03/17/09
Hello! I'm Alyssa. I joined this site just after I turned thirteen and I'm still here. Well, I'm here off and on.
Mugglenet is where I read my first fanfic, and it's where I tried submitting my first story. I met some of my best friends here.
This is just a great place.
I don't write very often, and when I do it's short. That'll never change, so never expect anything more than a one shot from me.
To anyone who has given me a review, thank you very much!
My first ever one-shot is Home, and my second is Talking in the Ministry. I don't think they are very good, so read at your own caution.
My stories:
Two is Better Than One - Harry/Hermione
Regret - Dark/Angsty (Molly's POV)
Home - Harry/Ginny
That One Detention - Other Pairing (Rosmerta/OC)
Your Time - Marauder Era (Lily's POV)
True Happiness - Dark/Angsty
Love Reign O're Me - Marauder Era (Remus's POV)
I Get By - Same-Sex Pairing (Crabbe/Goyle)
On my Own - Dark/Angsty (Sirius's POV)
Birthday Surprises - General
What Would You Do? - James/Lily ~ Won QSQ for best Canon Romance
Over and Over - Dark/Angsty (James's POV)
Talking in the Ministry - General
My poems:
Awaiting - A poem about the Final Battle.
Light My Fire - A Dolores/Fudge poem.
Character Haikus - Haikus about HP characters.
The One for Me - James's POV about Lily.
Father - A peom about Harry dying.
Madness - A poem about Azkaban.
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(You and I) Against the World by solemnlyswear_x
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: The night Sirius leaves for good, nothing is thrown, nothing breaks, and the front door doesn’t slam shut like you’ve always imagined it would. Regulus remembers the night his brother ran away.
Date: 06/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: Leaving
I aboslutly love this story. It's amazing. That's exactly what I thought was going through His mind when Sirius left. You did an amazing job on this story.
-Alyssa
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
The Memory Keeper by cassie123
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary:
‘No,’ he said, ‘I’m not disappointed, because I couldn’t have expected anything less.’
As an eighteen-year-old faced with death, Regulus Black recalls the moments of his life that shaped and defined him.
A two-shot.
Nominated for the 2009 Quicksilver Quills Best Dark/Angsty fiction.
Date: 07/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Part One
I really love this story. I love hoe you made Regulus and Sirius. Regulus is my faveroite character and I love him. I like how you made the problems at hom and when the were talking by the lake. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two
I absolutly love this whole story. You should do more Regulus storys. You are amazing at writing him. You do his emotions perfictally in my opinion. It's like he keeps it bottled up but Sirius can understand him. I can't describe it, but you do it amazingly.
I like how you go through different times of his life. What you wrote for what he thought about when he drank the liquid stuff to get the Horcrux was what I thought he was thinking about. It was cool to read it.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you very much for enjoying this story :) I'll definitely write more Regulus in the future. - Cassie
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Part One
I forgot to mention in the last review how much I like how you did Voldemort. You don't make him sound all power hungary like other people do. It's really good.
The Malfoy Family by Kerichi
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
Da da da dum, snap! snap!
A poem inspired by the Addams Family theme song.
Date: 08/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Da da da dum, snap! snap!
This poem made me laugh. I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you for laughing! I can imagine Lucius smirking...and snapping... :D
Dead and Gone by Karaley Dargen, padfootsgirl1981
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: After the First War, wizards and witches everywhere were celebrating. But there were still losses, and deaths to be mourned; and in the end, there were more similarities between the good and the bad guys than one might like to think.
Molly Weasley had two brothers, who fought Voldemort and paid with their lives. She always thought that all what happened was horrible, but she never thought it would happen to her own family. And now, people everywhere are celebrating, and hardly anyone thinks of all the heroes that died anymore.
Avery was a Death Eater. He watched many people suffer and die, and never cared - until his friends die for Voldemort’s cause. And now, people everywhere are celebrating, and no one thinks of all the brave and good men the other side had lost.
This is padfootsgirl1981 of Hufflepuff and Karaley Dargen of Gryffindor submitting for the Interhouse Co-Op Challenge in the Great Hall.
Date: 08/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dead and Gone
I really love this stoey. You guys did an amazing job on this. I really like the Avery part in this. This was so much fun to read.
Moments by ahattab33
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
Have you ever thought about those moments that really defined your life? The ones that were pivotal, life-altering? They can be as obvious as your wedding day, as defining as the birth of your child...or as small as a moment in time, as subtle as a glance between one person and another.
The greatest moments of our lives can sometimes be the shortest and simplest of them all.
A missing moment from the Half-Blood Prince and part of the "Moments" series.
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Moments
I really really like this story. It's super cute. It was good to read them doing stuff like this because it doesn't happen in the book. I also like how you did it in 2nd person. I haven't read a story like that.
Author's Response: I feel the same way, I wish we could have seen more interaction in the books as well. :) Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely review!
Padfoot's Place by hpjunkie09
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: The Wizarding world has lived in relative peace for the last one and a half years. Hermione, Harry, and Ron survived the war, and are now living with Sirius Black in 12 Grimmauld Place. Hermione and Sirius embark on a business venture that has the possibility of turning into more. During Auror training Harry and Ron discover a deadly plot that could bring the Wizarding world to its knees.
Date: 07/29/09 Title: Chapter 2: Have a Nice Trip, See You Next Fall
I really love this story. I love the part with Ron and the Pygmy Puffs. It was so funny. I love every part of this story and I'm adding it to my favorites. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it's up soon.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Ron and the Pygmy Puffs was my favorite part of this chapter :) I'm working on the new chapter now, so hopefully I'll have it up here soon.
The Fog Will Cast a Certain Shade by electronicquillster
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Sequel to 'The Watch Unwinds Until It Stops.'
The Black brothers' lives continue to unfold in unexpected directions. For Regulus, his final year at Hogwarts will bring many difficult decisions about life, friends, family, love, and the war that is going on behind the scenes.
Date: 07/10/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: All I See Are Dark Grey Clouds
I like this chapter. I think it's cool how he can tell what poeple are meaning in their voice. I can't describe it but it's cool. I also like Alphard. I really like this chapter and I can't wait to read the next one.
Date: 08/14/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Something's Caught in the Bushes, Someone Left us a Note
I really like this chapter. It's really great. The whole story is really great. It's a lot of fun to read. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Mess It All Up
I feel bad for Rachel. She doesn't deserve that. I also feel bad for Regulus. He has to choose between his family and his girlfriend. I don't know where all of this pity is comming from, but I feel it. I really want to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Yes, Regulus was in such a difficult position with that. Does he continue to just date her, even though he's fully aware it's dangerous since his family doesn't approve, or does he do the 'noble' thing? And the next chapter is up, so you DO get to start seeing what happens next. Thanks for the review!
A Miserable Rebel by Sainyn Swiftfoot
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
Featuring Anrdomeda Tonks (née Black), Druella Black (née Rosier) and an argument. [dialogue-only oneshot]
This is Sainyn Swiftfoot of Hufflepuff house submitting for the Gift of Gab challenge.
Date: 07/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Miserable Rebel
I really like this one shot. It's really good. I like the ending how her mom does that to her. The ight that they have is great.
Be Strong From Within by luinrina
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Ginny went back to Hogwarts for her sixth year, without Harry at her side. The school has been “taken over” by Voldemort’s forces. How will it be like, the new school year?
Follow Ginny back to school when there was nothing worth going for.
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Strong From Within
I really like this story. I like how it goes from her being sad about Hary not being there and then it's like she's going to make the best of it. You did a good job on writiing it. It's really good. I would love to read this story with chapters and stuff like that.
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. :) I'll see what my muse comes up with.
Letters From Hogwarts by mudbloodproud
Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Summary: In Britain, there are two birthdays that are waited for with bated breath by witches and wizards alike. The first is turning eleven. This birthday brings an owl bearing a letter to Hogwarts.
For some, getting their letter does not go as planned. In this series, you will discover the day several witches and wizards received their letter and why it wasn’t just a normal day.
I wish to thank my beta, Alyssa (harry4lif).
I do not own anything your recognise in this story. It all belongs to J.K. Rowling. I am just thankful to be able to play in her world for a little while.
Date: 08/15/09 Title: Chapter 2: Albus Severus Potter
I really love this one. It's my favorite. It was so much fun to read.
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you aren't set on this being your favourite as there are more to come. Terri
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: James Sirius Potter
That was very very funny. I had a good laugh reading that. I like how you did the characters. It was good.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I am glad you enjoyed it. There are more letters coming soon. Thanks again, Terri
Open My Eyes by Rhet
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: At the end of 6th year, after James and Lily have an argument, Lily comes to the realisation that James is human after all, and she’s been quite the hypocrite.
Date: 07/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Open My Eyes
This is a cute story. I like how he cried and she comforted him.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Within the Lion's Heart by FannyPrice
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Regulus turned his back on the scarlet and gold lion every time he entered the Great Hall. He avoided looking at it, as it was a painful reminder of both the star he was named for and the brother he no longer spoke to . . .If choices make us who we truly are, then he, Regulus Alphard Black, had certainly chosen wrong.? As your about to die, what do you request? What do you regret? What do you remember? One-shot.
Date: 07/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I have to say that I love this story. It's an amazing Regulus story. The last two paragraphs made me sad. I wish that Sirius would understand that Regulus died to help bring down Voldemort.
I like how this one shot goes through different points in his life. It was fun to read it like that. It also made me sad that Sirius said that he would always be there for him and he wasn't. I could totally see Sirius doing that.
I really do love this one shot. It is one of my faveorite Regulus storys.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. That was a very kind review, and I am glad you enjoyed my take on Regulus. I really enjoyed writing it.
The Summer of 1914 by MorganRay
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
~ David Lowe ~
The pressures of school are everywhere. The Third Task is looming. The future beckons. But to Cedric and Cho, the spring of 1995 is the best time to be alive. It is their summer of 1914.
MorganRay of Hufflepuff. Gift of Gab challenge one-shot.
Date: 07/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Summer of 1914
I really really love this story. I really hope it wins. It's so cute. It made me sad for Cho that they were planning to do stuff after the tournament but he died.
Author's Response: Thanks for your support! :) This fic does seem to be a bit more about Cho, and I guess I have her worries about school and her life after Hogwarts take center stage.
I'll Pick You Up by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years • Summary: “Guilt brings people together. It’s a takes one to know one type thing.”
James Potter has always been a spoiled, arrogant, lazy show-off. When he enters his final year at Hogwarts School, he’s Head Boy . . . and he’s still a spoiled, arrogant, lazy, show-off. But because of that terrible summer, he’s also guilt-ridden.
Lily Evans has always been a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. When she begins her last year at Hogwarts, she’s Head Girl . . . and still a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. But the first night back — and the murder that takes the entire school by surprise — leave her guilt-ridden as well.
With the darkness that’s surrounding the Wizarding world slowly seeping, at long last, onto the grounds of Hogwarts and into the lives of James Potter and Lily Evans, what comes next?
*Completed*
Date: 08/10/09 Title: Chapter 4: That Reminds You Not To Think
I really like this chapter. I just love everyones characterazation. Especially Lily's. It's amazing. I really like when James and Lily banter with each other. It's so much fun to read. I can't wait to read the Hagsmeade scene. Oh yeah, I also like the stuff with Reg and Sirius. I always love a good ight with them in it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I have so much fun writing James and Lily's banter so its good to know you enjoy it too! And I'm a bit fond of the Regulus and Sirius relatinnship as well.
Date: 08/01/09 Title: Chapter 3: A Punching Bag, A Piece of String
I really like this chapter. I like your characterazation of James. It's really good. I like everything about this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next and who the killer is.
Author's Response: Thanks! One of my biggest goals for this story is to make James realistic, so I'm glad that you like his characterization so far! The next chapter should be up soon, but it'll be a while before you find out who the killer is. . . .