Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 07/15/12 1:05 · For: Chapter 6

Why are the chapters so short? I want to read this, and wished the chapters were longer! But, I like where this is headed!

Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 07/15/12 1:01 · For: Chapter 5

Hmmmmmmm...... I want to know more!

Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 07/15/12 0:57 · For: Chapter 4

I love Severus! :) and I love how you wrote him!

Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 07/15/12 0:53 · For: Chapter 3

Yay! This is a review- I like it and I'm going to continue reading!

Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 07/15/12 0:44 · For: Chapter 2

Goodness! Still confused, but You have me hooked! Still reading...

Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 07/15/12 0:39 · For: Chapter 1

I'm just as baffled as Severus! But I'm going to keep reading! Yay!!!!

Name: punch (Signed) · Date: 06/19/11 14:34 · For: Epilogue

best story ever :)

Name: iloveyou4ever (Signed) · Date: 04/01/11 19:52 · For: Epilogue

I loved this soooo much! I have been reading it on my phone only took me like 7hours to read.(i took breaks because of school) your so creative! I love the mungos scene when you bring harry and ginny into your story. Very thought provoking on what he was going to do!!! I look foward to future writings from you!

Name: Mrs Cedric Diggory (Signed) · Date: 02/04/11 15:03 · For: Epilogue

You are a great author and I greatly look forward to any other stories you publish on here.

Name: Mickeyjuly (Signed) · Date: 01/13/11 18:05 · For: Epilogue

This is a beautiful ending... I was sobbing the entire way through the epilogue.

Also, the song fit perfectly. It was destiny.

This story is a job well done. : )

Name: Emerald Fox (Signed) · Date: 07/28/10 23:24 · For: Chapter 43

The diction in this chapter is meticulous, and the story becomes extremely riveting...

Name: Emerald Fox (Signed) · Date: 07/28/10 23:11 · For: Chapter 42

This chapter was very moving.

Name: lydiacsnape (Signed) · Date: 03/23/10 21:46 · For: Chapter 12

I love it!!!!!!! I can't wait to find out who the blonde is!!!

Name: lydiacsnape (Signed) · Date: 03/22/10 11:36 · For: Chapter 10

I love your story. It's incredible, original, and creative. However, this is all I can read at the moment. I need to get some work on my fan fic :/

Name: lydiacsnape (Signed) · Date: 03/22/10 11:30 · For: Chapter 9

AH! Stupid, idiot Dark Lord! He can be such a pain in the arse sometimes!

Name: lydiacsnape (Signed) · Date: 03/22/10 11:09 · For: Chapter 5

This is AWESOME!!!!

Name: lydiacsnape (Signed) · Date: 03/22/10 10:55 · For: Chapter 2

This is a great beginning! I love it so far! I hope Severus gets his memory back!

Name: Xain (Signed) · Date: 03/04/09 12:40 · For: Chapter 26

I like the general plot of the story, its just that there's a lot of OOC dialogue from severus. For instance I highly doubt that severus would use the work fuck so excessively. He is dark, and demeaning, but he sounds almost too "American" and not as British as he should. Other than that its a great story. Just a little off on the dialogue.

Name: Xain (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 15:13 · For: Chapter 5

Its excellent

Name: Xain (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 13:45 · For: Chapter 3

Still good I am enjoying it. :)