i'm 23, a huge harry potter addict and a mum of 2 boys (age 5 and 2 - also potter fans). i am an Arh Historian/History teacher. i love the fanfics, especially dry wit and sarcasm and fics set in post hogwarts (it lets me believe harry will live), and , more recently, HG/SS stories.
i think it would be interesting to see a different threat to wizard kind, maybe malfoy as a dark lord or something. and then harry finds the wall again at hogwarts and wants to live in a different world and finds that he ends up where he was originally and then realises that there is no point in changing destiny. or you could have a happily-ever-after ending that would be nice too
Author's Response: I like your first idea, but it seems really complicated. It would be a long process to reach that. Obviously, there must be some kind of threat, otherwise the story becomes boring. Thank you for the brainstorming ideas and for reviewing.
i've just started reading your story - very good, hope there's more to come. BTW, i think ted is hot too - and the Youmng Ones is a very famous brittish tv comedy from the eighties about four young flatmates (a punk, a nerd, a hippy and a cool guy) and includes the very hilarious rick mayal. viv who that quote is from is a punk with orange hair, studs in his forehead and a propensity for breaking things - you should be able to hire some of the series on DVD. PS also try the incomparable Red Dwarf for the BEST SHOW EVER.
Author's Response: Sweet, I learned something today. Maybe I\'ll check that out in my spare time. Thanks for the review!
exciting chapter! i have to wonder though how anyone else is going to be able to get into merlin's world and get their powers back? i'm getting a bit ahead of myself there...i can't wait to find out what happens next though
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They say love is the most magical thing in the world. They say it lasts until death due you part. But what if it didn't? What if it lasted forever? For Hermione her one and only love, Draco, dies. Her daughter Tammy and herself try to pull themselves together at the news of his death. But it’s hard. They can’t forget someone so special. He had held their family together, now he was gone and they were falling apart. She knew he was gone forever and nothing could change that… little did she know that he was just her last breath away?
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Everytime she sees a shooting star she says ‘Look mum, daddy is coming back down. Let’s go look for him.’
“Me? I‘m brilliant. Couldn‘t be better. I‘ve been playing hide and bloody seek with the ministry all year. Brilliant!” You muttered sardonically.
- “Good good. Glad to know that they are still… er… seeking you Draco.” I giggled.
- “Yes, yes it is. Now listen, I didn’t come here to have a little chitchat. As a matter of fact it is an important affair.”
- “Really? And what ‘important affair’ would you have with me?”
“You - you really think that? You still wallow in the past? You think I came here - risked my life for a dare!? If you do then say goodbye Hermione. Say goodbye to the person who risked his life to come and tell you how he felt.”
that was so so so sad. in a good way. it reminds me of something but i can't place my finger on it. that old lady in Titanic maybe? i don't know. anyway, good job, especially for a first fanfic. (a few typos but still very well done)
that was great. i liked the story the whole way through but the ending really rounded off nicely. great job! keep writing fanfics
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to be fairly conclusive - which is hard for me! So I\'m glad you enjoyed it, and thought it ended well. I will definitely keep writing - I wouldn\'t be able to stop!
hilarious...funniest chapter yet!
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Author's Response: Thanks, glad to hear it!
that was a great chapter. i would have been pretty angry if you had let hermione die! i hope the next chapter doesn't take too long aren't we supposed to be finding out about malfoy as well? i can't quite remember anymore, i'll have to re-read
that was really sad, i don't want hermy to die!
great chapter. pity it was a long wait. update soon, i can't wait to find out what happens. are harry and ginny EVER going to get together?!?
excellent, i'm really enjoying this story
what is in that letter? have I missed something or is it still to come? Can't wait for more
that was a great chapter except that it was too short. i wanted more. i loved the bit with ginny and the muggle fighting
interesting. i like H and M's interactions. i can see that you are trying to keep it realistic and it is working. good job. - oh, by the way, Muggle is always with a capital M.
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you enjoyed it! Oh, i\'ll make sure i don\'t make that mistake again - thanks for telling me! =D
one word. fan-bloody-tastic!
Author's Response: A-Thank you!
interesting...i am surprised that there is such a big time gap between this and the last chapter. harry is quite bitter. i'm surprised at his feelings towards ginny and the weasleys but i suppose strange things are happening to him. great chapter overall.
Author's Response: The time gap was a problem, but I needed it, otherwise Harry\'s transformation doesn\'t make sense. You can\'t change that much in one night. I thought I had explained the reasons for his feelings for the Weasleys, but ah... I knew some would be surprised... I\'m happy you liked the chapter nevertheless :). Thanks for the review!
that was a really good chapter, you shouldn't be bothered by it. hermione's organised approach is very in charcter and it also really helps the reader recap the story and understand it better as well. i like this mysterious new character, its got me intregued. well done
Author's Response: Thanks, it was the main purpose of that chapter at first: helping the reader to \"recap the story\". The bit with the feathered woman wasn\'t even initially planned so soon into the story -- then I thought I couldn\'t leave the chapter like that. Too short. Too dull. Again, thank you for the review!
i love this chapter. i was getting really frustrated with snape for not going to hermione but now that he has i'm even more frustrated because i want to know what will happen. what a cliffhanger!! ps i also thought it was funny how his friends thought he was imperius-ed.
Author's Response: Yes, Snape needed to go see Hermione. Let\'s see what comes out of that enconter...
I\'m glad you thought the Imperius bit was funny. :0)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Ja1young! :0)
i took your advice and found the story elsewhere. WOW. intense. i'm speechless, i have no words to express my praise for this story now, it just keeps getting better. update soon, i need more, i'm totally addicted
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. :0)
I\'m updating as fast as I can. Keep reading and reviewing. :0)
i took your advice and found the story elsewhere. WOW. intense. i'm speechless, i have no words to express my praise for this story now, it just keeps getting better. update soon, i need more, i'm totally addicted
Author's Response: And again! Thanks! :0)
more more more!!!
Author's Response: *lol*
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Ja1young! :0)