Wow... so One Last Golden Day won Runner-up for a Quicksilver Quill! Thanks so much to those that gave it a nomination. It's one of those stories I've always been rather proud of even if it didn't get alot of attention at the time I was posting it.
Feel free to poke around and drop me a comment.
Love,
Ashley
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AUGH! How can you end it that way!?!?!? Please make the next update a fast one!!!!
Ooo, evil. I hope you have the last chapter ready!
Cute! I like this so far =)
OMG SQUEEEEEEE! Ok, I kept seeing your banner on the forums and finally I felt compelled to read this, which is strange because I'm not a fan of Lucius at all. But, I'm so glad I did! I didn't review up until now because I wanted to keep reading, but after this last chapter I had to stop and say dear Lord this story is fabulous!! *adds to favorites*
Your characterization is wonderful, everyone is extremely IC, which I personally think is difficult to do with the Malfoy's. I love that you made Siobhan friends with Harry. There really is a bias against Slytherins in the books, and I think shes an excellent example of how they can't be all bad. At the same time, her determination to get what she wants and her ease with manipulation makes her a perfect member of the house. Ok, back to reading!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, love. I hope you enjoy the rest of it as much as you have been! :) I appreciate the compliment on my characterisation, especially. *hugs*
*Is completely speechless at how amazingly well written that scene was* Honestly I can't think of anything to say. Wow...
Author's Response: Ooh, yay. Thanks! :)
Hahaha, I literally laughed out loud when I read this! I really do like your work. I read "Friends in need..." because I came after you on the literary review circle thingie (GO BADGERS!!!!!!), and since I really enjoyed that story I decided to read your other work. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Oooops.
Hahaha, I literally laughed out loud when I read this! I really do like your work. I read "Friends in need..." because I came after you on the literary review circle thingie (GO BADGERS!!!!!!), and since I really enjoyed that story I decided to read your other work. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Yeah for my new fan. Thank you for reviewing.
I have one question... how did the spell make Malfoy a nice person? Excellent chapter though!
Author's Response: The spell didn\'t make Draco any nicer. It just made him honestly search out Hermione\'s help and connect with her. I don\'t really think he\'s an evil person. He\'s human and capable of loving someone, we just never see that side of him through Harry\'s eyes. :)
Yay! Lovely end to a great story! Congrats!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I really appreciate it!
Poor Ron! I love how protective he's being, but the poor kid needs to know the truth! Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Dealing with Ron is treading on difficult ground, poor kid. Hermione knows she can\'t keep him in the dark forever.
Yay! FINALLY!!
Author's Response: You are quite welcome!
I am a Hr/R shipper all the way, have been from day one, though I must admit that they were sweet together. But, how much of that was just because of the spell...hmmm, anxious for some interactions with Ron and a response to all that has happened!
Author's Response: I love hearing this - that R/Hr shippers have liked the first half of this story. I really do appreciate it since I\'m rather torn myself. I love D/Hr but in canon it\'s R/Hr all the way. I just can\'t decide! :)
Beautiful. I just lost my mom a month ago, and it's nice to read something that shows no matter what shes still listening. =)
“After all, I’m Team Captain of Puddlemere United. No wait, that’s Wood. Of the Chudley Can...No, that’s you. Doesn’t matter, I’ll get it in the morning.”
This line made me laugh out loud! PRICELESS! As per usual, I think you portray Ginny very well. She's not sobbing all over herself and a nervous wreck over the loss of Harry, but she's also not moving on too quickly, which I like. I was a little surprised at Zabini being the one to comfort her, though he takes on many different personalities in fanfiction, and this characterization was really nice and fitting. Good job! I also really liked your personification of the wind and the feeling of Harry being near her. Strangely the only thing that seemed out of place to me was the song lyrics (though I tend to find that's the case with song fics in general, so it could just be me). Fantastic work, as always! Write more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, Ashley, for that wonderful review. I just LOVE your reviews. I\'m really glad you liked it since this was my first \'serious\' fanfiction.
As for the lyrics; this used to be a complete song-fic with the lyrics worked in between the text. But I decided to remove them and only keep the one\'s that had really inspired me to do this fic.
Awwww! Very cute and that picture is amazing! Thanks for that!!
Awwww! Very cute and that picture is amazing! Thanks for that!!
First of all, I LOVE your use of imagery! I can literally see every line in my head like a movie. Fantastic job! Secondly, I like how you used Ginny in this story. People tend to focus on her anger or her stubborness, and you really brought out the beautiful aspects of Ginny as a friend. Her holding hands with Luna, crying for Neville's pain. Even screaming the word "boob" was so fitting of her! I almost cried when you described the scene in the great hall waiting for the owls. We focus so much on the battles themselves and those fighting, that sometimes we forget the horror of those who really don't know what's going on, and you painted that picture very well. Bravo! You're going in the favorites and I hope to read more!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that great and utterly lovely review, and since you like my work you\'re welcome to check out my other stories and poems.
I LOVE these kind of reviews. Yay.
=( Why must they tease me???? The link is there, and still, access denied. DENIED! *sigh* By the way, my SAT's were over 5 years ago now... I'm just THAT nerdy ;)
Author's Response: Gryffinpuff - NERDY is awesome. Best people I know are nerds - most interesting, for sure! I include myself in that statement too...hehehehe..
Haha, great plan of action. Snogging. Lol! Really great chapter! I really can't wait for their to reunite with Hermione though...
Author's Response: Thanks, Gryffinpuff. I expect you will get your wish shortly - maybe not in the next chapter, but almost certainly in the chapter after that...
Alright now, everyone together...
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Author's Response: Whooops, you got interupted!!