01/01/06
www.malallory.tumblr.com
Age: 21
Lives: Minnesota, U.S.A. Utah when I'm at school, which is most of the time.
House: Ravenclaw
Hair: Long, wavy, brown
Eyes: Gray
Patronus: Fwooper
Boggart: Scissors
Animagus Form: octopus
Favorite Harry Quote: "There's no need to call me 'sir,' Professor."
Favorite non-central character: Helena Ravenclaw, aka The Grey Lady. She's the greatest!
You scored as Hermione Granger. You're one intelligent witch, but you have a hard time believing it and require constant reassurance. You are a very supportive friend who would do anything and everything to help her friends out.
Hermione Granger...95%
Ginny Weasley...90%
Albus Dumbledore...90%
Remus Lupin...85%
Harry Potter...80%
Sirius Black...65%
Ron Weasley...60%
Draco Malfoy...35%
Severus Snape...30%
Lord Voldemort...10%
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Date: 01/01/06 Title: None
Gah! I'm so sorry... I just wrote "PLEASE kill Hermione!!!" I meant to say "PLEASE DON'T kill Hermione!" Evil typo! Forgive me, I beg you!!
Author's Response: Freud would say there ARE NO ACCIDENTS, so you saying "please kill Hermione" was actually an expression of your deepest subconcious desires. Just ask the Mirror of Erised.
Date: 01/01/06 Title: None
Very emotional... and I love your vocabulary. Your choice of words makes the reading very poignant. The random shifts from past to present tense throws me off a little as a reader, but other than that, your story flows very nicely. Well done! It's quite overemotional and melodramatic, but that's part of what makes you remember it. Plus, it offends the avid Potter fan in me with the way you brought Harry back to life... nothing can do that, even in Harry's world; the way you made the war actually like a muggle war kinda irked me, too. Otherwise, I really liked it, and I can't wait for your next chapter... PLEASE kill Hermione!! *whimpers* It was very satisfying when you got rid of Bellatrix, though. That part was especially well-written, with the way Dumbledore went through with it and everything.
Author's Response: Hi Celebwen, sorry I just have a note to another reader first: the reader who said the story wasn't emotional enough: haha, this person says it was, so I win! Anyway, back to you Celebwen: I love the melodramatic; normal life can never be as exciting as a bit of melodrama - Poetically written dramatic sentences full of double entendres and deep questions of life are my favourite kind!
Right, did you read the story? I don't know how you could say it was like a Muggle war - were there Heliopaths throwing balls of flame at Iraq? Did wizards duel to the death in the streets? If you read past this chapter you'll see some more of the war ... and Harry dying, well I knew that there'd be some people against it, but the idea of re-birth was quite intriguing for me. AFter all, Voldemort did the same thing, in a way. JK said you couldn't bring people back to life; but that depends on her definition of 'life'. My story says that this spell of legends which brought Harry back would only work for a short while after he died; hours after people die however, they still have nerves which hold life and neurones functioning - it takes a while to be destroyed completely. And this was why Harry could be brought back, because he was on the edge of two worlds: On the doorstep of his heaven in death.
Anyway, thanks for reading; you'll be shocked about what's to come - come back and find out! SEeya
The Final Chapter: Happiness Remembered by jezzleffezzle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: My version of the last chapter of Book 7. It's a bit sad. Hope you like it. Read and Review, please. (as you might notice, the last word is "scar") OVER 2000 READS (i know thats not a lot compared to some of the other stories here). GET IT UP EVEN HIGHER. THANKS.
Date: 10/03/06 Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue: The Boy Who Lived
Wonderful. I loved the view of death as not an ending but a release for Harry, but not in a morbid, emo-type way. And you can give another thanks to mudblood428 for being the one that led me here through her art! 9/10
Author's Response: alright, then. thanks, V!
The Awakening by hearyoume
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: My own shocking ending to the Harry Potter series (last chapter). Harry wakes up from a deep sleep and what he learns turns his world upside down...
Date: 06/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening
Waaauugh!!! What the heck is going on!!!! Isn't there more!!! Okay, that was good but extremely frustrating and terrifying. I don't like the idea of it all being a dream!! EEEAAAAHHH!! Okay, I'm alright. But still... whoa. That was almost more than my obsession could take. :0
Author's Response: Okay, I fear for your health now! :P No, there is not more. I wrote this as a one-shot, so that it\'s sort of like the last chapter of the series (with \'scar\' as the last word and everything). Just a little idea that I had, as freaky as it is. I hope you enjoyed it at least a tiny bit though! (:
As the Wall Crumbles by Aequitas
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: She laughs and turns, eyes set on the door on the other side of the kitchen. Her hand touches the doorknob, cold but inviting. Light envelops her as she steps out into her imagination. Open the door, child, her grandmother once said to her. Your imagination is waiting. On a beautiful summer afternoon, a child learns of her two worlds--reality and imagination--and what she must do only six years later in order to keep both in existence.
Date: 10/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: As the Wall Crumbles
Wonderful! You really deserve the spot on the featured list- a little hard to read, but once I got used to the diolouge it was fine. I really liked the thing about their light, and the way Hermione's mind worked differently because of her magic- with the walls and all. Well done indeed!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Yes, people find it hard at first, but I\'m glad that you kept reading and even left a review. :) Mm, I\'m not sure that you understood - Hermione\'s mind isn\'t different but metaphorically there\'s that wall because she\'s a Muggleborn witch. But muchos gracias!
Avenged Sevenfold by SecretKeeper
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
UPDATE: Guys, I'm back!
The innocence I’ve lost
The blood it's cost
Leaves unhealed scars within.
But I will not abate,
I will employ the hate
That has been planted deep inside.
I will not falter
Valor will not tire,
And I will survive
This trial by fire.
Many things are different now. Potions class is the least of the trio's worries. Battling dragons would be a welcome alternative to what it is they're attempting to battle now. The Order of the Phoenix is hallow without its leading member. And when someone close to Harry is stolen, Dumbledore's rhetoric of love, hope, and faith is challenged. Harry's strength and resolve are pushed to their limits. Loyalties are tested and new leaders emerge while Harry and Hermione struggle to balance new emotions and uncharted territory. Yet while this time after sixth year proves to be drastically unlike anything Harry's ever experienced, some truths remain, and some affections stand solid.
A novel-type story that explores the engimas of Snape, Horcruxes, war, and above all, the puzzle of love. HBP compliant. HHr.
Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 3: Avenged Sevenfold
Ohhhhh man.
It gets better and better. This is excellent, and I can't wait for more!
Date: 05/14/07 Title: Chapter 15: Knocks on Doors
More? More? More? Ooooh, I'm sorry I haven't reviewed any chapters before this, but I was too busy finding out what would happen next! I simply cannot WAIT for the next update- you really have me glued. And I liked this chapter a lot because there was at least SOME happiness in there! We could do with a few more laughs, or it gets tiring to be so depressed through the whole story. Otherwise, you have yourself another devoted fan!
Love and Floo Powder,
Mallory
Date: 05/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Trial by Fire
Dear Merlin. First chapter and I'm already going nuts. Most stories take at least three to make me go THIS crazy. You've got some talent. Can't wait to read the rest!!
A Moment Like This by Wise Owl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
Date: 01/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Moment Like This
Oh. My. Wow. That was beautiful... you have some real talent. I'm extremely impressed. More!
Author's Response: Hahaha! I love the way you did that (Oh. My. Wow.) it's so fun! *Blushes* thank you for the compliments, I really do value your opinion!!! Oh, as for more...the prequel will be coming out very very soon!
Anamnesis: All That Now Remains by Barabbas
Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Summary: Always he had been there. To cry, and to bear witness. He survived them all. Two centuries after the final battle, a solitary figure searches for solace in all that remains of his past; the shattered memories of yesteryears.
Date: 10/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
That was excellent. I absolutely loved it. Highly original, moving and very well-written.
The ode to Odo by Erik
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: This is my verison of the song Slugtorn and Hagrid sang that night after Aragog's funeral. Odo himself, as well as the entire last paragraph, belongs to Rowling.
Date: 04/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: The ode to Odo
I very much liked this... especially the "which was cute." That just struck me as hilarious. Plus, I can vividly imagine Slughorn and Hagrid singing this drunkenly, waving and leaning on each other with tankards in their hands. :D Very well done!
Symphony for Quartet by Tinn Tam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
Winner of the QuickSilver Quills Award, categ. Best Marauder Era.
What did being a Marauder truly mean?... Let's just say that some tunes cannot be played by a lone musician; and those four's lives were certainly not soloists' scores. In class or in detention, in Quidditch matches or full-moon wanderings, fleeing before monsters or confronting dark wizards, they wrote, measure after measure, their own eight-handed piece.Messrs Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs, are proud to present a Symphony for Quartet.
Date: 04/28/07 Title: Chapter 12: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies
YAHHHHHHHH!!!
Man, this is great.
I want to keep reading SO badly, but tragically I have to leave. You have a rabid fan in me!
Date: 04/19/07 Title: Chapter 2: Of the diplomatic virtues of a flying broomstick
Oooh I like. The character developement is really addicting. I'd like to see a little more of their funny sides, though... although I guess since they're just meeting each other they wouldn't be joking around as much. I really like this, great job!
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 5: Of the different uses of parchment planes and Levitation Spells
I'm not sure why, but James crossing his legs in midair was the perfect touch. Really, truly perfect. I don't know why that part struck me so, but it just seemed so... James-like. Good job!
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 5: Of the different uses of parchment planes and Levitation Spells
I'm not sure why, but James crossing his legs in midair was the perfect touch. Really, truly perfect. I don't know why that part struck me so, but it just seemed so... James-like. Good job!
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 7: Of condors, wandering at night and moon-gazing
WOW this was a good one. Ohhhh... you have yourself an addict in me. Absolutely spectacular chapter!
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 8: Of monsters, vicious trees, socks and metaphors
WAUGH!!! Oh man. They just keep getting better and better! Where do you GET this talent, and how can I get some? I am truly and devotedly forever your fan!
The Violin Teacher by stardust
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Wherever his reputation preceded him, he was unwelcome. So he kept inside and played his violin. And the music carried through his open window, and, unseen, he serenaded the city... Remus Lupin, as a Muggle, tutors one Hermione Granger, a brilliant young violinist with a promising career. (AU, slightly allegorical.)
Date: 04/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: Remus
You have a lovely writing style. This is very beautifully done and I can't wait to keep reading!
Author's Response: Thank you, Celebwen! I\'m happy to think you\'re enjoying it because your comment brightened my day. =)
Date: 05/01/07 Title: Chapter 5: Heartsong
Good grief, you are incredible. You have the most flowery and fluid writing I've seen from the unpublished- and especially in fan fiction! You are a truly incredible author, and I can't wait to see more from you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Celebwen!! I don\'t really know how to respond to such a comment because it\'s too kind to feel like I deserve it. I hope to someday, though, and I won\'t forget this! =)
You are insulting my delicate feelings again. by coppercurls
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Warnings: the following poems may contain sarcasm, witty repartee, little black dresses, and Inter-Office Unity events.
Date: 11/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.
I HATE Hermione/Draco shippings.......
and yet this was good. Very good. I liked it. I loved how it went from malicious to condescending to teasing to adoring. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I know a lot of people don\'t like Hr/D because it is always presented so implausibly, but if you give the relationship a chance to mature (very slowly) it can be a lot of un to play with. They are so funny when they argue. So thanks again!