Omg, i just started this fic (duh, I'm on th first chapter :P). I didn't fore now, because it didn't look like my type of thing, you know? I mean, it looked good but not like something I would read, but then I was looking at your 'finding her voice' fic, which looks amazing, and i wanted to read it, and I went to your profile, and hi! I'm also a Griff, btw, so anyway, your Andromeda fic looks amazing, you should continue it!! So I felt like something... different so I just started this and OMG I'm hoooooked. It's great! I'll go read thge next chappie....
And what's her name/ Meralda? Well, the creevey girl... I was jjust wondering if she was the creevey brothers mother, which doesn't make sence, as they're muggle-born...........
well, bb!
/babbles
Author's Response: Hello fellow Gryff! *waves* Melena's distantly related to the Creevey brothers. I figured they had to have a witch or wizard in their family somewhere, if they both had magical powers. Please keep reviewing and telling me what you think of the story! :D
uh, he was late... i thought ge was alwasys a top student... i likd it a lot!!!! haha he looks like edward in a way..... :P
Author's Response: Edward? And he think he's trying to spite Dumbledore. Keep up the R&R ing :)
LOVED IT! how vlody/ tome ridle (what should i call him???) thinks he is invincalbe... how Dumbly thinks it's great how keedie reacted-uh, adn Keedie!!! YAY!!!
Author's Response: Hahaha! Yep, Keedie's gonna give him a good kick up the arse. :o)
haha. i loved it! I like how he doesn't know what to think of her-and I just realized-the DIARY, the WRITING. it accually fits! NICE.
And Sluggy's characterization was really good.
As always, I liked Keedie a lot. How do you pronounce her name?
And in my earlier review I ment Edward Cullen from Twikight... I mean, skin like marbel....
Btw, I saw your drabble for the Gryff Challenge-it was great!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. You pronounce her name like Kee dee dan tay. And I always liked Slughorn. Keep r&r ing. :D
uh, nicely done how he always calls her 'the girl' and not Keedie
Hm, I noticed that in this chapter you said he was much taller than her, but when they first met, you said he as only a little bit taller.
I admit, I did not quite understand the voice part....
I like how you switch the POV, it's very nicely done.
I liked this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (hehe, don't exclimation marks loo funny if there are a kot of them? :P)
Author's Response: lol! The voice becomes clear in time. As for height issues, I dunno, maybe he suddenly sprouted. ;-D
awwww, how cute. They are so good for each other..... *sniffle*
And I have decided this story is very similar to twilight... but different, as Tom really is evil... or should I say Voldemort???
I like the beginnings of the chapters, the lyrics and stuff fit so well.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're reading the lyrics and not skipping. They are quite important. I think I'll have to read Twilight, as people often mention it in reviews :D
OMG, I Loooooooooved it. I liked Blaise, and I liked you portraying lavender's friendships... update!
Author's Response: Thank you, Andrea. I'm glad you're enjoying this. There's more to come. ~Carole~
OMG, I Loooooooooved it. I liked Blaise, and I liked you portraying lavender's friendships... update!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. There's another chapter coming soon ...
AAAAAAAAAh. I am scared and off to read the next chapter-although I SHOULD be doing NaNo. And do we know who Lavender marries? In canon? And because your fics are so inspiring I checked the lexicon and it doesn't say. huh. Do you think in canon she WOULD marry Seamus?
Author's Response: We don't know who Lavender marries ... we actually don't even know if she survives the battle. There's a line about her 'faintly stirring' ... but that's it. Hmmm, Lavender/Seamus - possibly in canon ... but ... This is my version - LOL. Thanks for reviewing. ~Carole~
hm. i am leaving a review because I am just nice like that, but you must already know your chapter and the whole story is amazing. I especially love Seamus and the way they are all... hm, what did you say? As if their sorting seven years ago never happened? Wonderful. But OMG SHE"S PREGNANT! BUT... hm. COULD still change. COULD. Well, I'll just have to read the next chapters, so you must write the next chapters so they can be added. Perfectly right logic. And are you going to have students from other grades go into hiding? Because I think it wasn't only seventh years.
Author's Response: THank you, Andi. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.Are you a bit fond of Seamus? You seem to mention him in every review - LOL. Okay pupils in the RoR. The only ones Harry mentions are the ones he recognises (Seamus, Neville, Lavender, Pavarti, Padma - three Claw boys, Ernie) I've added another four so that's 13. Harry mentions about 20. It's possible there were kids from other years there... but I don't know any names. Basically I've made it seventh years because they're now of age, and thus more of a threat to the Carrows regime. Anyway ... it's very near May 1st ... hmmm, what happens then - hee hee. Thanks again ~Carole~
Oh, boy. what a cliffie.
I like that you updated so fast-keep it up!!!
And yes, I did like that insight into Blaise's mind, althpigh I like Lavender...
Author's Response: Ahh, glad you're enjoying this. The next chapter is up as from today, so I hope you like that too. I've actually written all of this, so you should get updates pretty quickly. Thanks for reviewing ~Carole~
Aw. *wipes away tears*
I *loved loved loved* when Blaise described her as So proud, so determined, so reckless
And the scary/sad atmosphere when they were fighting.
I wonder though - did he just leave Fluer laying on the ground? :( I think the beginning was too fast. One minute Harry and Neville are arguing, the next he is coming back with McGonagall. She might not have been paying attention, but that part kind of confused me.... And some typos:
...herded the pupils to their tables As Lavender ... (missing the dot)
"What else can we do?”Blaise asked distantly. ( missing a space)
And when Pomfrey says marks,not bites (missing a space again)
Fabulous (sad) chapter - update soon!
Author's Response: oops, to the typos, thank you. I shall fix post haste. Well the beginning is delibeartely fast because I didn't want to write canon events from Lavender's POV. So things were occurring in a blur for her. I mean, it would, wouldn't it? She's been under a repressivce regime for a year, stuck in the RoR for two weeks, and suddenly hot on the heels of Tery turning up, Harry et al appear. So, I take your point - but it was deliberate. Thank you very much for the review though, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. ~Carole~
well, i really like the idea but i don't think that there's not such a big difference in this chapter than when harry was , well, a boy.
and snape?pretty?
but stii, i'm looking forward for the next chapter!
They fight. They argue. They threaten never to speak again. But in the end, it’s all alright. Because they’re brothers and sisters, or at least that’s what it feels like. James, Albus, and Lily Potter are the closest siblings you’d ever find. Rose and Hugo Weasley have their differences, but in the end, they would die for each other. And as for Scorpius Malfoy… he’s unlike anything the others have seen before. But he’s okay… because he saved them on countless occasions.
This is the story of the bonds between siblings, cousins, and friends. It’s the story of forgetting the past to create a brighter future. And it’s the story of learning to let go of the old, and holding on to the new.
wow i loved the chair
Author's Response: Was that a good wow? but thanks! the chair just seemed like something McGonagall would have made. Thanks for R&R-ing!
{BeccA}
yeah it was a good wow like in WOW i loved it!!!
Author's Response: thank you! :D
I really liked it, it had something special about it- and as Ari said, Ron's characterization was amazing!
But the part where Luns says "Don't, Ron," she said calmly."He's not worth it."
i think is not so good, because that's always what Hermione says, so...
Author's Response: Aw wow; thank you :)
The fact that people like my characterisation means the world to me - it's something I really work at!
Oh, I never thought about that...
Thanks for pointing it out, I'll see what I can do!
uuhkay, well I don't really have much to say as we were talking over AIM but I'm reviewing 'couse I am nice and I want my treats. (:
So.... I like it a lot although I'm wondering WHY Harry kept that stuff, as he doesn't seem the kind of person who keeps everything......... but it works and i really like it, and for like only having an hour to write it and no beta (as if YOU needed one :P ) it was truly amazing! Hope you write more!
Now give me my cupcake and my butterbeer! I did review and got the 400 read!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!
And I have nothing against Scorpius/Lily.
your a very good intensive writer (:
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! I think that intensity may be my writing forte, whereas romantic scenes I could probably improve on. If there are any criticisms, let me know!
Awww!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
A reading that consists of only cards from the Major Arcana indicates the destiny of the querant lies outside their own control - possibly within the hands of Fate itself.
Nineteen years pass between the final chapter and the epilogue. Here are two days inside those nineteen years.
uh, I relly liked it. i love you r writing style, adn the story. But what happnede to Harry's old wand??? Don't tell me it broke.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, good to know people like my work. About Harry's first wand, I've had different answers for that question every time someone's spotted it (he has it in a drawer at home and uses his other wand at work, he donated it to some manner of magical museum, it never worked quite the same after the last Horcrux was destroyed, etc.), but I've never settled on a reason I really liked. It's not broken or anything, anyway - it's just not as big a part of Harry's life as it was.