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04/15/07

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Marked To Find Your Way Back by GringottsVault711

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Two part ficlet. Ron has found himself in love with Hermione, but is now convinced that she 'detests' him. A simple gesture on his part could reveal the truth between the two friends. Includes references to Pride & Prejudice and 'The Ruined Puzzle' by Dashboard Confessional, because they both rock.

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 04/16/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter the Second: Hermione

Very nice story, I love it! Keep writing!

The Ribbon by Monster Book of Monsters

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This could have actually taken place within the story - 5th and 6th year. A sweet story about Hermione, Ron, and a special ribbon.

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 05/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Awesome story! One of my favorites! I heart it, keep up the good work!

Black Beginnings by black_ink

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One-shot. MWPP. I remember that the beginning of my life was never good. No friends, cruel family. The first thing that happened on the train, was that I got kicked out of a compartment by Lucius, my cruel cousin. So when I had found a compartment with a boy that was nice to me, I remeber being so relieved to make a friend. This is an account from my (Sirius') point of view of how I made three amazing friends and a lot more ememies.

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: Black Beginnings

Hahaha, very nice story. I liked it a lot, nice description of how they met.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!!

Ashes by coppercurls

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Spring Challenge #4, by coppercurls of Hufflepuff house.

“There is one who has failed me, and in doing so he has betrayed us all. He is a traitor and he deserves to die.”

“Tell me but who and I will carry it out willingly, master,” he said, excitement creeping into his voice. “If he has betrayed you he has betrayed us all and is not worthy of life.”

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 05/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: Ashes

Wow. Great story. Awesome job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I\'m glad that you liked it!

Senses by Gryffinpuff

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sense: a word of so many meanings. This is a story about senses. The common sense notion of self preservation that is lost when friends are in need, the senses of the body that can be damaged so easily, and the intuitive senses of the heart that tell you when things have changed. R/Hr focused with a little bit of H/G, not a lot of fluff, with rotating views between the characters on a truly horrific day.

Quicksilver Quills Runner-Up - Best Romance, Canon

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 04/18/07 Title: Chapter 15: Sensing the End

Awesome story! I love it, great writing! Update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 05/01/07 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

Wow...great story. From beginning to end...brilliant. You're a really great writer, you expressed everything beautifully, and the details and imagery was just amazing. I love your story and I hope you keep writing. Good luck!

Memories of Time by mugglegurl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When looking for Remus, Hermione, Ron, and Ginny stumble across a Pensieve, and find out the real story of Lily and James, told through the memories of their classmates.

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 5: Father, Son, and Spirits of the Past

Awesome chapter and a great story! I love how you described all the memories. Awesome job, keep writing!

Author's Response: Only an epilogue is left, and I\'m going to post that soon, after I do some editing.

Friendship, Love, and Pranks: The Story of the Marauders by Padfoot is MINE

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Chapter Thirty-Eight in Queue!

They say someday your life will flash before your eyes...

The Marauders. The name alone strikes fear into the hearts of teachers and makes girls swoon. Watch as Sirius, who has always kept his emotions locked up in a box, finally finds the girl that has its key; as James masterminds everything, except how to win over the girl of his dreams; as Remus finds love, but learns it's just as hard to keep it going, and as Peter tries to prove he's just as good as the other four, no matter what he has to do. They're unstoppable, and it's safe to say that once they're gone, Hogwarts will never be the same again.

...let's make ours worth watching.

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 04/22/07 Title: Chapter 22: Your Inner Anguish Doesn't Make Any Discernable Sense

Awesome chapter! Update soon please!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ll update as soon as I can!

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 06/03/07 Title: Chapter 24: Then, Everyone Screamed Bloody-Freakin’ Homicide. The End.

Great story, third time i tried to send a review cuz it keeps getting cut off, lol, but its ok, thats just how much i love your story, lol, i leave three reviews:P hahaha, well, awesome chapter, and amazing story! You're a really talented writer, keep writing, and update soon plz!

Author's Response: Haha...well, it worked this time! Thanks so much, I\'m glad you like my writing!

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 10/22/07 Title: Chapter 31: The Three Broomsticks, Part Two: “You’ve Got a Little…Yeah.”

Really good story! i love it! keep up the good work and update soon please!

Author's Response: Okay, I will!

Don't Wait Too Long by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Fleur was getting married. I never told her how I felt. I never told her I was in love with her. And now I didn't have the chance.

Told from the POV of Christian Beaumont, the boy who loved Fleur in school. It all begins when he receives an invitation to her wedding, and ends up changing his life.

Fleur/Bill, Fleur/OC and [minor] Harry/Ginny.

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 05/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Wait Too Long

wow, very nice story *Sniff*, it's very true. You really are an excellent writer, keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you!

To Love and Back Again by jillybeans

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Harry places his thoughts into Dumbledore’s Pensieve in hope to save Ron and Hermione’s relationship. Ron and Hermione delve into the Pensieve and revive essential moments of their Hogwarts experience starting with the day they met. This is a riveting tale, casting Ron and Hermione to the past as they unwind time and memories. As they unfold time will their hearts dare to let each other in? Or is the past too hard to bear?

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 05/01/07 Title: Chapter 7: Momentary Heaven

Awesome story, great chapter! Keep writing and update soon please!!

Feelings for Ron by Gin_PotterGirl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: On a starry night, Hermione finally expresses her feelings about Ron.

This is for just_the_Contrary's final assinment for poetry.

Name: GinnyPotter on the boards, Gin_PotterGirl here
House: Hufflepuff

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 2: Sad

Very nice, update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'ll try updating quickly!

A Smell of Sulfur - Part One of the Romulus and Remus Trilogy by The Webspinner

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Twenty years after the death of Voldemort. A murderer is on the loose, and he is using a powerful weapon - a creature known as the Atronach, a beast of fire that leaves traces of sulfur where it makes its kill.

Ron Weasley is the first to stumble across these murders, and Harry Potter arranges for the old trio, plus Ginny, to team up and face this threat. The mysterious orphaned teenage girl Amanda, whom Harry keeps as a foster child under nebulous circumstances, also offers her help.

However, underlying the case of the murders is a much deeper conspiracy, one involving the last true disciple of the Dark Lord, a man who operates in the shadows, a man who seems to be directing and predicting the every move of the trio and their quarry...a man who may be more powerful than Voldemort himself. Even though the threat of a sadistic murderer is high, it only conceals a far greater one. And in this story of love, deception, fear, hate, anger, betrayal, courage, and passion, the unanswered question is - when will this mysterious orchestrater tip his hand? Part One of a trilogy.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts
Characters: None
Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Self Injury, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 24 | Completed: No | Words: 42330 | Hits: 1686 | Published: 12/14/06 | Updated: 08/29/07
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Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 04/16/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Making the Arrest

I love this story, awesome job! :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 06/03/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Demented

Wow. Very intense. lol, You're an amazing writer, this was a great chapter, and I just LOVE your story! Great job, and update soon plz!

Author's Response: Thanks! Like I told another of my reviewers, the cliffhangers get worse, you\'ll just have to hang on with me!

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Plottings

Great chapter! Update soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Enchanted by Willow Rosenberg

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: ~Complete~

The summer after the trio's sixth year, people gather at the Weasley's for the wedding of Bill and Fleur. Hermione goes in high hopes, expecting a relationship to heat up between her and Ron. However, her arrival at the Burrow is greeted with a rather nasty surprise...

Pre-DH

2010: Ahaa, God, I just took another look at this story and, uh...the only defense I have is that I was a lot younger when I wrote it. Whew.

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 05/23/07 Title: Chapter 5: The Steps That You Take

Haha, very cute chapter:P love the ending though:P Good job, and update soon plz!

Starts with Goodbye by Ron x Hermione

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:
Ron and Hermione have been married for awhile now. They are even expecting their first child soon. They have yet to find a name for their bundle of joy, a boy; even though they have looked through a plethora of baby book names.

But when a house-elf shows up and tells the two that Hogwarts is in danger by Death Eaters and even Voldemort himself, what will happen?

Harry is the new Defense Against the Dark Arts Teacher there, but will he finally be able to break the trend of having a new teacher every year?

Will he fight to the death?

My version of the Final Battle, and what will happen.

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 05/15/07 Title: Chapter 2: Life's Meaning Comes From Death

Wow, that was a beautiful story...it made me tear up and everything *sniff*. You write beautifully, keep up the good work, its amazing.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much, dear. Made me smile. ~Lindsey :)

Harry's Letters by mgle_teacher

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Voldemort is gone, and so is Harry Potter. Ron is having a hard grieving the death of his best friend, and is wallowing in self pity. Hermione is struggling with the grieving process herself, until she finds Harry's letters.

Important note: After reading Deathly Hallows, this story is officially 'on hiatus' until further notice. Thanks to everyone who read it while I was working on it.

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 05/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: 31 June 1992

Very nice, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Relighting the Candle by guiding ray of sunlight

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Regulus battles his feeling of having no no self-will, aided by a golden, glittering object.

A Character Sonnet Challenge entry, I am Guiding Ray of Sunlight of Gryffindor House.

Reviewer: Ritter Signed
Date: 05/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Relighting the Candle

nice, good job!

Author's Response: thanks!

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