For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!
James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.
o god u have to continue this story!!!!!!
nobody cares that this doesn't go with the actual story!!!!!!
its a wonderful story
pleaassssssssssse
just continue :')
this story is one of the best i have read
i love it!
keep up the good work and please
put up the next chapters quickly!!
btw
i would love to see more of sirius and cassie as well.they are really cute:)
Author's Response: awesome! thank you! i will hopefully be putting the new chapter up soon. sirius/cassie are going to become a bigger deal, too. glad you like it!! :)
lol!what a great chapter! can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
do i need to mention that you are a brilliant writer?i think not!
i think hermione needs a little more mood swings..it gets interesting that way
besides snape's usually the one having them!its better if there is a change
keep up the good work
u have an impatient fan sitting on needles here!!
Author's Response: thank you so much!! and oh no! i hope they don\'t poke xD i will try to get the next chapter out soon -- thanks so much for reading!!
i was extremely impressed by this story!!!
at first i thought it was a little farfetched but then...WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it became so brilliant!!!it improved so dramatically that i can ony say that u are an extremely talented author!i can't wait for ur next chapter.after all this action i hope for a lot more fluffiness(between sev and hermione8-))
cant wait for it!update soon!
Author's Response: aw thanks so much! and i\'m glad to hear that it improves because that means that i improved too :D and don\'t worry, the fluff is on the way...
"I want your30;to take your clothes off for me."
lol!!!
that line had me snickering to myself for more than an hour!
i frankly didn't think i would get so into the ss/hg fanfic
but u changed allll that!!
its amazing how almost life like you have made these characters
and i see that there is more action about to begin.. thank yew for that!i thought i would see another chapter describing "his eyes were like the midnight sky and were as bright as the stars" etc etc
thankfully its just the right amount of sappyness involved
one question:the potion hermione makes, allows you to avoid death completely?so you don't die but become very weak is it?i didn't undestand it clearly...hope u can point it out for me:)
i know it was about 2 chapters ago but i was really connfused about it!
great work as usual!
i cannot( i am very serious!) wait for the update!!
another chapter soon!please!:D
Author's Response: So glad to hear that you are enjoying the story!! And about the potion: yes, Hermione died, and then was brought back, kind of like a phoenix. Sounds COMPLETELY lame and cheesey when I write it out, but yeah, that's pretty much what happened xD
FINALLY!i was dying waitingfor the updates
its certainly is quite a frusrating chapter though!and hermione acting so angrily is a good thing!i am happy that she is finally the one to throw some mood swings and besides it has such wonderful results!maybe she should actually kick snape in the shins
hope you update soooooooooon
Author's Response: hahaha, i actually kind of debated whether or not i wanted her to just go for it and kick him...but i thought it might ruin the mood xD thanks so much for reading!!
yaaaaaaaaaay!!
finally at least a little action
even though its of the drunken kind
one question:draco was sooooooo very drunk at the beggining having no clue of his surroundings whatsoever.how could he have suddenly sobered up??
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I couldn\'t resist. \r\nEh, Draco wasn\'t so drunk that he didn\'t know where he was. And until he took the potion at the end, he didn\'t completely sober up - note the falling and stumbling. But when Hermione was talking to him, she was being really serious and those kinds of intense situations tend to drive the fun out of you quite quickly...\r\nThanks for reviewing!!
i have never read a more....well in one word..a more gripping story than this.its incredible and best of all its original.i thought it was going to be the same old love story,but the whole death eater scene at the ball and draco never finding out about his "mystery" companion is just wonderful.great work!best of luck with ur other chapters.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it, and I\'m happy I can keep you on your toes. I have to admit, it\'s a lot of fun thinking of things that\'ll throw you all for loops! :)\r\n\r\nThank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!
great work!can't wait for the next chapter :)
this is very interesting story line!
i couldn't think of hermione being in an abusive relationship.its a very new way to write a fan fic and because it is such an original theme(in my opinion) you have set my expectations really high!so no pressure:P and the first chapter was excellent....are you sure this is your first fic?:)
keep up the good work and good luck with your next chapter
i really like ur ideas and your writing is brilliant
however i get a feeling it may turn out to be like the usual james/lily love story
....but....its only ur first chapter and the chapter is great..you are doing well
i hope you add a little...hmmm...spice into ur next few
gud luck!
Author's Response: Thanks, tashy! It won\'t be like the usual J/L fics, I promise, because this story\'s a one-shot. The series is only meant to show how they first got together. If you haven\'t already, you can check out the two prequels. The links are on my author\'s page.
i love the fact that u chose to write a story about sirius!i
Author's Response: haha, Sirius rules.
"Greasy hair," Ron squeaked, then shrank back into the common room sofa when Hermione's glare was turned on him. For a seventeen year old girl, Hermione can glare like a champion. She'll make a great mother someday, let me tell you that.
Urgh. Mini-Snapes."
Thank you so much for all the great reviews guys!
lol!cute
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^
F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C
i can't stress enough on it
but i really don't understand why severus wants her to hate him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this story is amazing and i can't wait for the next chapter *nudge nudge*
very nice!
but only one problem:" I stared resentfully out the window"
it sounds a bit weird,i can't explain it but i doubt he would know if he was resentful or not,it sounds like someone other than james is being the narrator
i am sorry i can't explain it any better
o and i didn't under stand
is james father is the minister of magic or is he just a minister?
i really like the james-point-of-view method you have approached!its really creative and has great results!good luck with the next chapters
Author's Response: Yes, James's father is the Minister of Magic.
Thank you for pointing that out, I'll go back and fix it.
Thanks for reviewing :]
IMPRESSIVE
i have never come across a storyline like this
it is well written so that even i feel my stomach clench when ron died
just one question.there are so many healing spells that would have cured hermiones burns like the potion madam pomfrey used on cedric there are concealment charms that would get rid of her scars as well.just mentioning it because u said there were no cures
your story is great and i can't wait for the next chapter
:)
Author's Response: I really appreciate the stellar compliments, and I hope I can continue to deserve them! I\'ve really been beating myself up over this story, holding it to really high standards for myself. so I\'d love to hear what you think of the next chapter! Also, you bring up some good questions, like why Hermione doesn\'t use magic or other simple ... adjustments... to cover up her scars and her eye. Essentially, she doesn\'t want to cover it up. She\'s punishing herself because she blames herself for Ron\'s death and Ginny\'s grief. I\'ll explain it further in a future chapter, but I hope I\'ve answered your question for now!
this story seemed so familiar that for a moment i thought somebody had stolen an older one and redone it!i remember reading this sometime back.glad u came back to finishing this since it is starting out to be a pretty interesting story!can't wait to see draco's up coming disaster towards hermione:)
Author's Response: I\'m glad you came back! I\'ve revived some other stories as well as a new one, so feel free to check them out! Thanks for leaving a note!
it has a rather cofunsing start and at some points i go a little lost and had to re read it a few times to understand it.how ever it is ur first story and it actually has a good plot.i love the fact that snape and hermione are not to gether but have had a relationship before.it makes it so very dramatic and i love that!congrats on your very first chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks alot, Im really glad you liked it made and could be bothered to read it enough times till it made sense, \r\nplease keep reading more is coming soon.\r\nx
what an intresting new twist!i have to congratulate you on the originality of the story!however,it seems very rushed as if you are trying to rush to the point.its ok if your story has alot of chapters :) i know i would love it.rushing wouldn't alllow the story to develop and that would be a waste of such original ideas.i really liked the first chapter and have high hopes about the next,so no pressure!
review soon :)
Author's Response: Yeah I'm a bit of a rusher in stories, I find it hard to flesh them out. The next chapter is a bit of a bridge chapter before the fun really starts. After that I am going to try really hard not to rush! I Promise!! Thanks for the constructive criticism.