[Report This]
Beyond The Portal by Pallas
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Remus and Tonks have been told to simply live. But what will that life be? Some short stories of the Lupin Family set in the Post Epilogue Portalverse established for A Little More Time.
Date: 09/08/09 Title: Chapter 2: Counting Legs Part One
uh, meanie! get updating!!!!
i was ever so sad when A Little More Time ended, so I am really glad you are writing this! I love it!!!!!!
Becoming My Sisters' Enemy by AngelEyez3954
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Andromeda Black had it all; great sisters, a name that was respected (and feared), and wealth beyond belief, but she gave it all up for love. This is a coming of age story about a Pureblood, who wasn't concerned with a person's blood status. Follow Andromeda as she struggles to break free from the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black, and becomes an enemy to her sisters. Formally known as "A Raven In A Family Of Snakes" - re-written and revised!
Date: 09/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Sisters Black
Uh, I love this fic! I have been looking fo r a good Andromeda fic, but I havn't found one yet-that is until now!!!
Do you think if I read your other one it would spoil the story? How similar are they? Why are you re-writing it, anyway?
Hehe, I like how Andromeda has the same nickname as me (:
Uh, and I thought the relationship was very well discribed, and I liked how you discribed Bellatrixat the beginnig, with the name' origin and stuff.
Oh, and it was great how she had a 'good' childhood. It makes sence-she dopesn't know wnything else, and besides, it adds to the suspence :P
Okay, I'm going to go red the next chappie! Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm sorry that I didn't respond sooner - I haven't been around in a while! Chapter 4 will be posted soon, as well as a companion one-shot!
Thanks again,
LJ
Date: 09/06/09 Title: Chapter 2: Dark Arts and Diagon Alley
Aw Cissy was sooo cute! )keypoint being cute)
uh,it must have been scary with Bellatrix turning all eveil... *shudders* And their realationship had been so good. well, it still is but.....
well, another great chapter! updatre !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry for the long delay in responding! I will have the next chapters up soon!
~LJ
The Beginning of the End by Radcliffefan07
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: October 31st, 1981. That was the night that Sirius Black lost everything. James and Lily were dead, and Harry's fate, undermined, and Sirius wanted only one thing: revenge against the traitor that took it all from him.
This is my take on Sirius and his reaction the night the Potters were killed.
Date: 08/30/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End
okay, Ash, I loved it. I was really REALLY sad though. *sniffle sniffle* I think this is like exactly what could have happend if JKR would have written about those missing hours. I especially think this lkine was great, with the double meaning: “Don’t worry about where I’m going, you’ll know soon enough.”
Because of course he thinks he'll capture Pettigrew and that Hagrid will know he took revenge, killed the evil traitor, ect. but Hagrid- and everyone he tells what happened, like Dumbledore- will think he went off to -well, you know what I mean- you wrote it!
And the end is very nice, him regretting thyat he broke his promise to his best friend... and I like how he wants to make sure Harry is safe (:
I think you could maybe add a bit more to the second to last paragraph. It's nice this way, but I would like to have a it more detail about how he was feeling, what he was thinking, blah blah blah. :P
I enjoyed this fic; great job!
~Andi
Author's Response: Thank you Andi! I'm glad you liked it. It would have been longer had it not originally been for class. Processor Terri was already nice enough to let it be much too long already so at the time I was trying to keep it short. I may rewrite this one day and make it longer though. You'll be the first to know if I do. Miss you kiddo.
-Ash
Stay Awake by ringobeatlesfan4
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
The gang is at Zack’s house for one final week together before they all have to go their separate ways.
They’ve proven that anything can happen in five minutes; but what can happen to them in seven days?
'Tis the companion fic to Don't Leave Just Yet. I strongly recommend you read that one first.
Date: 08/31/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Day One
ICKS. Ernie is so stupid. Funny though :P
I mean he was pompus in school, but here... well, okay, he wasn't that bad :P
*shocked* oliver wood left his family??? nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo~!why oh why would he do that?????*evil*
And is it possible for a muggle to pick up people from Platform 9 3/4? i guess it is....
Another grrreeeeaaat chappie! i loved it! did you say you submitted the next chapter? I can't wait! I reeally hope you continue it fast! it
soooo cool and funny! I really enjoyed it.
Go becca!
~Andi
Author's Response: EEEEEP thank you, Andi! I tried to make Ernie's character more likeable for this story; I felt he really grew after the battle of Hogwarts. And Oliver HAD to leave his family for this story to work! Lol it'll make sense after chapter three or so. *cackles evilly* I think it is possible for a muggle to pickk people up from Platform 9 3/4 as long as they went back with a wizard. My story, my rules. well, not really, since it's originally JKR's story, but still! And si, chapter 2 is submitted! I'm glad you like it so much! {BeccA}
Date: 10/01/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Day Three
lol. poor holly. and she beeter not find out jack got an autograph. and she is in charge, isn't she? Anyway, the Final Battle is capilizied. Great chapter! And I'm waiting for the next!
Author's Response: ooh, thanks Andi! Poor Holly may just be right...you'll have to wait for the next chapter before you decide on that for sure. XD I love torturing my readers with cliffies like that. Annd is Holly in charge? Hmm...I wouldn't say that. I wrote it in the case that Zack was. Ah well, toh-may-to, toh-mah-to. Final Battle should have been capitalized...In my mind, it was such an important date that they capitalized it. XD. Next chapter is almost done, I'll send it to the fantabulous Russia in a few hours/days to beta! Thanks for R&Ring! {BeccA}
Date: 09/06/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Day Two
uh, I don't know who'sd my fav! I like them all...
So Becca, I loved the new chappie! It was great! I hope you update ASAP!!!
But when Holly is talking, and she's falling asleep and then she wakes up because it's so bright, you start the sentance with an 's' Was that on purpose? *confused* or a typo? Wouldn't it make more sence to put ''as'
well, whjatever. great chappie!
Author's Response: Whoops, yep, that's a typo! Thanks for pointing it out! :) I love that you like all of my characters; that means a lot to me. I'll update as soon as I can; chapter three is with my beta still, but should be back by next week! (It's a long one; 6000+ words, so it should be worth the wait!) It's one of my favourite chapters, coming next....Anyway, thanks for the review, Andi! {BeccA}
Birthday Surprises by ron lover
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: In an attempt to get away from the surprise party that his friends are throwing, Neville ends up on a train. He doesn't know where it's heading to, all he knows is that it gets him away.
I am ron lover of Gryffindor writing for the Life Begins at Forty prompt.
Date: 08/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: Birthday Surprises
GO Alyssa! You made it!
I love the story, but I already told ya that, but I'll just tell it again. Me likes to see what came of my hubbie after Hogwarts :P
Grrrrreat story!
-Andi )hehehehehehehehehehe(
Author's Response: Thank you so much Andi. I'm glad you got to see what happened to your husband after Hogwarts. Thanks for the review and I'm glad that you liked it!
Madness by ron lover
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: A short poem about the madness that lurks in Azkaban.
Date: 08/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Madness
icks. can you imagine being in askaban??? *shudders*
good job, Alyssa!
Author's Response: Thank you , Andi! I think it would suck being in Azkaban.
Cassiopeia by Lunalovegoodrox
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Nine-year-old Lily Potter wakes up one morning and finds a strange girl in her kitchen. Now Lily has to share her room, her things, and her parents with this girl. Why is she here? What is her secret?
Meanwhile, nine-year-old Cassi Malfoy is scared out of her mind. Her parents have left her with the Potters and have gone into hiding. Who is looking for them? Will she ever see them again?
Date: 08/29/09 Title: Chapter 1: Who is she?
lol, i like this story. (: i like the idea of the potters having a lot of pictures, lily being lily (although we don't really know much about lily...) ... so why are the malfoys hiding? and do ginny or harry mind watchin cassi (nice name, btw)?
this is going to be interesting....
Author's Response: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I haven't been on, i didn't think they'd publish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!! i don't know why they're hiding quite yet, not entirely, anyway. it's something to do with the remaining Death Eaters.
Hermione by OliveOil_Med
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione Wilkins is an explorer with an over-active imagination. So when a woman show up on her doorstep claiming she is Hermione too, no one believes her. In fact, she is punished! Of course, the fact that she was climbing on the roof at the time might have had something to do with it...
But when Hermione Weasley appears once again, she shares a secret with Hermione Wilkins; mostly because she needs her help if she is ever going to achieve what she came to Australia for in the first place.
Date: 12/02/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 An Infinite Ability to Ask Questions
uh, I loved it! I liked how there relationship was ... growing, without Hermione even realizing, really. And how they are similar, even when they are so different... I loved it! Can't wait for an update! Oh, and some typos...
-placed on them on them only (repeated 'on them')
>ii
Author's Response: My goodness, I am getting reviews all over the place. And I will fix that typo straight away!
Date: 11/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Expecting…
uh, I loved it! It wasn't the typical "hermione rushes off to Australia, removes the memory charm, parents angry but calm down, happy ending' you know? i've always thought this looked good, so here I am, reading it :D Don't disappoint! JK I'm sure you wont.
Author's Response: Yeah, I feel like if that was all she did, why did she even bother erasing her parents' memories? If it were that easy, why didn't she just tell them to run to Australia? Besides, Minnie made her presence very loud, and there was no chance of ignoring her.
Date: 11/14/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Wonthaggi, Victoria
I loved it! HIHI. But why would Hermione wait ten years to return to Australia? her parents missed her wedding, she didn't see them for ten years...! Why? And here: but Hermione could still tell what it was. Shouldn't it be ...could still NOt tell... or COULDN'T tell...
Author's Response: I shall change that straight away!
Date: 11/15/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 House Guest
gee, was I glad when Minnie became Minnie XD
Author's Response: Well, that was mostly for my own sake. I had to make sure to introduce the nickname in the first chapter, because I can not imagine going through an entire story trying to tell the difference between the two Hermiones!
Grave Days by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Front page: THE DAILY PROPHET 4 May 1998
TOM RIDDLE – THE SELF-STYLED LORD VOLDEMORT
Editors Note: At the request of the Ministry for Magic this Official Statement issued by the Office of the Minister is produced full and unedited.
OFFICIAL MINISTRY STATEMENT
This official statement has been compiled with the assistance and co-operation of Mr Harry Potter.
“Lord Voldemort†was, in fact a man named Tom M. Riddle, son of a witch, Merope Gaunt and a Muggle, Tom Riddle Senior. The Ministry has decided that in all future official publications Riddle will be referred to by his given name.
There has already been much speculation and wild rumour regarding the events at Hogwarts School. The Ministry can confirm that Tom M. Riddle was killed at dawn on the morning of Saturday, 2 May. Riddle was disarmed by Harry Potter while in the act of firing a killing curse at Mr Potter. The curse killed Riddle rather than its intended target.
Continued on page 4
WHERE IS HARRY POTTER?
Despite the Official Ministry Statement (published above) we are no closer to receiving an answer to the question on the lips of every witch and wizard in the country. Where is Harry Potter?
It appears that Mr Potter left Hogwarts School early yesterday morning, apparently in the company of his close associates Hermione Granger and Ronald Weasley. An attractive young Ministry clerk, who did not wish to be named, told The Prophet “He’s at the Ministry, having an important meeting with the Minister. My friends and I saw him. He asked us out to the pub, but we had to turn him down.†This statement is at odds with a report from the Portkey Office that Mr Potter has fled the country, travelling to Australia with his companions.
Continued on page 2
The days after the battle were days of grief and mourning. Grave Days.Date: 12/04/09 Title: Chapter 2: Emotions Exhumed
Uh, Neil, it got accepted! Well done! I knew you could do it :D
You already know what I think about this chapter-great!
Keep it up :D
Andrea
Author's Response: Not without your help and support, Andrea :D
Thank you.
-N-
Date: 12/13/09 Title: Chapter 5: A Pall Over the Burrow
Oh, Neal! I smile so broadly every time I read this story. My heart jumps when I see you sent me another chapter. I feel lightheaded for ages after I see another chapter made it into the archives. I know this review is not really giving anything constructive or even helpful, yet I wanted to leave a review, just because I love this story ad wanted to acknowledge that fact once again. :D Good work!
Your Beta, Andrea
Author's Response: Andrea
Thanks :D
Given the speed at which chapters are now being accepted (after countless rewrites of chapter 2) I’m suddenly very glad that you’ve continued to beta the subsequent chapters. The ‘cushion’ of five more chapters finished and the rest almost done is very useful. Thanks for all of your constructive comments. The changes you’ve suggested have improved this story.
Date: 09/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: Sepulchral Mist
Oh, my, I loved it! It was great! I am looking forward to betaing this, and I'm glad I get to read the next chapter soon (:
I loved the detail you put into it.
When Harry was in thge dormitory, feeling for his glases? Brilliant. JKR never put stuff like that in, and you did it quite nicely. (:
I loved your characteriztion. Kreacher was great-as were Harry-it was very good- Kingsley and Minerva. Nice (:
I don't quite get how Kingsley knew Harry was there. you might want to explain that, although it was a nice toch (:
I have a few nit-picks, though. for the most part they are not all that importat, but....
So I noticed when you are describing the scene at the lake, you wrote lakeshore together and apart (so 'lake shore') One can write both, but I would stick with one.
Also, you normally capitalized Elder Wand, then when Harry is talking to Dumbledore's corps, you didn't.
And when Harry is telling Dumbledore how his plan failed but still worked, you forgot the ' at the end of his little speech.
Once again, I liked this a lot and am looking forward to working with you and betaing this story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Andrea :-)
I hope that you continue to enjoy this story.
And thanks again for being a great beta!
Date: 04/15/10 Title: Chapter 15: Postscripts
Neil,
congrats on finishing Grave Days! I'm so glad that you are continuing the story.
What I love most about your writing is your characterization and your humour. They are both great and fitting to the story. And, of course, all the Briticism you have taught me!
Again, good job, and thank you for letting me beta this amazing fic.
Andrea.
Author's Response: Andrea
What can I say but thank you for sticking with me. Your awkward questions always keep me on my toes (sometimes a simple (Why?) can trigger an extensive rewrite). This is a good thing.
Neil
The End by Karaley Dargen
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Remus Lupin and Nymphadora Tonks both died alone; their friends would never know the story of their last breaths.
Here is, at least, the tale of the death of one of them. Tonks is looking everywhere for her husband, but in the end she will have to face the terrible truth and her own fate...
Date: 11/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Dying Thoughts
I told you I would read it-and I did, although I admit, it took a while. kara, this one-shot was really amazing-but so sad! Really. Like Alyssa, I love the "Remus, where are you" in a quieter voice line. (I know that wasn't the exact line, but you know what I mean) And how she thinks of the good times. I liked how it wasn't just ALL dark, the readers got to see some of their lives, too. Which is what made it so sad, though. Well, good job! *goes off to wail and re-read her favorite Tonks/Remus scenes in the books*
Author's Response: Ooh thank you so much Andy! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that you thought I did the sad/good parts well. You know, I didn't think I'd get another review for this story :D so this was a pleasant surprise. Thank you very much for your nice review :)
Date: 09/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: Father
AW, Alyssa! Must you always write such sad poems? Itwas really good, though!
Author's Response: Thank you, Andi! Sad poems are my best, but I have a couple happy ones that I wrote that you might see.