08/23/10
I really enjoy the world of Harry Potter. I also love writing. so its a perfect match.
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As the Sand Falls by EnchantmentCamels
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Nineteen years have passed since Harry Potter died in the explosion that also killed Fred Weasley and Voldemort won the war. The Weasleys have been forced into hiding, along with others who are hunted down by the Death Eaters. The D.A. has become larger over the years, but no one knows what exactly Harry was doing the night he died. Meanwhile, Victoire Weasley--the eldest daughter of Bill and Fleur--longs to have a normal life, and resents Harry Potter for dying, when she and Teddy Lupin are given the chance to set everything right again.
Date: 08/24/10 Title: Chapter 1: Tears of Ice
Okay listen to ME. dont listen to what the other people say. I think that since we are all not like published writers here we need to calm down and look at the discription and story of the work, not the fact of how did she get her own wand or how do they get the newspaper with no trouble. i mean come on every story here has some holes that people didnt think of. this is one of my favorite stories in this site and i cant wit to see it finished. i really like the discription and the fact you feel like your there.
P.S. love the fact you brought the time turner back! Genius if you ask me !
Author's Response: Well, constructive criticism is always helpful. :) I'm really glad you liked it though! :)
Forever Entwined by lucca4
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
From the first time Rose Weasley saw Scorpius Malfoy on the Hogwarts Express, she knew they were fated to be enemies. At least, that was the plan. But as the years went on, she found that it was easier said than done. The gap between who she was and who her family wanted her to be was always widening. Her life becomes a tangled web of mistakes and regrets as she finds herself drawn to the one boy she was told to hate, until finally she makes a choice. A choice that might have just lost her the only one who had always been there for her…
Date: 12/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: Forever Entwined
awww i love this story! so cute! oh i wish you had a seen where you made Rose bring him to meet her parents. that wouldve been funny. but aw, that was romantic. very sweet.
the only things are the parent thing i said and i wish Hugo fit sonewhere in the story at least once. but oh well. great fic and i love your writing.
Author's Response: Hi, there! Thanks for your review :). Perhaps I'll write a sequel-type one-shot with Rose bringing Scorpius to meet her parents…there's a definite possibility of that. And I'll include Hugo in that, if I ever do. Thank you so much for that lovely review! xx Ariana
Realisation by Maple_and_PheonixFeather
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: In the midst of the falling snow and and bleak starry night, Hermione ponders Dumbledore's mission, Ron, and her heart. There's something lurking in the back of her mind, and it's high time she faced it.
Date: 12/26/10 Title: Chapter 1: Realization
this was greta. true poetry. keep writing. i look foward to seeing your next story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) I'm actually working on another story right now. WHOOO!! FIRST REVIEW :D
The Torture of Hermione Granger by littlebird
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: One above, two below. We know the boy's story, what about the girl's? One-Shot about Hermione's torture by Bellatrix.
Date: 12/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Torture of Hermione Granger
I loved it! up until the end, i got confused there? did you change the ending? or was she imagining Harry and the disturbance above was Dobby saving them? but otherwise, great detail and i love the way you write!
Author's Response: The disturbance is only Bellatrix brandishing her wand to perform the curse. When I wrote this, I was thinking about how a person could be driven into insanity by pain and I didn’t/ don't think that pain alone could it. I took the liberty of adding the psychological element. And thank you for the review :)
Defiance by lucca4
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:
Nearly eighty years have passed since the Battle of Hogwarts, yet Padma Patil cannot banish the string of tragic memories from her mind. A part of her still holds onto them as a way to see the faces of those she has lost once more.
Her memories tell the story of a young woman too afraid to fight against Voldemort’s regime. Throughout her final year at Hogwarts, Padma had been forced to choose between defying the Death Eaters and keeping her loved ones safe. Her decision is one that will ultimately haunt her for the rest of her life.
Nominated for a 2011 QSQ - Best Dark/Angsty Story
I am lucca4 of Gryffindor and this is my final for the Missing Moments class on the MNFF Beta Boards.
** indicates a line taken directly from Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows pages 659-660
Date: 12/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Holy Crap! that's the best story i have ever read on fanfiction! it was amzing. so detailed and well thought out. it's obvious this took time planning. i loved it. this story is just amazing. keep writing. you may even get a carrer out of it ! i cant wait to read some more of your stories. great job!!!!!!! (:
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! It makes me so, so happy to hear that you liked it that much :). This is the longest one-shot I've written so far so I'm definitely proud of it in that respect. I would *love* to make a career out of writing, and hearing you say that means a lot so thank you! xx Ariana
Always by xxbabewithbrainsxx
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: There's always someone who you're always going to make excuses for, isn't there?
A HP poem.
All reviews receive a response!
Date: 01/17/11 Title: Chapter 1: Always
i liked this. im not sure who you ment. i think perhapse, Sirius feeling bad for Peter, while hes in Azkaban? but thats just what i thought. i'd love to know who you ment. this was an insightful poem. loved it
Author's Response: Good guess, but I actually meant this for Remus and Sirius. I guess it could apply to Sirius and Peter too. I'm glad you thought this was an insightful poem and that you loved it--hope I see another one of your reviews again! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
~Soraya~
Swimsuit Quidditch by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary:
It is Ginny’s twentieth birthday, and she wants to play a game with Harry.
Date: 01/18/11 Title: Chapter 1: Swimsuit Quidditch
hey i liked the story, but you sort of change some of the characters personalitys. like harry and giiyn would never act like that in front of everyone. and ginny wouldnt say that underwaer thing in front of her parents. i also think that if ginny was doing that (ron, percy, bill and charlie) would most likly punch him in the face. js, good story, but dont change the characters.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I don’t think that I have changed their personalities. I deliberately dated this on Ginny’s twentieth birthday. Harry is twenty one and it is over four years since the battle, and five since they first kissed. Ron was (fairly) relaxed about Harry and Ginny during DH, he matured enormously during DH and he, too is in a stable, loving relationship (with Hermione). If anyone can control Bill and Charlie (who weren’t happy) it’s Ginny. -N-
Enslaved by Equinox Chick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A poem about Draco Malfoy and his steady downward path to Death Eater-dom.
Caught on the slide, he can't help remembering the words of Professor Dumbledore.
Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling, Dylan Thomas or Sylvia Plath. But I'd like their talent.
I'd also like Julia's (theopaleye) talent with words. She is a poet extraordinaire who always sets us incredibly tough challenges on the boards for Poetry, Anyone?
Date: 01/23/11 Title: Chapter 1: Enslaved
I liked this. It nice to see someone write about how Draco felt. (:
Author's Response: Thank you. I seem to ne writing a lot of Draco at the moment - no idea why. ~Carole~
But I'm a Weasley! by Anisky
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Rose Weasley didn't mean to be different. She didn't intend to stand out in her family. She didn't expect to be Sorted... into Slytherin.
Date: 02/13/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Sorting
awww poor Rose! haha but i loved it, good writing! cant wait for the next chapter! im excited to see what happens next! (:
Author's Response: Aww, well, don't feel too bad for Rose! Yeah, being a Slytherin will create some trials for her, but that's what gives us character, huh? And you know she'll learn things about herself in Slytherin she'd never have discovered otherwise.
I'm glad to hear you're excited to see what happens next! I hope you review the next chapters and let me know what you think about how things go... :-D
You Don’t Use Your Eyes, Do You? by Hermione Jane
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Ron’s point of view through the years when it comes to Hermione. Trust me darling, he uses his eyes more than you could possibly know.
Date: 08/16/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really liked this story! Very interesting to see Ron's thoughts all throughout the series on Hermione! Keep writing!
Your Anatomy by lovelle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Finally, Ron and Hermione are together. The war has passed and the time to go back to Hogwarts for the last time is near. But before they go back, they share a few final secret moments together as they remember the memories that they had through the years.
Date: 01/24/12 Title: Chapter 1: Ron's Side
Ahh! I love Romione! Your story i give an eight out of ten! (thats really good, cuz im usually very harsh). The one thing I say to work on is your despription (While VERY good, just a little tweaks here or there). But overall it was a great story