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Hullo :]
I'm Charlie, 16, I'm British but currently living in British Columbia ... blah blah blah.
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Ships: open to anything but mainly James and Lily, Harry and Ginny, Ron and Hermione.
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I Am With You by RagingStorm71117
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry tries desperately to cope wth all the deatth he has seen. One-shot. I'm amazed I didn't cry when I wrote this... HBP spoilers.
Date: 04/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: One
That was beautiful. Shame it's a one shot, be interesting to see how it carried on, with the necklace and the magic behind it.
Author's Response: Thanks.. I\'ll turn it into a full story, if I get the time and inspiration. But... I probably won\'t. :/ Glad you liked it, though!:)
Cheers,
~*~LIZ
"Mum, Dad, It's Me... Harry." by Mudblood428
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
Date: 04/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
*Crys uncontrolabbly* Twas beautifl
xx
A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.
Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!
Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)
Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Date: 07/24/07 Title: Chapter 46: Getting Back at the Boys
Hmm, you know, there's definately something about your story that I really don't like.
I think it's this ...
I am currently studying for my driving knowledge test, or atleast trying to, but at the end of every chapter I can't but help thinking "Just one more. Then I'll stop." "Okay, I swear I will study after this chapter"
But, somehow, I seem to be further in the story than I had intended and haven't even picked up my driving book yet.
Strange that ...
;)
xxx
Author's Response: *holds hand to racing heart* Phew... I thought you were going to tell me something you honestly didn\'t like! Had me scared there! *laugh* Thanks though, I\'m glad you liked it soo much! Hope you get through that test all right. Test to get your license? Or just a test in Driver\'s Ed at school?
Date: 07/23/07 Title: Chapter 17: Talks with Friends
I think you did it really well.
One thing I have noticed through out your story so far is the realisticness (if that's a word) of you character's and what they say.
What they say is never too cheesy or unoriginal.
For example, here "And I know that that sounded a bit cliché, but clichés are so cliché and hackneyed because they’re true. That’s why they’re cliché… And I know that that was confusing, but it’s true!"
I just thought that, in some other fan-fictions, people's long hear-felt speeches are often way too rehearsed, making them cheesey and just a bit stupid really.
But you manage, through out the chapters I have read so far, to keep you character's completly natural.
This was abit of a rant, to be honest, but i felt you deserved congratulations.
Love the story :)
xxx
Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks. I had to through in that line about the cliches just so everything is less cliche. *laugh* I\'m glad you liked it. It\'s such a great feelign to have great reveiws. *sigh* Makes me feel like I\'ve done something good. *laugh* Thanks, And I don\'t mind ranting. As for the characters; it\'s been tough at times, but I\'m glad they\'ve fallen off my fingers the right way. *chuckle*
Author's Response: And I admit.. it\'s nicer to deserve congratualtions then to just get them without really earning them. Nice happy, warm thought. Thanks, again!
Date: 07/23/07 Title: Chapter 17: Talks with Friends
I think you did it really well.
One thing I have noticed through out your story so far is the realisticness (if that's a word) of you character's and what they say.
What they say is never too cheesy or unoriginal.
For example, here "And I know that that sounded a bit cliché, but clichés are so cliché and hackneyed because they’re true. That’s why they’re cliché… And I know that that was confusing, but it’s true!"
I just thought that, in some other fan-fictions, people's long hear-felt speeches are often way too rehearsed, making them cheesey and just a bit stupid really.
But you manage, through out the chapters I have read so far, to keep you character's completly natural.
This was abit of a rant, to be honest, but i felt you deserved congratulations.
Love the story :)
xxx
Date: 07/24/07 Title: Chapter 41: Necessary Reunion
Hehe, totally hooked on the story.
One thing I wanted to point out was that a patisserie in France actually sells cakes and pastries.
A chocolaterie is what sells chocolates.
I also see a strong similarity to the film, chocolat. Which I love :)
The character of Anne ... c'est parfait ;)
And ... I want to marry James, please.
xxx
Author's Response: Thanks much! I\'ll go change that -serie bit. Wasn\'t quite sure. Probably should\'ve done my research, huh? *laugh*
And yes, there is a connection between that movie and this. I love that movie, as well!
And it would be kinda hard to have James since he\'s already mine. I mean Lily\'s. Whoops. :-)
Date: 07/24/07 Title: Chapter 42: St. Valentine's Festivities
"From below, in looked like a canoe. To the Slytherins…it was a trouble. A boat load of trouble. " Bu dum tcchhhh.
:] xx
Author's Response: Haha. Bad joke, of course, but bad jokes get the drum snare, or whatever it\'s called. *laugh* Thanks!
Date: 07/25/07 Title: Chapter 46: Getting Back at the Boys
Test to get my L plates.
Knowledge test. Just beens I can start learning.
My MNFF site lies, i'm 16 not 15. I havent got round to changing it in a bit.
Anyway, loveeeee the story :]
Btw, when you apologise for giving us all a bit of fluff ... stop. Fluff is the best bit ;)
xxx
Author's Response: You\'re Aussie, aren\'t you? Hahaha. My Beta\'s Aussie- well, really, Tassie- and she was telling me that she had to go take her L tests.
haha. I\'ll try not to apologize so much. :-)
Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 49: NEWTs
Yeesh, girl. I cant believe you're finishing the story!
But loveeeed the chapter :D (surprise surprise)
Tehe I have a little fit of excitement every time an email pops up announcing a new chapter. I'm going to miss that!
Nice work once again :)
xox
Author's Response: *laugh*
Thanks very much! I\'m so happy that you loveeeed it. :-D
Haha. Someone else already mentioned that they\'ll miss the updates. :-D
Thanks.
Date: 09/08/07 Title: Chapter 48: It's Nearly Over
Yaay I loved this chapter :)
And this line made me giggle ... >> She also noticed that he had nice feet.
It just reminded me of something in my own story. lol. ANYWAAY
Can I have a James Potter? Perleasse?
xx
Author's Response: Haha. I threw that in there before I posted. *laugh* Couldn\'t resist.
Your own story? Really? Hmm.... I woudl read that, but I have SOO much other stuff to do, that chances are, I won\'t get around to it. Sorry.
Why are you asking me? Ask Lily... I don\'t think she\'ll give him up though... I\'ve already asked. :-D
Author's Response: Whoops... Just saw now that you asked for A James... if you can find one, then, tell me where- I need a Christian one. :-D
Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 47: Studying, Frustration and Fun
Gaah, Love it, as usual. :D
I love Lily's stubborness, spot on :)
Btw in reply to the last reply on the last review (yes, it does make sense) I am actually English, but I live in Canada ... where you have to do a ton of different tests and go through stupid plates. But yeaaaaaah...
:) xxxx
Author's Response: She\'s pretty stubborn, so I\'m glad you liked that. Ah... I see. E- *sneeze* English in Canada. Got it. FUN! :-)
Sirius: The Black Knight by Pussycat123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Sirius was killed by Bellatrix. When he lands headlong at his dead best friend’s feet, he is a little perplexed. All is soon explained, however. He has reached Heaven, and James is here to welcome him. Before he can begin to get used to life in Heaven, he must first “watch his life” on the large screen in front of him, because it will help him understand things better. And so, that’s what he does. From the very beginning, to the very end. You too, can follow him through the ups and downs. Follow him through the highs and the lows. Follow him through the laughter, the pain, and the romance. Follow him through the story of his life. This fic is a tribute to Sirius Black. It is not all marauder-era, although a bulk of it is, and that is why it’s in this category.
Date: 04/21/06 Title: Chapter 4: "The Brilliant Quartet!"
This story is so cute :D I love the idea about watching over his life again! C'est magnifique! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
xx
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I\'m glad you liked it, and am always glad of encouragment ... it keeps me sane :D Glad you liked it.
The Curse of the Toad by Vindictus Viridian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: "If you judge people, you have no time to love them." --Mother Teresa.
To love James, Lily needs to discover his better side. To earn Lily's love, James needs to fight his own prejudices -- and learn to cope with battle-scarred tomcats, toads, and the sneakier side of his own nature. This was a Ravenclaw entry for February's Challenges -- and it won, by the way.
The SSP warning is because I simply cannot resist sticking Peter and Sirius together at all possible opportunities, even in the background of other higher pursuits. Mild profanity will also occur, a natural side effect of putting James and Severus within shouting distance of each other.
Date: 04/29/06 Title: Chapter 5: The Gift
I love this story, so original and cute! Only trouble is, i could almost kill you for finishing the story there *Bares teeth!* Oh how I wish there was more *hint, hint*
Author's Response: You\'ve seen \"The Princess Bride,\" right? \"Aw, from there it\'s all mushy stuff.\" But -- maybe someday this\'ll get longer. Thanks for the review!
The Marauders' RAP by PadfootBaby
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Just a little thing I started in my spare time, but it turned out pretty good. A poem/rap about the history of the Marauders, their legacy, and the answers all us Potterheads are waiting for! Hope you like it!
Date: 05/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Marauders' RAP
haha, this is awesome!! woo love it
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
T'was but a Puddle by Mind_Over_Matter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
But it’s now changed indeed.
To find out more, do look at my tale,
And please review after you read!
Twelve hundred square metres of thanks go to HermyRox12, who nominated this little ditty for Best Poem in the QsQ's. I'm all a'flutter!
Date: 06/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: The One and Only Chapter... 'The Muddy Mud Puddle'
*claps* this is so good! So witty, and I like how you thought of this from the quote given. Fantastic rhyming aswell!
"Though that puddle, that muddy mud puddle,
Started as something so small,
So insignificant in the scheme of things,
It had a great destiny after all."
Perfection!!
xx
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you consider it witty more than... dumb, I guess. When I first got the idea I was battling between the two ^^. Again, many thanks for your happy review!
Happy Birthday, Lily Evans by Vindictus Viridian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily's eighteenth birthday is approaching fast. Will one of her friends figure out to do with a long-neglected organ?
Date: 04/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans
Cute! Love it! xx
Author's Response: Thanks!
Dear Mrs. Potter... by DaisyMaeEvans
Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Summary: Professor Granger deals with a pair of students who have inherited a knack for trouble...
Date: 04/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot
:D Hey, this is great! So original and cool! Shame it's only a one shot.
xx
Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked it. That makes my day!
Thanks-
-Daisy
Date: 05/10/06 Title: None
*claps* love it and you! xx loov me
Author's Response: Hah love you too! :]
Date: 04/19/06 Title: None
I love it! You made me fall in love with Harry and Ron!! Cannot wait for the next chapter :D Loveth xx
Author's Response: Heh thankies. x
Date: 11/12/06 Title: None
Aww I love it.
That Charlie girl sounds like an awesome chick :P
Can't wait for an update!
Love ya babes XXxxX