01/12/05
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Casualties of War by JessicaH
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: A war has many casualties and Hermione has lost more than most. Years on the run from Voldemort and his followers has taken it’s toll, but is she strong enough to stop to rest, to trust, to learn to love again?
Hermione/Blaise
Written in response to, and winner of, October's monthly challenge, number six. JessicaH, Ravenclaw.
Date: 11/27/05 Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning
This is fabulous. Lately i have been on the lookout for something 'different' and this is it! I love how well you can describe the scene and emotion behind Hermione's hardship. The fact that she remains so strong throughout such an awful time and despite any temptation is able to remain logical and refuse to 'give knowledge' to the enemy. Her sudden breakdown at the realisation of a wasted book was heart breaking and the scene we are left with, Hermione crying into Zabini's shoulder, is just as emotional. I also think that if we knew more about Zabini in canon we would see that you have described him very in character. His personality just sits well with the fiction. I have to say I'm excited about the upcoming chapter! *10*
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that. And I think I can promise that you will enjoy the next couple of chapters as well. Thank you.
Date: 03/07/06 Title: Chapter 7: Hope
That was such an exellent way to end the story. I never would have thought Hermione would fall pregnant and her carrying his child added a whole new tension to the story. You did such a fantastic job. Especially in your explanation of how everyone must feel. It was horrible to think of Ginny acting the way she did..but also very understandable. The end was so cruel! I started crying when I thought he was dead.. All I could think of was 'how can Hermione live without him?'..and then it was if I felt a similar rush of relieve as Hermione when they said "He's in Azkaban" It was so wonderful.... This truly is one of the best fictions I have read on this site. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. That was high praise indeed. I'm very flattered and happy that you liked the story so much. I'm so glad to read your reactions, because those are exactly the ones I wanted readers to have. Again thank you for your high praise, I'm blushing from head to toe here. :D
Date: 12/13/05 Title: Chapter 3: Another Year Gone By
Gorgeous.. I was shocked, I just finished reading 'The Picture of Dorian Gray' for the first time just two days ago..and I never would have made the connection with Horcruxes but when I read it..I had to think wow.. very similar. Blaise giving her a new book was wonderful and then him suddenly choosing to ask for her opinion and involving books once more in her life .. I was almost crying...The window.. all I can say is WOW I loved the whole idea of her having this random window ..you can see their relationship evolving slowly and it's just so beautiful the way you have written it. I cannot wait for future chapters. *10*
Author's Response: I'm so glad I managed to make an impact. It thrills me that you like the story so much.
A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.
Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!
Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)
Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Date: 11/18/05 Title: Chapter 5: Beside the Lake
Nice work :) This story is just cute and cuddly. I liked the description of the Heads area that was really nice..a little freaky with having a big window into Lily's bedroom.. but it sounds lovely all the same. The Alice and Frank scene was quite lovely too and I'm sure the detentions will be quite interesting. Keep up the good work!
Love Is Not A Simple Thing by Starmaiden
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Remus and Hermione are twenty years apart in age, but not unlike each other in essentials. Two years after being her teacher, Remus meets Hermione again and reflects on her place in a changing world.
This story may someday be lengthened; for now, it stands as is.
Date: 11/27/05 Title: Chapter 1: Return to War
This is a great start to an unusual pairing. I liked that you started the chapter by explaining the formation of OotP in Remus' POV and that by the end of the chapter we had hints at the aspects of Hermione's personality that Remus will come to love: example courage, loyalty, and impressive grasp of knowledge. The scene where Hermione is picked up from her home was written very well too. With her parents being reluctant to let her go and Hermione's impatient 'you-have-to-trust-them mood.' My favourite parts of the chapter would have to of been Sirius' attempt at setting his mothers portrait on fire and the last line 'Remus followed slowly with the trunk, and thought that her laughter, quiet though it was, was a glimmer of light in the gloom of the house.' It was a very beautiful last line. I hope you are planning to continue with this story because I would like to read more. *10*
Author's Response: Awwww! Thank you so much! I have to admit I don't know how quickly I will update, but I promise that this story, like my other, will NOT moulder away alone. Nope. Never.
Date: 11/23/05 Title: None
Interesting concept. I loved it :) I had to laugh at Hermione..because its the first thing you would do isnt it..ask everyone your talking to if they know who the person in question is. It will be interesting to find out who her secret admirer is. I liked the automatic msg Harry left about kickin Malfoys butt and Colins 'oh' response :) This was a really clever idea I can't wait to see what happens next.
Old Moon by Lucidshard
Rated: •Summary: Post OotP - Lupin is coming to terms with the losses in his life and struggling to continue with his role within The Order. He has more trouble than he thought when a mysterious ailment plagues him and makes him a danger to those in the Order. Circumstances change, the war gets a lot worse. After a series of events, Lupin and Hermione find that all was not as it seemed nor who it seemed to be, and they grow much closer, more than seemed possible.
Date: 03/18/06 Title: Chapter 2: In Old Wounds
Obviously I just finished reading the first two chapters of your fic and I thought it was wonderful so I had to leave a review. I am very curious to know why poor Remus is changing before the full moon. I love your characterization so far. Molly is her motherly self and Dumbledore is patient as always. Snape is rather in character although it is odd for him to be hanging around so much..and I am going to ignore his slight niceness to Hermione because it isnt like hes being nice to Harry. I had to smile at the way Hermione still calls Remus Professor Lupin..its just so cute. Having Hermione be the one to clean him up was a very good way to start the intimacy between them..because its so innocent. I'm rather happy with that. There was one inconsistency I wanted to comment on though.. at the beginning you described Hermione as feeling vulnerable because she had forgotten her wand...and then when she wakes up from the living room she suddenly has it with her again. She didnt go back upstairs to get it.. so you might want to check that out :) Besides that I am loving this story so far and I am now going to read chapter three :)
Date: 03/18/06 Title: Chapter 3: Shifting Pain
Another great chapter. I loved the description of Remus looking at himself in the mirror, seeing more than just his reflection. The fact that Hermione kicked him instead of Ron was actually a little bit amusing. I could just picture the mortified look on Hermiones face when she realised she had hurt him. I wonder if perhaps the overwhelming grief of the loss of Sirius has anything to do with Remus transformations. I am also wondering whether the little girl he ran into in diagon alley has anything to do with whats going on.. hmm..Well you have kept me interested.. so I will have to put the story on my favourites to check for updates :) Well done.
Date: 12/30/05 Title: None
Despite your previous reviews I personally thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter. The opening paragraphs were wonderfully descriptive and informative so as to bring the reader up to date with where the story is set. I also think its great to finally see someone kill off Harry..not that I don't like him but because its different...also I found it interesting that you described Harry and Dumbledore becoming like a 'myth'.. the idea is quite realistic and yet also sad that the wizarding world can forget about the seriousness of war so quickly. I think your characters were rather in canon and you explained that Hermione would have changed ever slightly because of war. I loved this line ' He had never addressed her or looked at her all those years he taught her without an outright hate and annoyance for her existence in his world.' because it shows the reader that Hermione has never 'crushed' on Snape and has always been fully aware of his hatred towards her..which will make the pairing a lot more interesting. As for the idea of exchange professors..I must say I havent read it anywhere before and I like that you have found this way of bringing in some good competition to the story. Who could resist the handsome Krum afterall? So all in all I do look forward to the next installments :)
Date: 12/30/05 Title: None
Oh yes...he disagrees with her becoming a professor but the signs of jealousy have appeared frequently already..no matter how well he hides it. :) A very in character Snape I should think though. I liked this line 'If the students did not scare her away, surely working with the likes of him would.' At least he is aware that his presence is rarely wanted and mostly considered unpleasant. So now I am left to wonder what happens next...what is Hermione's reaction to running into Snape at such an uncomfortable moment?..hmmm.. :)
Clair De Lune by Astrid Skywalker
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary:
It was full moon when the Dark Lord sealed a part of his soul within a magical amulet, and then broke it in half. One half was left to the faithful werewolves to guard. The other half was tossed into the impenetrable depths of time where no one but him could get it. When the first half has been found, the Order of the Phoenix selects Hermione Granger to go back into the past to search for the missing piece. What is waiting for her is a brutal task that will test her beyond her limits, and an undying love that extends beyond the boundaries of time.
RL/HG, Post-HBP
No werewolves were harmed in the making of this story.
Winner of 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards - Best Non-Canon Romance
Update (9 May): Chapter 17, Burning, is up! Enjoy!
Date: 04/21/06 Title: Chapter 8: Close
That had to be the best description of Hermione’s reaction towards meeting a past Peter I have read so far. Running to the toilet indeed, it was hard not to laugh at Remus amusement, even if I was immediately brought back to the seriousness of the situation.
I rather liked that Remus secret just slipped out, and Hermione's knowledge of it of course. I don't think I could picture that particular conversation being brought up any other way.
Hermione's 'acceptance' would mean a great deal to Remus. I got all giddy and excited by the sweet little moment at the end. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Oh yes, Hermione\'s acceptance definitely means a truckload! I\'m actually quite relieved that the romance is finally kicking off; I think I delved so much into the Horcrux subplot that I almost forgot about the real plot. >.< Ah well... thanks so much for your review!
Date: 03/10/06 Title: Chapter 6: Sunset
I stumbled across this story yesterday and when I got up this morning I immediately wanted to jump online to read the next chapters. Now that I'm all caught up (and dying to know what happens next) I thought I should leave a review :) I admire the thought you must have put into this fiction because you have so far managed to intertwine past and present very well ..I know if it was me I would be forever mixing up dates etc. Your characterization is excellent. Not once so far have I thought that anyone seemed out of character. Hermione's reaction to meeting the marauders was spot on and the guilt that must have come with knowing their fate would weigh heavily on her, but still she is logical and knows that there is nothing she can do. I also love your description and additional information. For example, Lily being appalled at Remus' garden ..and then further on in the story forcing James to plant flowers without a wand. The fact that Lily and Hermione are both muggleborn is a great way for them to bond and you have shown that just by them carrying out everyday chores. The thing I liked the most was the way you set up the story. I love that Remus remembered her and knew that it was her that had to go back. I loved the whole emotion behind Hermione being sent back and Harry and Ron being so reluctant to let her go. The whole ritual was excellent also. Anyway, to sum it all up I just love this fic! It is so suspenseful ..every chapter leaves me wanting more. Fantastic work! I just wish I had come across it sooner :) *10* (of course)
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! I\'m glad that you like the way I set up the story; I had many ideas [that weren\'t really good, but... meh] that I wanted to apply, but I just decided to go with starting in the present and moving into the past. Again, I\'m so happy that you like it. :)
Date: 02/12/06 Title: None
How utterly wonderful this fic is. Only someone like Luna could take such a long time to read a wedding invitation. Its amazing how one sentence can make her go off into a trance of thought. The hat was spectacular! My favourite addition definately having to be the bubbles. Also I loved Luna's father. 'When he lost his wife, it was as though he lost his translator for most human interaction.' this line tells alot about the kind of character he is, I had to smile..and I loved his initial reaction to Luna's hat, it was charming. Oh and of course the wedding was beautiful and the foot repelling charm was hilarious! Of course you would look around for Fred and Georde though wouldnt you :) And one more thing...what would poor Witches and Wizards around the world do without a stray firework or two? :D
Date: 02/12/06 Title: None
Gah! I love that Luna is 'Chief Reporter-The Quibbler' I mean it makes sense. The article is great! Having Luna speak dragon is a rather random idea...but it works so well. I had to laugh when I read the part where Norbert is reminiscing about a former partner. 'Just thinking about Mabel stokes my fires: she’s such a comely wench.' Very amusing :) But the whole cruelty to Dragons side of thing has to make you feel guilty about The First Task of the Triwizard Tournament..doesnt it? As for the description of 'Luna in nature', it was excellent and very in character I believe. I was right there with her watching the butterfly take off and taking care not to squish the beetle. I cannot wait to read the next chapter...boys can be rather amusing when they are being all protective. :) Fantastic work you Hags have got going here.
Date: 02/12/06 Title: None
What an interesting piece of fiction that was! Who would of thought to write about the mating habits of dragons..honestly...not that it wasnt fascinating of course. The next part of the interview with Norbert was just as good as the first :) I have to say though when I read this 'Oh! It was love at first smell.' it seemed interesting to have Norbert say that right after we read Luna's take on the smell of a dragon. I suppose if you live with it...you could find it attractive :) As for Charlie's whole POV on everything, it was quite in character. I loved that you started his POV with him soaring through the air, it just fit well with him. Luna is obviously much more in tune with nature than he is though...especially if the ants are anything to go by :) Now I just have to wait with everyone else to see what happens next!
Friends in Need... by Foxy Wolf
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's one week till Christmas and times are rough in the wizarding world. Neville Longbottom is forced to stay behind at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry due to tragic events. Fortunately someone chooses to stay behind with him.
Date: 04/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: ...Are Friends in Deed.
That was very touching indeed. I must say that this is the first fiction I have read where Ginny has accepted why Harry broke up with her. I'm glad you mentioned it because it made the fiction so much closer to canon. I loved the description too. I could see everything playing out in my mind. The goings on at Hogwarts was described exactly how I would see it. Very little students left and the apprehension of what the coming mail would bring. There was one thing I picked up on. In the first chapter you have Ginny seated in front of a roaring fire, but then she gets goose bumps. But then, perhaps it was due to the thought of Harry and his search for the Horcruxes? Well that was my only query everything else seemed perfect to me. Poor Neville, I am so glad Ginny was there for him and the fact that he kissed her...well I think it was believable considering the circumstances. Neville may be clumsy at times but he’s a Gryffindor. He had the courage in him to do it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for that lovely review, and you're right; the goosebumps is related to the thought of Harry and the Horcruxes. I just really wanted to emphasize her dark thoughts even with a roaring fire right beside her.
The Battle of Love and Friendship by RupertsPheonix
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Ron and Hermione will find love early on, but will it last? And what about Harry and Ginny? They might come back together--if Ginny has anything to say about it, but what about how Harry feels?
Warning: Rating has changed because of a couple Very Sensitive Topics!!
Completed.
Date: 03/24/06 Title: Chapter 2: Hermione's Secret
Okay I never...ever...ever...would have guessed that Hermione was dating Ernie! A good way to put tension on the R/Hr relationship :).. ohhh and is Ginny going to tell Harry her..news...what a way to tell him. Not to mention Ron is going to go ballistic at them for listening in on such an emotional conversation. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Another brilliant cliffhanger by the way!
Author's Response: Aww, *tears up* thanks for such a postitive review! I was going for a way to make the Hr/R relationship have troubles just like every other relationship coughharry/ginnycough. lol! The next chapter should be up soon. I'm glad you liked the cliffhanger too, I wasn't sure if that one was any good or not, but I liked it, lol! Thanks for reviewing! =)
Date: 12/15/05 Title: Chapter 1: A Rather Loud Confession
Whoa.. talk about heavy first chapter. Not only did Ron find out about Ginny n Harry's antics but so did we!! And the result... good gosh. I wonder if it's a boy or a girl :) Oh dear Fred and George are going to kill Harry if Ron doesn't get there first. I loved that Ginny shut him up about the Hermione thing though. HA and Ron yelling out his confession and Hermione hearing...brilliant. I don't mind the cliff hanger it keeps readers interested :) Well I suppose I had better wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the long review! It was sort of a heavy chapter, and I hope that's okay. that's really why I write cliff-hangers, so hopefully readers will stay interested and keep coming back for more! lol. Thanks for the review! =)
Lethal Affection by Phoenix5225
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: It has been said that when a butterfly flaps its wings, the effects are felt on the other side of the earth. And so it is the same with our past. Every memory, every scene we have witnessed, every emotion we have felt, has shaped us into the people we have become. How is it that an event that occurred thirty years ago can affect an action today? How do we begin to understand this phenomenon so that we may alter the paths of our future? And most importantly, how will one man learn to love one woman, when for him, feeling affection for another has led to nothing but death?
Date: 04/06/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Oh! How interesting. I must admit I never usually sift through Snape/OC fictions but I do love it when an Author can write him so in character. Anyway just had to note that your first chapter has got me very interested and I will likely be adding this to my favourites. Now I will move on to chapter two!
Date: 04/06/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Fabulous. I had to love the staff room incident. I could just picture a little metre above his head that filled slowly up everytime Laurel impressed him.
I'm glad you had Laurel burst out laughing when Severus says, '...I find myself able to tolerate you,' because that was my exact reaction. But I agree it was a much better thing for him to blurt out than sappy poetry. I absolutely love this portrayal of Severus so far and Laurel is growing on me too.
The kiss was rather sudden, but I don't think it is a problem because it seemed both characters were just as shocked as I was!
Anyway, on to the next chapter! *10*
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind comments. I have to say again that the exact line you quoted was the initial plot bunny for the entire fiction. It all came to me one night when someone had mentioned that even if Snape did fall in love he would still be a git. That line just came to me then and Lethal Affection evolved from there!