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02/27/08

Reviews by adeebee10

A First Kiss by Harry_Ginny_Love

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: First Kiss fanfics usually dissapoint me. They portray Ron as a cocky little Romeo and Hermione as a I-just-got-back-from-holiday-and-now-I-am-so-hot! girl. So I wrote an alternative. The way I think a Ron/Hermione first kiss fanfic should be written.

*One-shot*

Please read and review...all reviews will be responded to!!!!

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 03/20/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this! I also hate it when people write Ron and Hermione wrong. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I began to write because I wanted to see a change in the typical stories, so this review is wonderful!

Great Expectations by Cassandras Cross

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: A weekend trip to the mysterious Rose Cottage leads to Ginny's second pregnancy and Hermione's first. The Potters and Weasleys take on “The Next Great Adventure” as they anticipate the births of Albus Potter and Rose Weasley.

NOW COMPLETE!

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 05/15/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: A Safe Bet

I love this page, especially the last line. Very funny!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

Pride and Pre-Juiced Plums: A Potter's Pentagon Love Story by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A companion piece to the Potter's Pentagon trilogy... it's better if you've read the Potter's Pentagon trilogy, but you don't necessarily have to.

It's five years after Emma Weasley and her chums graduated from Hogwarts. Ted and Ivy are married, Haley is working at Madame Puddifoot's while trying desperately to break into show business, Jordan's doing whatever it is he does, and Emma is an Auror trainee working as a guard at the Chudley Cannons' stadium. The Cannons have actually been doing much better lately, due to their new star Beater, Tyrone Thomas. Unfortunately, Tyrone is Emma's ex-boyfriend. OH, THE AWKWARDNESS.

Follow Emma through her awkward adventures told in her usual insane way, as she experiences angst, hilarity, obnoxiously strange people, misadventures involving a deceptively dashing cad, Haley's wedding, the birth of Ted and Ivy's baby, and her own eventual descent into LURRRVE.

Written for the marvellous Vindictus Viridian's Pride and Prejudice NEWTs class on the Fanfiction Beta Boards, based on Jane Austen's fantastic novel, "Pride and Prejudice.".

Nominated in the 2008 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Non-Canon Romance Story! And its lovely (haha) heroine, Emma Weasley, received two nominations for Best Female Original Character, while Haley Potter and Ivy Potter each received one! Thanks so much, guys!

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 11/30/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Me, Me, and Also Meeee

I looove Emma's voice!! She makes me laugh. I also love how you described Ron in this chapter. Awesome.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I really need to update this more often...

To Draco, With Love by Hutchinson

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Draco somehow managed to get his very own advice column in Hogwarts' school paper, where he gives his sage opinion to those who dare to ask for it. Feel free to write in for advice about love, life, school, family, anything you can think of! But remember... with Draco, you tend not to get the answer you expected!

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 02/21/10 Title: Chapter 1: Issue the First

Every single one of those responses made me laugh :) i love it!

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 02/21/10 Title: Chapter 3: Issue The Third

I LOVED the ear flicking response!!

Hermione Wild by Hutchinson

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Ginny lures Hermione to do some sneaking about late one night, straight into mischief. Little do they know, a sneaky Slytherin sees it all...

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 02/21/10 Title: Chapter 1: Goodnight

"...What's your bra and panties but a lacy swimsuit, anyway?" she said casually." hahaha so, so true! :)

Snowflakes by The_Dream_Team

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: And there he was. The one boy she could not stand. His messy, jet black hair was ruffled and untidy and his glasses were sitting crooked on his nose. James Potter was here. With Lily. And all her Muggle friends. At a Muggle ski resort. Could things possibly be worse? Oh yeah, Sirius Black is there, too.

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 12/28/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Buffet

I laughed about every other line reading this! I love all the stuff about their "fine arts" school!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you think its funny! =)

Scenes from Shell Cottage by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This fic is a series of missing moments from the time H/R&H were at Shell Cottage, beginning immediately after they Disapparated from Malfoy Manor. JKR shows us what was going on with Harry, but this is my version of what could have happened with Ron and Hermione after one of the most emotional/disturbing events in the entire series.

UPDATED June 2010 When I first wrote this fic, I didn't know what a beta reader was, and frankly, it showed. Thanks so much to Natalie for helping me polish this up and make it more readable. Thanks also to both Julia and Carole, whose helpful comments in the review section allowed me to make some much-needed corrections during the rewrite. I would love to know what you think ~ reviews are very much appreciated!

This was nominated in the 2010 Quicksilver Quill Awards for Best Canon Romance.

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 01/13/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This made me cry! Really, really well written.

Author's Response: I love making people cry. ;) Just kidding. Thanks though... I'm thrilled you liked it.

How Much a Heart Can Hold by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The seven men who loved Hermione Granger.

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 03/20/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this was one of the sweetest things i've ever read!! i was a little worried at first that all of them were going to love her in a crush-type way, but i liked how you included fatherly and friendly love as well :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It would be so wrong, imo, not to include other, different kinds of love. :) I'm glad you liked it!

The Kurrawong Academy for Young Witches and Wizards by jenny b

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: In the middle of a mountain range in eastern Australia, lies a secluded school that is very rarely seen by anyone other than the staff and students.

And then Albus Dumbledore visits.

This is jenny b of Hufflepuff writing for the Fiction Junction I Challenge Thee Challenge. My prompt was "Write a oneshot about Dumbledore taking a tour of a magic school somewhere else in the world" and set by OliveOil_Med.

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 03/19/10 Title: Chapter 1: Kurrawong Academy

I really like your writing style! I wish I could visit Kurrawong. It's really cool that you could come up with a different school in so much detail. :)

Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 03/19/10 Title: Chapter 1: Kurrawong Academy

I really like your writing style! I wish I could visit Kurrawong. It's really cool that you could come up with a different school in so much detail. :)

Hearts of Red and Gold by moonyschick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It started out as just a simple friendship between four boys. The story of that friendship, as it grew and they became men, would eventually define wizarding history and change the world forever. Documented here is the story of the four unique, imperfect, and remarkable boys who made up the Marauders.

Categories: Marauder Era
Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death, Mental Disorders, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 7 | Completed: No | Words: 23974 | Hits: 21349 | Published: 03/15/10 | Updated: 08/26/10
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Reviewer: adeebee10 Signed
Date: 05/14/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You did a really good job summarizing their childhood lives! That's how I imagined them to be, except Peter. But I think your idea of Peter's childhood was really good. It makes sense. I liked it! :)