Wow! It was nice. I wouldn't say I was rolling with laughter after I read your story, but there definitely was a pleasant smile on my face. I was going to leave without leaving a review if I hadn't seen some of your negative reviews. I agree with you on that- if you cannot say something constructive, don't bother at all. What problem I think people have with your fic is that it is short, and when you seem to start making an impression on the reader's mind, the story is already over. I understand that this is a missing scene from POA and so you cannot extend it further, your best shot would be to maybe show a few scenes before this- something about Percy do something really irritating or something.. Then your story, I feel, would have a more lasting impression on the reader. All in all, I would say I really like your work- your humour isn't something for which we need to leave our brains behind; we can take them along and enjoy some intelligent laughter, small maybe, but intelligent. :)

oooh!!! amazing chapter as always!!! How do you write so beautifully??? Please tell me.. And then what happened??? You seriously caught me off-guard with the fight and 'i hate you's.. and plz plz plz update soon.. i beg of you.. i can't bear the suspense.. anyway, how many chapters left in the fic.. i think you are wrapping it up now.. Well, this is the first story i ever read on MNFF and i am in love with it.. i think i'll be really sad when it finally ends but i have wanted to know how it ends, since 2 years!! this is my most fav harry potter fan fiction and right now, i so wanna know what happens next.. Please do update soon.. ;) =) =) =) =)

one word- cute!

Hey!!
well. even i was thinking of the titanic sceane when i read that. A good chapter though i thought i'll see more of the ball in it. Hopefully, you'll the next chapter sooner and finally see what happens! we've been waiting so long!! so. pleeeaaassse update soon!! one more thing is that you've copied that "merlin's pants" joke directly out of DH so it really didn't feel right or funny.. Anyway, a well written chapter and i'm dying to know what happens next!!! =) do update soon!


Author's Response: I thought I would actually write in some of the ball scenes, but the chapter was getting to be too long, so I decided to just write one whole chapter based on that night, so hold on tight for the next one! Oh, really!? I honestly didn\'t know that merlin\'s pants was in DH...it probably got stuck in my head somehow without me knowing how and where I got it from - oh well..! Anyway, really glad you enjoyed the chapter overall...! Thank you so much for your review!

cute!!!!! plz update soon!
witch6

Author's Response: I will don\'t worry *smiles*

Both your stories, ‘3 A.M. Confessions’ and ‘5 A. M. Revelations’ have been more about character interaction than actions. In such a case it is obvious that you’ll have more of dialogue. But I have found it difficult to follow it in your stories. I think you should use more tags to explain who is saying what. In some place one of the characters has said something, and then you added a tag. After that you have continued the same character’s dialogue in a new line. I think it would be easier for the reader to understand if you continued the dialogue on the same line after the tag.

I think one of the strongest points in your writing is your characterisations. I have found that in both ‘3 A.M. Confessions’ and ‘5 A. M. Revelations’. In this story the interaction between Harry and Ginny was very natural and flew without any struggle. It is very rare for authors to make their characters converse believably and you do a very good job with that.

This story is a sweet and interesting one-shot. You knew how you wanted to go about our story and it shows plainly in your writing. You are a good author and I would love to read more of your fiction.

:)

hey!!
ur story is really funny unlike many others which i have tried in the humour section.. newayz keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Double posts... the bane of Voldemort\'s existence.

hey! amazing chapter and quite surprising actually! really liked d filch and R.A.B. idea. and u r planning to write a sequel??!!?? that would be gr8!!
newayz lemme say it once more, hilarious fic!

witch6

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I do indeed plan on sequeling. The Filch idea was my favourite part of the chapter, so I\'m glad you liked it, too!

You have given a very interesting account of how the Chamber of Secrets was founded. Although it is accurate according to cannon, I think it is still interesting. All the four founders seemed very much n character. Gryffindor was brave, impatient, and impulsive. Ravenclaw was intelligent, wise and didn't hurry into decisions. Helga was motherly, helpful and forgiving. Even though Salzar seemed to be in character, I would have liked to see more emphasis on him and his thoughts. Your main focus was understandably on Godric, but an example of what you called Salzar's 'ambition' would have been good to see.

What bothered me in your story is some of the expressions and phrases you used. Expressions like ‘Bollocks’ and ‘Bloody hell’ sound completely out of place. I know you can’t possibly use the language used at that time, but such blatant use of Americanisms can be avoided.

All in all I would say your story is very interesting and a good read. Your descriptions and narrations are good and I will look forward to reading more stories of yours.

:)

Hey! cute story! i hope u'll update soon!