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04/26/07

A Black Rose and a White Lily
Update on August 9, '12- I have yet to start writing the fifth chapter. So that'll take some time. Okay, so, let's just admit this fic has been abandoned for now.

A Silent Change
Update on August 9 '12 - Chapter 4 was apparently with my betas. Chapters 5 and 6 were all written but I don't have any of these now. So, again, fic has been abandoned for now.

Eventual Embrace
Update on August 9, '12- A sequel to my other James/Lily one shot: Beneath the Shell. A follow up one shot will be coming whenever. Okay, probably never.

I haven't written Harry Potter fanfiction in an age. I highly doubt I'll be writing any more any time soon and continuing these which I wrote forever ago? Don't think that's happening. Enjoy the one shots though. :)

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Just a Game? by R_Ravenclaw

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: While in Charms class one day, Lily feels James’ eyes on her. After her first glance back at him, she starts to think. It’s just a game to him, right? And is all really fair in love and war?

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Just a Game?

omg! i loved it! like totally! good job! (Y)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Who Stole the Cookies from the Cookie Jar? by FlightofthePhoenix

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James Sirius Potter is a mischievous little six-year-old and is rather like his grandfather, James Potter, and also his namesake, Sirius Black. When he has an idea, he is determined to fulfil it to the best of his ability. He drags his siblings Albus and Lily as well as his cousins Hugo and Rose Weasley into his plan while a twelve-year-old Teddy Remus Lupin watches on, amused.

Written for the September Challenge by FlightofthePhoenix of Hufflepuff

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: James Potter = Mischievous

aww... so cute.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. Maybe i should write more stories with the little kiddies! They attract a lot of attention! Glad you liked it :) ~Nicole

The Moon and the Sun by Love_is_4ever

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: You and I, that’s like talking about the sun and the moon: even though they share the skies, they can’t be together at the same time...

What happens when your most precious possession is taken from you? This is the story of the life of Rowena Ravenclaw, one of the cleverest witches of her time. But she has a secret, and a past she can’t forget...

Written for the Full Moon One Shot Challenge, I am Hopeful_song, of Hufflepuff House.

This Story Won Third Place in the Full Moon One Shot Challenge!

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 12/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

first of all, CONGRATULATIONS! =D
wow! that was amazing, emotional and moving! i envy you though, english is my second tongue too but you're really good at it! a lot better than me. anyways, may i give a suggestion please? write more fics, will you??

Author's Response: Thanks! And I\'ll do my best to write for my fics soon.. *giggles*

Author's Response: Er.. I meant to say \"And I\'ll do my best to wrie more fics soon...\" I don\'t know what happened there... =)

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 12/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dear Man-Journal... by wewillmissyou

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Dear Diary….

No, only girls keep diaries. Sirius and James would murder me if they found out.

Journal?

Nah, that's rubbish, too.

Man-diary?

Don't be such a pansy, Peter. Man-diary? You must want to be mocked out of this century.

Man-journal, then?

Well, that's not so bad. It could be a temporary title, anyway.

Peter Pettigrew's mother wants him to let out his feelings in a "diary". Here is the first (and last) entry of his man-journal.

Many thanks goes to ix3thehpseries and Mistletoe for being faboulous and helpful betas!

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: December 4

that was amazing! no siriusly!
although i can just imagine peter boiling whilst watching james and lily kissing... hehe!

Author's Response: Thank you! Love the Sirius pun, btw. :)

Only Him by R_Ravenclaw

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: I could see it every time I looked into her eyes.

At first I thought her eyes were beautiful. They were black and strong; she obviously wanted nothing more than to follow the one she loved.

It wasn’t me she loved.

And I don’t know when I found out.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Only Him

the only thing that comes to mind right now is- poor rodolphus!
and yeah, i liked the way you've written this one-shot, with no mentions of names or anything. beautiful job! =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Apparently the pity for Rodolphus is pretty much universal. ^.~

Sirius's Riddle by R_Ravenclaw

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: What happens when a Ravenclaw catches Sirius Black's attention? He has a riddle to solve, to find out.

All you have to do is read this story.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 10/31/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sirius's Riddle

Hi, Alison!

Great starting =] I liked how you showed Sirius being all bored, remarking on it, and the girl sitting next to him passing a sarcastic comment. It catches Sirius off attention since he isn't used to girls responding to him in that manner.

She was very ordinary.
A very straight forward sentence, but I like it for quite a few reasons.

First, the herione of the story doesn't always have to all beautiful. Lily's beautiful, Ginny's considered attractive too, but Sirius' love is just ordinary. Good.

It also shows how Sirius used to think about Victoria in the beginning. It portrays his thoughts about her when he just sees her and doesn't know her. It makes them ending up together more believable, that good looks aren't all that

important. It's the personality that mainly counts.

It's nice that Sirius is interested in her and starts asking her random questions after every few days break. And even though in the beginning she's sort of cold [and maybe wary?], she starts warming up to him, and they become friends. Kind of. And how Sirius is on denial until the whole scene at Hogsmeade.

The riddle was very appropriate, by the way. I think I should check out that site sooner or later. Anyway, I myself couldn't guess the answer until the clue about it being a four letter word was given. Then it was obvious-- love. Lol. But I still wanted to confirm, and when I reread the riddle, it made perfect sense.

The ending was perfect! How both of them realise their love for each other and end up kissing.

In short, it was a very well written one shot. I really liked it! =]

- Afifa

Cinderella Was a Redhead by NeLLyRaE

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans has problems. She sleepwalks, (and always ends up in strange places) she is disorganised, flunking Arithmancy, and, to her dismay, was made Head Girl. There is also the problem of James Potter, who refuses to stop asking her out. Will she ever pull herself together enough to give him a chance?

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 03/27/08 Title: Chapter 3: Dancing on the Roof

lol. how can anyone want to dance on the roof? your lily is SO original. :D

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Sleepwalker

i just looove it, so i've added your story on my favourites. =D
lily's characterization is pretty different, but nice. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh crap. i submitted the review for the first chapter, but, uh, whatever. the contents would have been the same. lol. and now you get a bonus review. tehe.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 07/30/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow. I love this fic. =D gREat chapter! =]

Turning Tables by x_lily_evans_x

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans, Head Girl, has never been reckless. She has been reliable and careful, thinking through everything before making decisions. But when she recklessly takes on a challenge by Amelia Lance to see who can make James Potter fall for her by the Easter holidays, her life goes from orderly to complicated. However, Lily thinks she's got it under control. After all, this is James Potter, the boy who, at least, used to like her and ask her out. Winning this challenge should be child’s play, right?

It's amazing how wrong a girl can be...

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

absolutely wonderful! can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

absolutely wonderful! can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you want to read the next chapter. Thank you for your review! :D

Snape Speed-Dating by Bethywoo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After losing a bet, Professor Severus Snape is forced to accompany Professor Filius Flitwick on a speed-dating event. Will he manage to survive the witless witches and the maddening MC? Or will he leaved with more than he bargained for?

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 05/27/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

this made me laugh so hard, i was practically shaking! LMAO. great job! (Y)

Author's Response: LOL! Thanx ;)

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my Godric! I've fallen in love with this fic. I love ALL the sarcastic comments by Snape. You really know what he'd say at what times. Your characterisation is perfect.

“Oh joy. This looks promising,” Snape muttered to himself as a witch with uncontrollably frizzy white hair walked towards him.
You don't know how much this first line cracked me up. =D

“Do you like Pinm1;a Coladas ?”
I'm assuming that it's 'Pina'.

“Too bad. I always liked the dark, greasy type,” the blonde sighed, as she tickled Snape’s chin with her false fingernails.
Ookkay, now that's weird. lol.

“Glad you’re having a good time! I’m off to my date. She’s three-foot five and she is hot, hot, hot!”
LOL. I can well imagine Flitwick saying that. =D

I sirius-ly can't wait for the next chapter. And please, please write longer chapters, yeah? =) Then they'd make me laugh more! lol.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for catching that error! I guess it didn\'t translate from Word. Ah well :)\r\nGlad you\'re enjoying it. And thanks so much for your compliments! Snape is definitely my favorite to write *evilgrin*

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*is laughing loudly* *clapms hand on mouth* siriusly, i need to stop laughing or else everyone will wake up. lmao! H.I.L.L.A.R.I.O.U.S. =D
lOved this one...
“My hero,” said Snape bitingly, sizing up little Flitwick.
tehe. hopefully the queue will start working normally and this will get updated. *adds story to favourtes*

Author's Response: lol. Thanks so much. All of you guys are so great to leave feedback :)

Finding Someone New by LilyGinnyWrites92

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It's the Marauders' Seventh Year, and Remus, Peter, and Sirius are getting tired of James mooning over Lily. Their solution? Write an anonymous love letter, and leave it a classroom!

I'm sorry, but this fic is going on semi-permanent hiatus. I ran out of ideas

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/13/08 Title: Chapter 2: Reactions

cool fic. it's a really nice idea. =)

Love Is Just Hate With A Smile by jenny b

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: ‘Love and hate are quite similar when you think about it,’ James said thoughtfully.
‘What do you mean?’ Lily asked.
‘You can’t hate someone for no reason without loving them a little,’ he said.
Lily rolled her eyes. ‘That’s stupid,’ she said.
‘No it’s not. Why do you think guys tease girls they like? Most people use hate to hide the fact that they really love someone.’

Lily didn’t say anything, so James continued. ‘After all, love is really just hate with a smile.’

Lily Evans hated James Potter. She always had, and thought she always would. But people change. Opinions change. Sometimes the line between right and wrong blurs … as well as the line between love and hate.

ON INDEFINITE HIATUS. Check out my bio for more details.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Friends and Foes

lovely start. can't wait to read more. =)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Fuzzy Elfin Dilemmas by KritchMis

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: “Hell -- Oomph! Ouch. Sorry, Sirius decided it’d be fun to trip me.”

“I did not!”

“Oh don’t deny it Sirius, I saw you too. Hello there! You’re here to read, aren’t you? Isn’t that great Remus? Remus?”

“Wha – Oh yes, lovely… So sorry, love, but what are you talking about?”

“You’d think being a werewolf, you could hear twice as good as the normal wizard.”

“Anna! Keep it down!”

“But why, Remus? Everyone’s going to find out once they read Fuzzy Elfin Dilemmas, and then, why would you care?”

“You three are completely ignoring the company. How rude. Don’t mind them, they’ve got the manners of a teaspoon, I tell you.”

The other three sigh as one at Sirius.

“You’ll really like this story. It’s better than my daddy’s, but shhhh, don’t tell him I said that.”

“It’s about a werewolf community, us four and Time-Turners.”

“That hardly says anything at all, you two!”

“We’re sent on a mission of spying on a community I already knew well. Yes, I am a werewolf –“

“Harmless though, I tell you!”

“Those two have a project through the Department of Mysteries –“

“It’s great fun working there.”

“Nat, enough. We’re supposed to figure out how to finish the Time-Turners. Unofficially of course.”

“We’ve got to go…Happy reading!”

“NAT!”

This is a story written by Mistletoe (Kat) and myself using our OC's (Natalie Carmen and Anna Boothe), Remus and Sirius. These four are an unlikely group for a mission, but that's indeed what happens. Sent on a whirlwind journey by the Order of the Phoenix and uncomfortable with each other, they're a little lost in the forests of Wales. Where exactly do werewolves and Time-Turners come into the mix? It involves mystery and intrigue, some adventure and fears, a smidgen of flirting and quite a bit of silliness.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Fanciful For Floo

great job! oh, and i totally love remus' last dialogue. =D

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Serious for Strawberries

great one! *goes to add the story to her favourites*

Author's Response: Thanks. :] Make sure you check out Kat\'s other stories or mine by clicking on the banners. They\'re just as good. lol.

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