06/12/07
Why, hello! I'm Brittany: indecisive, sarcastic, loving and loyal. I'm a proud Gryffindor but SPEW is my home.
I love reading, writing, talking, listening, loving, horses, piano, guitar, swimming, thinking and cooking. I'm a sociable creature, though I am fairly sensitive. I live in New York where it snows piles in the winter and the sun shines brightly in the summer.
I am greatly influenced by music and I mostly listen to alternative and rock. =) I like a wide range or artists and would be happy to discuss music with you any time. My favorite shows are House, Skins, Gossip Girl and Greek. Though I've been known to channel surf.
I want to direct film when I grow up and writing screen plays is also something I'd like to dabble in. I've always wanted to be an author or perhaps and English teacher. Well, who's to say. Now I'm just rambling about things I'd like to do.
My favorite characters are the Marauders, Regulus Black and Lily Evans. I'm quite fond of all my OCs too.
Right now, I'm working on a Regulus/OC (her name is Reed =D) and I want to have the first chapter up within the month. It is not yet titled.
I'm also working on a Sirius/Lily which... actually isn't a S/L but you'll have to sit tight until it's up. ;) This also lacks a title. XD
So, read and enjoy!
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Fan Girl by Evilpersonified
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Severus Snape has taken a teaching job at Hogwarts, and he intends to teach, not act as a confindent for silly little students, thank you very much. But while he tries to keep himself as isolated as possible, there is one particular student who can't help but fall for the grumpy potions' master.
Date: 04/30/08 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
Admittedly, the thought alone is disturbing. At various points I cringed, wondering how Tonks could fall for the cruel and cynical Professor Snape, kudos to you for making it work. I found Tonks to be very awkward and that’s what made it so believable. The incorporation of the lyrics was fantastic. I think the song went along well with this one-shot and gave it an extra push.
“What did you do to your hair?” he asked in an equally crotchety voice, the smallest hint of curiosity lacing his tone. Her blush darkened, but she maintained eye contact.
Those lines were highly convincing. I found myself being sucked in, reluctant as I was. Your description is quite fair too. You could have been bland and just written the minimum to get by, but you can tell that there was an effort to make this more enjoyable and interesting. I think that description truly pushes a story along and I also think you’ve done a fine job of accomplishing that.
“Because I know you are merely trying to torture me in the way your cousin, Sirius Black, the murdering scum, would have wanted you to. Now leave me alone,” he barked, glaring at her.
Now, this is just brilliant. I think you have portrayed Snape wonderfully. He’s so gloomy and hateful; it’s just exciting to see an author write him spot on.
“Severus, I understand that you wish me to return the bracelet, but why in the name of Merlin do you have it in your pocket five days after the incident? Does she not take your NEWTs class?”
This is the line where I became hysterical. I wasn’t sure if I should be disgusted or burst into laughter. I became so immersed in the story, taking everything in. I also like his reaction when Professor Sprout confronts him and explains to Snape about Tonks. He is in such utter disbelief. It’s amazing how cold he can be, I think it was all rather swell. Clearly, Snape had no idea how he should handle the situation, who doesn’t love to see Snape clueless?
Snape said in a deadly whisper, his black eyes scanning the room.
I can just picture that so clearly. I swear, this should be under humour, not other pairings. XD
“You think I hate you and want to torture you? No, actually, you’re the most attractive person I have ever met, and you insist on torturing me!”
I found this line to be a little too melodramatic for Tonks. I picture her stumbling over her words, running out and tripping over something.
He lent forward and kissed her roughly on the lips. She almost collapsed into him, her hands gripping the front of his robes as he stole her mouth with his own. He broke the kiss, looking scornfully down at her. “Is that what you wanted? Get out of my sight this instant, you little whore” he ordered. She took a step away from him, her retort caught in her throat. “And if you tell anyone, you will lose more than just house points.”
However, when it came to those lines, I just felt my heart crumple for poor Tonks. Severus was harsh and handled the situation in an incorrect manner, in my opinion. But I congratulate you for keeping him perfectly in character throughout this one-shot.
There were a few grammatical errors, nothing too serious. Overall, I think this flowed nicely and you kept the momentum going. You certainly kept me on edge, wondering what in Godric’s name was going to happen.
Fabulous job!
Brittany
Friendship, Love, and Pranks: The Story of the Marauders by Padfoot is MINE
Rated: Professors •Summary: Chapter Thirty-Eight in Queue!
They say someday your life will flash before your eyes...
The Marauders. The name alone strikes fear into the hearts of teachers and makes girls swoon. Watch as Sirius, who has always kept his emotions locked up in a box, finally finds the girl that has its key; as James masterminds everything, except how to win over the girl of his dreams; as Remus finds love, but learns it's just as hard to keep it going, and as Peter tries to prove he's just as good as the other four, no matter what he has to do. They're unstoppable, and it's safe to say that once they're gone, Hogwarts will never be the same again.
...let's make ours worth watching.
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 34: Yes (Simple, No?)
=0 I haven't left you a review in a very long time, I promise I'll be back later with an in-depth one, I just don't have time at the moment. You are one of my favorite authors. I love how you portray the Marauders and your OCs are fabulous. I'm so excited to see what happens between Remus and Amber. I feel bad that things aren't working out because I liked them together, but obviously we're sticking to canon here =p. I'm also curious to see what will happen between Sirius and Agie, even Lily and James. You've done a fantastic job so far and I'm sure you'll contunue to do so. It's been a pleasure reading.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I\'m glad you\'re still reading!
Date: 12/05/07 Title: Chapter 32: Confusion, Quidditch, and Cheese Sandwiches
I just re-read the story. It has some cliches but it's different from what I remember. You can tell it's cleaned up. So far I'd have to say this is my favorite Lily/James. Not many authors are consistent, but I'm glad you are.
I'm extremly anxious to read the next chapter! Yayyyy! =)
Author's Response: I\'m very glad you noticed the changes. Yes, there\'s still lots left to do, I\'ve only re-done the first six chapters! Thanks very much! :D
Date: 07/22/07 Title: Chapter 14: Stage 2: Anger (Why Lily and Amnesia Don't Mix)
aha old but maybe you'll read this. I'm pretty sure the drink is called Jaeger Miseter, something along those lines. Anyways, I love the story!!
Author's Response: Yeah, that\'s what it\'s called (except it\'s one word). I\'m surprised how many people know this one. My family is made of alcohol connoisseurs, and I\'ve never heard of it before...
Thanks, I\'m glad you like it!
To the Souls by BeautyInTheBreakdown
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: HHWP challenge submission
Where did Sirius go after he fell through the veil? This story answers some questions you may have had about the mysterious place.
Date: 03/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: Beyond the Veil
Well, Gabby, that was quite a piece of writing. It's not the happiest of endings, though your way is more unique than most so it gives this fic an edge. I have to comment on the beginning. For the most part Sirius was as in character as he could be. But I thought the first paragraphs that included his thoughts flowed a little awkwardly. Honestly, I don't Sirius would have minded taking Bella out. Not just for fun or no cause but they were in a battle and Sirius knows his loyalties. So, in this instance I don't think Sirius would have hesitated if he had been given the chance.
I thought your explanation of the veil was entrancing. Honestly, I've never considered that to be a possibility. You've certainly opened my mind. I’ll admit it was very saddening to think of all those poor souls that are stuck there for the rest of eternity, especially Sirius, but you made it work. Great job, it was a lovely read.
Brittany
Author's Response: Thank you for such a wonderful review :)
Promises, Principles, and Socks by Gmariam
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: James Potter has resolved to get over Lily Evans and move on with life during his seventh year at Hogwarts. An incident after Potions changes all that when their verbal spat in the corridor turns into something more. As Lily struggles with her principles, James tries to win her over once and for all.
Date: 08/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
I enjoy reading your pieces...just thought I'd let you know.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate you not only reading my stories, but leaving a note about them. I\'m glad you liked this one, I just started another J/L story and am finding them very fun to write. Thanks again! ~Gina :)
A Christmas Gift by Hallie Black
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Sometimes, the most simple and unexpected gifts are the ones we appreciate the most.
Date: 06/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: (one-shot)
That was really good. Great writing style!
Date: 08/15/07 Title: None
I loveee your writing. Very very much. It just seems so effortless. You have some amazing writing skills. I really like to read your pieces.
Author's Response: Thank you! This piece was easier to write than some others. I\'m glad it came across as easy and natural; that\'s what I was aiming for. Thanks for the review!
The Pied Piper of the Black Forest by butter_beer_drinker
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. -G. K. Chesterton
Can the hero slay the "dragon" that hunts his little girl and haunts his nightmares?
This is submitted for my final assignment in Professor Talons DADA: An Introduction to Dark Arts class.
I am proudly saluting you with the sword of Godrick Gryffindor.
A small warning, this story terrified me (and my beta) and made me cry. Read it with caution but please read it.
Date: 05/18/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Nightmare that Follows
Kristy! You made me cry again. =( It's so good but it depresses my terribly. *hugs* It just means you are an amazing writer.
Brittany
Author's Response:
I try my hardest love
~Kristy
Sweet Sorrow by lucilla_pauie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Prim-and-proper-and-tough Lily.
She was only shaken once.
Not by James’s romance, nor by Voldemort’s evil antics, but by that little joyous miracle called ‘motherhood’. And in her case, it had nothing to do with erratic hormones and mood swings.LucillaJoanna of Hufflepuff tells in this story how the mother of a destined hero feels, her perplexity of whether To Laugh or Cry.
Not your regular Lily/James story. Originally an entry to the Spring Challenges.
~dedicated to my fab bannermaker friend, Edwina (Wulfric Brian Dumbledore/blacsilver_serpent)
Date: 08/31/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Sorrow
My, Joanna, I just didn't know what to expect when I picked this story to read. I'm always rather skeptical when I read James/Lily and I often wonder if it's the same person with various accounts. But this was different and so much more than I could have hoped for in a simple click. It was quite refreshing. First off, James and Lily just veered in a completely different direction than I am used to and I appreciated it so much. I became immersed in it and absorbed it. Their characterization was fantastic!
Honestly, it was amazingly witty and pleasing. I truly enjoyed seeing them act differently, more human, instead of some love sick puppies with such cliché mannerisms.
I like how you started out. =) Very clever and I always, always enjoy references. It was also humorous and it flared my interest in finding out what was to happen. Normally, I'm also not a fan of inner-monologue but that, too, was adorable! Hehe. Lily is just a character, you could say. XD She's so unintentionally hysterical.
I think what threw me off and made me think that in the beginning that there was more than just Lily and James was the “Hi Prongs.” I haven't often seen Lily addressing James as that so I was a little baffled. I think it's fine but I also think that there could have been a tag, you know, to not confuse people like me. =D I also found it interesting how they called each other Evans and Potter. It was slightly endearing. Heh.
I was also wondering about this part:
“Let’s get inside, it’s getting too chill.”
I have never heard someone say 'chill' in that context. So I was just curious, as perhaps it might be something I've never known about.
I loved the interaction in the first part. So believable and so delicious, yes, delicious. The hearts to signify a new setting also add to it. =D
“I’m just so worried.”
“Mothers are experts in that, I heard.”
*giggle* Ahaha. You have such a gift for awesome dialog.
“Believe so.”
Aw, that is definitely something Albus would say!
This whole fic was just so lovely.
These were my favourite parts:
“Yeah, Lily! Little Potter, the whipper of Voldemort’s ass!”
I can’t wait for my baby to kick that Voldemort’s misanthropic ass.
*snorts*
Oh, dear, thank you for such an enthralling and enticing read. XD I can truly say this was incredibly enjoyable.
Brittany
Little Things by lucilla_pauie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
that could bridge the chasm of time,
fan dying embers,
burst into flame,
and bring a heart to touch another heart.*
~This is LucillaJoanna of Hufflepuff sipping cocoa and waxing poetic By the Fireside for The Winter Tales Challenges
Date: 07/31/08 Title: Chapter 1: All chasms bridged
I quite like how you opened. Simplistic but still interesting. Molly just felt like a normal person. And we all want to be able to relate to people.
Right now, she was in an armchair by the fire, not cooking, baking, scolding, marshalling… only gazing at the embers tenaciously glowing several inches away from the logs. Like memories. They would forever burn in heart and mind. Both comforting and cruel.
Gah. Quite a talent for imagery and detail you have. That was beautiful. It’s really lovely what you can do with words. From this alone I can tell you are a gifted writer. Right from the start, the interaction with Molly and Percy was so believable and witty in a subtle way.
“You, speechless and stuttering. Not hiding anything, are you?”
*rolls around laughing*
It really just seems like everything flows and is set at a good pace. The dialogue is delicious. Characterization to die for. This line also caught my attention:
She bustled off, leaving Percy sidestepping her like a crab, hiding whatever it was he had behind him.
Oh, wow, Joanna, that’s just fantastic.
Reading about Mad-Eye and Fred not being there… it just hit me. They really never will be back. Your writing it made it so realistic. It really just tugged at me. The situation is so depressing and hard to accept.
However, I really did enjoy Percy’s confession and the guilt he felt. It’s always so great to see such raw emotion. One thing though, in my mind, as I read it, it sounded a tad melodramatic. I just imagine him admitting things more slowly and with awkward, strangled pauses.
Everything felt so wrong without Fred to go along with George. Horribly dismal, I think. I enjoyed it all the same.
Thank you for ripping my heart out, dear. *squish* Altogether, it was pretty heart-warming and held a family-ish vibe. =D Just lovely. So lovely.
Brittany
Werewolf Among Wizards by shewolf2000
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Glimpses into Remus Lupin's life at Hogwarts, all trying to answer the question: Is Remus a normal wizard who just has a “furry little problemâ€, or is he a werewolf among wizards, trying to fit in where he may never truly belong?
Now with more Snape down the Whomping Willow! Check out Chapter 10: A Highly Amusing Joke and Chapter 11: Skyfall
Date: 01/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: His Worst Fear
Wow, I’m really impressed that this is your first fic. This is a great depiction of Remus. In the beginning he’s a bit wary, like he’s unsure of his reception among the rest of the Marauders if they were to discover his secret. He seems to exhibit a lot of self-doubt. I like how James seems to care so much for Remus that he works diligently trying to figure out Remus’ injuries and mysterious disappearances.
The trick they played on Remus was admittedly cruel but his reaction to it was perfect and exactly how I’d imagined. It was extremely believable. I liked that Remus finally felt accepted. My heart gave a little tug because I feel so badly for his situation.
Awesome chapter, I’ll be sure to keep an eye out for chapter three.
Brittany
Author's Response: Is there some unwritten rule that first fics are generally awful? There must be, because you are not the first to say you are impressed that this is my first. However, I find it very flattering, so thank you! I\'m glad you like my depiction of Remus, and also that you liked how much James cared. I really like to think that, behind the Quaffle-headed arrogance, James cares about his friends most in the world. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Love Will Do That To You by hermione_granger4life
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Melanie Lostner, a sixth year Slytherin, has known Draco Malfoy all of her life. Their parents were best friends when they were in Hogwarts, but when unfortunate events lead to Narcissa Malfoy's death, Lucius Malfoy's imprisonment, and Melanie's parents mysterious deaths soon after she arrives at Hogwarts, Draco and Melanie are all alone in the world: except for each other. Melanie battles her brother's rage over her unique powers while she and Draco grow closer with each passing day. Draco is working as a spy for the Order but when some dangerous tasks for the Dark Lord get out of hand, Melanie worries for his safety. Will their romance last, or will Melanie be ripped away from Draco for all eternity?
****UPDATE**** 7/31/08 Chapter Five just submitted :) ********
7/30/2011 Years later I'm finally getting ready to update this story. I've re-written this chapter five times so far now. Chapters 5 and 6 sort of blend together, I'm trying to pick a good separation point. Chapter 5 is less Draco. Chapter 6 is ALL Draco. Thanks to anyone who has stuck with this story.
8/8/2011
CHAPTER FIVE IS VALIDATED AND UP! :D Reviews are appreciated.
Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Miserable At Best
Wow, this chapter was fantastic, Emma! Melanie is developing into a great OC. I really love the plot that you're creating. I can feel the tension and I feel for Melanie. What an awful situation. She must be so torn. I am most impressed that you beta'd this chapter yourself. A job well done. I look forward to the next update.
Brittany
Author's Response: Ah, thanks Brittany! I know, I kind of feel bad for Melanie myself. When I was writing this I was like gosh, next chapter, something good will happen to Melanie...lol. Thanks for the beat compliment...I was quite shocked myself when it was validated because everyone cautioned me against betaing myself...lol. :)\r\n\r\n**Emma
Date: 01/25/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- No Bravery
Hello there, Emma right? I like the story so far. It's great. I can't wait to see all the plot bunnies from the questions pop up. Very nice job. =)
Brittany
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I am currently sorting through all the plot bunnies for chaper four. Ted should be coming into play in chapter 4. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
**Emma
Colours Of Life by xombie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Each moment is a decision, defined by the circumstances. Who knows? Had it not been for an overprotective cousin, perhaps Rose Weasley and Scorpius Malfoy could have been the best of friends. Perhaps in one point in time and space, they are. As it happens, their relationship was defined by one catalytic factor, James Potter, and now,they are sworn enemies.
This story is a chronicle of their first year at Hogwarts, and their last. It is a tale of happenstance and familial influence, of an enmity that was not theirs to decide. Read and find out how such an enmity can influence the lives of two innocent children and wreck them. Will the injury last forever?
Due to my heavy work-schedule, this fic will be on hold till early June. My apologies to all.
Date: 03/21/08 Title: Chapter 2: Frozen Words And Broken Promises
Can I just say that so far, this fic is fabulous? You've managed to keep all of these characters, that we know next to nothing about, completely in character. First, I love the emphasis on their names. It reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. Really, what is in a name? I’m not sure if I’m just imagining that allusion but either way, it worked out cool. Their last names mean nothing until they are revealed and then there is an undeniable tension that forces them apart. It’s unavoidable.
Next, I love how they talk about the night. I find it just as beautiful. It might have been unintentional, but you really reached out to me, the reader, and I felt connected to them. The interaction between Scorpius (ach, I almost wrote Draco, bad habit) and Rose is very believable.
You’ve no idea how happy I am to have read this fic. Your style is very enticing and I find myself hanging on every word. Overall, this flowed extremely well and you did a wonderful job.
Brittany
Finding Someone New by LilyGinnyWrites92
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: It's the Marauders' Seventh Year, and Remus, Peter, and Sirius are getting tired of James mooning over Lily. Their solution? Write an anonymous love letter, and leave it a classroom!
I'm sorry, but this fic is going on semi-permanent hiatus. I ran out of ideas
Date: 03/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: Letters
Kate, isn't it? I really liked this chapter. I'm already wrapped up in the plot and I can't wait to see where you take this. It sounds great so far and I'm sure I'll continue to enjoy this fic even more as it progresses.
Brittany =D
Date: 03/25/08 Title: Chapter 2: Reactions
This chapter was just as nice as the last. My only critique is the last paragraph. It seemed to be a little bumpy, perhaps it's just me. I am eagerly awaiting the next update. This is a very promising fic.
Brittany =)
Surviving Christmas Eve by hermione210
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Lily finds herself alone on Christmas Eve, and the only person she wants to be with is missing. Where is he, and will she be able to survive Christmas Eve?
Written by hermione210 of Gryffindor for the Winter's Tales Challenge prompt: By The Fireside.
Date: 05/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: Surviving Christmas Eve
Hi, Becca! I decided to stalk you after we were partnered in Fresca’s class. XD don’t worry, you won’t need a restraining order. Now, let’s get down to the actual review for this fabulous fic.
Who doesn’t love a heart-warming tale? Now, my favorite category is J/L but too often do I come across cliché-ridden fics with enough mush to melt my face off. I think here you’ve found a good medium. It’s just the right mixture; I’m all for fluff but sometimes it gets a little sickening.
First off, I noticed this one mistake and I couldn’t do this review without pointing it out.
“Alright, but for the sake of my sanity, you better hurry.
Alright is not a word, at all. It should be ‘all right.’ Of course, everyone makes mistakes. =)
Lily looked at the fire, which was framed by several merry Christmas stockings. “How happy you look, little Christmas stockings,” she whispered, “surrounded by all your friends. All of you right here, together forever.”
This may be only of the sweetest things I have ever heard. I like the analogy you’ve set up between the stockings, and presumably, Lily and James. It’s quite touching, the stockings being friends, I mean. *is aware she sounds mad*
Her voice rose slightly and became laced with bitterness. “I bet you’re good friends. I bet none of you would leave for a month and not send any indication of whether or not you’re alive!”
I think my main goal in reviewing is to find something I relate to. This is definitely it. Not only is it hilarious that Lily is ranting at inanimate objects but it’s probably something I would do.
I love the significance of the bells. It’s so meaningful and symbolic.
The characterization of everyone was done very well, too. I especially liked how you characterized Lily. She was obviously very sensitive but you didn’t turn into some hormonal beast. The emotions she expressed were appropriate for this. She did seem a bit hostile at the point of James’ return but I think I would be going crazy too if someone I loved went missing for a month without explanation.
As for the OCs, as minor of a part they played, they were enjoyable. Well, scratch that, Sarah was the only one we met but I liked her.
I felt so awful for James and Lily, I suppose. They’ve both lost important people in their lives. Clearly, it’s hard for Lily to come to terms with this but I think it helps her understand James’ absence and it allows her to forgive him.
One thing I would have liked was for you to expand on detail. All of the dialogue was great, but I would have liked to have a clearer picture of their surroundings. I think what you wrote was brilliant but it would have been more enthralling if there had been more imagery in there.
This was a lovely one-shot and I’m very fond of it having read it. It was simplistic and beautiful.
Brittany =)
So I Heard by Indigoenigma
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Remus Lupin has excellent hearing and he's only come across one thing that he never wants to hear again.
This was written for the SBBC Summer Swap. I have Preethi's wonderful prompt.
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Meow
Thanks for putting these glorious thoughts into my mind XD It was very well-written and I enjoyed it.
Author's Response: You are very welcome, dear. I\'m glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reviewing!
Monochrome by Elmindreda
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Black and white. Two perfect colors to form a perfect world. Or at least, so has he thought for almost twenty-two years. One color would always intrude... one way or another.
I am Elmindreda of Gryffindor, and this is my submission for Color of Loss challenge.
Date: 02/13/08 Title: Chapter 1: Monochrome
I love this El. It was so beautiful. I have a new respect for Severus Snape.
Everything was flawless, and the colors you incorporated, just fabulous!
Brittany
Author's Response: A new respect for Severus Snape - what better reward can a Snapewriter (term coined by VV, I think) ask for? ;)
Okay, said writer could (and usually does) ask for more of her fics to be read, in order for more of said respect to be instilled. ;)
All in good time, though. Thank you very much!
~El