different and a great read. I hope to see more of your work up soon! ^_^ Keep writing!

Singularly in his Heart by Prongs92

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Just a poem I wrote about the Boy who Lived. Please read and review.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 07/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Singularly in his Heart

Amazing work. I like how you included parts of the prophecy in there. My only critique is that you used commas in certain places where they seemed unnecessary like:

Situated above his spectacled emeralds,
Is what truly makes him unique...

The occurrences of one single night,
Are represented with this mark on his head...

And I don't think the commas were necessary in the 4th stanza.

But that is just my opinion and other than that I have to say this is an extraordinary poem. Keep writing! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you enjoyed my poem. I\'ll keep your grammar advice in mind the next time I write poetry.

Fleur's Thoughts by Hermione Lurves Ron

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Fleur is thinking about Bill. This story has some French and a French accent.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Another great acrostic. I have to say I like the beginning the best, and I like how you included the french words. Keep writing! ^^

Author's Response: I can do that! Thank you!

"Oh Harry, why not me?" by SevenAndMoreToGo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Parvati, Cho and Ginny - the three prettiest girls of Hogwarts, demand Harry why he didn't simply stick around with one of them. And he answers each of the ladies in limerick-like stanzas, giving his own "verdict" in the end.

Warning: Slightly idiotic

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: "Oh Harry, why not me?"

Whoa! Harry/Luna? I did not see that coming. Anyways, fantastic poem, it was fun to read. And I like how you included the "readers" part. Haha. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! *bows* Enjoy your HPDH!

Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes by Prongs92

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A poem I wrote about the famous joke shop founded by Fred and George Weasley. Like every author says, please read and review!

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes

A creature in shades of colorful fluff

That line is missing punctuation. Just thought I'd point that out.

Anyways, (again) great job on this poem! It was very enjoyabale and a lot different. I can just see Fred and George playing or even singing this in their shop. Hahaha. It'd be a nice way to advertise. Excellent job.Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I\'m glad you liked it!

Goodbye by ravenclawhero

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry Potter has given up, he waits for his life to end. Then he realizes he has to finish the war, he has to win, so he fights. He fights to keep breathing, to keep himself afloat. Will he make it?

Warning: Kinda dark.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 07/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye

Awww... Harry died? So sad. My only question... why did you italicize (hope I spelled that right...) the "bye" in the... what is it... 9th stanza? Was it to emphasize his leaving?

Anyways, great poem- like I said, very sad. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Yes, Harry died...boo. And about the \'bye\' thing, I don\'t really know why I did it. I guess I thought it looked cool :P. But your reason sounds a lot more sophisticated, so I\'ll go with that ;). Thank you! Glad you like it. Rave <3

Bliss Era - The Happiest Man Alive by lady magician

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry’s PoV, Post- DH

Harry Potter is the happiest man alive. He lives his days in bliss and joy, for he has one thing, just one thing, that completely makes up for and outweighs his Voldemort-driven childhood…

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 08/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Mirror of Erised

Very sweet poem! ^_^ I like how you had Harry take the time to describe each character. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! (I really have to find something better to say than thank yoiu!!!) It\'s really great you liked it, cuz I loved writing it! And I love to imagine how Harry would desribe his family, it really warms your heart up, doesn\'t it?

The Dark Lord's Eulogy: An Odious Ode by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This fanfiction writer laments the loss of her favourite dark lord in a re-donk-ulous poem.

This is not very complimentary to Volders, so don't tell him about it if you see him around, okay?

Deathly Hallows spoilers.

Four times nominated for Best Poem in the Quicksilver Quills Awards!

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 08/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One and Only!

Haha. Hilarious. My only bit of critique is that you could have added more punctuation (commas can be helpful). This was such an awesome poem. Write more! ^_^

Author's Response: Oh, whoops! I always forget about punctuation in poems... thanks for the review!

Just for Me by StellaSirius

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A poem from Tonks to Remus. Before they got married.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 08/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Just for Me

Great poem, my one question- where is she? Is she on a "quest" for the Order or at home? I know you described it as winter. That's the one bit I didn't really get. Anways, great job. ^^

Author's Response: Oh, no. It\'s more of a metaphorical thingy- without her Remmykins it\'s cold and dead and winter and stuffs. :) Thanks for the review- I love getting them!

My One Regret by slytherins_queen2

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: There's only one thing Lily ever regretted...

No DH Spoilers!

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 08/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very sweet. I'm sure that really was her biggest regret. My only bit of critique is that some of the lines were a bit long whilst others were much shorter, like:
I didn’t get to see your first day at school or embarrass you by beginning to cry,

Anyways, great poem. Keep writing! ^^

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your critique I\'ll try and keep it in mind when I write another poem.. Thank you also for the review and yeah I really think that was Lily\'s greatest regret.

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