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04/26/07

A Black Rose and a White Lily
Update on August 9, '12- I have yet to start writing the fifth chapter. So that'll take some time. Okay, so, let's just admit this fic has been abandoned for now.

A Silent Change
Update on August 9 '12 - Chapter 4 was apparently with my betas. Chapters 5 and 6 were all written but I don't have any of these now. So, again, fic has been abandoned for now.

Eventual Embrace
Update on August 9, '12- A sequel to my other James/Lily one shot: Beneath the Shell. A follow up one shot will be coming whenever. Okay, probably never.

I haven't written Harry Potter fanfiction in an age. I highly doubt I'll be writing any more any time soon and continuing these which I wrote forever ago? Don't think that's happening. Enjoy the one shots though. :)

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From Inside the Wardrobe by anath

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Sirius Black comes back to his flat to look for a forgotten object and witnesses the most traumatic event in his life: Lily Evans' bridal shower! Oh, did I mention that he witnesses it from inside the wardrobe?

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg! i can't stop lauging. hehe. nice! =)

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you find the story amusing.

The Last Black With Her Sanity Intact by cassie123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Andromeda Tonks thought she had finally got her favourite cousin back.
So when he is taken from her once again by the person she least expects, it is enough to break her.

Post-OoTP one-shot.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Black With Her Sanity Intact

i just loved it!

Author's Response: I\'m glad.

Always In Red by Weasleyboyfreak

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: We all know that growing up isn't as easy as it always seems. Well, what happens when you mix that with a twisted love life, an overzealous mother, and a group of Marauding boys? That's right, chaos! Follow Roseanna Marie Parker in her adventure in her sixth year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and how she learn more about herself and the world around her. Rio Parker is no average girl, struggling with her strict mother and her urge to rebel. It is bound to be an eventful year at Hogwarts with the four Marauders and their accomplices!

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Skirts, Manners, and A Night Out With the Boys

Lovely chapter! I can't believe that I never got a chance to read it until now.

Ah... Rio's so damned lucky. :p Mes wantings tos spends somes times withs Sirius toos! *begs* lol. Sorry. *blushes*

Oh, and I don't know how I forgot to mention this in the previous review, but I'll say it now. I love Lummer! He's so sweet. I read all the drabbles you wrote in the birthday challenge thing in the Common room. Lummer was always so sweet! *hugs Lummer* But, you better not make James wait for long.

Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter. =)

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/16/08 Title: Chapter 1: They Call Me Parker

It's wonderful! Sirius-ly. =D I have to point out some typos though. =)

From the Story Notes. lol. Yeah, I read those carefully too. =p
I would also like to thank my friends, Jen and Jess, for supporting me through his writing process! My story would

not be the same if you three hadn't helped me!
I'm assuming that it's supposed to be 'this'.

Now, from the chapter.
“Bye, Mum;, and yes, I will write you,”
Two punctuation marks? Maybe you can delete any one of them?

The next thing the brunette knew, she as forced into the red cushioned seats of the Hogwarts Express.
Was, is it?

The brunette chirped a short ’goodbye’ before she was forced around the corner.
Check out the inverted comma's, the first one i.e.

“Well…erm…they looked at me like I was a raging Flubberworm,”
It's misspelled, it should be Flobberworm.

No, the name Rio suits you well, but now we just have to get the boys to stop calling you ’Parker’
The same inverted comma thing.

Maybe it would benefit her future and possible love life to let some of her mother’s ’Roseanna’ kick in
Same here.

Okay, so there was a lot of stuff which I had written, but thanks to this absolutely fantastic net connection ^o) the whole thing got lost.=@ It's five thirty in the morning here and I just can't write everything all over again. But, I had to leave a review 'cause this seems as a fantastic story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. =)

And You Were There by Mem_Marie

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: You’re here. Of course you’re here. No matter what I do, no matter what I say, you are there. Always.

Because there comes a time when we look over our shoulder and - whether we want it or expect it - see the one that will never leave.

[James x Lily]

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very sweet.

One error though:

I look at you and I take in your smart suit that is so completely muggle I am a bit shocked, as well the fact that it looks like you tried to tame your hair.

The 'Muggle' should have a capital M. Otherwise, it was perfect!

A Different Kind of Love by Nymphea

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James gives Lily a letter on the last day of sixth year:
I’m going to be perfectly honest with you—I’m not that good with feelings. I usually just ask Remus; he’s pretty good with that sort of thing. But I can’t ask Remus to write this letter for me, so you’re just going to have to bear with me while I set the record straight before the school year ends and I forget how to describe my feelings about things between us. [2000 reads! thanks guys!]

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Different Kind of Love

Wow. That was amazing! Great Job!

Author's Response: thanks!

Pride and Pre-Juiced Plums: A Potter's Pentagon Love Story by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A companion piece to the Potter's Pentagon trilogy... it's better if you've read the Potter's Pentagon trilogy, but you don't necessarily have to.

It's five years after Emma Weasley and her chums graduated from Hogwarts. Ted and Ivy are married, Haley is working at Madame Puddifoot's while trying desperately to break into show business, Jordan's doing whatever it is he does, and Emma is an Auror trainee working as a guard at the Chudley Cannons' stadium. The Cannons have actually been doing much better lately, due to their new star Beater, Tyrone Thomas. Unfortunately, Tyrone is Emma's ex-boyfriend. OH, THE AWKWARDNESS.

Follow Emma through her awkward adventures told in her usual insane way, as she experiences angst, hilarity, obnoxiously strange people, misadventures involving a deceptively dashing cad, Haley's wedding, the birth of Ted and Ivy's baby, and her own eventual descent into LURRRVE.

Written for the marvellous Vindictus Viridian's Pride and Prejudice NEWTs class on the Fanfiction Beta Boards, based on Jane Austen's fantastic novel, "Pride and Prejudice.".

Nominated in the 2008 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Non-Canon Romance Story! And its lovely (haha) heroine, Emma Weasley, received two nominations for Best Female Original Character, while Haley Potter and Ivy Potter each received one! Thanks so much, guys!

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Me, Me, and Also Meeee

It's absolutely lovely, and flawless. :D One gotta love Emma.

Author's Response: Afifa! I saw your lovely comments on my thread on the forums. I\'m really glad you like this story so far and that you like Emma so far!

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Abandoning Pregnant Wives-- A Fun Lupin Family Tradition

Hillarious! I loved the chapter title, it made me LOL. =D

Emma was sorta mean with Ivy... it's not always a good thing to speak out loud what you think. I feel sorry for Ivy though.

I loved the whole part. The Patrick scene, the dance part, and especially the summary. It made me laugh like crazy. My mum came up to me to ask whether I was okay or not. Lol.

Oh, and I looove long chapters, and had a lot of fun reading this one. =]

Author's Response: Thank you so miuch! Yeah, I had to use that title, even though I disregarded DH for everything else... Emma was so mean, and I felt terrible writing it. She does a lot of jerk things. I guess if she didn't put her foot in her mouth every two seconds, she wouldn't be Emma, but still, EESH! Have you ever heard the song "Just The Girl?" The one that starts "She's cold and she's cruel but she knows what she's doin'" or whatever? Because that song always makes me think of Tyrone singing about Emma. I'm so glad you liked this... Chapter Six was rejected, so it may be awhile before this story's updated, but I'll try to fix it!

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 08/15/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: He Followed Me Home, But I Don't Want To Keep Him

Wow! Another fantastic chapter! =D

“Don’t worry,” chirped Haley, as though reading my mind. “Wolfgang’s adorable, but he’s not my type. He looks like a girl. I like a man who looks more like one.”

I stared her. “Haley, you don’t have a ‘type.’ You like everything with a y-chromosome.”

LOL. This made me laugh so hard, I had to clasp my hand on my mouth! LOl.

“What about that vampire that tried to kill me in the alleyway last year?”

“HE WAS SPARKLY!”

“No, that was your diseased imagination, Haley. Bloodstained, maybe.”

“HE WAS SPARKLY!”

Do I catch a Twilight reference here? =p I still haven't read it though. =O

Still, it’s an undeniable fact that he’s carrying on the proud tradition of socially inept Potter boys.

Poor James, he'd be so disappointed, yeah?

I wonder if Tyrone remembered that his pets were, in fact, toads.

I wondered that too. I mean, really! You don't go on about water temperature and all about toads! =O

Oh, and the summary was absolutely hilarious! =D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The funny thing is, I know so many people like Haley, who really do like random boys simply because they're boys and no other reason. That was definitely a Twilight reference-- I strongly dislike Twilight, so I sometimes like to make fun of it, beause my friends and my sister are so obsessed. James might be disappointed with Jordan, but Jonathan (while a bit dreamy and out of it) certainly gets into a sufficient amount of trouble to make James proud!

One reason why I made Tyrone so obsessed with taking care of his toads is because it's part of indirectly showing that he's a really affectionate person! Because later, we see how well he takes care of his sister, but I just wanted to play up that aspect of his character.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/21/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Werewolves And Wolfgangs Of London

LOL. P&P's summary was hilarious! I love Mr. Darcy though, but it's okay. You can make him as bad as you like. As Emma likes, I mean. lol.
I love this, I sirius-ly do.
I feel cool that I know the outline of the story =p lol.
Oh, and I loved the term, 'facial topography'. LOL. I will use it!! =D lol.
Talk about hyper. Sorry.
Anyways, I LOVED the chapter, =D
You're awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I actually like Mr. Darcy, too. But Emma has to think he\'s a jerk at the beginning of reading the book because she\'s essentially Elizabath. ^_^ I\'m so happy that you liked this!

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/16/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Cute Is What We Aim To Avoid

omg, Schmergo! It was absolutely fantastic! I loved all the analogies, and everything. I can't go into the details at the moment (it's around four in the morning here! :eek:), but I wanted to drop a review congratulating you for having such a fantabulous story up. =D I promise you that I'll read all your fics as soon as I get over with my exams. I might even start reading them earlier. lol. Can't stay away from this site for long. lol. Try to update asap. =)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! It\'s great to have new readers! I\'ll try and read your stories, too!

Of Blood, Gore, and Alibis by lullaby BANG

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: It’s coming, believe it or not. The Ministry doesn’t believe it, but who will then? It’s infuriating to know you’re invisible to society, but then there’s something exhilarating, entrancing about it. It’s dancing the devilish dance: provocative, teasing- leaving the viewers wanting more, or better yet, it’s like having an addiction.

An addiction with a purpose to be more precise… oh, and the occasional bite. Who are we then? We’re the out casted of the outcasts within a secluded society that further alienates us and leaves us utterly alone, but we’ve finally found each other so we’re not as alone. Things can change in an instance, though, and they already have. I have to confess: I’m scared, but I’ve already started to dance so I must keep dancing.

And besides, I don’t want the vampire or werewolf communities seizing control of the Ministry because I’ve already seen what they’ve done.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 05/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Angels, Monsters, and Redemption

omg! He's a vampire! That is so cool. =D I loved this chapter. In fact, I liked it even better than the previous one. I'm adding it to my favourites. =)

Author's Response: OHMY! He is!! -squeal- And a damn sexy one at that.xD Thanks for the review Afifa.(: I\'m glad you adored this chapter; they\'re only going to get bettter. ;D

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: I'm All Dressed Up and Ready to Play

Ah, lovely start, Jess. =)
The summary was very well written, very interesting. It perked my attention. Same with the chapter. What I liked was your description of Dacia. You pictured her as one with scars and all. She isn't supposed to be having breath taking beauty as several other fics have. Of course, she's a werewolf, so she has all those scratches, but that's revealed later. Anyways, all in all, it was a wonderful start, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. =)

Author's Response: All of these compliments about my summary are drowning me in happiness, ha. (: Wewt.:* Yay for scars, hah. As you already mentioned, we\'ve got two weeks for the next chapter.xD haha. Thanks Afifa, another review that made me smile.(:

These Lives We Live by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: These lives we live are not bright...

Petunia wishes she were a star.

These lives we live are not worth memory...

Peter wishes to be like his friends.

The lives we live are just tiles.

Regulus wishes he were alive.

Every life means something.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 05/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Our Lives

Oh my goodness, Mia! This is fantastic! So sweet, and real and emotional (a bit?). I loved it.

Author's Response: Lol, thanks Afifa! I\'m really glad you liked it.

I Am Nothing by lullaby BANG

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: But werewolves turn into vampires after death, after all, monsters are monsters, and inversely, hybrids can be formed, and this is the result. It cannot be described in a conventional manner for it shouldn’t be described in such vulgar terms, but he is here now- forever. Casted aside from the Wizarding world, he is stuck in a fluctuating state of uncertainty, but he’s ready to declare himself- to you.

*Written for Schmergo's Silly Summaries

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: I Am Nothing

I've got no words. Sirius-ly. This one shot blew me away. It was so very well written. Great job, Je$$! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you Afifa! :D I\'m glad you enjoyed it.

Who Am I? by mudbloodproud

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

What happens when you find out your whole life has been a lie? How do you react when the people you trusted, believed in confess to hiding a secret that changes everything you believed about yourself?

Hermione Granger is about to face that situation.

The war is over and life should be simple. She should be planning her future with the man she has loved since she was 11. But now, she doesn’t know who she really is. As she struggles with the grief of lost friends, she also deals with the grief of the loss of everything she believed about herself. Can she open her heart enough to let Ron help her deal with this, or will this secret drive them apart?

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/19/08 Title: Chapter 3: A Long Held Secret

Woah, Terri. Talk about being shocked. =O I had thought that one of the Marauders would have been the father, because of one of the lines in which you've said about Snape hating her father. But then, you had written about Dumbledore meeting the person, and I thought that it could not possibly be any of the four. =/

Anyways, it was a great chapter! Sirius-ly. =)

Author's Response: When I wrote the line about Snape hating her father, I thought for sure I\'d given away the \'secret\'. I\'m glad the part with Dumbledore going to talk to her parents balanced out the mystery. Now that the secret is out, the fun will begin. Thanks for your review. I\'m glad you liked this chapter. Terri

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I could only find one typo:

“We have to tell her. Now, before she finds out on her own, before she reverses the Memory Charm on her parents!” Professor McGonagall spoke to a portraits hanging behind the headmistress’s desk.

It should be 'portrait'.

He would not have been able to get over his hatred of her father.

This has got me thinking, not that I need to seeing that the next chapter is already up. :p

Great starting! *goes to read next chapter*

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I will fix the typo. Thanks for pointing it out. Terri

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: The Letter

This is not fair, Terri! I thought that you were going to reveal Hermione's real parents in this chapter! *humph*

/tantrums

Lol. I loved this chapter. And I hate your 'strengths' of ending stories with cliffies. Jokin' jokin'. Don't take it sirius-ly, hmm?

Anyways, the story. It was very well written, especially the whole of Harry's speech to Snape.

And, I'm adding this to the favourites! =D

Best of luck for the future chapters, and be sure that I'll read and review every one of them. :p

Author's Response: I am honored to have my story added to your favorites. Thank you. I will be submitting the next chapter to the queue within a day or two. The following chapter is already with the betas. Thanks again for your thoughts. Terri

The Noble and Most Ancient House of ... Nevermind. by TCole

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Sirius Black was the complete opposite of every member of the Black family, save for Andromeda. What made him become this way?

He thought his brother, Regulus, was a complete git, and he disliked him even more when he became a Death Eater at the age of sixteen. How did Sirius feel about him while the two were growing up? Were they close, or did they never get along?

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Still Going Through

Wow, Tiff! That was amazing. Sirius-ly. It's no hidden fact that I love Sirius, so that added of course. But I really did liked this chapter. And, no, don't you dare abandon this fic. Continue it, yeah? Lovely job! =)

The Last Reminisces of a Single Man by mudbloodproud

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It is the morning of Bill Weasley’s wedding to Fleur Delacour. In the early morning silence of the Burrow,

Bill looks back over his life and the recent events that brought him to this new chapter in his life.

Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Lovely starting, Terri!

I like how you bring in all the Weasley kids one by one, and even Harry in the end.

You've kept the fact that Bill was a Head Boy in your mind, and made studies go easy on him. Very good!

Over all, it was nice! =)

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well. I will be resubmitting chapter 1 soon. Terri

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