Okie for all those who want to read my Marauders Map fic (4th chappie - Albus Dumbledore is almost done + 3rd chappie - Harry Potter is up) you can find it here :
www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=200283
Moderators wont accept it here *cries*
Another fic is also up :)
It was reallly nice...though u know I think that Lily being the studious and responsible student that she was, would never have advised her readers to daydream in history of magic, however boring the class may be...she would always want them to listen to professor binns
anyways, that hermione bit at the end was really nice. It added a touch of perfection u know..to let us know that there are some pple like hermione (who else???) following her...mr tiddles! hehaeehehe..thta was funny...and i can't believe hermione suspected mcgonagall of a secret life of crime! lolzz...then she really must have reaserched quite hard bcuz as we all know, now hermione loveeeeeees mcgonagall....all in all...a very creative fic..good job!!
Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks very much. Although, the bit you said about Lily may be wrong - we don\'t KNOW she was 100% totally and utterly devoted to absolutely every lesson. I think she definitely had a rebellious streak to her, no matter how small, just like every other teenage girl of about fifteen. I mean, I\'m a studious and responsible student, but I often forget to listen in maths and physics. Thanks for the reviews, anyway, I appreciate it!
You know...now that I think of it...even I daydream in History...*blushes* and I usually stand 2nd always...so we can't blame Lily.....
Author's Response: Ha ha, glad you think so. Thanks for all your reviews, I appreciate them all!
Author's Response: Coincidentally, this is review # 50! Have some cyber-cookies! Yaaaaay!
Hahahahahahahahahhahahhaha..sorry..hilarious story! 10/10!
Author's Response: Nothing to be sorry about. I glad you liked it, thanks.
Hey Smita di...Menka here ...so I finally found ur author page n tried some of ur stories....I must say this one was very cute. Poor neville, I feel sad for him...Hermione really is too good for him..but yeah he can always dream of her (like I can always dream of Draco...lolzz)....
I visited ur author page n was happy to see that u also like D/Hr pairing. Personally, I'm not a D/Hr shipper but it certainly is amusing to read their fics!!
And yeah those banners are nice...I tried to get one made at HPFF...but they said my demands were too high!! Oh bother...
Anyways...enough of my blabbing...I think this is the longest review I've given to anyone..!!! Please read my story and review...in detail....everything u liked about it n everything you didn't
Thanks
Bookwormy
I really liked it! When i first read the title, i thought this was a poem about neville and his toad!
Author's Response: Thanks! Well... I s\'pose anyone would think of Neville... this was the first thing that came to my head. :)
"Snape? Severus Snape? Professor Severus Snape, the Potions master at Hogwarts?” Trainee Healer Alverton had gone pale. The bat of the dungeon. The Greasy Git. Was he the prospective father? She couldn’t be serious.
HAHAHAHAHAH!!!!
This was a veryy funny fic. I was feeling very depressed...this cheered me up. I DO LOVE FANFICTION!!! Ahem, sorry. Hermione-Snape is kinda...repulsive hehe but it was a good plot and I'd recommend everyone should read this at least once!
I liked your story! It was hilarious and all that. But I have one little complain--you can't rate it 1st-2nd years if it's got so much snogging. I mean, reading it was fun, but I would appreciate if you didn't make Ron/Hermione, D/Hr and H/G snog always!!
I do get irritated, just like Harry!
Again, I would say I liked all the aspects of this fic except that. All those scenes with the marauders were quite fun! How Sirius made girls in vicinity faint was superb.Very nicely written!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I suppose you\'re right, I\'ll see if I can change the rating. I didn\'t think it would be so bad, but I guess I should raise the rating for safety. :)
Oh! I really liked it! My fav line was-Little Peter, friend-turned-traitor,
look at what you’ve done.
James Potter, mischief-maker,
and sweet Lily are both gone.
Good! Nicely rhymed!
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you liked it. :)
Haha! It was very well written...poor Neville! His commmets were just hilarious ...10/10!
Awesome ending! Nice message, I mean we all know it but people who criticize Harry Potter really need to realize it! 10/10
Author's Response: Yes! Before Dh came out, I actually bet a bunch of my friends that Harry would live. I should have an extra $25 right now, but all of them refused to pay me back :(
Wow..that was simply amazing! My favourite line was---"And so the all-powerful Dark Lord met defeat
By a baby who sat in his crib and cried."
Omg hahaha "uglier than a chimp!" Very nice...(I wonder if I've reviewed this fic before. Well. I'm reading anyway).
Author's Response: Hmmm . . .
*checks reviews*
*gets lazy*
if you did, then it wasn\'t recently. And more reviews are always good.
Omg hahaha "uglier than a chimp!" Very nice...(I wonder if I've reviewed this fic before. Well. I'm reading anyway).
Author's Response: Hmmm *looks down* more reviews for me! Yay!
Hehe, random but funny! Bellatrix fanices Voldy, she could be his wife notwithstanding his noselessness :P
Author's Response: Ooh, good point!
*visualizes wedding*
OK . . . Voldy just set fire to the priest, and Bella got mad and left him for Tim Burton. Maybe not . . .
I could write the next one about her, actually, but I was thinking about wrapping it up at seven and making this one a sort of conclusion. Hmmm . . .
Author's Response: Not this one, the next one. I type too fast :)
Wow, this one was really good. The line about shampoo being one of Snape's fears was really well rhymed and written! I wish I could master rhyming as perfectly as you have :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
I loved it. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you much!
Eliot Moore...? Can’t be an Indian name…I’m saying that ‘cause I’m an Indian myself.
Anyway, I liked the story!
Author's Response: I\'m feeling sheepish, then- but maybe he has a father who is English? I know a family where the mother is Indian but the father is white, so their kids have western names... ah, I don\'t know... but I\'m happy that you liked the story. Cheers, Mollie
Hehe ! The ending was soooo nice! I also liked the comments that the professor gave to the students, especially the one to Miss Jones. Also, here's an advice--
You have written in the summary, that peter is good at painting. Isn't that a bit of spoiler?
I mean, when one reads the first chapter, one should feel curious: Who's going to be worse in painting--James or Peter? And then in the 2nd chapter when you tell us that Peter is marvelous at painting, one should feel surprised. But what happens here is that, having alraedy read the summary, one knows that Peter is going to be better,. so there's not as much surprise when the professor says Peter's castle is marvellous.
What I recommend is writing in the summary--Who do you think is going to be better? James or Peter? Or anything like that, so that the readers feel curious.
I know I have made a mountain out of mole...but just an advice :)
Author's Response: Neh, it\'s fine. I just thought it made for a funny summary in any case.
I loved this poem. Very nicely written!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it!
funny. lockhart made me laugh out loud. are u gonna continue?
Author's Response: This particular story is a one-shot. Thanks for reviewing...laughter is wonderful. I\'m glad you liked it.
TOMROHT