I am a 29 year-old college professor at a little university in the South. This semester, however, in addition to my usual freshman English classes, I'm teaching two sections on the Harry Potter series as literature. Seriously! Unfortunately, I spend a lot of the the time I'm supposed to be grading papers reading fanfic instead, and I've been writing it for about five years now. In fact, my chaptered fic, "Of Christmas Past," was the first story I wrote and it's still not finished...I'll finish eventually though, I promise! It was on hiatus for a while, but I've started it up again, so it might actually be finished this year.
"Of Christmas Past" was also nominated for the Best Cannon Romance Quicksilver Quill Award for 2009! I'm so excited! I mean, there are over three thousand stories in Romance, and at least fifteen hundred of those are cannon! And I was nominated twice! I don't even mind if I don't win, just to be nominated was an honor. Anyway, good luck to everyone else who was nominated!
Speaking of "Of Christmas Past," I'm very very sorry that it's taking me so long to update it. I keep having problems, and then encountering massive writer's block. But I will finish it eventually, even if it takes me five years. Hopefully it won't, but I won't abandon the story.
If you want to read these in chronological order, they are as follows:
1. "Langlock" - set during James and Lily's time
2. "Chasing Away the Dark" - Ginny's POV during the middle of OotP
3. " Among the Ranks of Heroes" - set right after Sirius' death in OotP
4. "Comforter and Comforted" - set a few days after Sirius' death in OotP
5. "The Monster ON Harry's Chest" - set in the middle of HBP
6. "Twice Lost" - set near the end of HBP
7. "Of Christmas Past" - originally set directly after HBP, but became Alternate Universe after DH came out. So, it's set during DH, but isn't totally cannon, since a few major details changed in DH.
8. "The Queen of May" - technically set during DH, but is mostly a flashback to Snape's childhood.
9. "Falling into Darkness" - set during DH
10. "The Tree by the Lake" - technically set right after the Battle of Hogwarts in DH, but is mostly flashbacks.
Oh, FANTASTIC! A wonderful job, spot on characterization, and hilariously funny to boot. I especially loved the last part about exactly what kind of kiss it was. And you write very well, gramatically and stuff, by the way.
Very well written overall, and I think you captured the characters well too. Very sweet, and I recognized the Love Actually quote! And yes, it is the best Christmas movie ever.
Sweetness!
Author's Response: It is! It\'s just some simple light fun, slightly fluffy, plot. Thanks!
This was a very well written and enjoyable story. Both moments seem very appropriate for Snape's life, particularly his memory about his father.
I particularly liked the contrast that you set up between Snape and Lucius. You didn't make Snape ugly or anything, but he definitely appears inferior to his friend. However, as we all know, looks can be deceiving. Young Snape proves that when he hexes his father.
Note: Even though Snape drank a glass of wine, he could just be against drinking Firewisky, since it's what his father drank. Wine is different...and I just can't see him indulging in beer, ever. So, it's still quite believable.
All together excellent.
Lovely! I wish it were longer, but I really liked what you did with it! I especially liked when Remus confesses how scared he was about losing her. Reminded me of Harry and Ginny...imagine that.
Some people spend a lifetime searching for someone they can love with all their heart. Sirius and Cami found love and wait only for that special kiss...and a moment like this.
I really liked this one-shot; Sirius deserves a little happiness! And it was rather amusing that he was afraid he'd "lost it," though believable at the same time. I can see him being a bit insecure about it, especially with someone he loved.
Just one thing, this story's in the Remus/Tonks category. You might want to move it...
Author's Response: Thank you, and I\'ve been conflicted about what category to place the Cami/Sirius one shots, because they\'re inspired by the Remus/Tonks series. When I thought you could put your stories in more than one after they were approved, I put OP and R/T, but sadly, you can only have one now.
Ooooh, wonderfully chilling! I really like that you started out with Borgin and Lucius and then flashback to Quentin and May. It was a little confusing at first, but it made the ending even more sinister. Your writing is very good too. I especially liked the way you did the interior dialogue that May had with herself and the ring and made it seem like it was her own thoughts. Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I\'m really glad you liked it. I\'ve had quite a few people mention that the flashback is confusing, but I can\'t really see any other way to do it other than write \'flashback\' in big letters... which would kind of ruin the effect lol!
Thanks very much for the review!
Fantastic! Well written and quite funny.
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you thought it was funny. Did you catch the \"Sorcerer\'s Apprentice\" in here?
Sweetness! And excellent writing too.
Wow. That was really, really good. Painful and sad, but really good. You made me cry! And I think it was very fitting. I was happy he got to die with family around him.
Your writing is good, and I think your characterization of Ron, Hermione, and Harry was well done. Then again, I like all your writing. The children were well done too, and I liked that Harry's son was named Tom. Nice touch.
Wow. That was really, really good. Painful and sad, but really good. You made me cry! And I think it was very fitting. I was happy he got to die with family around him.
Your writing is good, and I think your characterization of Ron, Hermione, and Harry was well done. Then again, I like all your writing. The children were well done too, and I liked that Harry's son was named Tom. Nice touch.
Author's Response: Thanks. It\'s been a while since anyone\'s mentioned the name of Harry\'s son. Sicne we see a little bit more of him in Part III of Epilogues, I wonder how many more people are going to comment on that. Anyway, thank you so much.
Within the Marauder band of Merry Men, Sirius is the dashing Will Scarlet. Seventh year, his goal is not to rob the rich, but to help poor Robin woo Maid Lily, avoid sermons from Friar Moony, aid a rat in need, and win the love of a fair lady.
Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance- Non Canon.
*Chapter 30 is 'To Be Loved'*
I'm torn! I don't know if I want you to finish or to just keep going and going and going...It's fantastic!
Author's Response: Aw, that\'s such a compliment. I\'m going to sit here and appreciate it. Thanks! ^_^
Oh, it was lovely! I can't wait for you to update! I love how you combined Hermione and Draco in Medea. Wonderful! And very well written. Can't wait to read more of your stuff.
Cuteness! Sweetness! And I liked the little touches of Ron and Hermione in there too. Very characteristic of all of them. And it meshed well with J.K.'s sections. You write well too. Good job!
Cuteness! Sweetness! And I liked the little touches of Ron and Hermione in there too. Very characteristic of all of them. And it meshed well with J.K.'s sections. You write well too. Good job!
Gillian lives on Magnolia Crescent. She is a Muggle, but not the kind generally accepted by the majority of Muggles. Gillian finds herself wishing daily that there was more to the world in which she lives. Something more fantastic and wondrous, as she sometimes believes there is. As circumstances would have it, she meets Harry Potter, that strange boy who's nothing but trouble. It's rumored he spends the school year at St. Brutus' Institute for Incurably Criminal Boys. At first she's terrified of him, but even lies that conceal one of the world's greatest secrets can't keep at bay her curiosity and longing for something greater. A bond is formed between her and Harry that not all the magic in the world can conceal. And as more about the world is revealed, the question arises: is she a Muggle or Squib?
Aw, poor Gillian. I don't think it's weird that she read Beauty and the Beast as a little kid; I did! Though the Polkisses do seem a bit like the Dursleys in that any little thing that's the least bit odd is bad. Ah well. Good start!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I don\'t think it\'s weird either...Gillian just didn\'t get adopted into the right family for her.
I hope you keep reading!
Excellent! Ted's a wizard! That was a nice little twist you threw in there. I look forward to reading the rest!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it! Please do keep reading!
Wow. Just...wow. An EXCELLENT little one-shot. I really like the way you juxtapose everything, and I even like all the run-ons! And I'm an English major, so that's saying something! I think you wrote it very well, especially considering that it was entirely Regulus thinking and feeling and so on. Fantastic!
Excellent! I think you caught Romilda's character perfectly, and it was interesting to hear the story from her point of view. I wonder if anyone's done something with Dean's...Good job! And well written, too!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Actually, I have seen one with Dean\'s POV. At the time that I wrote this, I had not seen one on Romilda\'s.
Excellent! I think you caught Romilda's character perfectly, and it was interesting to hear the story from her point of view. I wonder if anyone's done something with Dean's...Good job! And well written, too!