11/07/05
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Hey, I'm Lilypudding AKA LongbottomsLady... I just started writing fanfic a few months ago, but I've been writing all my life!
I'm really sorry I had to delete "A Summer to Remember." I fell of the face of fanfiction Earth for nearly three months and once I rejoined, I had forgotton my plans for chapter two. I solemly swear never to attempt another chaptered story again and I am sticking to one shots. I am sorry for the pain it has caused any of my readers. The regret I put into deleting it is unmeasurable.
Series Status:
The World's A Stage for Lily and James: I'm updating that periodically; however, I'm only going to add a new story when natrual inspiration strikes. I'm thinking about songs from several shows, like RENT, Into the Woods, Guys and Dolls and maybe even Fiddler on the Roof.
IMPORTANT UPDATE: "I'll Cover You," a songfic to the song from RENT, is in a beta's hands as I type this. I'm hoping the nature of this song in the musical won't turn people off, as this fic completely focuses on Lily and James's wedding and has nothing to do with the homosexual relationship of Angel and Collins. "I'll Cover You" is a romantic song, and can fit many couples regardless of sexuality.
Stories Status:
Perfect for Each Other: Completed
How Did It Happen: One shot
Defying Gravity: One shot
A Mother's Love: One shot
Somewhere: One shot
Such Sweet Sorrow: One shot poem
Your Eyes: One shot poem
A Summer To Remember: WIP chaptered L/J
COMING SOON: I'll Cover You- One-shot L/J.
ABOUT ME:
I'm just a HP fan who is obsessed with musical theatre and dogs. I enjoy performing, even though I'm not very good at it, and my love of theatre is second only to my love of writing. I generally try to be a constructive reviewer - don't be insulted if I leave a long and not-so-positive review on your story, as I sometimes will, because my intent is to help. While I usually give long and guiding reviews on barely-reviewed stories, I'm not above the occasional "Great story!" review.
Ok, heres a banner for Defying Gravity, courtesy of Token from HPFF:
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Well, I hoped you enjoy reading my bio and you enjoy my stories!
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Love Is by smiley10792
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Tonks never wanted to fall in love with him. Remus never wanted to fall in love with her. But there's nothing they can do to change it. Through mishaps and mistakes, attacks and rescues, Tonks and Remus learn exactly what love truly is.
She felt some sort of strange and scary electricity rush through her body as she looked up at him. His face was confused, but there was something else in his expression. Was it fear? Or was it some kind of hope?
“I have to go,” Tonks said. She felt like her internal organs were exploding.
Date: 09/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: Ch. 1- Scary Electricity
This is a good story that really captures the emotion of a crush. You described it well. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, but I like to think the emotion isn\'t just a crush- it\'s something more than that.
The Secret Horcrux by accio_firebolt
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: There is more that meets the eye to Pansy Parkinson than her hard, pug-like face and her distasteful appearance in frilly pale pink dress robes. What is the real reason behind Malfoy’s ongoing obsession for her and how is she connected to the Dark Lord? Be prepared for the surprising twists and dark secrets in this romance story that lead up to the discovery of the missing horcrux and the true identity of R.A.B. (no, not Regulus Black), as our heroine Iris Borgin uses her wits and courage to win her love back.
Date: 08/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Now and Then
I think this story has got a lot of potential, although I don't quite see how Borgin's daughter would end up in Ravenclaw. Also, I doubt Draco would like anyone who wasn't in Slytherin, but you never know. This is quite good for a first fic; much better than my own. I really like Iris's character. While many authors experiment with the romance category with their first fic (often with disasterous results!) you wrote this very well. I look foward to reading more of this story. This is a good first chapter and with a little tweaking, this could develop into a very good story.
Author's Response: Thanks! Your comments mean a lot to me. I guess the reason why Iris is in Ravenclaw is because she is more intelligent than ambitious, regardless of her family background. Chapter 2 is up, please read. =)
Date: 08/25/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-The Yule Ball
This chapter really shows this isn't just a romance story! I thought how you started it with the part about Draco's father and the dream was excellent. The only thing I was a little confused about was the fact that it said Draco woke up with Pansy next to him and I was confused of whether they had slept together or not. I doubt that your intention of that passage was that and maybe you should change it so not confuse any more readers. Besides that, I really liked this story. The lightbulb in the head part was excellent. Great job!
Author's Response: Nope...they didn\'t sleep together. I fixed it a bit. Thanks for pointing that out.
Maybe it Will be Alright by HorcruxHunter14
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Pansy had finally revealed herself to Draco, and their relationship is stronger than ever. But sometimes, Pansy feels insecure about the situation, and one day, she goes too far...
This is the sequel to Take off Your Mask. While it can be read independently, it will probably make more sense if you read Take off Your Mask first.
Date: 08/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Maybe it Will be Alright
This is a good story. The only thing I could suggest is to make it clearer who Monica and Amber are, because it is a bit confusing for people who haven't read "Take Off Your Mask." I'm off to read it right now... this story has intrigued me. Maybe you should make it a series; I also read your poem "The Waves Will Wash It Away" and you seem to have a whole mask, finding your true self thing going on. I like it a lot. The only other thing I would suggest is that this doesn't really exactly stand on its own. While it is a good one-shot, I would like to see it continued or with a sequel. It has a great first-chapter potential. Anyway, its been a pleasure to read and I'm off to read more!
Author's Response: This is actually the sequel to Take off Your Mask, and the poem is based on the stories. So I guess I should make it a series. I\'m thinking of adding more, but I\'m not too sure yet. Take off Your Mask was supposed to be just a one-shot, but I kept getting ideas for ways to add to it, so...Anyway, thank you so much for the review!
Author's Response: This is actually the sequel to Take off Your Mask, and the poem is based on the stories. So I guess I should make it a series. I\'m thinking of adding more, but I\'m not too sure yet. Take off Your Mask was supposed to be just a one-shot, but I kept getting ideas for ways to add to it, so...Anyway, thank you so much for the review!
The Waves Will Wash it Away by HorcruxHunter14
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A poem based on my story, Take off Your Mask. It's about how Pansy feels about the situation she's created for herself.
Date: 08/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Waves Will Wash it Away
I'm seeing a lot of Pansy fics lately, and I must say I enjoy them. I really liked this poem. The fact you kept repeating "mask" was interesting; not only did it make me wonder what Pansy is hiding behind her evil exterior, it also reminded me of Phantom of the Opera. Anyway, this was a really great poem. I liked the capitilization of every line, even the one worders. Great poem!
Author's Response: Yeah, the stories kind of make me think of Phantom of the Opera. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Yeah, the stories kind of make me think of Phantom of the Opera. Thanks for the review!