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12/23/06

Hi. I love to write fan fics and J.K. Rowling is my hero!

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The Confessions of Lord Voldemort by Master Wolf

Rated: •
Summary: A look at how Voldemort really feels.

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/26/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Further Confessions

Is the level 85 thing makeing fun of World of Warcraft or Runescape? It's a great joke.

Dursley Gets Drilled by MsTattersall

Rated: •
Summary: Uncle Vernon has a bad toothache, and the only dentist who can see him on a Saturday is a Dr. Granger. What he doesn't know is gonna hurt him. Open wide!

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: (Short Story)

lol, that was great.

Loathing or Love? by Miss Radcliffe

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans loathes James Potter. She loathes him with a passion everyone in Hogwarts knows about. But during her 7th year, Lily begins to ask herself, is it loathing, or is it something else? Read as feelings and the lives of Lily, James, and their friends unfold.

SEE NOTE ON AUTHOR'S BIO REGARDING THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 5: Full Moon

i no this is last chapter, but they dont actually swim in the lake. That's where the toilets empty out, but i can definately see Sirius doing something like that.

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 6: Hogsmeade Weekend

i no im being a harsh critic, but that seems a bit too, romantic for Sirius.
Four point five stars

Author's Response: I understand. I\'m just trying to show that Sirius feels Alexis is somehow different from the other girls he\'s dated. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 7: Confrontations

I love lily as a charactor, but i think its a bit strange that her two best friends end up with James's two best friends. Sounds a little novie like if you ask me

Author's Response: Yes, and I realized that after I started writing this story over a year ago. When I write another J/L, it won\'t happen. But the plot for this one is already posted and in motion.

Author's Response: Yes, and I realized that after I started writing this story over a year ago. When I write another J/L, it won\'t happen. But the plot for this one is already posted and in motion.

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 8: A Threat and an Announcement

favorite chapter so far.

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 9: Gryffindor Vs. Slytherin

New Favorite Chapter
PS Will you beta my Lily+James fan fic

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 9: Gryffindor Vs. Slytherin

New Favorite Chapter
PS Will you beta my Lily+James fan fic

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it. This was the first time I wrote the commentary for a Quidditch match and that can be quite difficult. Now the betaing: I will beta but you must understand that I have an extremely busy schedule. The longest I\'ll have a chapter that is sent to me is a week. I do not beta stories that are not in paragraph format. They must be as ready as possible for submission. As a beta, I just make suggestions and tweak things. If this is alright with you, I\'ll gladly beta your story. Use my contact option on my author info page and I\'ll e-mail you. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 10: Truth or Dare, Wizard Style

Perfect
In spanish: Perfecto
In french: Sir Manufigue! or somethin like that.

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, and if French, it\'s parfait! Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 11: Aftermath

Sirius is a little off charactor, he's definatly not as romantic, but 5 stars

Author's Response: I\'m stille having trouble building up Sirius\' character. The character Alexis is based on someone I know particularly well and I\'m trying to match them up to perfection. I think I\'ll sit down this week and really work on Sirius\' character. Thanks! Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 15: The Holiday Dance Part II

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: I\'ll submit chapter 16 tomorrow when the queue reopens. Miss Radcliffe~

Luna Lovegood by loverofluna

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A short poem about Luna Lovegood! Please R&R! It would mean a ton to me!!!

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Short poem

That's our Luna!

Lily Evans, This Is Her Life by AbnormallyAbnormal

Rated: •
Summary: A typical LilyJames story, but with few twists. Lily is a Marauder and is best friends with James. If you are looking for pink hair-dye, Truth or Dare and revenge on evil Slytherins, then this is the story for you!

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/24/07 Title: Chapter 3: Walks and Talks

u have a realy evil mind to leave off at this part, do you know that?

'Yes' by nat089

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James Potter usually accepts dares without batting an eyelash. However, this time, while he’s on a dare, he's also on a personal mission. But first, he’s anxiously waiting for Lily to turn up. What does Lily have to do with this dare? And what will she say when she finds out?

(One shot)

[Author's Note]
Before you start commenting that the dare was unromantic, please please read the 2nd sentence of the 4th paragraph. I clearly state that "James was steeling himself to do SOMETHING HE WANTED TO DO VERY MUCH EVEN WITHOUT BEING DARED TO". In other words, the dare was the catalyst, not the cause. It only served to spur him into action; it didn't give him the intention of doing what he did (I'm trying not to give out spoilers here, so read to find out what - though you can probably guess ;)).

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: 'Yes'

aww. that's one of the best ive read on this site, but i can't believe sirius dared him! that part was wrong, it should've been on his own accord.

Siriusly Me by Hallie Black

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: The story of the wonderful life of Sirius Black told by the one and only, Sirius Black!

CHAPTER 5 SUBMITTED!

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/21/07 Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts Number One Hottie? Again?

I vote for James!

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/21/07 Title: Chapter 5: Hogwarts - Year One

ur soo mean to Sirius! even though Prongs is like a million times hotter, he doesn't deserve that!

Unwritten by MeiQueen

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:
Lily Evans is just beginning her 7th Year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She is the Head Girl alongside James Potter. This story isn't far-fetchedly love/hate. This story is NOT Mary Sue. This story follows the canon to the best of the author's ability. Don't believe me? Find out for yourself.

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/14/07 Title: Chapter 3: Memories

Only James would compliment a girl with, "Nice arse, Evans."

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Rated: •
Summary:

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/26/07 Title: None

... so true... I love the twins.
100%

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! =)

A Hare-y Little Problem by spunkymuzicnote

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry has an opportunity to view a Pensieve memory of his parents—When Lily overhears James commenting on Remus’s “furry little problem” the Marauders must do some fast talking to get themselves out of a sticky situation.

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/14/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

so did you pull that story out a hat or what?
im just f ing kidding!

You Make My Heart Surrender by cutiepoet

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: He has the slimmest chance in the world, yet he keeps pushing for a relationship with her. Will she finally just give him a chance, or will he give up before she even glances in his direction? R/R!

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins Signed
Date: 01/26/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Deal

not to be annoying, but straight A's should be straight O's for Outstanding. I think that Remus and Sirius should switch places in this chap.
4 stars out of 5

Author's Response: OK but i don\'t know what you mean by switching places. thanx, anyway!

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