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Too Far Gone by Gemmika

Rated: Professors •
Summary: *How far would you go for love?* "If you touch her again, I'll kill you." "Go ahead for I'll come to her again and again." *Is it worth it?* "James leave her alone, she's no good for you." "Don't say a word against Lily!" *Will it last?* "It's forever, I've known it sice the day I met you." "Forever is a long time." "Not if you love someone..." I am finally re-editing this story, please take a look and see all the new stuff!
Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Grown-Up

Its a very nice story.



Chasing His Flower by Jude Harrison

Rated: Professors •
Summary: James and Lily were the perfect couple until James cheats on her with his secretary. Lily runs away to America, where her parents resided after retirement, and James follows. Will James ever win Lily back?
Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: She Thought Wrong

Great, when are u going to finish the story?



A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/18/07 Title: Chapter 49: NEWTs

Nice.


Author's Response: Short and sweet. I love it. ;-D



Some Coincidences are Meant to Happen by SummerRain

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: We all know James and Lily's relationship ended on a Halloween night with two bright green flashes, but how did it begin?


Were they introduced by friends? Did their eyes meet across a crowded room? Did it perhaps start with a small hello? Did they just lay eyes on each other and immediately hate one another?


Or maybe it began with a perfectly timed, destined chance encounter ... a coincidence, as some would say.

Join James and Lily in their Seventh year at Hogwarts as they recollect the times throughout their Hogwarts years that brought them together.




Teensiest bit of AU included, nothing major.
Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 12: Through It All

Nice story, I am waiting for your next chapter. Please write more romance of James and Lily.



Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 12: Through It All

Nice story, I am waiting for your next chapter. Please write more romance of James and Lily.



Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Train Ride

Great story. Update soon.



Thrice Defied by leighpotter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: So, it’s James and Lily’s last year at Hogwarts.
All the year ahead of them full of spells, arguments, Quidditch, arguments, detention, arguments...But, this time, something is different. James Potter is more determined than ever to win Lily Evans’s heart and she seems to be considering.

Maybe, just maybe, a year of rule-breaking, rule-following and fighting for their lives will liven up the romance at Hogwarts...
A story that’s centred on the (inevitable!) romance of Lily and James but also one that goes into the darker sides of that last seventh year. Prepare yourselves for a little R.A.B. , a few Horcuxes, a dash of lovesick Severus and more than a few brilliant moments between the fights, the laughs, the fluff and the danger!

Warnings for extra funny Sirius and Remus moments (that include a love-potion gone wrong and marriage proposals due to drink) , alarming giggling spells from a character who bears more than a resemblance to our own Loony Lovegood, Quidditch talk from a fun Alice Vance, evil Bellatrix and Narcissa, and Lily and James in the middle of it, falling in love without knowing...

AU warning (not for some horrifying reason as you may assume – like Lily dying or Remus turning into a chicken – but because two of the characters – namely Lucius and Bella – are in Lily and James’ seventh year as well when we know from canon that they're older! Just a minor difference but then I really needed some nastiness in the story!)
xxx leighpotter ;)

Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Nice

Author's Response: simple yet effective...!thnx!



Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 12/18/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Falling Snowflakes

Great chapter. PLEASE update soon. I am waiting an I thought there would be a kiss. When James and Lily are going to be together?

Author's Response: Thanks !!!!!!! I will I will update! The next few chapters are all laid out and this one was the only one I had a problem with but I guess you liked it! Kiss? Lily nad James? Whoever heard of such a thing? Nah, I\'m messing with you! But you\'ll think I\'m a horrible person over the next few ones cause I\'m not making it easy for them (esp James!) but I promise Lily will realise what she really feels for James soon! Very soon...:))))



Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

“I’ll always protect you.”
Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/06/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Conversations and An Invitation

I loved the story. Thats the best story I have ever read. when are u going to submit your last chapter? Please response my review, I want to know when can I read the last chapter. Please write some romance between James and Lily.

Author's Response: I don\'t know when the last chapter is going to be, hopefully the next chapter is soon. I\'m glad you like the story, thanks for the review!



Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: You Lose

great


Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Doubt That Brought Faith

Great, James and Lily's romance was the best. Hope to read more romance of James and Lily.


Author's Response: They are cute, aren\'t they?



Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I don't want to know your computer is ok or not, I just want to read the full story. Please hurry up, I am waiting. This is the limit. Do what ever you want, but finish the story.

Author's Response: Okay. . . .



Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Seven Ways You Know You're a Sissy

Nice.

Author's Response: :)



The Curtain Call by Amelia Bedelia

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James and Lily spend their summers together producing plays, though neither are happy about the presence of the other. With James, as the set designer, and Lily, as the actress, tensions run high.
Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 12/14/07 Title: Chapter 11: Act 1, Scene 5

Great, just great. Please now don't make me waite any more. I beg update soon.

Author's Response: I\'m so sorry for how long I made you wait! That was a horrible thing for me to do... But I\'m out of school very soon, and then I\'ll try to finish up the story then!\r\n\r\nThanks for reviewing!\r\n\r\nYours truly,\r\nAmelia Bedelia



Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 12/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Bennett Theater

PLEASE, PLEASE. Update soon. I can't wait anymore.

Author's Response: I\'m sorry the update wasn\'t sooner! School keeps getting in the way! Haha! But I\'m glad you like the story so much! Thanks for reviewing! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia



Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Bennett Theater

Finish the story, please.

Author's Response: I\'m so sorry it\'s taking so long to finish it! But my last final is tomorrow, and I\'ll be spending the rest of my break writing as much as I can so I can try to finish my story! Thanks for reviewing! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia



Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Bennett Theater

This is the best story I have ever read. I liked the you have presented James character. Please update soon, I am really waiting to read the whole story. Please write soon I can't wait any more.

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you like it! :D And I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Thanks for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia



Of Christmas Past by Chaser921

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny find themselves in a Muggle hotel in Godric's Hollow on the Winter Solstice. During an enthusiastic snowball fight, Harry and Ginny step through a stone circle that transports them seventeen years into the past. This may be the only chance Harry has to spend with his parents, and it may also be what he needs to figure out his relationship with Ginny.


The warning is for later chapters.



Edit: So, this was originally strictly a Harry/Ginny fic, but Ron and Hermione kept trying to get together too, so I felt like I had to change the category. And there's a bit of Lily/James in there too, though they're already married, and I've also added a bit of Remus/Tonks. Poor Sirius is the only Singleton (though he may manage to get a girl of his own)!


Edit: This story was cannon until after Deathly Hallows came out, so I changed it to Alternate Universe, but it's still pretty close to cannon. Only a few things will end up being different when the story ends.



Edit: I've changed all of the chapter titles to the titles of Christmas songs that I felt reflected the events in the chapters best. Tell me what you think! Does it fit?
Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/22/07 Title: Chapter 9: Do You Hear What I Hear?

Nice.



The Pursuit of Sappyness by A Cappella

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Seventh-year Lily Evans is ready for romance, but not any kind of romance--she desires the sappiest kind possible. She is not aware, however, that her knight in shining armor just might be the (until now) devilishly annoying James Potter.
Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 10/17/07 Title: Chapter 3: Part I, Chapter 3

Nice.



Amphibious Lizards by Apollonious

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: They are all talented, some more than others. Some play Quidditch. Others are known for their brilliance in academics. They are the Marauders and a group that has lain in the shadows up to now, called the Lady Firebrands, known for their hot tempers and rather subdued practical jokes.

Romance will bloom.

Rivalries will blossom.

The author will try to stop using so many bad plant puns.

The story of Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs' NEWT years will be told.

These are the Amphibious Lizards.

Reviewer: black sabathings Signed
Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The First Jailbird

The starting is excellent. Update soon, I will be waiting.















































Author's Response: Thank you!