Hi, I'm Evelyn! I'm a sophomore that loves reading, writing, playing the viola, studying, and learning about God. Fanfiction is something I do in my free time (so, not very often) but I do have a few stories up and I would recommend anything in my Favorites. God bless!
E- Very Good kisser
V- You are not judgemental
E- Very Good kisser
L- You live to have fun
Y- One of the best bfs/gfs anyone could ask for
N- You are absolutely beautiful
For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!
James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.
whoa! i'm really wondering about that now...but go lily! that scene at the end was perfect! in fact, the whole story's perfect! keep on writing!
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review!! :) glad ya love the story, thanks for the compliment! At least you don't think it's bland and- *must stop being insulted, must ignore other review* Ok, mean time over, but I swear, that on top of gettin hate mail from your bestie is stretching the limit. add one of your other friends swearing about you to another friend nopt knowing that you were there is enough to drive anyone crazy, considering this all happened in the space of a few days! I'll keep writing alright, I love it, whether my writings bla- *shut up* Ok, cya then!
omg i just saw that banner on your site! is that what they're gonna look like, or are they totally different people? can't wait for the next chapter! you rock!
Author's Response: Um, yeah I think I understood that! I love the banner sooo much! Um, I don't know who the people are, my friend reckons the Lily girl is off of that 70s show, but I'm not sure! Thanks again! :)
omg i just saw that banner on your site! is that what they're gonna look like, or are they totally different people? can't wait for the next chapter! you rock!
Author's Response: same answer as b4 :)
Ooh, what can I say? I love Jada, she loves and hates James about as much as I do, and is very loyal and fun-loving, very nice. I love this story! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review, and for accepting the challenge! hehe we have another jada! she's probably my favourite OC, you get so attatched to them, hey? I'm so glad that you like it, and I don't just say that either! It makes getting it on sites worth it! I will definately keep up writing! i'm a little freaked though, because what if the seventh book comes out, and it changes all of my story? gack!
It seems as if he's trying to prove himself, though I'm not sure how. Excellent chapter, keep it up!
Author's Response: lol I will do, glad you liked it!!
hi! once again, i'm loving your story! and so does my sister! she's not a member, but here's her answer to your question: probably the part at James's house in the secret passage. yeah, i liked that too. she also said it sounded really pretty. keep the chapter's comin! i know we still have to wait a few more days to submit chapters (i've got my own story written and revised), but i'm loving it! keep on writing! and thanks for being the first person to review my story! you rock!
Author's Response: hey lol thanks for the review!! It's great to know you both love it!! That's so far the second time a non mugglenet member has been told to read by my excellent reviewers, namely you lot!! :) Another review challenge accepted this is the most popular challenge yet...yay! Well, techically I should be able to submit my chapter tomorrow, as in australia its the second, but I'm not sure.. :( I loved your story as well :) cya then!!
Author's Response: hey lol thanks for the review!! It's great to know you both love it!! That's so far the second time a non mugglenet member has been told to read by my excellent reviewers, namely you lot!! :) Another review challenge accepted this is the most popular challenge yet...yay! Well, techically I should be able to submit my chapter tomorrow, as in australia its the second, but I'm not sure.. :( I loved your story as well :) cya then!!
omg, i'm, like, reading this story for a second time until it's updated! luv it! it's like totally cool! keep it up!
Author's Response: wow, you're reading it again!! That is a compliment!! :D thanks!!
woo-hoo! i'm still loving this story! no bad comments whatsoever. keep the chapters coming!
Author's Response: Great to know you still love it!! yay, no bad stuff!
:D
excellent chapter! i luv the suspense!
Author's Response: great to know ya liked it :)
this chapter is so much fun! i luv it bunches! keep up the good work!...oh, and merry christmas!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! it's cool ya think it's fun!! it's good to have lighthearted moments!! If ya love em, read Potters Charm. I died, I just died reading that one!! :)
well, i'm absolutely in love with james; lily is just wonderful; i guess james so far because he's just so sweet and nice to lily! yeah, i love that guy!
Author's Response: Hey!! thanks for the review!! Oh, i love James so much!! to tell he truth, mine is one of the only stories on this site that I like Lily, in most sories shes a kleptomanic bitch! no joke lol
~*~Sophie~*~
Author's Response: Ohh, please if it's not too much trouble, could I know what your fav OC is?? ya know, the ones I made up?? Thanks heaps!!
Whoa! Totally freaky, totally wonderful! and I'm so happy they let you update again! Fabulous chapter, and can't wait to find out what happnes between James, CAlista, Remus, and Lily! 10000/10!!!
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review! Im glad you like it!!!!! I have realized, just then even, that I made Calista a bigger character than her sister lol which was NOT intended lol Thankyou or the high rating, how did you manage it? did you hack into it or what jkn lol cya!!
Ok, I have to say that from the beginning this story was very believable and that I enjoyed it for the most part. But what about the ending? It isn't really an ending! It's way too...I don't know, a lot of stuff happened and then suddenly stopped. Did you just get bored or something?
*tear* That was really sweet! I love that moment with Nikeia, very touching, very believable. PLEASE get the next chapter up soon! God bless!
Author's Response: haha. I\'ll get it up as soon as I can. I so glad you liked it! *smile*
Ooh! Great touch, Emily! I like the cliffie and how you brought Lauryn into the picture. Isaac sounds cute, too... Update soon! God bless!
Author's Response: Good, good, Thank you!
I only saw your review, and not the penname, and somehow, I knew it was you. :-) I think you\'re the only one who actually calls me \"Emily.\" rather then my penname. ehhe.
Whoa, where do I start? Absolutely loved it, as usual. The Masquerade is a good idea, but I feel so sorry for Sirius right now. Please let Nikeia get better before the ball! Please? And the news in the Daily Prophet was surprising. Any reason to kill Stacey off? Samuel's pretty smart, "Well that was a stupid move!"
So, overall...absolutely brilliant! God bless, and keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks much, like I said in anothe reply, I needed to get rid of her..I didn\'t want her story to just hang off. And then i had to show that Voldies\' not playing around. The Masque\'s coming up...I\'ll have to add in a bit about Snape though.... God bless you too!
*sob* That's so sad!!!! :-( I feel really sorry for them, you know, Lily and James. I really like Aunt MIchelle and that "magical" line. Very nice touch. I also feel a bit sorry for Stacey and Snape too. Don't kill me! I'm just way too much of a romantic.
You're doing an awesome job! Talk to you later, and God Bless!
-Eva :-)
Author's Response: Don\'t cry! I feel sorry for them too. Losing parents is hard. Why would I get mad at you for feeling sorry about Snape and Stacey? I love that scene! I\'m a romantic too. Hehe. ttyl. God Bless right back atcha!
*sniff* That's so sad! I absolutely hate Snape! He's so evil! And Sirius is so...I wish he were real. He really does have a lot of love in him.
Author's Response: \"so....\" Words can\'t describe, right? He\'s a great guy. :-) Thanks for reviewing!
Wow. It's over. Sort of. You said you're writing a sequel? Yay!
This story was great, Emmi! And I promise, I'm going to write you soon. School has been really hectic, and it must be even worse for you since you're a junior this year.
God bless, and I'll write you soon!
Author's Response: Whoa... it\'s you! Hehehe. I was beginning to continue to worry. :-D Yes, beginning to continue.
Glad you liked it soo much! And yeah- I\'m pretty sure there will be a sequel, it\'s \"when\" that\'s the big question. Like you said. HEctic school- no time.
Sigh. I\'ll be looking forward to that letter!!!!
Excellent chappie, Emmi. Love it very much, and I really, really, really, really, really--well, I guess you get the point now--really want the next chapter up soon. God bless, and by the way, I have a new email, so you should get one in the next day or two from my new address.
Author's Response: Yeah! I\'m glad it was good. I\'ll get the next chapter up soon, I promise. I\'m waiting for that email...God bless you too!