Name: ginnygirl16 (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 21:33 · For: Chapter 3: The Buffet

Okay, I have been following this story for far to long without leaving you a review, so here goes.

Okay, generally I'm not a humorous person. I have a rather dry sense of humor, and some occasionaly stupid things will make me laugh, but honey, you've got me cracking up with this story. It is absolutley hilarious.

I'm really enjoying the originality, and the fact that Lily is able to have fun with James and only dislike him when he is making a move on her. Poor James, but I think she is actually warming up to the idea. You've done a beautiful job making this story your own, and avoiding the cliches so kudos to you!

I did find one mistake, though. (Sorry, had to find something). James began chocking on his ice cream, I believe the word should be 'choking' but I'm sure it was just a typo that you can easily fix.

I do have an idea where this story is going, but I don't know if you want me to say that here, so I will just ask: Is there any chance that Lily's friends are the Muggle girls in Sirius' room when Harry goes through it in DH? I'm just getting the idea that it is, but I'm not sure yet...

Anyways, you've set the tone nicely for the rest of the story, and I am excited to see the rest of it. *Wondering when we will get to the skiing, as I'm sure it will result in lots of hilarity and such.

Keep up the excellent work!

~ginnygirl16~

Author's Response: thank you sooo much 4 the incredible review! im really glad you're enjoying the story! im very flattered! wow is chocking even a word? haha... and that is an interesting theory you have there... to be honest that wasnt what i was thinking about, sorry! its a good idea tho! i wish i had thought of it... :) and dont worry they start skiing the next chapter! thanks again for the great review!

Name: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 20:33 · For: Chapter 3: The Buffet

Uh, this was soooo good! and funny :p
i liked it and am waiting for the next chappie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks 4 another fabulous review! I will try 2 update soon!

Name: plunkky10 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 13:04 · For: Chapter 3: The Buffet

wow is all i can say

Author's Response: haha 2 reviews! thanks!

Name: plunkky10 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 13:04 · For: Chapter 3: The Buffet

wow is all i can say

Author's Response: um... thanks?

Name: plunkky10 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 12:58 · For: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

you're really good.

Author's Response: why thank you! :D

Name: plunkky10 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 12:50 · For: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

That was awesome! Was voldemort around when lilly and james were in school?

Author's Response: thanks so much! yeah... i think he was... i could be wrong tho! thanks 4 reviewing!

Name: ron lover (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 9:26 · For: Chapter 3: The Buffet

I really love this chapter. It was so funny. I couldn't stop llaughing when they were talking about their school. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: im glad you liked it and i will try 2 update asap!

Name: Samantha Wilkins (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 1:53 · For: Chapter 3: The Buffet

It's very funny!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: iHEART george weasley (Signed) · Date: 07/20/09 16:35 · For: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

this is greatt!! It says that you've completed this...hopefully thats wrong because you really should continue. It doesn't seem finished and I'd absolutely love to read more!!

Author's Response: o dear it definitely isnt finished! i'll try 2 fix that... i submitted the next chapter so hopefully it should be up soon! thanks for the review! :)

Name: Professor Applebom (Signed) · Date: 07/13/09 16:42 · For: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

Bloody Brilliant! :D
(As is everything you've written)

Author's Response: Thanks trevz!

Name: voldy_is_mouldy (Signed) · Date: 07/12/09 0:25 · For: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

That was really good, just remember this is set in the 80's. Really what to see more

Author's Response: righto! i wasnt exactly alive then... but i will try my best! thanks 4 the review! (and i love ur username!)

Name: ron lover (Signed) · Date: 07/11/09 19:43 · For: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

I really feel bad for Lily. It must suck for her.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! and ya... i can only imagine what it would be like to have your enemy showing up everywhere you go!

Name: RedhairedMom (Signed) · Date: 07/11/09 15:06 · For: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

been to Colorado. If this is a summer holiday, Colorado just isn't cold enough to ski, not where the tourist ski areas are. Aspen and Vail can be downright hot in the summer.

Author's Response: Oh my! You have caught the biggest flaw in this story! Wow I cant believe I didn't even think of that! I think I will go and edit that! Is Canada cold that time of year? Thanks for the review!

Name: RedhairedMom (Signed) · Date: 07/11/09 15:04 · For: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

Good story so far but I have to wonder if you've ever

Author's Response: Ive got it! New Zealand!

Name: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer (Signed) · Date: 07/11/09 14:14 · For: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

Oh, i had another question. Are you planning on having this story follow them back to Hogwarts or is it just during their vacation?

Author's Response: hmmm... thats a good question! i think its just gonna be the vacation, but maybe ill change it!

Name: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer (Signed) · Date: 07/11/09 13:39 · For: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

haha hilarius!! very nice (:
i think once you wrote 'Lily' with a small l.
And I don't thinkSirius was james' sidekick- they were more like a 'double-act', always together and equal....
I loved it and can't waitfor the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! oopsie! i think there is something wrong with my shift key... but thanks for catching that! and ur rite about the double act thing. thanks again and i will try to update soon!

Name: siilly_bookworm_28 (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 21:33 · For: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

AHHHHH HAHAHHAHA!!! Poor Lily, but I just love the circumstance! Good luck, James! I can't wait to see more of this!!

Author's Response: Thanks 4 reading and reviewing! i'll try to update as soon as possible!

Name: april_fools_fun (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 18:26 · For: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

That was hilarious!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Professor Applebom (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 17:21 · For: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

HAHAHAhahahahHAHAHAhahahahahaHAHA!!!
It is absolutely FANTION-TASTIC!
I loved the ending! It was like a 55 fiction!
Mr. Boeckman, everyone's FAVORITE teacher who NO ONE hates at all, would be proud. (aka: the Wuthering Heights hater!!)

Author's Response: TREVZ! hey thanks 4 the review! it was... sweet? an hu *couldnt* love mr boeckman? thanks dood!

Name: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 15:58 · For: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I love it!!!!
(and not to be annoying, but...:
'her usual bright blue eyes'
this might (probably) is just because I'm dumb, but her USUAL blue eyes? Like in they're a usual color??? Or they are usually blue??? (that doesn't make scense)
Also,
'...at Lily horrified expression...'
shouldn't it be Liliy'S horrified expression???
And
'...her two least favorite people...'
Of course they are her least favourite people- except for Voldemort and the Death Eaters, I hope!! :P
Anyway, good job! And keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
~Andrea

Author's Response: Thaks for the review!!! and no you are not dumb cuz u totally caught that and i think ur rite... ill go and edit it! im gonna try to update soon! thanks again!!! :D