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04/05/08




Well hi! My name's Becca, I'm a Gryffindor, and I reside on the forums as twilightHPgirl18. I live in New York, I love the 1940s-'70s almost as much as I love Ashton Kutcher, and I'm actually working on an OF that takes place in 1966, and another in 1976 based on my dad's teenage life :)

My favorite bands are, in no particular order: The Beatles, The Rolling Stones, The Kinks, Bruce Springsteen, The Doors, and Pink Floyd.

I love the TV shows The Big Bang Theory, Gilmore Girls, Happy Days, Glee, Saturday Night Live (I love Jimmy Fallon and Will Ferrell), and Survivor.

My favorite movie at the moment is Pirate Radio (which I love oh so much), but I'm also very fond of Tommy Boy, Across the Universe, 21, The Breakfast Club, The Blues Brothers, and Grease.

My dream is to live in New York City, London, or New Haven, Connecticut. I'm just that cool ;)

Becca:D


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A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 08/15/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Unbelievable Head

Ooooooh. Great beginning. It's really vivid, and I really like how it begins; you have a way of drawing the reader it. Excellent job, Emily! {BeccA}



Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 08/15/08 Title: Chapter 4: The Fight and the Punishment

Ohhhh great chapter! This has to be one of the best writing styles I've ever read. I can't explain it, though. It's just so good. and this is my favorite chapter so far. {BeccA}



Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 08/15/08 Title: Chapter 9: The American

Great chapter! And Stacey's a lot like me (again, American), so I'm not that offended with the description of her. And I read the author's note at the end, and something simalar happened to me. I cdid a spell check-or-whatever to change the name 'Nat' to 'Kenley' so 'naturally' became 'Kenleyurally'. It's very annoying, actually. I thought I was the only person that happened to! Great job with this chapter! {BeccA}



Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 08/15/08 Title: Chapter 13: Betrayal

I know I said that Stacey was a lot like me, and she was up until this chapter. Why did she have to like Snape? By the way, I think your characterization of Snape is a lot better than other Snapes I've read.

“Did I just hear correctly? The One and Only Lily Evans, Head Girl Lily Evans, ‘do your own homework’ Lily Evans, is allowing me, James Potter, procrastinating, prank-pulling, ‘go-out-with-me-Evans’ James Potter, to use her notes to do my work?”
^^This has got to be one of the best James lines so far in this.

Wow. that was pretty deep. Good job! {BeccA}

Author's Response: Haha. Glad you do. :-D Yeah, it one of my fave quotes too.



Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 08/15/08 Title: Chapter 14: A Few Discussions

Ohhh! I get the whole 'they all end in 's'' thing! Maybe it's a way of singling one out as a traitor because he's different in a way, like the name! And forgive me if that wasn't what you were thinking. Great chapter! {BeccA}



All Right, Evans? by anglophile

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Everyone knows the story after that Halloween night that Harry Potter became an orphan... but what about before? James Potter and Lily Evans are two young people with an extroadinary story of bravery, friendship, and love. Join them throughout their seven years at Hogwarts and see how the past affects the future.
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 05/16/08 Title: Chapter 18: Lily and James's First Chapter

great job! good luck w/ whatever's going on in your life now (i did read your bio to see about this chapter) and this is a great story. i loved the ending. {Becca}



On the First Day of Christmas, Lord Voldy Gave to Me.... by MagicalMaddie331

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary:
Challenge 4 - The Twelve Days of Christmas submitted by MagicalMaddie331 of Hufflepuff My version of "The Twelve Days of Christmas" HP style!

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Twelve Days of Christmas

Oh, awesome! This was hilarious! I loved the whole reason for it. {BeccA}



The Trouble with Mistletoe by Crystallic Rain

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily decides to invite James along to one of Slughorn's Christmas parties, immediately deciding it was a huge mistake. Everything seems to go wrong, especially when Lily is caught off guard by the thing she hates most: mistletoe.
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Trouble with Mistletoe

Perfect title, and perfect summary! You know how to really draw people in to reading!

“Fine,” sniffed Sirius, crossing his arms against his chest. “I see how it is.”
^^Wow. That is hilarious! Poor Sirius, thinking he's being replaced. I love that kid.

Wow. James, James, James. That kid is random. But this was a really funny story! {BeccA}



The Importance of Being Single by erikthephantom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Fourteen months after leaving Hogwarts, Sirius takes it upon himself as a seasoned veteran of love to educate a "naïve" Remus on the dark, inner workings of the female mind when the former receives a letter from a girlfriend demanding his time. Pointless, yes, but Erik enjoys procrastinating.
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 07/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Importance of Being Single

Only Sirius could be that smart, and that stupid at the same time! Great job (and isnt Erik the Phantom in Phantom of the Opera?)



Hogwarts: A Musical by QueenHal

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A SPEWish Covert Cupid for TheVanishingAct. Happy Valentine's Day, Professor Pat!

It's Seventh Year, and the new Headmaster has decreed that students must take some sort of course to fulfill the new Art Requirement. Our favourite characters have decided to take Drama. What kind of hilarity will ensue when the night of the first dress rehearsal arrives? Expect Hagrid as a Tree, Ron as Godric Gryffindor and Malfoy as the Amazing "Dancing" Ferret.

Ron/Luna, Prof. Pat/Hermione, Blaise/Himself

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 05/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Hi! Wow, I've never reviewed this story, even though I love it... great job, and 1000000/10!!!!! Great job, Haley. I loved it. And I just have a quick question: Are you going to be updating Spirits of the Storm? It seems like a good story, but the last update was a couple years ago. Ah well, I'm gonna go read it anyways! [becca]



Secrets by GringottsVault711

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ron's guardian angel comforts his grief with secrets of hope and love. Written for my dear Patrick, aka TheVanishingAct
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 05/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Secrets

Oooo! Ooooo! I think I guessed it1 Is the mystery girl... Miss Luna Lovegood??? I guessed that because of your description of her eyes. Anywho, great job! {BeccA}



Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Secrets

Who was the girl, exactly, and I have a question: I heard that you're VP of SPEW, I believe, and I was just wondering what SPEW is. If you could tell me, I would greatly appreciate it. By the way, 100000/10 on the story. {Becca/Becaa/Riley}

Author's Response: Hmmm. Well, I don\'t think I shall tell you who she is ;) She\'s a reasonably major canon character, and, as her physical features and personality traits are pretty unique compared to others, there should be enough references in the fic to figure it out.\r\n\r\nAnd, yes, I\'m VP of SPEW. SPEW stands for the Society for the Promotion of Evaluations for Writers. We\'re mainly a review group on the forums, we leave fairly detailed feedback for stories that go into writing more than just \"I liked it!\", in order to help writers\' recognise what they\'re good at, as well how to improve. We also have other writing/reviewing-oriented activities, such as writing challenges, story exchanges and discussions. There\'s more information in our subforum on the MNFF boards.\r\n\r\nAnd, thanks for the Review :)



Cliché Nation by just_the_contrary

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A compilation of the most commonly used Harry Potter clichés in the fandom. Features Angsty!Harry, Sweet!Draco, Head Dorms, sudden romances in the forms of Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny and of course, Draco/Hermione, because what's a cliché without them?

The Marauders also make an appearance in this fic, including Lily/Lily's best friend/Lily's other best friend.

Warning: mention of hippopotamuses inside.

Chapter Five is up! The story is done. Also, thank you to everyone who nominated this neatly tied bundle of ridiculousness in the QQ awards, I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Collection of All-Sorts

hha!!!!!!!!! That was awesomeatasticalicious! I loved it! Angsty!Harry was perfect and I can see that (strangely) happening! And what's up with Sparklypoo? They were hilarious, but they were cool. 100000/10 {Becca}



Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: The New York Student Exchange

Great chapter! I loved the appearance of Sirius, cos he's my favorite character (along with Reg, but really, where's the difference aside from Houses and values?) 10000000/10. Great job and I love all the cliches. {Becca}



Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: I'll Just Go Throw Myself a Large Pity Party

Hermione's cheating on Ron? Eep! Ah well, next chapter. 1000000000000/10 {Becca}



Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: I Came, I Saw, I Dissolved Into a Fit of Laughter

Aw. No more cliches? So sad! Well, I'll go look in the mext chapter for some good ones. 10000/10 {Becca}
P.S. NO! WHY IS HARRY NOT TALKING IN CAPS LOCK ANYMORE! iT'S MAKING ME VERY ANGSTY! Or not...



Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: Bring Me to Life

Oooooo
! The end! There werent many cliches, except for Hermione/OOC!Snape. Which I found amusing. Along with Ron and his stupidity. And Sirius came back from the dead! Sirius rocks, but I can't seem to write him. And I loved the American Sparklypoos. I take it the the Hogwarts houses in this story were Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Slytherin, Hufflepuff, and Sparklypoo? I enjoyed it. And I, too, am no longer angsty like Harry. ACK! I JUST REALIZED THE STORY'S OVER! IM SO ANGSTY AGAIN!!!!! Ok, l'm good. Congrats on a great story! Overall rating: 100000000000000000000000000/10. {Becca}



Disturbing Conversations by Hallie Black

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sirius has finally realised he has feelings for a certain girl... but since he can't share these considerations with James, who is he going to turn to for advice?
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 08/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Disturbing Conversations

Wow Hallie. Great story! This is probably my favourite line:
Remus paused a moment. "Please tell me you're not in love with his mother."

And who does Remus like? did I miss something? Great story; its going on my favorites! {BeccA}



Deep Water by smiley10792

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hermione can't sleep. Ron can't sleep. It's the night after Dumbledore's funeral, and they meet in the common room...Can Ron comfort Hermione? Can they admit the feelings they've been hiding for so long?

OneShot songfic to Deep Water by Jewel.
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Deep Water

Oh, great story! I was actually lucky to find this. I was on the front page and saw that you were on, clicked the penname, and bingo! read one of the best stories ever! I dont normally read fluff, but this was great! Keep up the good work. {Becca}

Author's Response: Thanks! I guess the story is pretty fluffy, although I didn\'t write it with that in mind...



Alone by BeautyInTheBreakdown

Rated: Professors •
Summary: How could one night change a life so drastically? Something as simple as choosing to take a walk could ruin a life forever.

Nell is a fifth year at Hogwarts, but she's not like the rest. She's been through more than most could even dream up.
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4 Signed
Date: 08/26/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Talk

Gabby! Please update this! Everytime I come on Mugglenet, which is at least twice a week, I check to see if this is updated. I started reading when it was at ten chapters, and I absolutely love it! I've taken a bit of inspiration from the emotions in this to help me with my one and only D/A fic, All We Know Is Falling. And I can't believe Addie with Snape of all people! Who would choose Snape over Sirius? Okay, I know a lot of people would, just no one I know... But this was really, really good!! I love reading fics that have a lot of emotion in them like this one. As a matter of fact... Okay, I have tried to locate the favourites button, but it has escaped my notice yet again... but rest assured, I will find that button within five minutes! Excellent job! {BeccA}

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. It's nice to know people are still reading my story. I am sorry it is taking so long. I got distracted by college and the story was put on hold. I have chapter 12 written but I don't want to submit it until 13 is written because I don't know if 13 will be long enough. I will try and update as soon as possible. Dont give up hope!