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02/19/06

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Harry Potter, The Boy Who Lived
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With the help of an ancient spell, his friends, and love, Harry embarks on his mission to destroy Voldemort. What will happen on the way? With Ginny, Ron, and Hermione by his side, will Harry find the solution? And where do Neville and Luna fit in all this?

Her Other Half, An Evil Most Insidious
Sequel to Harry Potter, The Boy Who Lived
It's up!!! Finally, eh?

Follow our favorite heroes continue their lives after the defeat of Voldemort. Someone wants revenge and will stop at nothing to get it. Is this a battle they can win or will they lose what is most precious to them?

3/27/2011

I did get a chance to finish chapter 6 this weekend, and a good portion of chapter seven, which should make everyone a teensy bit happy... I hope. Don't throw rotten fruit, okay. Please?!?

I am going to see how the moderating process is going here, since it's been a long time since I've been posting on this site. If things get hectic, you can always try the story at WattPad, which might be posted faster. :)

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Reviews by Khrys

The New Chocolate Frog Card by Pretty_Fangirl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry, and his friends were all at the burrow, celebrating Harry’s sixteenth birthday. They were sitting in the living room, right after the party, Harry and Ron were looking at the Frog cards Harry had gotten, and everyone else was watching, except Hermione, who was unfolding the Daily Prophet, that she had saved for after the party. Harry noticed a Chocolate Frog he hadn’t opened, and flipped the card over, at the same time Hermione looked at the front page, and the both screamed!

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 05/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: The New Chocolate Frog Card

I was so flabbergasted as I read the story. I loved the details, especially Harry's reaction to the news. The twist. Tottaly twisted and excellent. I wasn't expecting it at all. You should write one about the twins, and their products.

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'ll be sure to do just that as soon as I have an open second! And thanks, I\'ve always wondered how you spelled flabbergasted! :-)

Life Of a Wizard by xCoHoRoIoSoToAx

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A Glimpse into Harry Potter's life as an adult wizard shows us that growing up doesn't mean growing apart.

Harry goes through his troubles in a branch off of the Order called the Living Wizards. He tracks and finds his godfather, Sirius, who disappeared when the war against Voldemort began. He also becomes closer with old and new friends as he follows his destiny to destroy Voldemort.

I'd like to thank my beta, Lily_greeneyes! She helps a lot!

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 05/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Start of the New

Great start! I am looking forward to more!

Memories by mcgonagallfan

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A few days after Albus Dumbledore's death, Minerva McGonagall finds that she is much more affected than she thought. Can she find the strenght she needs to go on?

A one-shot on the pain going through Dumbledore's most loyal colleague and friend.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 05/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Beautifully heartwrenching. I love it! Not enough people write about Professor McGonagall!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. This is the first fan fiction i\'ve ever written and i totally appreciate any comments. I have to say i agree wth you. Professor McGonagall is my favourite charcter and i really think there aren\'t enough stories about her.

A Wink Can Tell It All by HPLoverForever

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans always had felt a strong wave loathing toward James Potter whenever she saw his face. However, one night when Lily is walking along the great halls of Hogwarts, she stumbles upon James doing a wonderful deed for a small first year girl, causing Lily to look at him in a whole different light. What will happen in the end? Read and find out.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Difference

This is really good. I like how you wrote the scene with the taunting, although I would have liked to see a bit of what happened before Lily approached. It would have made James' actions a bit more special for me. Then again, I'm not Lily, eh! Any how, I just wanted to let you know that I thought it was really well written and the ending was superb.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I figured I could have written a bit more in that scene, but I didn\'t want to spoil it. You\'re not really supposed to know what happened ;] but thank you for reading it and I\'m glad you like it!

The Perfect Mistake by hearyoume

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Update: Chapter 6 has been approved :]

At age 22, Ginny is living on her own and has a job at the Ministry. Everything had been going well since her engagement, but she is stunned when her fiancé commits the ultimate act of betrayal. Heartbroken and in desperate need of comfort, Ginny goes to the Malfoy Mansion, but what happens that night has greater consequences than she ever imagined.

So this is where my story begins: a day that seemed nothing out of the ordinary but would become a changing day, a day when my life took an unexpected turn and caused me to make a mistake that would alter my life as I knew it. But it wasn’t just any mistake – it was the perfect mistake.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 05/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Heartbreak

Keep going!!

Author's Response: Thanks to the reviews I\'ve gotten in the first few hours of this being posted, I\'m definitely going to complete this. Chapter 2 is already written and I believe it\'s even better than the first. Thanks for the support! :D

Return of the Heros by hedwig_hoots

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Ginny wakes up on a day like many others... only to find three unexpected visitors on her drive. The heros have finally returned... Voldermort is defeated... and Ginny and Harry must now try and recover what they lost some where along the way.

***ONE SHOT***

My first fan fic please R&R ! !

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Return

What a great story. I like the details and characterizations. Good job!

A Final Night of Freedom by goldenprincess

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ginny's sitting alone outside the Burrow one night, wishing she could be almost anywhere else. A conversation with her brother changes her perspective, and gives him a lot to think about too.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Final Night of Freedom

This is the most interesting take I have seen on that last night. You really portrayed Ginny and Ron as I would hope they would act on the eve of battle. Great descriptions and imagery. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you very muchly!

In Retrospect by LariLee

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After the war, Harry finds himself in the office of a Squib psychiatrist because everyone needs someone to talk to. Even if your life is going good, really.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: In Retrospect

What great story. So full of emotions. I felt like I had a window into Harry's soul for a brief moment, with all his true feelings shining through, not hampered or clouded by his attempts at a normal life.

Understanding Eyes by whittyleah

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Minerva McGonagall feels alone. She is overworked and in need of a friend...and she finds one in the last place she would have thought to look.

One-shot response to Gryffindor challenge made my Marauder by Midnight.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

I was intrigued when I saw the challenge issued in the Gryffindor Common Room, but I didn't have a chance to read your submission. I think that you did a fabulous job creating a believable relationship. I like how you used McGonagall's sense of humor to add a bit of tension to their 'relationship'. It is understandable for her to feel a connection with Crookshanks. I wonder if it has anything to do with her lack of partner in the books. I also really like how McGonagall shared her feelings with Crookshanks while she was in human form.

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to keep the relationship...non-animal-y...yeah. If she had turned into a cat it would have changed everything, so I stayed away form that. That you so much for reading!

Breathing by mugglegurl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: On the night of Bill and Fleur's wedding, Harry and Ginny have a serious talk about their relationship. Song-fic to Yellowcard's "Breathing." One-shot.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Breathing

Another great story. I really like the feelings you put into their chat. I can picture Harry saying those things. I'm kinda surprised that Harry is a bad dancer, I always pictured him as a young version of Fred Astaire. Okay. Not really, not all all, actually. You're right, the more I think about it, the more sense it makes for him to be a bad dancer. I just want him to be a good dancer, for the sake of Ginny's feet. I am looking forward to your next piece!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!

The Stupid Toad Woman by mugglegurl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One-shot challenge- owls, written by the patient Hufflepuff, mugglegurl. We all know that Hedwig was attacked by Umbridge in OotP. Here's her tale of what happened. Somewhat funny, if I do say so myself.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Stupid Toad Woman

Whether or not owls keep diaries is immaterrial. This is the perfect owl diary entry. I love the point of view and the humor is excellent. I have to admit that I never thought of Buckbeak as Australian, but now that you mention it, it fits nicely! Wonderful!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I don\'t know why, but I always thought of Buckbeak being Australian... Thanks for your wonderful review!

Buying Day by Gemma Hawk

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Third Place in the One-Shot Challenge-Owls!

Have you ever wondered what exactly happened the day Hedwig was bought? All the books offer are a few lines. But find out what really happened- from Hedwigs point of view, that is.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Oneshot

What a great story. There were a few points where I was close to crying, although that might just be me. I think you captured Hedwig's point of view perfectly. Simply wonderful!

Author's Response: Crying?? Because it was a bad story, or because it was sad? It wasn\'t supposed to be either of them. Thank you so much for a wonderful review!

Amoretti by Violet Phoenix

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It was no wonder my friends had abandoned me to the clutches of this couch that just happened to be in the same room as the girl I adored who just happened to hate me and who wished I had never been born. Definitely not a good day... Flip. That noise was going to drive me crazy, I swear it.

A James/Lily humour story that takes place before she changed her mind about him.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Amoretti

I really like this. The thoughts running through James' head are dead on. I like the 'flip' of the pages, it really accentuates the attempt at conversation and the awkward silence in the room. The ending is my favorite part! Great job.

Peculiar Satisfaction by Periwinkle

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One shot from Sirius's perspective in his Animagus form, on the night he first saw Harry in Magnolia Crescent.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: One shot

This was a wonderfully refreshing look at Sirius. You did a great job with the imagery and emotions he felt in his Animagus form. Way to go!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so much for your kind comments!

Harry Potter and the Beginning of the End by Ozma333

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: POST HBP. Harry, Hermione, and Ron start back at Privet Drive for the beginning of the last adventure. A story about the love and friendship needed to end the final task.

Begins with what we know will happen in Book 7 and delves into what we hope will happen...(Warning added due to some slight content in Chap. 5)

UPDATE: CHAPTER 11 IS POSTED... (Some content may be considered...harsh...you have been warned!)

Thanks to everyone who keeps reading and thanks for all the reviews!

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Four More Days

What an excellent beginning. Please keep writing more! Your characterizations are wonderful. I love how Hermione got embarassed by "spending the night" with Ron. I also like how Harry attempted to ease their(her) humiliation at having been found out. Your descriptions were very vivid and real. I'm definitely looking forward to the wedding and Harry's Birthday. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so grateful for your response! The next chapter is almost done and will definitely have Harry\'s Birthday in it. I thought it would have the wedding too, but the chapter is getting long so the wedding may come in chapter three. Thanks again for the review, it means so much! -ozma333

The Spare by Rob Matthews

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A look at the Triwizard Tournament's third task and beyond through the eyes of Cedric Diggory.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Wow! Simply, Wow. This was beautiful. Heartbreaking at the end. I really liked Cedric's point of view.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Winning Eternal Glory by Cruciatus Love

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What would happen if instead of Harry Potter participating in the challenge for eternal glory, it was Tom Riddle instead. Watch as the heir of Slytherin find his way through rows, columns, tasks and obstacles to win the recognition he know he deserves.

Written as a Gauntlet Maze Challenge entry by Cruciatus Love of Slytherin.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 08/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Maze

This is impressive. I would love to know how you came up with so many great ideas for the challenges. Blinding the snake, phew. The plant challenge would have been mind numbing for me, but you wrote it so well. When I got to the end, I was sure that Tom would make the "wrong" choice and relieve himself of his companiona (competition). The description of how he reacted to the look on Rabastan's face was eery. This is such a good description of what Tom would have been like as he achieved his precious power, bit by bit. Wow!

Author's Response: Thanks! And, actually, I found that many of these challenges were not as hard as they looked at first. But I\'m glad you enoyed it!

The Little Owl Who Believed by Bryant

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A little owl who never stops believing that he will one day be the greatest post-owl that ever lived, is dissipointed when he finds out that he is going to be shipped to Romania. However, something happens that he never expected, and he finds himself leaving the place he lived in for so long to have a new life.

Written by Bryant of Ravenclaw for the One-Shot Owl Challenge.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Little Owl Who Believed

What a great story. I love how you brought to life the story behind Pigwidgeon. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Hidden by Marauder by Midnight

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Epilogue up.

Luna Lovegood, fresh out of Hogwarts, is assigned her first article abroad in rural England for the Quibbler. However, she encounters a strange story in this small town. Soon, she finds herself entangled in a web and race to save the life of a former Death Eater.

Luna Lovegood/Draco Malfoy.

Post-Hogwarts, Mystery, Draco/OC, Other Pairing story.

Dedicated to Poultrygeist who presented to me an unforgettable plot bunny.

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 4: Wake Up, Luna

Hey Bethany,

This story is becoming more and more interesting. The twists and turns you are throwing at us are amazing. No wonder your plot bunnies are going wild.

Your characterization of Draco was dead on during his rant about S.P.I.T., which is, by the way, hilarious. I'd like to think it's that you intended it that way, or it could be because it's late on Monday night and I haven't been sleeping well lately, who knows.

The descriptions of the bedroom, bed dressings and such are excellent and I can imagine being in the bed next to Luna. I'm simply amazed that you can maintain such a high level of quality with all of your stories!

Author's Response: Oh poor twists. I might even end up warping the entire story x_x Haha yes, I did intend for S.P.I.T. I wonder what it might stand for. Thank you!

Reviewer: Khrys Signed
Date: 06/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Wow. You have an amazing way of making the whole scene jump off the pages and come to life. The Ron twist was superb. I often forget that Luna could be paired off with anyone other than Neville, which is a bit ridiculous if I do say so myself. I love how you have caputered Luna's excitement over her new position at her father's paper. I don't have anything too constructive, since your chapter is so beautifully written. The only thing I have to offer is that I would like to know more about the reason behind the bartender's glare. I am assuming, though, that you will deal with that in a later chapter. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

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