09/14/05
I just want to write about Harry
You scored as Remus Lupin. You are a wise and caring wizard and a good, loyal friend to boot. However sometimes in an effort to be liked by others you can let things slide by, which ordinarily you would protest about.
Remus Lupin
85% Albus Dumbledore
80% Harry Potter
80% Draco Malfoy
70% Hermione Granger
65% Sirius Black
65% Ginny Weasley
65% Lord Voldemort
65% Severus Snape
60% Ron Weasley
60%
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Date: 12/16/05 Title: None
Good! I've had a lot of hope for this story, I really enjoy it. That was a great place to stop, right when Voldemort starts the duel, even if the chapter was short. Anyways, I may not have read it right, but it seems like there's a major plot hole in between two chapters. I'll go over that. Write on!
Author's Response: Well yes, there is a bit of a "hole" so to speak between chapters 4 and 5, but if you read the very beginning of the chapter, and in between the lines, you may begin to figure it out. Don't worry, I know it's confusing, but all will be cleared up when chapter 6 is up! But if you are still confused then, let me know. Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 12/28/05 Title: None
Wow. Brilliant. I love your description of the duel, and Harry's reaction to his own use of the killing curse. Very fun to read. However, unless Harry got another wand than his own, he couldn't duel Voldemort, because of the Priori Incatantem. Anyways, write on!
Author's Response: You have a very good point about Priori Incatantem, and it was something that I pondered quite a bit while writing. I think that it only works if Harry and Voldemort shot spells at the same time. However, that might not be the case, and if it isn't, then I just chose to ignore that bit of info! ;-) Anyways, keep posted and thanks for the review!
Date: 01/18/06 Title: None
Ooh, creepy. Spine-chilling, mysterious, dreading... I love it. Write on!
Date: 01/21/06 Title: None
Creepy, sad, scary, emotional, dangerous... perfect 10/10.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. I promise to have the next chapter up as soon as possible...it's giving me a bit of a problem right now, but I hope to be able to finish it in the next few days.
Date: 01/11/06 Title: None
An interesting little chapter. Not much happens, but it was nice to read anyways. 9 out of 10.
After the Die is Cast by Mudblood428
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Since the tragedy at the Astronomy Tower, Harry has become an even more formidable wizard, but a shocking revelation may mean the difference between life and death for The Boy Who Lived. It is the final stage of Harry's quest to destroy Lord Voldemort - can he save the Wizarding World and those he loves from the treachery of the Dark Lord... and also save himself? [Action takes place in media res towards the end of Harry's Seventh Year at Hogwarts (Post-HBP).]
Date: 01/08/06 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: Fire and Ice
Oh... WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. Fabulous. Love it. Great ideas, as usual. Great description, as always. Again, I love it. I can't WAIT till the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, Imageous :). You'll have to forgive me - I've been anxious to read the rest of your own fiction (The Dark Side, for those of you reading this who would like a real treat and see Voldemort's side of the story!) but I've been up to my ears in work. As soon as I get a chance, I'm heading back over there with my fuzzy slippers and a cup of tea to finish your chapters :).
Author's Response: And as always, I'm so happy you've enjoyed the chapter! Cheers!
Date: 02/24/06 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Debts Repaid
Oh. Wow. You really wrapped a lot of things up there. All I can say is that it was beautiful. Bull's eye.
Author's Response: Two words: sleepless nights. *wink* Many thanks, Imageous :). (Anyone reading this should also check out her fabulous fiction - it's a wild trip on the dark side :)...)
Date: 11/13/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Cursum Perficio
This is great. You have an excellent tone, good story line, and clever ideas. I enjoy reading this more than any other fic. But would Harry have told Lupin about the Horcruxes? I understand the others at the vital moment, but Lupin before hand? Still, it's essential for the story line. Now, where's chapter 7???
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I've had a blast writing it! As for Harry sharing the secret with Lupin, that's a tough question to answer because I knew I was taking a leap when I wrote it in. However, I decided to keep it because I just have this feeling that Lupin will become more important in Book 7. He is the last thread to Harry's parents, and I really wanted that to be something you can discern in the story, if only between the lines. He's also a marker for Harry's growth - here, Lupin is no longer an authority figure so much as he is a friend, an equal, a valuable resource that maintains Harry's connection with the Order of the Phoenix as he does things apart from them. I hope to get into greater detail over their relationship as I get into the "prequels" - one shots that fill in the gaps that AtDiC has created, but for now I'll just say that their bond lies in both being "marked men". In any case, thank you again for reviewing and I hope to finish Chapter 7 tonight!!
Date: 11/15/05 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: A New Generation
GGGGGGGGRRRREEEEEAAAAAATTTTTTT!!!!!! I loved it! It's written in a very Rowling-ish way, was very emotional, ready-for-action, and inspiring. Great character acting, lovely tone, and everything else I said times 10! I can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: Woo hoo! So happy you liked it! That's exactly the effect I was going for! Thanks so much :)
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Song of the Phoenix
You know, I just can't describe it. It was perfect. The emotions, the conclusion, the spirituality, it all fit. I love it. You problably won't read this little review, but could you stop by at my story, the Dark Side, again? Anyway, congrats!
Date: 12/03/05 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Dead and Undead
Freakin' awesome!!! I loved it, it has action, emotion, suspense, drama, humor, and entertainment all at once! I feel bad for Padma, but it was perfect, no suggestions from me, just HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Author's Response: You should be my publicist :). So happy you have no objections to anything in the chapter - I'll do my best to get Chapter 9 up soon! Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Harry Potter and the Soul Guide by Sunshine1313
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: It's just after Harry's sixth year, and he is getting ready for his long journey. But, as usual, the journey begins at Privet Drive. This is Harry's last day with the Dursley's. How will they react when he tells them he's leaving? For good....
This story will no longer be updated on this website! They keep rejecting my chapters, so from this moment on it will be updated at different websites. For more information, see my Bio Page!
Date: 11/30/05 Title: Chapter 4: The Beautiful Maiden
This was really good. It was written very emotionally, smoothly, and beautifully. After reading all these stories, I feel like I'm going to explode if Harry doesn't get back together with Ginny. Anyways, I love Dobby!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Wow, I've had two reviews in just two days. I'm so happy. I'm very happy you liked it, and you thought it was written well. I have to agree, I will explode if Harry and Ginny don't get back together. And I, too, love Dobby, especially the way he talks, it's just so fun to write. LOL!!! Chapter five has been submitted, but it's taking a long time to get validated. Grrrrr.... my patience is running a little thin. LOL!!!!!! Anyway, thanks again for reviewing, I really do appreiciate it.
In Nomine Amoris by suckr4romance
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: A Book Seven fan fiction. Harry Potter embarks on his journey after completing some unfinished business, and receives some unexpected help from an old mentor. Disembodied Voices, Unrequited Love, a Missing Person, a Lovely Wedding, and a Secret Room. Many surprises and unexpected twists lie ahead... Debts are repaid. Revenge transpires. Emotions run high. The hunt is on.
'In Nomine Amoris' is Latin for 'In the Name of Love.'
Follows Post-HBP canon.
Nominated for the Quick Silver Quills: Best General Fiction
Discontinued.
Date: 10/01/06 Title: Chapter 22: Hope, Peace, and Dreams
Well, I'm reading over this, and the story's really developing. I still there should have been some more special effects at the destruction of the Horcrux, but otherwise, very entertaining. I have a favor to ask of you. I've finished my story, "The Dark Side," and was wondering if you could pop over and give me a review. Also, I'm turning it into a series, and I was wondering if I should next do a story from Dumbledore's point of view or Snape's. Anyway, update soon!
Author's Response: I will take a look at your story when I get a chance--there are many other authors who have previously asked me the same thing, so after I read theirs I will read yours. Thanks for your review; sorry for the Horcrux destruction disappointment, but that is the only thing that has stumped me to the point of simplicity so far. --Christine
Date: 12/30/05 Title: Chapter 13: Godric's Hollow, Part Two
Good. It was very well-written, and a good plot and idea. Just one question though. Is the last word of the poem "hiss" or was that a typo, and should it be "his?" Anyways, write on!
Author's Response: It is supposed to be 'hiss,' don't worry. Tune in next time for some explanation.
Date: 01/21/06 Title: Chapter 15: Bloody Revelations
Cool chapter, cool vampires. I love the Quibbler, escpecially when they're right... Rufus Scrimgeur a vampire... 10/10,
Date: 01/21/06 Title: Chapter 15: Bloody Revelations
Cool chapter, cool vampires. I love the Quibbler, escpecially when they're right... Rufus Scrimgeur a vampire... 10/10,
Date: 11/11/05 Title: None
This story is good, but could we have a little more information on Nagini, and her human form?
Author's Response: My beta, Peevsie, keeps telling me that. Okay, people, detailed physical desription comming up!
Hermione's Summer by Leahr
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione has just gotten home after her fifth year at Hogwarts. Her parents give her an ultimatum, but a mysterious phone call changes everything. Events seem to conspire against Hermione finding out what she needs to do. Then Hermione is thrown into a series of dangerous events, needing every ounce of her Gryffindor bravery as well as her cleverness, to deal with Death Eaters, kidnappings, and worse, and to come up with the solution that is being so desperately sought. Hermione's summer is turning out quite differently than she ever dreamed.
A/N: This story may not follow HBP, although as of Chapter 6, it still does. Chapter 6 is now up. Hooray! And I would like to bring to your attention a most marvellous feature of this excellent web site known as reviews...
Date: 11/13/05 Title: Chapter 1: Ultimatums to Phone Calls
This is very good. I like how you give her a fight with her parents, we've never seen her lose her temper. The second chapter is a little short, though.
Date: 11/13/05 Title: Chapter 1: Ultimatums to Phone Calls
This is very good. I like how you give her a fight with her parents, we've never seen her lose her temper. The second chapter is a little short, though.
Author's Response: She's just upset, not really losing her temper like Harry in OOtp. "There might be a couple of people fifty miles away who dodn't hear you..." I didn't realize Chap 2 is short, it's sort of just leading into Chap 3, which I am about halfway with it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/25/05 Title: None
Great. I love the idea of "adding" your chapter. Anyways, the story's getting better, to be honest I didn't have much hope at first, I thought characters were OOC, but write on!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it better now. For me, the beginning of a story is always the hardest to write. Anyway, the adding chapter thing doesn't work out, unless you add the rest of the story. Otherwise when the mods find out, they delete it. Anyway, I resubmitted it on 12/17.