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Harry Potter and the Impossibility of Time Travel by ChibiChibi
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Three years post-Hogwarts. The final battle has started on the night of Harry's twenty-first birthday and he and Voldemort finally face off -- but Voldemort still has to play his last card to get rid of Harry -- by sending him and three of his 'friends' into the past exactly twenty-one years. The four of them now have to struggle to be accepted, keep their identities from certain persons and find a way home.
This story will contain some romance -- if you don't accept certain couples or just desperately want to know who's going to pair up, just e-mail me, and I'll tell you.
Date: 10/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: As the Years passed
this is your first fanfiction/ Hard to believe. you do good work! keep it up.please e-mail me when more chapters are done.
mrmcllstr@yahoo.com
The Worthy by Seren
Rated: •Summary: The Last Battle has begun, and the Last Stand is pitched in the Ministry of Magic. After Remus Lupin is felled, Harry and his closest friends defeat Voldemort, and Prophecy is fulfilled. But it is not the end; the Veil stands as Judge, Jury, and Executioner, and only the worthy may survive. Not a Sirius returns from the Veil fiction.
Date: 09/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Worthy (One-Shot)
Good story, I think it could have been longer. The after life is alway a good way to draw people into a story. This story idea had a lot of potential to be more than this one shot. I think your writing is good, you just need to expand on your ideas.
Charner
Friends in Need... by Foxy Wolf
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's one week till Christmas and times are rough in the wizarding world. Neville Longbottom is forced to stay behind at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry due to tragic events. Fortunately someone chooses to stay behind with him.
Date: 10/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: ...Are Friends in Deed.
Hello,
I enjoyed this little piece very much. it grabbed your attention at the beginning and held it the entire way.
Only improvement suggestion would be to make it longer.
Charmer
Author's Response: Ooops.
Date: 10/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: ...Are Friends in Deed.
Hello,
I enjoyed this little piece very much. it grabbed your attention at the beginning and held it the entire way.
Only improvement suggestion would be to make it longer.
Charmer
Author's Response: Thank you :D
It Had to Happen in Snape's Class by nerd2006
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Post-HBP. Voldemort attacks Harry during Potions class. What will Snape's reaction be? PG-13 for violent scenes and mild language.
Date: 10/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: Voldemort Attacks
Hey, great job. This story has really pulled me in; I can't wait for more. I appricate the effort. I am sure it takes alot of time, but it definitely worth it. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Waiting and puting you on my fav authors list !
Harry Potter, The Boy Who Lived by Khrys
Rated: Professors •Summary: With the help of an ancient spell, his friends, and love, Harry embarks on his mission to destroy Voldemort. What will happen on the way? With Ginny, Ron, and Hermione by his side, will Harry find the solution? And where do Neville and Luna fit in all this?
And, as of August 25, 2006, I'm done. I sure hope you liked it!
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty Four: Survival
I really enjoyed this story. I think it had a good plot line, and I really enjoyed all of the group's exceptional powers. There were a few jumps in the story line where I was almost lost, but you managed to pull it together in the end.
Good Job. Let me know if you continue Charmer
Author's Response: I am glad that the ending pulled everything together. I hope that the leaps of faith I asked you to take while reading the story were not too great! The sequel is posted. Her Other Half, in the Romance Category under H/G and R/H. I hope you like it!
Harry Potter and the Secret Spell by Phoenix 86
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: With the death of Albus Dumbledore came the passing of the most powerful symbol against the Dark Lord Voldemort. Now the Death Eaters are more active than ever, the Wizarding World is in mourning, the Order of the Phoenix has to regroup, and Harry Potter has to follow the path set before him. But Harry will get more help than he bargained for, will have more responsibilities than expected, and will find a spell that nobody knows how to work.
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Homecoming
Hello,
I think that this is a great first attempt. The story has a good plot, and the part about the Dursley's was great. The only thing that I see that needs improvement is the flow. A few of the sentences have to be reread a few times to get what you are trying to convey. My suggestion is to re-read, and see if it flows for you.
GREAT JOB!!! KEEP WRITING.
Charmer
Author's Response: I hope that my writing improves for you as you read on. This was before I got a beta.
The Man from Adian Avenue by Aelan Greenleaf
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: There is a strange, emerald-eyed man who lives on the corner of Adian Avenue, forever alone and anonymous. That is, however, until a young boy on the cusp of entering the magical world visits him and reveals, for a time, the true secret of the hermit of Adian Avenue. [one-shot]
Date: 09/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Man from Adian Avenue
I really enjoyed this story. I think it still has a lot of potential to be more. i hope that someday you will expand on this idea. This story could go so many ways.
The Charmer
A Stolen Past by nuw255
Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Summary: Fifteen-year-old Harry Potter wakes up in his cupboard under the stairs at number four, Privet Drive with no memory of the past five years of his life. What happened to his memory? What do his strange dreams mean? And most importantly, how will he survive in a school for incurably criminal boys?
This is primarily a mystery, with a bit of shippiness thrown in here and there. Of course, if I told you WHO is involved in the shippiness, that would ruin part of the mystery, wouldn’t it?
This story takes place immediately after OotP (and thus disregards HBP).
Date: 10/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Memory Loss
Hello,
I think that your story has great potential. It draws you in, and that is what you want for the begining of a stroy. I was disapointed that chapter two is not accessable. Please continue, it is worth the effort.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was really worried that the beginning might not be all that interesting, so I\'m glad you disagree. I hope chapter 2 gets validated soon, but I only submitted it a couple of days ago, so I guess we just have to be patient. :)
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: “The best freak I can be”
I really like this story. It pulls you in from the very begining. Please keep updating quickly. Waiting for the next chapter,
Charmer
Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it. I\'m on my way to submit the next chapter right now.
In A Nutshell by hearyoume
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Dumbledore is going senile, Ron's eating is out of control, and poor Hagrid... will he ever realize his true strength before he kills someone?? This starts off at the beginning of the school year and ends with a detailed account of how Harry finally defeats Lord Voldemort. I poke fun at stereotypes and clichés in fan fiction, and even joke about some things in the actual books. It’s pretty much everything – in a nutshell (or is it nuthouse?).
Date: 10/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: In A Nutshell
This was cute. A little plagerism, but cute.
Good Job.
Charmer
Author's Response: EEEEEK! The P word! Certainly not something I expected to hear :o Do you mind telling me what you believe I plagerized? D:
Date: 10/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: In A Nutshell
This was cute. A little plagerism, but cute.
Good Job.
Charmer
An Uplifting Adventure by Gmariam
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: While shopping for Christmas gifts during their final year, Fred and George decide to visit the Muggle shopping centre, and drag new prefects Ron and Hermione along for the ride. After experiencing the fascinating world of Muggle clothing, music, and magazines, they take the lift up to the top level, a ride that leaves the Weasley brothers pale and nervous. When they return to the lift for the journey back down, Fred and George Apparate back to Diagon Alley instead, leaving Ron and Hermione to face the consequences alone when they return to the Leaky Cauldron.
This story was written for the One-Shot Challenge: Muggle Artifacts by Gmariam of Ravenclaw and received Third Place.
Date: 10/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: An Uplifting Adventure
I think this was great. The only thing that I would have changed is that Harry and Ginny would have been adventurous enough to have come along too.
Good Job!
Charmer
Author's Response: Hi! I\'m glad you liked this story! I definetely thought about sending Harry and Ginny along on the adventure, but ultimately I thought Harry was probably not in the mood for shopping with the twins at this point in his fifth year and wanted to stay in character with book five. I made Ginny stay behind to watch over him, although I think she probably would have had a good time with Hermione! It was fun to just focus on the Weasleys, and hopefully Harry and Ginny had a nice time in Diagon Alley on their own. ;) Thanks for reading it and leaving a review! ~Gina :)
Arthur Weasley and the CP Layer by ChrissyOfGryffindor
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A strange object arrives at the Misuse of Muggle Artifacts office. What is it, where did it come from, and how do they get the bloody thing to stop making noise?
Entry for the One-Shot Challenge – Muggle Artifacts by ChrissyOfGryffindor of Ravenclaw house.
Date: 10/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Strange Muggle Contraption
I really enjoyed this little piece. It really fits Arthur Wesley. He just loves anything muggle, and boy does this fit him to the tee. Please write more, and longer!
Date: 10/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Strange Muggle Contraption
I really enjoyed this little piece. It really fits Arthur Wesley. He just loves anything muggle, and boy does this fit him to the tee. Please write more, and longer!
Author's Response: Oh, I\'m so glad you liked it! I will be posting more stories soon, but nothing like this, at least not for a while. Thank you so much for the lovely review and encouragement!