04/28/05
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The Seventh Horcrux by Melindaleo
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: The hunt for the Horcruxes begins. Harry has to decide who to trust as he moves closer to fulfilling his destiny. Will he be able to find and destroy all the Horcruxes? And at what price? Will he be able to find the strength within himself – the Power the Dark Lord Knows Not – in order to succeed in vanquishing Voldemort? And…can he do it and still get the girl? Join Harry and his faithful friends on their quest to finally defeat a Dark Lord.
Date: 09/10/06 Title: Chapter 27: Echoes in Time
Wow, what a cliffhanger. I can't wait to see what happens. I really liked the conversation they had with Dumbledore; I'm glad he is aware of things and able to help them. My ONLY complaint (and it's not even a complaint) is that I'm staunchly of the opinion that Snape is good. ^_^
Author's Response: That\'s okay - I tend to think canon will make him do something for the good side, anyway, but I can\'t resist my fondness of having him really bad. I love the idea of Harry being right and DD being wrong in the end.
A Sleepwalk to Remember by Lady Knightly
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: For once in her life, Hermione is faced with a problem she does not know how to solve...
Date: 07/28/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember
I'm loving this story. Snape is perfectly in character...I thought Hermione's boldness here bordered a LITTLE on the OOC, to be perfectly honest, but it didn't bother me. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I know, I was a little worried about FORWARD!Hermione, but i was kind of getting tired of writing weak/accepting/subservient!Hermione. Glad you thought it was okay though! Thanks for reading!!
Date: 01/02/08 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember
Have I reviewed before? I can't remember, but I feel the need to say that I've been following this story a long time and I love it. It's so engaging! I'm not normally a Hermione/Snape shipper but you render it actually plausible, and you make me really want them to be together. I have a feeling that Snape's close connection to Hermione might enable him to somehow save her from death...I hope that's not just wishful thinking. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thank you so much! i\'m so happy to hear that i was able to add a bit of plausibility to the relationship :D :D :D thanks for reading!
Date: 10/13/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember
I love this story! I hope you update soon. I also suspect the owl...something suspicious about those eyes.
Author's Response: i will try to update as soon as i can :D thanks for reading!
Date: 08/18/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember
My only criticism of the dialogue-only approach is that it can get a little hard to tell the two speakers apart. I would prefer, I think, either shorter passages of dialogue, or dialogue interspersed with "he said/she said." I love this story though. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: i was mildly concerned about that, but i did my best to make sure by at least the third or fourth line to drop pretty big hints about who was talking. sorry if it was confusing--sometimes my mind just does what it does xD xD thanks for reading!
Minerva McGonagall and the Half-Blood Prince by DailyProphetEditor
Rated: Professors •Summary:
What do you do when the man who murdered your best friend turns up and claims to be innocent?
What do you do when you realise you slowly start trusting him again?
What do you do when you fall in love against your will – with a man half your age?
This is a McGonagall/Snape fic about trust, friendship, shame, and love. It’s canon compliant otherwise; set immediately after HBP except for a mini prologue.
This fic also is my attempt at continuing the at Book 7, so you also have the war against Voldemort, the search for the Horcruxces, and the way they run Hogwarts during that year included in the plot.
Side characters like Ron, Hermione, Moody, Lupin, Tonks, Neville, Augusta Longbottom, Draco, Hagrid, and the rest of the Weasleys get their fair share of the story.
It is done novel style, which means that some apparently minor issues mentioned in early chapters will become important in later chapters. I do recommend you read them in the right order.
To be on the safe side, I rated this “Professors” because it contains violence, sexuality, character deaths, and torture - although none of them described in detail.
Also I now have added an AU warning - my story contains two detals that we will not see happening in "Deathly Hallows". I made the Sorting Hat a Horcrux, and Arthur Weasley will become interim Minister for Magic in my last chapter. Well, I wrote this before those rumors were shot down as non-canon by JKR, and I'd not like to change my plot now - so, sadly, my story has become a bit AU. You have been warned ;-)
Date: 04/25/07 Title: Chapter 10: The Killing Curse
Well yes, it has its dark aspects...but what I meant was sweet was their relationship. They make a strange but cute couple. :)
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for getting back to me on that question. Yeah, I can see what you mean - they are just the perfect couple, aren\'t they?
I was simply sursprised that this battle chapter should get the most reviews, and actually quite a lot of people called it \"sweet\" or \"loveley\" or, as one of my friends put it, \"what a darling fight\". Folks, someone I really care about just almost died here! ;-)
But I now understand what you mean. The background story is a bit dark with Voldemort and all, but of course it\'s mainly a love story, so, yeah, it\'s sweet.
Date: 04/22/07 Title: Chapter 10: The Killing Curse
I checked out this story because it was an unusual pairing...and I'm glad I did. It's so sweet! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Sweet... hmm... interesting. I was afraid the whole fic would turn out too dark. Anyway I\'m glad you liked it. Thank you for leaving a review, I live and breathe on these little messages ;-)
Mortality by dashofmagic
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Everything was fine. There was pain and hurt at the death of their headmaster, but they were all okay. And then, he fell in love with her. And their romance would spark a betrayal unlike anything Harry had ever known. But it isn't just lost friendship Harry must worry about. There is an epidemic sweeping through Hogwarts and threatening to destroy the Wizarding World. And as his own health begins to deteriorate, will he have the strength to defeat the man behind it all? Or will the betrayal of his friend, in essence, destroy him?
This fic has not been abandoned!! I'm having a bit of writer's block in reference to the ending, but it is NOT abandoned.
Date: 10/01/07 Title: Chapter 11: Caged Bird
Wow, this is really good! I clicked on the link just out of curiosity, and ended up reading the whole thing. I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews. You write very well, and the story is really unique. I'm awaiting the next chapter!
There She Goes by Jazzinator
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Love is not love,
which alters when it alteration finds...
Nyxandriana Brisk: Ravenclaw, sixth year, Shakespeare buff, designated 'odd one out', never been kissed, no one knows her name.
Nyxandriana Brisk: Just fell in love.
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
-William Shakespeare
Date: 08/17/07 Title: Chapter 3: Three
I like the story so far, but my honest impression -- and I mean no offense -- is that Nyx borders on being a Mary Sue. I tell you this not to get to down, but because I think she's a character with potential and I'd hate for that to be wasted. The fact that she is good-looking, mysterious, intelligent, has a name hard to pronounce, is good with magic, witty, attracts the attention of the Marauders, and -- just incidentally -- is an animagus is a bit too much. She DOES clearly have some pain in her past relating to her father, but I don't see that as enough of a weakness or flaw. When a character is too perfect, she becomes uninteresting. On the bright side, you do write well. Good luck.
Author's Response: While I see your point, all those things you pointed out can be applied directly to the Marauders. Well, all the likable ones (offense meant, Peter). I knew when I was writing the character that there was a danger of her becoming so-called \"perfect.\"
I am genuinely glad at your honest review, but I ask you, and all other readers, not to judge too soon. After all, it is only the third chapter.
-Cat
The Phoenix of the Order: A Potterized Phantom of the Opera Soundtrack! by Schmerg_The_Impaler
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Having spoofed the lovely album "Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band," I decided to do another one of my favourite albums: THE PHANTOM OF THE OPERA SOUNDTRACK! And through Andrew Lloyd Webber's yummy songs, this spoof tells the story of "Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix."
So here it is, guys! (And girls, and koalas, and lampreys, and shrubs and parameciums and stuff.)
This is more a spoof of the soundtrack than the actual play... though if anyone records themself singing any of these songs, I would fall over from sheer awesomeness attack.
Date: 08/22/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Songs From Act Two
This was wonderful! I love Phantom of the Opera and you've done a great job making the words fit. It was really fun to read (I was singing it in my head).
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I\'m so glad you thought the words fit well.
Of Death by MaraudersWolf
Rated: Professors •Summary: There is one dark night each month for Remus, bringing the darkest of thoughts with it, thoughts that one Potions Master knows very well.
Originally written for a Dark Fic Fest, so the overall story is VERY DARK, but not graphic. Set post-HBP/pre-DH; NO SPOILERS!
Date: 08/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Of Death
Wow...very, very dark. You really make the reader feel his pain and hopelessness. Poor Remus! I wish I could give him a hug. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, it is very dark, but I find it hard to write anything about death and NOT be dark . . . and yes, I want to hug Remus, too! Thanks, again!
What Became of His Shattered Souls by A Cappella
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: What happened to the infamous Lord Voldemort after he died?
Date: 09/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: What Became of His Shattered Souls
That was a really interesting read because I wrote a somewhat similar story, but with a very different end. Yours is much darker -- probably closer to what JKR would have done. It was very effective. Great job.
Daughter of the Dark Side by Lyra Lestrange
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:
Lindsey Tonks appears to be a normal, almost invisible Hogwarts student, but underneath her is someone far from normal. What the world doesn't know is that Lindsey is the daughter of two well-known imprisoned Death Eaters, and has an identity she must hide from the world. Underneath Lindsey is a girl named Lyra Lestrange, a girl who is meant to be a secret forever. But will it last forever?
*Begins in GoF and follows the series through DH.
**Will appeal to fans of the Black family! Prominent characters are Bellatrix, Tonks, Andromeda, Sirius, and (to an extent) Narcissa.
Part Four Synopsis:
It's the summer after Albus Dumbledore's death, and the whole world is falling to Voldemort and the Death Eaters. Broken-hearted Lyra, unable to return to Hogwarts, must go into hiding with her family. It doesn't last long, and eventually Lyra is faced with a choice: join or die. Lyra's decision comes with many surprises, including a new ally who follows her to the final battle of good versus evil. While Lyra's path may seem clear, she finds herself torn between two sides for the final time, and in the end, despite tragedy and loss, Lyra accomplishes the impossible...which defies all of the agreements she and her family ever made.
Three years later, the fic has been completely finished! Enjoy reading it without having to wait for new chapters. Thanks to those who patiently waited and faithfully reviewed!
Date: 11/05/09 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38- The Tale of the Three Sisters
Well, before I read your response to the reviewer below me, I was going to say I'm predicting that Lyra will turn out to be the daughter of Voldemort, not Rodolphus! But I guess that is not to be. I love that ship, but that's just me and my sick mind.
Anyway, I seldom read fanfiction anymore, but I came cross this one a litle while ago and I've been following it. Keep up the good work, it's very interesting!
Author's Response: Haha, that's okay. A lot of people seem to like it. It's not just me. I actually kind of got the idea for this story because I was searching for some Bella/Rodolphus romance fics but all I could find were Bella/Voldy ones. Anyway, I'm glad you decided to read my story! I hope you continue to read :)
Date: 11/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Very interesting, her boggart is snakes...suggests some kind of connection to Voldemort. Or maybe a premonition of something to come? I look forward to reading more...
Author's Response: Good guesses! You will find out! Thanks for continuing to read :)
Date: 11/29/09 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40- Temper Takes Control
Hell, I would have said that to Snape too.
A short chapter, but I look forward to what's to come. I like how you incorporate the events with Harry, Ron and Hermione while keeping the story centered on Lyra. Many times, OC's can fall flat, but you have done a good job making me care about Lyra, and she's not at all a Mary Sue. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy you like how Lyra's story follows that of the trio because I've always been afraid that it's boring. I'm also glad you don't think she's a Mary Sue! I had some difficulty early on with getting chapters submitted because the mod said she was becoming a Mary Sue. So yeah...thanks for reviewing again :)
Alexandra Quick and the Deathly Regiment by Inverarity
Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Summary:
Alexandra Quick returns to Charmbridge Academy for eighth grade, angry and in denial. Unwilling to accept the events of the previous year, she is determined to fix what went wrong, no matter what the cost. When her obsession leads her to a fateful choice, it is not only her own life that hangs in the balance, for she will uncover the secret of the Deathly Regiment!
This is the third book in the Alexandra Quick series.
Date: 04/26/10 Title: Chapter 17: A Tightly-Wound Plan
Ooh, things are getting exciting! Alex is both very clever and very stupid. I have a feeling she's going to mess things up badly. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: The WODAMND Act
Hey there, I'm a new reader. I haven't read your previous stories, but I was drawn into this one and I think I've gleaned enough of Alex's backstory from it to understand what's going on. I really like the detail and imaginativeness you've put into this world. I plan to keep reading!
Author's Response: Hi there, Hesperia. I've never gotten feedback before from someone starting the series without having read the previous books, so please let me know how well it stands up on its own. Although I assume most readers will have read the first two books, I tried to include enough exposition for new readers. Hope you enjoy it!
Date: 05/14/10 Title: Chapter 22: A Deal with Darla
Wow, this is getting very interesting! I love the idea of Death personified. As someone who does research on the psychology of death (and who is probably a little too fascinated by it), this story is really pulling me in. I can't wait for more!
Date: 06/20/10 Title: Chapter 1: The WODAMND Act
So, after having had a chance to let things sink in and settle, I thought I'd give you some feedback on the story as a whole. It's rare that I've read a whole chaptered fanfic, so those I get through are really something special. I have very few criticisms, and those I offer are with the friendliest of intentions.
-- I felt like the story, at several points, built up certain expectations that were never fulfilled. The Time-Turner is one example. You make it clear that something bad would have happened to Alex if she had indeed gone back in time and tried to stop Maximillian. But then she's prevented from doing it, and I'm left wondering -- what would have happened? If you pose a question like that, and then don't answer it, it's a bit of a let-down for the reader. Another instance of this was Death's token. I wanted to know what would have happened if Alex had given that to someone. Would Death indeed have followed through on the deal? How would Max have returned? Again, it's a possibility you raise, but then preclude without answering the questions it raises.
-- I felt like Anna's character was too weak and passive. I wasn't sure what she was contributing to the story. I guess I wasn't sure either what the two of them get out of each other's friendship. Alex seems to do nothing but make Anna cry, and Anna does nothing but slow Alex down and make her rethink her decisions. I see that some of your readers are hoping for an Alex/Anna angle on the relationship, but I don't see that, at least not yet. I think there are enough hints that Alex is attracted to boys.
- On that note, I have to say this -- I actually wondered whether Alex was a bit in love with Maximillian. It would explain her obsessive devotion to bringing him back, and it would be perfectly natural given that she didn't know she had a brother until last year, and wouldn't necessarily feel the normal way siblings do about each other. I think that would have been an interesting angle. But I could just have a sick mind.
I can't think of anything else, I was really impressed with your plot, characteriziation, and language and I really do hope you are working on original fiction -- not that fanfic is a waste of time, but I'm sure you can publish your own stuff as well. Best of luck!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your comments. You've brought up quite a few issues other readers have commented on as well. Anna started the series even more passive, and it was my hope to show her developing a bit in this book as well.
You make some good observations, though I'm afraid I can't answer your speculations. ;) But I hope you will read the next book in the series when I finish it.
Date: 05/08/10 Title: Chapter 20: The Winter Ball
Aw, Alexandra and Larry! Okay, he was under a spell of some type, but I thought that was cute. :D