09/22/06
The name's Juliet.
Yes, Juliet as in Romeo and Juliet.
No relation.
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Breaking Point by Sly Severus
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: The Dark Lord has learned of the Unbreakable Vow. He is displeased, and prepared to punish his unfaithful servants.
Bellatrix and Severus end up going into hiding together, and they are forced to relive the one thing they ever had in common.
Date: 10/10/06 Title: Chapter 2: The Vow is Revealed
Oooh... I love it! Very good insight on possibilities for Book 7. And... *gasp* Peter's dead! *happy dance*
Anyhow... Moving on to next chapter.
~Juli
Author's Response: Hehe! Glad you liked it.
And about Peter being dead, well, it doesn\'t add anything to the plot, I just hate him too.:D
Date: 10/10/06 Title: Chapter 2: The Vow is Revealed
Oooh... I love it! Very good insight on possibilities for Book 7. And... *gasp* Peter's dead! *happy dance*
Anyhow... Moving on to next chapter.
~Juli
Author's Response: :D See below.
Date: 10/21/06 Title: Chapter 5: The Talk
Oh... Another touching chapter - the memories are very excellent, and I love the way you're developing Bella's character. Very intriguing... Keep at it!
~Juli
Author's Response: Glad your enjoying. I love working with Bella as a character. I find that she\'s a lot of fun. She\'s also my favorite hp character.
Anyway, I\'m keeping at it. I\'m actually planning to work on chapter six some tonight.:D
Thanks so much for the review. :D
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 3: A Name From the Past
Nice... Bella doesn't seem the sentimental type, though, but maybe trauma does that to a person. It's a wonderful "homecoming" chapter... Settles peace after the eventful last one. Great work - keep at it!
~Juliet
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I\'m glad you enjoyed it. I have a tendency to make Bella sentimental before I finish with her. :D
Date: 10/14/06 Title: Chapter 4: Memories of Elysia
What did he do to her? Oh, Bella!
That was a wonderful chapter - oh so Snapeish. I loved it. Keep at it, please... Don't you dare leave me on that cliffhanger for too long! I might fall.
~Juli
Author's Response: Poor Bella. She\'s in for a rough time, but so is Sevy. But they do get to have a little fun along the way.
I\'m glad you liked this chapter. I was a little concerned about my Sevy. It\'s hard to write him in love. Glad to hear that I have pulled it off so far.
I promise to have the next chapter in que A.S.A.P. I hate to keep you guys waiting. :D
Unicorn's Blood by Dragon_Warrior
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: This is a poem about the unicorns in book one--and Harry Potter.
Date: 10/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Unicorn's Blood
I like it... Brings a sense of serenity to a topic that is somewhat vague. Very nice! The rhyme scheme is simple, but beautifully written.
~Juli
Author's Response: Thanks! you are now on my good list! :-)
Date: 10/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Unicorn's Blood
I like it... Brings a sense of serenity to a topic that is somewhat vague. Very nice! The rhyme scheme is simple, but beautifully written.
~Juli
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/12/06 Title: None
Oh... That was so beautiful. I love how you played up a not so well-known character... His mother seems to fit the family, with what we know of his father and knew of Cedric. The last line is amazing, I will sing a lullaby. It's just so motherly... You really described the feelings of loss well.
Bravissima on a masterpiece!
~Juli
Almost by Wings of the Morning
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A little girl playing in her garden drags up unwanted memories for Petunia of her sister and why they drifted apart. More a character study than anything else.
Date: 10/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Almost
That's awesome. Lovely reflections - you see Petunia in a new light. Wonderfully written and explained.
... And he Turned Around Snobbily and Strutted Away by Mind_Over_Matter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: "Strutting around the place with his friends and admirers..." ~Professor Snape, PoA
There may be some reason behind Snape's words.
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Particularly Good Day
Oh... This was funny, guaranteed. I must say you managed to keep the Mauraders in good-sporting character, even with all the humor thrown in.
Though isn't a pepper-flavoured bean in eggs a good thing?
I want to change forks into cacti sometime, I swear. Give me that ability! xD
Sirius' reaction to being woken up was just so... Sirius. I laughed. (I laughed during the whole thing but - well, I laughed harder there.)
My favorite part was this:
Perhaps it was because Lily Evans had finally accepted that she and James were meant to be together for all eternity, forever remaining passionately in love like any soul mates should…
Well, technically she’d agreed to go to Hogsmeade with him anyway, and that was basically the same thing.
That is SO a teenage guy thing.
Awesome story!
~Juli
Author's Response:
Wow. I love you.
Definitely feeling more confident with this story now - to start off with, I was almost concerned when it was accepted. Maybe I just read it too many times...
BUT anyway...
I don\'t know - I assumed a pepper flavoured bean was like... very pepper flavoured - a big chunk of magical pepper flavour. A chilli-like object of doom...
Meh - maybe, maybe not. Personally, I\'d be suspicious of anything one of the Marauders put in my breakfast. Again, an absolutely humungous \'thank you\'!
A Stolen Past by nuw255
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Fifteen-year-old Harry Potter wakes up in his cupboard under the stairs at number four, Privet Drive with no memory of the past five years of his life. What happened to his memory? What do his strange dreams mean? And most importantly, how will he survive in a school for incurably criminal boys?
This is primarily a mystery, with a bit of shippiness thrown in here and there. Of course, if I told you WHO is involved in the shippiness, that would ruin part of the mystery, wouldn’t it?
This story takes place immediately after OotP (and thus disregards HBP).
Date: 10/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Memory Loss
Sounds like a very interesting story - I'm excited to see the rest of it!
I'll be back to read more! Can't wait!
~Juliet - 10/7/06
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I\'m really glad you like the beginning of the story, and I\'m sure you\'ll like the rest of it too (well, I hope so anyway). I hope chapter 2 is up for you soon.
Date: 10/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Memory Loss
Sounds like a very interesting story - I'm excited to see the rest of it!
I'll be back to read more! Can't wait!
~Juliet - 10/7/06
Author's Response:
Their Sacrifice by h3art0f1nk
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A poem of the death and sacrifice of Lily and James...
Date: 10/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Their Sacrifice
Oooh... Nice. I loved this line:
Evil couldn't touch him twice, for love could not be stilled.
Most magnificent. It draws together all the feelings of love and sacrifice that Lily and James gave that night... I love it. Brava!
~Juli
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I am so glad that you like it!
A Perfect World by happyhooligan2001
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Berlin, 1937, The dark wizard Grindelwald has a fateful meeting with the Chancellor of Germany, Adolph Hitler.
Date: 10/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Fateful Meeting
Woah...
Back up there for a minute.
Hitler? And wizards?
BRILLIANT!
Excellent introduction to your story - Minerva's excerpt at the bottom was a most extraordinary teaser. Very creative and ingenious way to manipulate one of the most terrible catastrophes in all of history...
You ABSOLUTELY must keep writing.
Bravissima!
~Juli
Amortentia Tonight by potions_perfection
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: My Amortentia would be like this in the middle of an insomnia-struck night, remembering lost loves and broken hearts and things I've lost.
Date: 10/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Amortentia Tonight
Oh! That's beautiful. And very sad. I loved it... Very well-written, very emotional... I loved this part :
My Amortentia
Would smell of him
The one I lost
and the one I cannot have.
My Amortentia
Would remind me of
My salty tears
My metallic-tasting blood
As I bite my lip
Too hard. Again.
Excellent job - definently one of my favorites.
~Juliet
Author's Response: Thanks, that\'s my favorite bit too! This, like most of my poetry, was a random inspiriation in the middle of the night. I was awake, as I usually am, so I just turned on the computer and started writing. I\'m doing Draco next, then Sirius, then probably Snape.
Storyteller by BuckbeakBeyond
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: One of the stories within the story as told by a Second War veteran. She is old by know, and may not know the answers to your questions, but she will try to answer them while relating a small bit of Luna's story.
Date: 10/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oooh.... I like this one. Very good. Unique approach, how you set it from a storyteller's point of view... And the "I have forgotten" part was marvelous.
Truly a masterpiece. You must keep at it.
~Juli
Author's Response: This is the first one I\'ve written in awhile, so I\'m glad you liked it :)
I have two other poems up, if you like my work and want to check them out.
The Art of Lion Taming by The Queen Marauder
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
James Potter and Lily Evans have become a legendary couple in wizarding history, an extremely talented pair that later became parents of the Boy Who Lived. However, it is not as widely known amongst magical folk that they did not start off, in their early days at Hogwarts, as being very fond of one another. Here is the story of the eventful education of two of the most intelligent, witty, stubborn, and fiery tempered witches and wizards in Hogwarts history as they learn that it takes a lion to tame a lion.
Disclaimer: Please pay attention because this is the only time I will say this. I AM JK ROWLING. Also please note that that was a complete and utter lie. Thank you for your time.
--The Management
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: When the cubs board the train...
After reading the reviews, I had to add another - My boyfriend's name is Andrew James... Maybe that's one of the reasons I like this one so much.
Anyhow... Keep writing soon or you'll drive me up the wall.
~Juli
Author's Response: Dude, that\'s crazy! Congrats on a boyfriend with a nifty name! And don\'t worry, I\'ll have another one up soon!
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: When the cubs board the train...
EEEEEE!
That was spectacular. Wonderful. The characters were kept in really strict characterization, and the sequence of short dialogs at the end was wonderful. Definently a favorite. Keep at it!
~Juli
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 10/18/06 Title: Chapter 2: Yet another near death experience...
Yet another wonderful chapter - I love the quick progression, and I love the idea of Lily befriending all of James's friends, but not James himself. Great!
~Juliet
Author's Response: Ah, the story is but young yet. We\'ll see what other twists and turns I can whip out of my pocket! Thanks for the review!
When Darkness Did Surround Us by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: 2007 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts
Petunia Dursley is enjoying dinner with her family when someone starts pounding on the door. Ready to tell them off for being so rude and refusing to leave when they didn't answer at first, Petunia opens the door to have a baby shoved into her arms and told she is his only family. Years after the great Harry Potter defeated Voldemort, Death Eaters have risen to power and taken over Hogsmeade, Hogwarts, and even the Ministry of Magic. Their marriages announced invalid, their children in danger and their lives hanging by a thread, the heroes of the war with Voldemort must once again take a stand against evil.
H/G and R/Hr
(pre-Deathly Hallows)
*Completed*
*Quote from The Epilogue*
Suddenly Harry was kissing her as if he couldn’t resist the temptation. There was a kind of frenzy to the kiss at first, a kind of desperate need, but it melted into something soft and sweet and gentle, a promise of a future when kisses would never be limited. When they broke apart he rested his forehead on hers, sprinkling a few affectionate butterfly kisses across her face. “I love you,” he murmured.
Date: 10/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Man and The Baby
Oooh... This was enticing. Definently. I like the almost repeat of Harry's story, the girlfriend, and... Oh, this is wonderful. A new take on an old story, and I love it. Keep at it, please!
That was a horrible cliffhanger. Great, but terrible to your readers! So cruel.
~Juli
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful review.