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The Art of the Quill by Pussycat123

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: *One shot* It is Lily and James's fifth year, and they have to endure many extremely dull classes. To pass the time, they swap notes. This is a collection of most of those notes ... and the madness that inevitably ensues.
Reviewer: Peritus Signed
Date: 05/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Art of the Quill

great fic! really nice and original

Author's Response: Thanks very much, I\'m glad you enjoyed it.



A Tale of Two Matchmakers by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Romance for three couples when Blaise and Luna use Shakespearean styled matchmaking to hook up Ginny and Draco. There's Much Ado about...something!

Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance-Non Canon 2007, 2008, and 2009. In 2010 mods changed the rules (they got tired of the same fics being nominated ^_~) so no more QQ hopes, but that's okay. No proof is needed that Draco/Ginny = love.  

* Written before the HBP, this tale presents an alternate sixth year in which Dumbledore lives, Draco is more than a foil to Harry, and Blaise Zabini is a girl. I hope readers who ship Draco/Ginny will enjoy the story which includes dancing with faeries, Celtic and Norse mythology, school holidays in London and Spain, and loads of fantasy and romance. "Is this a kissing book?" (to quote the Princess Bride) Yes, it is. *

(Warnings were added for safety, due to brief allusions in later chapters, not graphic content.)

 


Reviewer: Peritus Signed
Date: 05/15/07 Title: Chapter 52: The Long Goodbye Part Three: Draco and Ginny

just to say that I love your story. And all the one-shot. And all of your stories, actually. And.. have I just read about a new, Holiday in Spain, one ? When are you going to submit it? Hurry up, please, you got me addicted to Draco-Ginny !

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! It\'s still in the planning stage since I\'ve been distracted by my R/T series. Sirius going through the veil is very traumatizing to write! I\'ll get to it, though, I pinky promise. :)



Sequel Of Suggestion! by FriendsOfSnape

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It's baaaaaack...........


As the name implies, the ever-wacky, ever-evil Power Of Suggestion has returned to Hogwarts! What insanity will occur this time?


Note that this is a sequel (duh), so it's strongly advised to read the first part first. Just check my author page for a link!
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Chappie nine is UP! Enjoy!
Reviewer: Peritus Signed
Date: 05/20/07 Title: Chapter 7: Villainy Is Vision-Impaired

aaaaaaaaargh! I love your stories (POS and the sequel), it's so funny, and I read it aloud to my brothers and they love it too. I was just saying aaaaaaargh because I can't read chappie 7! that's awful, knowing there's a good, long (1750 words, that's great it's the 2nd longest in this fic), funny chapter out there and then read :"Access denied. This story has not been validated by the adminstrators of this site. " I've been trying to read it for four days so I thought I should tell you. I don't know if you have noticed... I read in the reviews something similar happened with chapter 6? Well, if you can do something, please fix it !! I'm addicted to your story! By the way, Neville at the Dursleys' was great... and the rest of the story too (I love the "llamas" part)

Author's Response: I know! I haven\'t the foggiest why it\'ll have the chapter up, but not. However! I am deeply happy that you are deeply happy with my fic. that makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. :D



Moonlight and Shadow by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Tonks' world has fallen into shadow. Voldemort has returned, the Order of the Phoenix has risen, and Sirius is slowly drowning in memories and Firewhisky. Tonks needs more than determination to fight the darkness. She needs Remus.






Reviewer: Peritus Signed
Date: 06/09/07 Title: Chapter 31: Realms of Shadow

it was amazing! sad and romantic at the same time. I'd say more, but I'm speechless !

Author's Response: You said it fabulously. ^_^



The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...


"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"
Reviewer: Peritus Signed
Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 4: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

it was so funny! It was great how everyone ended up throwing food! I loved peeves and Sirius with the "helmet" an how Lily started it all! it really was great!

Author's Response: Lol, Sirius\'s helmet and Peeves were my favourite parts of the story...and Lily of course, what a girl!



The Wrong Werewolf by A House Elf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It wasn't really that exotic. There were no "damsels in distress" or deadly dangerous dragons lurking school grounds. Voldemort didn't use Veritaserum to make Lily admit she was madly in love with James. James didn't offer to become a Death Eater to save Lily.

But there was a werewolf.
Reviewer: Peritus Signed
Date: 05/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your story's great! Great idea, great style... I loved to see Lily's reactions, both to James being a werewolf.. and to James not being a werewolf : ) And the introduction was great too... and the end... I'll stop there, I'd quote the whole story



Paint it Black: the Portraits of Phineas Nigellus by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

When widowed Headmaster Phineas Nigellus commissions a private portrait, children and unexpected emotions complicate his elaborate plans for a simple seduction.

*A Victorian romance with a Christmas epilogue*


Reviewer: Peritus Signed
Date: 08/14/07 Title: Chapter 3: Family

that was so cute! And your Phineas Nigellus is a great character (so is Felicity... And the kids... and everyone, actually... even Aunt Petulara : ) ), I hope you'll write more about him!

Author's Response: Thank you! If I do, I\'ll be sure to have it completed before I post. Four months to post three chapters gave me massive writer\'s guilt, and I\'ll never do that again! :D



There She Goes by Jazzinator

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Love is not love,
which alters when it alteration finds...


Nyxandriana Brisk: Ravenclaw, sixth year, Shakespeare buff, designated 'odd one out', never been kissed, no one knows her name.

Nyxandriana Brisk: Just fell in love.

Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
-William Shakespeare

Reviewer: Peritus Signed
Date: 08/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

your story is very interesting and original. The beginning is great, it makes the story mysterious, and I really like Nix, she's a very good OC


Author's Response: Thank you! If I keep getting all these good reviews, I\'ll get conceited!



For Bitter or for Worse by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

All is not well.

George uses work and Firewhisky to cope with Fred's death until a drink with a friend leads to something that dulls pain better than alcohol. Emotionally torn by grief, he struggles to allow Alicia into his life...and then comes baby....

*Winner of the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Dark/Angsty Story*


Reviewer: Peritus Signed
Date: 08/31/07 Title: Chapter 6: Motherly Love

Aww, it had started so well, and I'm happy Mrs Weasley finally knows, and it was great with the chair, but... What the hell was George thinking ! "Alicia isn't my partner." ! ! ! Couldn't he have said it more... less... well, I'd expect that from Ron, but from one of the twins!! I'm not saying he is OOC here, I'm angry at George and only at him, and I can understand his behaviour, but still... I'd be glad to hold him for you when you give him a kick in the arse : ) And if Fred's voice makes fun of him all night for being a prat, he'll have deserved it!

Author's Response: George wasn\'t thinking. He was reacting, so his response was bluntly honest, unfortunately! Open mouth, insert foot describes it pretty well. :D

Maybe grief makes some people more sensitive to others, but I\'ve found that the opposite happens, that personal feelings are so overwhelming, it can be hard to see someone else\'s point of view.

The kick will be multiple, if that makes you less angry! :)



Baby Mine by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Precious to me, cute as can be.... Tonks was supposed to be with Teddy at her mother's. Why couldn't she stand waiting? What caused her to look 'anguished'? Not a deathfic, just a possible explanation of why Tonks 'sped off' to find Remus.




Reviewer: Peritus Signed
Date: 08/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Baby Mine

^bouncing aroundover "I won't kill off Tonks or Remus!"^ I'm so happy you won't !!!!!!!!!!! I was so sad they died in canon , it cheers me up knowing that, in your fics, they'll live. I was nearly crying when I read this story, because I kept thinking "they are going to die in less than a month time" : ( I'm not complaining, your story was great, as usual.... and clumsy little Tonks would be the sort of woman to have postnatal depression... "Or else I'll have to slide down the steps on my arse" lol

Author's Response: I think it made it easier on most readers, not having more than Remus showing photographs to give an image of the couple with their baby, but I wanted more. I wanted to know why, so I wrote what seemed to fit.

Yay for you being happy they won\'t die in an alternate dimension of the Potterverse...and for liking that line. I definitely see Tonks as plucky, even when she\'s insecure. She\'ll find a way around it! :D